Yu-Gi-Oh! PbP Tournament - Lorolar vs. KazilDarkeye

[KazilDarkeye]

Kazil walks into the Arena of Bronze, chalk and parchment in hand.

"This envoy must not fail me as Invidia did."

[Lorolar]

Initative [roll0]
Starting hand [roll1][roll2][roll3][roll4][roll5]
Re-rolls (if needed)[roll6][roll7][roll8]

A man in strange leather armour with a shock of wild blond hair stands opposite to you, what apears to be an actual sword resting in a hilt at his side, though the life point counter and correctly sized groves confirms this to be a duel disk.. The letter X adorns the hilt of his blade, his belt buckle, earings and pretty much everywhere else he can fit on it. Strange lumps bulge beneath his armour in places all over his body and his skin has a sickly tint to it.
"We're going to show you what we've got Human"

{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
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-|-|-|-|-[/table]

Life points - 8000

Graveyard -
Removed from play -

Hand
Alien Ammonite
dark resonator
burden of the mighty
burden of the mighty
mind control
Deck

Monsters

2 - Alien Ammonite
3 - Alien Ammonite
4 - cyber valley
5 - plaguespreader zombie

7 - alien dog
8 - alien dog
9 - alien skull
10 - alien kid
11 - alien kid
12 - alien kid
13 - alien telepath
14 - alien telepath
15 - alien telepath
16 - alien warrior
17 - alien warrior
18 - alien warrior
19 - alien overlord
20 - alien overlord


************
spells
21 - Code a ancient ruins
22 - Code a ancient ruins
23 - Code a ancient ruins

25 - burden of the mighty

27 - the dark door
28 - the dark door
29 - "A" Cell Incubator
30 - United we stand
31 - swords of revealing light
32 - forbidden chalice
33 - lightning vortex
34 - giant trunade

36 - mystical space typhoon
37 - gold sarcophagus


***********
traps

38 - grave of the super ancient organism
39 - grave of the super ancient organism
40 - royal decree
41 - royal decree
42 - planet pollutant virus
43 - planet pollutant virus
44 - offering to the snake deity


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EXTRA DECK
********************************
armory arm
cosmic fortress gol'gar (x3)
Ally of Justice Catastor (x3)
Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier
goyo guardian
ancient sacred wyvern
ancient fairy dragon
black rose dragon
stardust dragon
red dragon archfiend
thought ruler archfiend

[KazilDarkeye]

"By your unlimited desires, and by all the people who have given in to avarice, I invoke the fourth sin!"

The symbols on the floor shift, and one of the seven symbols at the corner of a heptagram is glowing - the symbol of a goblet and pair of coins, glowing with a gleaming golden colour.
The creature then stands, where none stood before, prepared to accept orders. It resembles a snake with large, ramlike horns growing out of its head and 4 arms holding various objects. The creatures skin is covered with gleaming jewelry - the precious metals on its body alone must weigh more than the average human could carry, let alone the gems.
"Good day. I am Avaritia, the Daemon of Greed. Here, my card."

The creature then produces a stack of golden cards, presumably from some interdimensional storage area. It motions for you to take one as its other arms fit a gem-encrusted Duel Disk to its topmost left arm, and another rolls a golden die.

[roll0]

[roll1]
[roll2]
[roll3]
[roll4]
[roll5]

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[/table]

Life Points: 8000



Hand: 5

Destiny Hero - Defender
Messenger of Peace
Gear Golem the Moving Fortress
Exodia the Forbidden One
Upstart Goblin


Deck:

1. Crystal Seer
2. Deep Diver
3-4. Emissary of the Afterlife x2
5. Left Arm of the Forbidden One
6. Left Leg of the Forbidden One
7-8. Mystic Tomato x2
9-11. Nimble Momonga x3
12. Right Arm of the Forbidden One
13. Right Leg of the Forbidden One
14. Sangan
15. Spirit Reaper
16. Stone Statue of the Aztecs
17. Vortex Trooper
18. Burial From the Different Dimension
19. Card Trader
20. Dark World Dealings
21-22. Different Dimension Capsule x2
23. Level Limit – Area B
24-25. Monster Reincarnation x2
26-27. Upstart Goblin x2
28. Backup Soldier
29. Birthright
30-31. Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
32. Gravity Bind
33. Mirror Force
34-35. Reckless Greed x2


Graveyard:
Empty

Out of Play:
Empty

[KazilDarkeye]

"Very well," says Avaritia looking at his hand, " I believe I shall go first."

