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Fin
2011-01-27, 02:43 PM
The Relics of Raz'ni

Ok, so this my Fan-Comic inspired by the Order of The Stick created by Rich Burlew. It is essentially a cheesy quests for the maguffin(s) story with (hopefully) a few original elements tossed in there as well.

Updates will have to be limited to one a week minimum. There is the potential for more than one a week, I just can't promise that.

So without further delay here is the prologue:
(watch out it is fairly long)
http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/7566/nicomic1.png

Archive and stuff will be created when more comics are made!

Also any and all feedback is appreciated, I am still learning this after all.
BeethroBudkin07
2011-01-27, 10:50 PM
This looks intense. I'll have to wait and see how the story starts off...

Your art style is pretty amazing as well.
Fin
2011-01-28, 01:18 PM
Yeah, that strip had to be fast paced in order to fit everything in. I know it is a long strip but I thought it would inappropriate for a "Prologue" to be more than one strip in length.

Anyway, the first proper strip plus a cast page should hopefully be up this weekend :smallsmile:
super dark33
2011-01-28, 03:48 PM
thats nice magic clouds you did there for Urzil, think you can upgrade my Avvie?
Terry576
2011-01-28, 06:23 PM
thats nice magic clouds you did there for Urzil, think you can upgrade my Avvie?

...

Hey Dark remember this?
http://i581.photobucket.com/albums/ss257/araveugnitsuga/SuperDarkAvatar-1.png

it's that avatar you didn't thank August for.

Just thought I'd mention it.

IC: Damn good start. I really want to see the next one.

@V: Yes. Yes it is. Link to post. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=10236203&postcount=943)
super dark33
2011-01-28, 06:37 PM
nope i dont remeber this, when did it happen? is it me?
Cizak
2011-01-28, 07:10 PM
Wow! Really nice beginning, good script and awesome artwork.

Just two things though:

"It's over Urzil" is missing an "!". What? I found things like that annoying when I read :smalltongue:

Your running characters in robes look a little weird, kinde like they're floating. Rich does is like this (first panel) (http://www.giantitp.com/comics/oots0092.html). He shows the feet of the runner, which makes it look better.
Ninjaman
2011-02-06, 11:11 AM
wouldn´t this go into the fancomic section?
Cizak
2011-02-07, 02:45 AM
wouldn´t this go into the fancomic section?

Um... that's where it is :smalltongue: