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mastermind
2010-09-13, 07:12 AM
Mostly homebrewed races, and I'm also using 4e, without relying too much on it.

I plan on using less jokes and more story, as I am bad at humor. Any help is appreciated regarding humorous titles for the comic.

Current:
http://i53.tinypic.com/317i7p3.png

The Comic (http://theunderscores.thecomicseries.com/comics/)

Lore:
World Map (V 1.0) (http://i54.tinypic.com/9rnkpk.png)

mastermind
2010-09-14, 05:22 PM
Update:
http://i56.tinypic.com/6gvreu.png

Please comment.

mastermind
2010-09-15, 06:57 AM
Update:
http://i55.tinypic.com/rj1slc.png
Please Comment.

mastermind
2010-09-17, 03:44 PM
Update:
http://i52.tinypic.com/mv2mmo.png
POOOSSST

mastermind
2010-09-19, 04:48 PM
Update:
http://i51.tinypic.com/2n19jkz.png
Scene Change!
And come on, POOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSST! I don't care if it's spam, just please acknowledge this comics' presence! (Well, actually, DON'T spam, I don't want this thread locked. But please post.)

mastermind
2010-09-20, 05:45 PM
Update:
Nom Nom Nom (http://i56.tinypic.com/2agiykz.png)
Comment

Anitar
2010-09-21, 03:23 PM
You might want to make it clearer who's talking, and definitely want to make the order of speech more apparent.

mastermind
2010-09-21, 03:49 PM
Alright. I'll make the next one have tails on the speech bubbles, and also have a better order.

mastermind
2010-09-29, 07:36 PM
Update:

You all meet in a tavern... (http://i53.tinypic.com/317i7p3.png)