PDA

View Full Version : Shadow of Fire--A Webcomic



Sahaar
2010-05-17, 06:11 PM
Fellow playgrounders, Maximum Zersk and Sahaar are proud to present:

The Shadow of Fire Webcomic!

A tale of two brave warriors who dare to take on a powerful Empire by themselves. Presented in OOTS-style format.

Thanks to Maximum Zersk for the art. Written by me.


Book 1


1, Prologue (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-001.png)

2, The bushes are a clue (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-002.png)

3, Could be puberty (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-003.png)

4, Share your WIS Modifier with us, oh great Tim (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-004.png)

5, Believe it or not, there are Predator spoilers. (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-005.png)

6, No food for you! (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-006.png)

7, Not even if it was pretty with sugar on top (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-007.png)

8, There's a joke hidden in here somewhere... (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-008.png)

Domochevsky
2010-05-17, 06:47 PM
...they banned fire, hm? Guess they're that evil. :smallwink:
(Odd transition from panel 1 to panel 2. "Yeah everything's going well. Oh wait, now it doesn't.")

Sahaar
2010-05-17, 06:52 PM
Blame Zersk I take responsibilty for that. Oh, well. We're working on the next strips now, I promise they'll be at least slightly more interesting than the first one.

Eric Tolle
2010-06-06, 10:31 PM
I think an empire that banned both magic and fire would be a pretty quickly self-correcting problem.

"I don't know why, but we keep losing to that small kingdom."
"You mean the one that has the metal armor and weapons, and cooked food, and magic?"
"Yeah, that one. I don't get it."

Jokasti
2010-06-06, 11:33 PM
Will watch.

Maximum Zersk
2010-06-06, 11:43 PM
Damn it, Sahaar. I was watching the Fancomic Sub-forum, waiting for you to put it up. And then you put it up here. :smalltongue:

Yeah, I'm thinking about the fire thing. I sent him something about a whole bunch of things in the comic, so we'll see.

Jokasti
2010-06-06, 11:48 PM
If it's OotS style, shouldn't it be in Fancomics?

Maximum Zersk
2010-06-06, 11:54 PM
If it isn't hosted anywhere else, it should be in Fancomics. :smalltongue:

And don't mind the soldier in panel three holding the sword in a wierd way. He's actually a lumberjack.

"I never wanted to be a soldier. I wanted to be a lumberjack!"

Jokasti
2010-06-07, 12:10 AM
Don't forget to link in your signature

Maximum Zersk
2010-06-07, 12:37 AM
Got it, thanks for reminding me. :smallsmile:

Domochevsky
2010-06-07, 11:05 AM
But link it in a way that doesn't contain a "&posted=1#post8643992" in the URL. :smallwink:

Maximum Zersk
2010-06-07, 03:36 PM
But link it in a way that doesn't contain a "&posted=1#post8643992" in the URL. :smallwink:

Did it do that? :smallredface:

Domochevsky
2010-06-07, 03:46 PM
Did it do that? :smallredface:

Yes, that's exactly what you did. (And still do.)

Just remove that part from the URL and you're good. :smallsmile:

Maximum Zersk
2010-06-07, 05:37 PM
'Kay, fixed it.

Still waiting for Sahaar to reply.

Maximum Zersk
2010-06-12, 10:17 PM
'Kay, I finished page two.

Since it seems that Sahaar might not see it for a little, I'll post it here.

Page Two. (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-002.png)

Sahaar
2010-06-13, 08:54 AM
Chapter 2 added to the Archive.

Domochevsky
2010-06-13, 10:25 AM
"The path says to go through here" ...? The paper/parchment mayhaps?

So... yeah, at least the names are descriptive, that's always a good thing, right? :smallcool:

Arcanoi
2010-06-13, 11:11 AM
Shouldn't there be MORE tombstones in panel 2, rather than less >_>?

Jokasti
2010-06-13, 11:17 AM
Shouldn't there be MORE tombstones in panel 2, rather than less >_>?

Those are houses, they have little roofs. Roofs? Is that the correct spelling?

Sahaar
2010-06-14, 06:44 AM
No, yes it is.


Strip 3 is in the works.

Ninjaman
2010-07-21, 06:47 AM
Nice comic, i watch gladly to see where you take it

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-01, 01:07 AM
Strip 3 is in the works.

Indeedly it is.

Sorry, I was gone for the past few weeks. Comic should up soon.

By the by, how would we go about moving the thread to fancomics? Using the report thingie, right?

Domochevsky
2010-08-01, 08:21 AM
I think so, yes. But is it actually a fancomic because it uses stick-type art?

Personally i'd rather have it stay here, so i can keep an eye on it. (i don't check the fancomic forum) >_>

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-01, 09:23 PM
Well, basically any comic that's hosted one the website needs to be in the fancomics section. We could keep it here, but we'd need to host it off-site. I could do that, but I'd need to see if Sahaar's okay with that.