[roll0]

"I will start with the Spell card Upstart Goblin - this allows you to gain 1000 Lifepoints, and I get to Draw a card. Everybody wins...sort of"
"I will play one card face-down, summon a monster in defence mode, and end my turn."

{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
-|-|Fm|-|-
-|-|F|-|-
[/table]

Fm: Face-down Monster
F: Face-down Spell/Trap

Life Points: 8000



Hand: 4

Messenger of Peace
Gear Golem the Moving Fortress
Exodia the Forbidden One
Emissary of the Afterlife


Deck:

1. Crystal Seer
2. Deep Diver
3. Emissary of the Afterlife
4. Left Arm of the Forbidden One
5. Left Leg of the Forbidden One
6-7. Mystic Tomato x2
8-10. Nimble Momonga x3
11. Right Arm of the Forbidden One
12. Right Leg of the Forbidden One
13. Sangan
14. Spirit Reaper
15. Stone Statue of the Aztecs
16. Vortex Trooper
17. Burial From the Different Dimension
18. Card Trader
19. Dark World Dealings
20-21. Different Dimension Capsule x2
22. Level Limit – Area B
23. Monster Reincarnation
24-25. Upstart Goblin x2
26. Backup Soldier
27. Birthright
28-29. Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
30. Gravity Bind
31. Mirror Force
32-33. Reckless Greed x2


Face-Down:

Destiny Hero - Defender

Monster Reincarnation


Graveyard:

Upstart Goblin


Out of Play:
Empty

[KazilDarkeye]

Upstart Goblin:
[roll0]

[Lorolar]

[roll0]

"I activate, mind control (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mind_Control) to take control of your face down monster ((I just checked what it was, hope thats okay)), then I summon dark resonator (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Resonator) from my hand. Clustering stars, shine together to form a new hope. Form the path that light shines upon, syncrho summon: Ancient Sacred Wyvern (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ancient_Sacred_Wyvern)! Now, my wyvern powers up by the difference in our life points, 1000 thanks to you. My 3100 point wyvern attacks you directly! Then I activate two copies of Burden of the mighty (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Burden_of_the_Mighty) which should suffiencently cripple your forces. Then I throw down one more facedown, your move human"


{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
-|-|ASW|-|-
-|F|Botm|Botm|-[/table]

Life points - 9000

Graveyard -
Removed from play -

Hand
Alien Ammonite

Deck

Monsters
1 - Alien Ammonite
2 - Alien Ammonite
3 - cyber valley
4 - plaguespreader zombie
5 - alien dog
6 - alien dog
7 - alien skull
8 - alien kid
9 - alien kid
10 - alien kid
11 - alien telepath
12 - alien telepath
13 - alien telepath
14 - alien warrior
15 - alien warrior
16 - alien warrior
17 - alien overlord
18 - alien overlord


************
spells
19 - Code a ancient ruins
20 - Code a ancient ruins
21 - Code a ancient ruins
22 - burden of the mighty
23 - the dark door
24 - the dark door
25 - "A" Cell Incubator
26 - United we stand
27 - swords of revealing light
28 - forbidden chalice
29 - lightning vortex
30 - giant trunade
31 - mystical space typhoon
32 - gold sarcophagus


***********
traps

33 - grave of the super ancient organism
34 - grave of the super ancient organism
35 - royal decree

37 - planet pollutant virus
38 - planet pollutant virus
39 - offering to the snake deity


**********
EXTRA DECK
********************************
armory arm
cosmic fortress gol'gar (x3)
Ally of Justice Catastor (x3)
Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier
goyo guardian
ancient sacred wyvern
ancient fairy dragon
black rose dragon
stardust dragon
red dragon archfiend
thought ruler archfiend

[KazilDarkeye]

[roll0]

"I summon one monster face-down and activate my Messenger of Peace Spell card - your Wyvern won't be much good with this. I'll then end my turn."

