drack
2010-08-14, 10:00 PM
OK so I am somewhat new to the forum, and so far I have posted only one homebrew so I decided to dig through my scraps of homebrew (in a folder) and attempt to get some suggestions for it.
Ash of the Undead Oak
stats as a goblin except type becomes undead, only attack is slam +2 and 1d6 damage, environment becomes any, organisation becomes any Treasure becomes none, and advancement becomes none.
Also as a special quality they may emit some of the ash of which they are comprised inflicting 1 negative energy damage in a 50' radius and adding one damage to the next ash emission of other Ash of the undead in the area.
They may only stay out of their ash pit for one day at a time without harmlessly drifting away in the air.
Assume they enter combat with no damage bonus.
Pit burner [Epic spell]
spellcraft DC: 200
Target: touched plot of land
Effect: The ground sinks in a 10' by 10' square 10' deep, and instantly fills with a crackling blaze. Every fire elemental that enters this pit is trapped within, and as firewood is added and ash cumulates Ash of the Undead Oak form within Interdemensional space in the pit and the fire elementals begin loosing HP at a rate of 10 per Ash of the Undead Oak created. Ash of the Undead oak can't be created if there is a total of less than 10 HP of fire elementals trapped in the pit.
This spell also creates a dagger which when slashed through air can summon any number of the inter-dimensionally stored Ash of the Undead Oak as it's wielder desires.
So any advice on it?
Ash of the Undead Oak
stats as a goblin except type becomes undead, only attack is slam +2 and 1d6 damage, environment becomes any, organisation becomes any Treasure becomes none, and advancement becomes none.
Also as a special quality they may emit some of the ash of which they are comprised inflicting 1 negative energy damage in a 50' radius and adding one damage to the next ash emission of other Ash of the undead in the area.
They may only stay out of their ash pit for one day at a time without harmlessly drifting away in the air.
Assume they enter combat with no damage bonus.
Pit burner [Epic spell]
spellcraft DC: 200
Target: touched plot of land
Effect: The ground sinks in a 10' by 10' square 10' deep, and instantly fills with a crackling blaze. Every fire elemental that enters this pit is trapped within, and as firewood is added and ash cumulates Ash of the Undead Oak form within Interdemensional space in the pit and the fire elementals begin loosing HP at a rate of 10 per Ash of the Undead Oak created. Ash of the Undead oak can't be created if there is a total of less than 10 HP of fire elementals trapped in the pit.
This spell also creates a dagger which when slashed through air can summon any number of the inter-dimensionally stored Ash of the Undead Oak as it's wielder desires.
So any advice on it?