Ghill
2010-06-13, 01:15 AM
A friend of mine played a DnD character, a half-celestial, who gained some notoriety in and out of game. I kind of snowballed and mutated. At time of writing he had (I believe) four entire books written about the Yomish race and its various "leaders", the total page count well in excess of 1,000 8x11 pages. I am trying to convince him to actually let someone read it, and from what I know I think it would do decently as a book.
SO, here is the premise: An ingenious magical tinker and inventor creates an artificial life form successfully. This is a big deal to his neighbors, and as he creates more and more of his "children" as the population of his home city-state begin to polarize on the issue. The people who think that artificial life is a good thing, the people who think it is permissible, and the people who think this is a horribly amoral or dangerous thing end up in open conflict which leads to a civil war. The civil war destroys the city and leaves the artificial race (called the Yomen, I do not know the canonical reason for this) in a position of power. In the generations to come the Yomen separate into three distinct classifications, the first is made up of sidekicks and helpers who struggle to help destiny happen, the second a race of supernatural killers who intend to exterminate all other races in existence with only themselves remaining, and the third gets killed off so fast that I never learned anything about them. It is a struggle between competent, powerful, successful evil, and luckless, overwhelmed, paranoid good. The helper race is called the Yomish, and they work to set up and prepare heroes to fight the vastly more powerful forces of evil. The main recurring characters are the Yomen (yes, that word is used a lot), originally a single individual whose soul has been recombined and spliced into various incarnations (some of them simultaneously) to organize the Yomish in their effort to have others thwart evil.
Wow, that is verbose...anyone think it has potential?
SO, here is the premise: An ingenious magical tinker and inventor creates an artificial life form successfully. This is a big deal to his neighbors, and as he creates more and more of his "children" as the population of his home city-state begin to polarize on the issue. The people who think that artificial life is a good thing, the people who think it is permissible, and the people who think this is a horribly amoral or dangerous thing end up in open conflict which leads to a civil war. The civil war destroys the city and leaves the artificial race (called the Yomen, I do not know the canonical reason for this) in a position of power. In the generations to come the Yomen separate into three distinct classifications, the first is made up of sidekicks and helpers who struggle to help destiny happen, the second a race of supernatural killers who intend to exterminate all other races in existence with only themselves remaining, and the third gets killed off so fast that I never learned anything about them. It is a struggle between competent, powerful, successful evil, and luckless, overwhelmed, paranoid good. The helper race is called the Yomish, and they work to set up and prepare heroes to fight the vastly more powerful forces of evil. The main recurring characters are the Yomen (yes, that word is used a lot), originally a single individual whose soul has been recombined and spliced into various incarnations (some of them simultaneously) to organize the Yomish in their effort to have others thwart evil.
Wow, that is verbose...anyone think it has potential?