Shian Tieus
2009-06-02, 04:58 AM
Hi everyone.
Mabye someone of you remember me: I posted months ago a webcomic named "Hybris".
Then, i had some problems with my computer (all data lost... sigh...) and I disappeared.
Instead of continuing the old webcomic, I decided to restart it changing completely the style from the OOTS's one to a personal one.
I made some sketches of the characters of the "new" Hybris, and I was hoping you can help me and give me some suggestions about the "desing". It does not convinces me completely
1) Keth "Redeye", half-orc sorcerer (main character) LG. Suggestions are welcome even for his (not yet drawn) rat familiar
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9735/disegno.png
2) Vajenegar, Cobold Psion (Shaper) LN
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2838/vaj.png
3) (unfinished) Lomilin, wood elf barbarian CG/CN His weapon will probably be a sort of great scimitar
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2998/lomil.png
4) (unfinished) Thay, sylask (new race) cleric LN with evil tendencies This one is not convincing me... I don't like it at all... Suggestions are welcome especially for his horrible scalemail
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4136/thayt.png
5) (unfinished) nameless guy, goblin shadowcaster this is one of the bad guys... a minor character, after all. His original name was "whitemantle", but i soon realized the... ehm... similarity with a guy we all know^^.
The color of his clothes does not convinces me at all.. any suggestion? Under the mantle he must have a military vest.
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4778/shadowguy.png
6) other female character. Rouge-like. NN or CN well... i made some scketches, but I don't like them at all.
She must be the last member of the group, but I don't have ideas about she...
Any suggestion for race, class, weapon and appearance?
Thank you for your help.
Sorry for the crappy english^^
Mabye someone of you remember me: I posted months ago a webcomic named "Hybris".
Then, i had some problems with my computer (all data lost... sigh...) and I disappeared.
Instead of continuing the old webcomic, I decided to restart it changing completely the style from the OOTS's one to a personal one.
I made some sketches of the characters of the "new" Hybris, and I was hoping you can help me and give me some suggestions about the "desing". It does not convinces me completely
1) Keth "Redeye", half-orc sorcerer (main character) LG. Suggestions are welcome even for his (not yet drawn) rat familiar
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9735/disegno.png
2) Vajenegar, Cobold Psion (Shaper) LN
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2838/vaj.png
3) (unfinished) Lomilin, wood elf barbarian CG/CN His weapon will probably be a sort of great scimitar
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2998/lomil.png
4) (unfinished) Thay, sylask (new race) cleric LN with evil tendencies This one is not convincing me... I don't like it at all... Suggestions are welcome especially for his horrible scalemail
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4136/thayt.png
5) (unfinished) nameless guy, goblin shadowcaster this is one of the bad guys... a minor character, after all. His original name was "whitemantle", but i soon realized the... ehm... similarity with a guy we all know^^.
The color of his clothes does not convinces me at all.. any suggestion? Under the mantle he must have a military vest.
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4778/shadowguy.png
6) other female character. Rouge-like. NN or CN well... i made some scketches, but I don't like them at all.
She must be the last member of the group, but I don't have ideas about she...
Any suggestion for race, class, weapon and appearance?
Thank you for your help.
Sorry for the crappy english^^