And now, young Skywalker... [spell/Modern]

[Dhavaer]

Wrath
Evocation [Electricity]
Level: Arcane 4; Components: S; [/b]Casting Time:[/b] Full round action; Range: Short; Target: One creature; Duration: concentration, maximum one round/level; Saving Throw: Fort partial; Spell Resistance: Yes

You send a powerful current of electricity into your target, disrupting their nervous system. Each round they take 4d4 damage and make a fortitude save. If the save is succesful, the damage is reduced to 2d4. If the save is failed, they are stunned for one round.

[Fizban]

Hmmm...I dont' know about Modern, but I glanced through once and the spells seemed balanced to their equivalent level DnD counterparts. Therefore, I deem this spell.....a little overpowered. 4d4 just seems like too much to me. I'd say 2d6+stun, or 2d6 on succesful fort save. I seem to recall some random druid spell dealing about 2d6/round at lv4-ish. Requireing concentration while adding the stun seems okay to me. Of course, I'm not too experienced in things, so you may want to wait for more of an expert.

[Dhavaer]

Hmmm...I dont' know about Modern, but I glanced through once and the spells seemed balanced to their equivalent level DnD counterparts. Therefore, I deem this spell.....a little overpowered.

How does this make sense?

[Sacrath]

It seems fine to me, and I like the image.

[Dhavaer]

It seems fine to me, and I like the image.

Hurrah!

[endoperez]

How does this make sense?


He glanced the spells that are balanced for their level, not glanced this spell and deemed this spell balanced for its level. Or that's what I think he meant to write.

[Fizban]

I once looked through the D20 Modern core book thing. When I looked at the spells, many were exactly the same as those in the PHB, and others were only slightly modified for the Modern setting. Therefore, I deemed my dnd knowledge somewhat applicable, and examined the spell according to DnD.
For your game, it's probly just fine, you have my official unofficial approval for what it's worth.