Champion's Curse

[Gimliggamer]

Decided I would try to make a webcomic. Here it is.

1: A New Age
http://i905.photobucket.com/albums/ac256/Mordakka/comic12.png

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1: A New Age
http://i905.photobucket.com/albums/ac256/Mordakka/comic12.png

[Cizak]

I don't get the... punchline?

Also, that character looks a little too much like V for my taste.

EDIT: He's also much thinner in two panels, what's up with that?

[Mad Mask]

IEDIT: He's also much thinner in two panels, what's up with that?

I think it's the OP squashing panels to make them fit in a single row.

[Gimliggamer]

No punchline....yet. Still thinking of ideas for the plot.

[Cizak]

So... why was he angry? :smallconfused:

[Bago!!!]

Too much like V with the outfit and hair style. Change it around a bit. And maybe make the Raven different in some way shape or form.

[CrimsonAngel]

Oh hey, V decided to die hir hair.

[Gimliggamer]

Thanks for the suggestions, will put up revised in a bit. He's mad about the lack of plot in the first strip.