Hopeless
2010-08-02, 09:44 AM
Looking good so far.

Looking forward to part 3.

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-08, 12:28 AM
And page 3 is done.

Here it is!

So how is it? (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-003.png)

X2
2010-08-08, 01:45 AM
Great art.

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-08, 01:53 AM
Why thank you. :smalltongue:

I'm going to try to fix the blur problem. Don't know why it's doing that.

Comet
2010-08-08, 06:41 AM
And there goes the fourth wall. It's almost like it's a thing on this website. :smalltongue:

I like the writing. And the art.

Sahaar
2010-08-08, 08:59 PM
I thank you :) Zersk does do good art, doesn't he?


Edit: New format, Chapter 3 added

Edit again: Chapter 4 ITWs.

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-08, 10:26 PM
And there goes the fourth wall. It's almost like it's a thing on this website. :smalltongue:

I like the writing. And the art.

Yeah, about that...

The fourth wall left earth a while back.

Lord Raziere
2010-08-09, 10:58 AM
Yeah, about that...

The fourth wall left earth a while back.

eh, its a trait of post-modernism, like all art movements it will eventually pass.

Sahaar
2010-08-09, 02:05 PM
Yeah, about the 4th wall.....the demolition team's bill came in.....

super dark33
2010-08-10, 05:06 PM
if the black haird guy was the mage, and had no glasses, robes are black & red, it would be me and my friend (who is blonde and blue eyes)

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-10, 07:03 PM
eh, its a trait of post-modernism, like all art movements it will eventually pass.

Aw, but I like Post-Modernism. It's better than Modernism, at least.

Makes me curious about what Post-post-modernism is gonna be like.

Lord Raziere
2010-08-10, 09:36 PM
Aw, but I like Post-Modernism. It's better than Modernism, at least.

Makes me curious about what Post-post-modernism is gonna be like.

"hey we're being those weird post-modern people who point out cliches and stuff."
"eh, that is not all that special I mean whats the point? lets go be stupid heroes anyways for kicks and giggles"

OR its gonna be using post modern elements for dramatic or even horrifying ways instead of the usual humorous bent

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-10, 09:53 PM
So basically Post-Modern Deconstructionism? Aren't we almost doing that already?

EDIT: OH DEAR GOD WE'RE TALKING ABOUT ART MOVEMENTS IN A THREAD ABOUT A FANTASY WEBCOMIC USING STICK FIGURES.

Sweet.

Lord Raziere
2010-08-10, 10:20 PM
frack I have no idea- art movements can sometimes last for decades and then the movement after that can backlash against the previous one, art movements are weird, we really have no way of knowing where it will go next, especially now that the internet is bringing freedom of expression to a whole new level, all art movements could be going on right now, or none of them or they're changing more rapidly, or whatever, there isn't really any predictability to it.

Maximum Zersk
2010-08-12, 10:09 AM
Heh, well look at it this way. We may have broken the Fourth Wall, but we haven't made any D&D references yet. :smalltongue:

Sahaar
2010-08-23, 03:34 PM
We should change that in part 5.

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-04, 05:58 PM
Oh, hey look, only a month between the two. I think I'm getting faster.

The actual comic 4 is actually much bigger. This is just the first part.

Oh, and I'm trying the traditional gutters.

http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-004.png

Look, if I argue with you, I must take up the contrary position.

That's Flying Circus, not Holy Grail.

Yes it is.

No it isn't.

Sahaar
2010-09-05, 08:17 AM
No, I've SEEN Holy grail, it's in there :P


Also, The D&D references? We've got one now :D

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-05, 04:34 PM
No, I've SEEN Holy grail, it's in there :P


Also, The D&D references? We've got one now :D

Really? Hm, I must think of another reference to a different Monty Python work. :smalltongue:

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-07, 10:37 PM
What is this?! What is this foolery?!

A new comic within a month? Preposterous!

http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-005.png

I've never watched Predator, so I have no idea what they're talking about. :smalltongue:

super dark33
2010-09-08, 06:10 AM
nice one filler text!

Sahaar
2010-09-08, 06:46 AM
You haven't seen Predator? What kind of blasphemy is this!?

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-08, 06:56 AM
You haven't seen Predator? What kind of blasphemy is this!?

Oh, I own the DVD. It's just that I'm not allowed to watch it with the younger siblings around. Which is all the time. :smalltongue:

Sahaar
2010-09-08, 07:20 AM
Hahaha, I know the feeling.

The script for chapter 6 will be PMed to you soon. probably tonight.

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-08, 08:49 PM
Okay, I was hoping this next comic would be done in a day or two, but I'm experimenting with this comic a bit. I'll try to finish it by Sunday. If I do not make it, you may hit me as hard as you can...

With this Herring.

