Dino-Zombies

[DinoZombies]

http://dinozombies.aura-core.com/

Website just went live, still has some things to fix (like forum) but please give me feedback, my first attempt at a web comic. It's an all pencil comic but edited in Photoshop to look stylish (blood, gore effects, colors)

Again feedback would be great!

[TheLaughingMan]

Looks good, but I'd downsize your signature.

Good luck!

[DinoZombies]

thanks, ure the first person to tell me anything about the book! lol. and i will get to work on making it smaller sorry :/

[Domochevsky]

Still too big. >_> (For reference: the size of my Anteheroes logo is a good size. Keep it small but recognizable.)

First impression: the frontpage certainly looks promising. :smallbiggrin:

Second impression: Needs navigation buttons at the bottom.

That being said, the art style is certainly... different. In that i have trouble recognizing what's in a panel due to it being pretty much just one color tone. A bit more contrast should go a long way on that front. :smallsmile:

[DinoZombies]

new page is up showing what the daytime colors look like, enjoy!

http://dinozombies.aura-core.com/index2.php?

[chiasaur11]

This comic is ridiculous.

Everyone knows dinosaurs are immune to zombism.

Inherently impossible. Good day, sir!

[DinoZombies]

haha well how me evidence of that!

[PhantomFox]

Here obviously:
http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/8p28

[DinoZombies]

new page is up!

http://dinozombies.aura-core.com/

[DinoZombies]

hey guys two new pages up!

http://dinozombies.aura-core.com/

[DinoZombies]

3 new pages up guys, worked all week and made a bigger buffer so enjoy!

http://dinozombies.aura-core.com/

[DinoZombies]

new style guys, check it out!

http://dinozombies.aura-core.com/index2.php

[Glass Mouse]

The artstyle is really neat. The first pages were more art-y than comic-y, but with the newest page(s), this seems to have fixet itself.
Not that you need colours if you aren't comfortable with them. A bit of contrast could work just as well.

I have a lot of trouble figuring out what's happening. Who are the characters, and how many are they? Where are they?
It looks like you skipped over all the introduction stuff and went straight to the action. Which is... okay, I guess. But you need to make things clear as soon as the action appetizer is over.

I don't know what I think of the concept. Dino-zombies. Snicker. It's pretty silly - but then again, if you have fun with it, go for it!

[DinoZombies]

The artstyle is really neat. The first pages were more art-y than comic-y, but with the newest page(s), this seems to have fixet itself.
Not that you need colours if you aren't comfortable with them. A bit of contrast could work just as well.

I have a lot of trouble figuring out what's happening. Who are the characters, and how many are they? Where are they?
It looks like you skipped over all the introduction stuff and went straight to the action. Which is... okay, I guess. But you need to make things clear as soon as the action appetizer is over.

I don't know what I think of the concept. Dino-zombies. Snicker. It's pretty silly - but then again, if you have fun with it, go for it!

it will clear up trust me, and the reason its unclear is because if uve noticed most of the shots are medium/close ups. why u ask? I SUCK AT BACKGROUNDS hahah but im working on it. The where is explained, theres those parts where it says NYC, NYC BANK, Coney island beach etc. ive started to draw more backgrounds so hopefuly things will clear up, and this is my first comic so its all a work in progress ya kno? good to get feedback to fix whats unclear! and if u want more info on the characters thats why we made a characters page lol

[Threeshades]

It really is frickin awesome. But its sad that you're taking your dinosaur facts from jurassic park (spitting frilled-lizard miniature dilophosaurus and giant velociraptors)

Well the velociraptor bit can be solved by renaming them Deinonychus.

Oh and spinosaurus triple the size of T-Rex? :smallconfused: As far as i know its just a few meters longer (two or three)

I'll follow anyway because the premise is as i said, frickin awesome! :smallbiggrin:

[DinoZombies]

hah well come on, zombie acid spitting dinosaur? and the largest recorded spino is about 3 times the size of an average t rex :D

here is the official motion comic!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/548376

VOTE 5!!!!!!


great job for juan to draw over and bring my creation to life! and another great job to josh for making a cool ass chambers inc logo and tag line! he makes great tag lines, like HELL YES, simples! The next few pages are getting better and better so look forward to some better quality work to read. The whole issuse is fully paneled and written out, just waiting for the pictures to be plopped in! anyway, enjoy!

[Threeshades]

and the largest recorded spino is about 3 times the size of an average t rex :D


where did you get that information from?! That doesn't even make sense.

[DinoZombies]

from the big old bag of bull****!

[Threeshades]

from the big old bag of bull****!

Ah, you see, you shouldn't trust wikipedia :smallbiggrin:

[DinoZombies]

hey guys, so issue 1 is almost complete and what a crazy journey it's been drawing it for 4 months! I'm on issue two now with the buffer of 3 pages and am too excited to even start, hope you guys like it and read it!

www.dino-zombies.com

[Domochevsky]

Entirely unfitting for this board, mainly because of screen stretching. >_>

(Oh, and there's the gore, too.)

[DinoZombies]

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