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Ichneumon
2009-03-09, 11:33 AM
I wrote this poem yesterday and I thought I'd share it.

Yo to the beach

I fell on a girl’s castle
She ran away in tears
Mother got mad
But that’s okay
Because I say Yo to the beach

I lost my shoes
Stepped on glass
Got salt in my eye
But that’s okay
Because I say Yo to the beach

Seagulls greet me
Because I say Yo to the beach

Lost my keys
Searched all day
Didn’t find
But that’s okay
Because I say Yo to the beach

It got dark
Icy winds, against my face
I got lost
But that’t okay
Because I say Yo to the beach

Respect!
I say Yo to the beach

Dallas-Dakota
2009-03-09, 02:18 PM
That sounds more like a song or something.

But its good.

Fredthefighter
2009-03-09, 02:21 PM
That sounds more like a song or something.

But its good.

Agreed, it does read like a lymeric.

Dirk Kris
2009-03-09, 02:28 PM
Ichneumon is a rapper!

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Ichneumon is Joaquin Phoenix!