Sahaar
2010-09-09, 06:33 AM
Awwww....I had a bloated Goldfish just for such an occasion...

super dark33
2010-09-09, 03:59 PM
with herrings you can chop trees you know

Sahaar
2010-09-09, 04:40 PM
True that. I'll go get said herring, then.

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-10, 11:30 PM
Hahah~!

http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-006.png

No being hit with a herring for me!

Also, as you might have noticed, I'm experimenting with the background a bit. Tell me how it looks.

super dark33
2010-09-11, 06:48 AM
Its nice! and one of te first webcomics i saw that has goblins shorter then people!

Sahaar
2010-09-11, 08:06 AM
Good looking background, finally a change of scenery, eh?

mastermind
2010-09-11, 08:34 AM
I like these comics. Hope to see more.

Zexion
2010-09-11, 06:47 PM
Um... the speech bubble that says "me too" has no speech bubble spike. :smallsmile:

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-11, 07:27 PM
Zexion, you must be hallucinating. That word bubble has always had a spike on it, and I have not just gone back and added it at this very moment.

>.>

superdark: Well, most Mythos has them as short little guys, doesn't it? :smalltongue:

Sahaar: Of course! :smallwink:

mastermind: Why thank you! It's nice that Sahaar and I are producing something good. :smallbiggrin:

Sahaar
2010-09-11, 09:01 PM
Yeah, that is good to know. I'm going to go start page 7 right.....now.

Maximum Zersk
2010-09-28, 08:42 PM
This is why I don't have a schedule. >.>

Next comic will be up soon.

Sahaar
2010-10-03, 04:48 PM
Still waaaaaiiiitiiiinnnng....

Maximum Zersk
2010-10-05, 12:47 AM
It's coming, don't worry.

Very slowly, mind you, but it's coming.

Sahaar
2010-10-05, 02:56 PM
Yeah, well, take yer time. Better a good one really late than a crappy one really early.

Maximum Zersk
2010-10-16, 03:44 PM
Feeneeshed, finally!


http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-007.png


Eurgh, the composition in this one bothers me a bit. >.<

Sahaar
2010-10-16, 03:52 PM
Well, it appears we have an art upgrade of sorts. Maybe we'll reference that soon.

Maximum Zersk
2010-10-16, 03:55 PM
Well, it appears we have an art upgrade of sorts. Maybe we'll reference that soon.

Well, not much of an art upgrade. Just me messing around with the angles. You don't get better unless you try, right? :smalltongue:

Sahaar
2010-10-16, 04:07 PM
True. Sent you the script for #8. You've got a lot of thinking to do ;)

HalfTangible
2010-10-19, 01:37 PM
I like it :) it ain't Shakespeare or burlew but it's decent so far

Sahaar
2010-10-20, 05:37 PM
DECENT!? DECENT!? Thank you ;)

Maximum Zersk
2010-10-20, 07:53 PM
Yeah, thank you. I don't think we're at the level of pervy-ness that Shakespeare was at, but we'll try. :smalltongue:

Sahaar
2010-10-21, 06:22 AM
We may have a sex scene. I dunno.

Akrim.elf
2010-10-21, 07:21 AM
fantastic end!!! :)

Sahaar
2010-10-21, 02:49 PM
But we're not done yet!

Well, that was theend of our first story arc (of sorts), plenty moar to come.

Sahaar
2010-12-12, 06:04 PM
MZ? You still there?

Maximum Zersk
2010-12-12, 06:19 PM
Depends on what you mean by there.

School is time-consuming. NO, WAIT, THAT'S NOT AN EXCUSE TO WAIT 2 ****ING MONTHS, YOU IDIOT. -Slaps self-

Grargh. I'm almost done. >.>

Sahaar
2010-12-12, 06:31 PM
Good boy. I thought the project was defunct.

And this particular chapter is quite difficult to draw.

Maximum Zersk
2010-12-14, 06:30 PM
Hey, you know what'd suck?

Your computer breaking before you finish a comic! Heh.

...It shouldn't be too long, now. >.>

Maximum Zersk
2010-12-24, 05:05 PM
I dunno about the two's story. (http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/Zorosuke/ShadowofFire-008.png) Yeah, it's okay. I guess.

super dark33
2010-12-25, 08:08 AM
MZ=maximum zersk
Rahaas=Saahar

Sahaar
2010-12-25, 10:21 AM
AHA, you get it :D

Fin
2011-01-02, 06:33 PM
Nice work guys, love the fact that you have introduced noses to the OotS style (on the goblin)

Quick, if somewhat odd question. What font are you using in your speech bubbles? Is it comic sans cause if so it doesn't look right to me, but it might just be me being dim...

Maximum Zersk
2011-01-04, 08:12 PM
Oh, thank you! :smallsmile:

The font I use is not in fact Comic Sans, but a Freeware script designed by Blambot (http://www.blambot.com/) called Digital Strip.

Sahaar
2011-03-31, 12:19 PM
-cough- bump -cough-