Snowblind - Into the North

[Psyco Jelly]

This is the thread for my webcomic Snowblind. It uses the most exact imitation of Order of the Stick graphical style as I could manage, though the story and characters are all my own.

Well, it's somewhat based on a DnD campaign I'm currently running, and it takes place in a far-north setting that borrows heavily from Norse mythology.

I will post Bios for the characters eventually, as they appear. I doubt I'll ever update regularly, but you can expect a comic every 1 to 2 weeks. Of course I'll probably put them out a little faster at the start.

Here's it is:

Strip 1 - It Begins (http://i802.photobucket.com/albums/yy306/Psyco_Jelly/Snowblind/snowblind_1.png)
Strip 2 - Provision Acquisition (http://i802.photobucket.com/albums/yy306/Psyco_Jelly/Snowblind/snowblind_2.png)
Strip 3 - A Little Much (http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/4593/snowblind3.png)


Tell me what you think.

[Cizak]

Well, the art looks nice :smallsmile: Can't really comment on anythings besides that, put I'll check it out when you update.

[Psyco Jelly]

I posted the next strip, now there is actual dialog. You should be able to discern the characters' names now.

[Silverraptor]

Your should correct the speech bubbles. It's cutting off the words.

[Darklord Bright]

Looks like it could be interesting. Will keep an eye out for this.

[V'icternus]

You've got me drawn in, now you just need to hook me within the next few comics to hold my interest. I cannot see any art faults, and the story, I expect, will be revealed in time.

Good luck, and I hope you make a fan out of me!

[Cizak]

The speech-bubbles seems a bit small at some points, but otherwise I think this has real potential :smallsmile:

[Psyco Jelly]

The next comic will be up tomorrow. It was a *mammoth* of a job!

[V'icternus]

I get it!

What? I do! Even if it isn't out yet, I get it!

[Psyco Jelly]

New one's out, it was too big for photobucket (dimensions, not file size) so I used imageshack. I'll probably just use that from now on. It's not like I'm posting this anywhere else.

I am aware that an elf has a beard. It's not a mistake.

[Keris]

This is shaping up to be a decent comic, although your walking pose needs a bit of work. At the moment it looks almost like they're skipping along. :smalltongue:


I am aware that an elf has a beard. It's not a mistake.
Evidently Your Elves Are Different (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/OurElvesAreBetter?from=Main.OurElvesAreDifferent).

[FoE]

Definitely work on the speech bubbles.

The first strip gave me a chuckle. And your mammoth was impressive.

[Psyco Jelly]

I tried to fix my too-small speech bubble problem in the latest strip. Also, I'm looking at Rich's work to try and fix my walking pose.

EDIT: Ah, I see. Back leg bent, front leg straight. I'll keep that in mind for the next strip.

[CrimsonAngel]

Hey cool, i've used a mammoth template too!

[Nageto004]

This is pretty good.

[Belkarsbadside1]

I like it, hope you continue with this.