{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
-|-|Fm|-|-
-|-|F|MoP|-
[/table]

Fm: Face-down Monster

F: Face-down Spell/Trap
MoP: Messenger of Peace

Life Points: 4900



Hand: 3

Gear Golem the Moving Fortress
Exodia the Forbidden One
Burial From A Different Dimension


Deck:

1. Crystal Seer
2. Deep Diver
3. Emissary of the Afterlife
4. Left Arm of the Forbidden One
5. Left Leg of the Forbidden One
6-7. Mystic Tomato x2
8-10. Nimble Momonga x3
11. Right Arm of the Forbidden One
12. Right Leg of the Forbidden One
13. Sangan
14. Spirit Reaper
15. Stone Statue of the Aztecs
16. Vortex Trooper
17. Card Trader
18. Dark World Dealings
19-20. Different Dimension Capsule x2
21. Level Limit – Area B
22. Monster Reincarnation
23-24. Upstart Goblin x2
25. Backup Soldier
26. Birthright
27-28. Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
29. Gravity Bind
30. Mirror Force
31-32. Reckless Greed x2


Face-Down:

Emissary of the Afterlife

Monster Reincarnation


Graveyard:

Upstart Goblin
Destiny Hero - Defender


Out of Play:
Empty

[Lorolar]

[roll0]
"You will... regret that. I summon my alien kid (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Alien_Kid) in attack mode and end my turn"

{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
-|-|ASW|AK|-
-|F|Botm|Botm|-[/table]

Life points - 9000

Graveyard -
Removed from play -

Hand
Alien Ammonite

Deck

Monsters
1 - Alien Ammonite
2 - Alien Ammonite
3 - cyber valley
4 - plaguespreader zombie
5 - alien dog
6 - alien dog
7 - alien skull
9 - alien kid
10 - alien kid
11 - alien telepath
12 - alien telepath
13 - alien telepath
14 - alien warrior
15 - alien warrior
16 - alien warrior
17 - alien overlord
18 - alien overlord


************
spells
19 - Code a ancient ruins
20 - Code a ancient ruins
21 - Code a ancient ruins
22 - burden of the mighty
23 - the dark door
24 - the dark door
25 - "A" Cell Incubator
26 - United we stand
27 - swords of revealing light
28 - forbidden chalice
29 - lightning vortex
30 - giant trunade
31 - mystical space typhoon
32 - gold sarcophagus


***********
traps

33 - grave of the super ancient organism
34 - grave of the super ancient organism
35 - royal decree
36 - planet pollutant virus
37 - planet pollutant virus
38 - offering to the snake deity


**********
EXTRA DECK
********************************
armory arm
cosmic fortress gol'gar (x3)
Ally of Justice Catastor (x3)
Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier
goyo guardian
ancient sacred wyvern
ancient fairy dragon
black rose dragon
stardust dragon
red dragon archfiend
thought ruler archfiend

[KazilDarkeye]

[roll0]

"I will summon a monster face-down and end my turn."

{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
-|-|Fm|Fm|-
-|-|F|MoP|-
[/table]

Fm: Face-down Monster

F: Face-down Spell/Trap
MoP: Messenger of Peace

Life Points: 4800 (paid)



Hand: 4

Gear Golem the Moving Fortress
Exodia the Forbidden One
Burial From A Different Dimension


Deck:

1. Crystal Seer
2. Deep Diver
3. Emissary of the Afterlife
4. Left Arm of the Forbidden One
5. Left Leg of the Forbidden One
6-7. Mystic Tomato x2
8-9. Nimble Momonga x2

