Gao meray saath (new song)

[mirza aadil]

Hi fellows...i have made a song and am looking forward for a feedback..

here'z the link..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J35Csr3JZzk

feel free to comment
Regards

[Innis Cabal]

It's not terrible. It's not astounding either though. Fairly traditional from the sound of it with very little personal notes from the artists themselves.

[mirza aadil]

hmmm...i get ur point..thanks alot :)))

[mirza aadil]

do u think harmonies are soundin good? or should i cut it out in the pre-chorus?

[Mephibosheth]

I like it! It reminds me a lot of Roobaroo from Rang de Basanti, but that's probably mostly because of the prominent acoustic guitar part. My Hindi/Urdu isn't quite good enough to comment on the lyrics without reading them (or at least listening over and over again), but I always enjoy this sort of syncretism between South Asian and Western musical styles (follow the PashTones link in my sig for my own attempts). I think you should keep the harmonies on the pre-chorus. They add an interesting element that set's it apart from the verses. Is there anything else specific you're looking for by way of comments?

I'd definitely be interested to hear more!