good avatar?

[Eon]

Not sure if this is the correct place but anyway.


I am a beginning avatarist and would like some constructive critisicm on my work. Here is my most recent work.http://i692.photobucket.com/albums/vv288/generick_01/Lightningknight.png

can I get a 1-10 rating please?
Thanks, Bandil

[An Enemy Spy]

Your picture is too srot and too wide. The cape also goes out too far

[Mando Knight]

Move the legs in a bit, and put them at an angle closer to the vertical. Do the same with the cape.

Also, use more color.

[Eon]

thanks I'll be sure to do that.