11. Right Arm of the Forbidden One
12. Right Leg of the Forbidden One
13. Sangan
14. Spirit Reaper
15. Stone Statue of the Aztecs
16. Vortex Trooper
17. Card Trader
18. Dark World Dealings
19-20. Different Dimension Capsule x2
21. Level Limit – Area B
22. Monster Reincarnation
23-24. Upstart Goblin x2
25. Backup Soldier
26. Birthright
27-28. Compulsory Evacuation Device x2
29. Gravity Bind
30. Mirror Force
31-32. Reckless Greed x2


Face-Down:

Emissary of the Afterlife
Nimble Momonga

Monster Reincarnation


Graveyard:

Upstart Goblin
Destiny Hero - Defender


Out of Play:
Empty

[Lorolar]

[roll0]
"I summon my Alien Ammonite (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Alien_Ammonite) from my hand who will tune to my kid. Clustering darkness, bring about world ending power, Syncrho summon:Cosmic Fortress Gol'gar (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cosmic_Fortress_Gol%27gar). Now I equip my Gol'gar with the magic of united we stand and use its effect to bounce all face up continous spell and trap cards to their owners hand and distribute A-counters equal to the number, in this case four. My burdens and united we stand and your messegner. I then remove two of these counters to destroy your leftmost facedown monster through gol'gar's effect. Next I requip United we stand to my Gol'gar who will atack your remaining facedown for 4200 attack points. My ancient sacred Wyvern will then attack directly for 6300 thanks to the difference in our life points. I belive thats game human"
{table="head]1|2|3|4|5
-|-|ASW|AK|-
-|F|Botm|Botm|UWS[/table]

Life points - 9000

Graveyard Alien Kid
Alien Ammonite
Removed from play -

Hand
-

Deck

Monsters
1 - Alien Ammonite
2 - Alien Ammonite
3 - cyber valley
4 - plaguespreader zombie
5 - alien dog
6 - alien dog
7 - alien skull
8 - alien kid
9 - alien kid
10 - alien telepath
11 - alien telepath
12 - alien telepath
13 - alien warrior
14 - alien warrior
15 - alien warrior
16 - alien overlord
17 - alien overlord


************
spells
18 - Code a ancient ruins
19 - Code a ancient ruins
20 - Code a ancient ruins
21 - burden of the mighty
22 - the dark door
23 - the dark door
24 - "A" Cell Incubator

26 - swords of revealing light
27 - forbidden chalice
28 - lightning vortex
29 - giant trunade
30 - mystical space typhoon
31 - gold sarcophagus


***********
traps

32 - grave of the super ancient organism
33 - grave of the super ancient organism
34 - royal decree
35 - planet pollutant virus
36 - planet pollutant virus
37 - offering to the snake deity


**********
EXTRA DECK
********************************
armory arm
cosmic fortress gol'gar (x3)
Ally of Justice Catastor (x3)
Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier
goyo guardian
ancient sacred wyvern
ancient fairy dragon
black rose dragon
stardust dragon
red dragon archfiend
thought ruler archfiend

[KazilDarkeye]

"Incorrect - the monster your bloated ship ran down was Nimble Momonga, which not only allows me to regain 1000 Lifepoints, butalso summons two more to my field. Will you continue your attack with your Wyvern, or not?"

[Lorolar]

"I shall attack, then I will re-play my burden of the Mighty's and end my turn. All you have bought is one turn"

[KazilDarkeye]

"Yeah, you're probably right. Which is why I'm goin- hey look over there!"

<running>

Seriously though, do you have any hints on how to improve this deck? I mean, that's the second duel I've lost. Am I just kind of unlucky?

[Lorolar]

Your not so much unlucky as this alien deck is insane. I mean, did you see what I did in just three turns? I am right in considering you surrender right? Can weat least finish the duel so I can get my damage done/lost ratio for the tourney? Pwetty please?

hmm, put two copies of gold sarcophagus (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gold_Sarcophagus), best draw power in game for your exodia pieces.

More suggestions to be eddited in as I think of them.

[KazilDarkeye]

You did 9400 damage, and you took none. Can't we just leave it at that?

[Lorolar]

sure, fine by me

trawling through alternate cards for your deck. Cant stress gold sarcophagus enough though