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Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-09, 09:50 AM
Decided I'm going to finish an old project of mine, and I'd like some feedback for what I have from the old stuff, and any ideas from the playground for things to help me either A) answer questions, B) round out the race or C) create PrCs and variant class features to work this race into my game worlds.

Galean
Galean Racial Traits
• -2 Str, +2 Cha
• Humanoid (psionic)
• Medium: As Medium creatures, galeans have no special bonuses or penalties due to their size.
• Galean base land speed is 30 feet
• Naturally Psionic: Galeans gain 1 bonus power point at 1st level. This benefit does not grant them the ability to manifest powers unless they gain that ability through another source, such as levels in a psionic class.
• Psionics (Sp): At will/- empathy, Effective character level equals the galean’s class levels. The save DCs are Charisma based.
• +2 racial bonus on Gather Information and Perform
• Automatic Languages: Common, Galean. Bonus Languages: Elven, Celestial, Gnome, Draconic, Undercommon
• Favoured Class: Bard or Wilder

A Day in the Life

Iri awoke late in the morning, a common occurrence these days. She quickly washed her face and hands, then hurried swiftly out of her apartment in the city’s guildhall district. Iri walked swiftly and with a skip in her step towards the offices of Belneiros Goldweaver, master of the physic’s guild.The work was hard, but the clients were interesting and friendly, and Belneiros mainly used her for looking over paperwork from the city hall, and paying visits to the other dozen-odd physics in the city. She relished the sunny days like this in the city. She loved the feel of the wind in her emerald hair, the warmth of the sun on her chalk-white skin. When Iri arrived, she sat down at her desk, touching the singing orb on her desk. The orb sang a quiet, ethereal song, reminding Iri of the quiet days in the hatchery of her people. Back in those days, if she had walked through the same city street, she would have been overwhelmed just by the daily happiness, sadness, anger and confusion of the city as a whole.

Mr. Goldweaver came in to scold Iri for being late, and then gave her the forms and records for the guild’s books. Iri opened the thick leather folder, sighing as she started to check the numbers and sign the duplicate forms. She hated days like these. If she was busy doing paperwork, she would have no time to chat with the clients.

Once her work was done for the day, Iri pulled on her cloak and walked briskly towards the Drunken Dragon tavern. Tonight, Eldak Sandtracker, famous gnomish eccentric, had given Iri the chance to sing some songs she had written to an audience of Eldak’s best patrons. As Iri sat down in a chair provided on the stage at the back of the Dragon, she could feel the excitement. Not just her own, but the excitement of the crowd. They were as happy to hear her as she was to sing for them.

Description
Galeans generally stand a little bit shorter than humans. They stand somewhere between 4-1/2 feet to 6 feet, and can weigh between 90 to 130 pounds. All Galeans share three highly noticeable traits, their chalk-white skin, bright, colourful hair and vivid eyes. Their hair is never a colour in the ordinary human range, instead being red, green, blue, metallic silver or even purple. Some have mixtures and bands of colours in their hair. Their eyes are described as like jewels, mianly because of the colours they share in common. Ruby red, sapphire blue, and emerald green are all common eye colours among Galeans. Though their appearance can be startling at first, many humanoids, especially humans, find a sort of exotic appeal to the Galean physique. Most Galeans are not muscular, and tend towards being slim and waif-like, though exceptions do exist, especially among those Galeans chosen to be Blades of Emotion. Galean males are able to grow facial hair, and frequently do grow short and neat beards.

Galean Psychology
Galeans are strangely dualistic creatures. They thoroughly enjoy urban life, almost exclusively spending most of their adult lives in cities and metropolises (or at least large trading towns). On the other hand they do not raise their children anywhere near cities, fearing that the negative emotions normally present in such a location would harm their children psychically. This leads Galeans cultivating two very separate and different personas. A Galean bard, for instance, might be outgoing and playful to his friends, his superiors, his employers, and might even of out of his way to start conversations with random strangers on the street, but in private, or among other Galeans, the same bard might be somber and quiet, drawing all the emotional sustenance he needs from his surroundings, savoring the silence so absent in the rest of his life. Years of quiet and subtle emotional molding by the Galean elders give all Galeans an ability to shut the world out from their minds when needed, and like all other humanoids, sometimes all a Galean wants is to be alone. But they never remain alone for long, always seeking out new friends and experiences.

Galean Life
Galean females bear children much like other humanoids, having generally one child at a time, at rare times perhaps twins. When a Galean child is born, it is known by its “hatchling name”, a three syllable name denoting who its father and mother are, and where it is from. The reason for this is simple, in the regrettable case a child is lost, any member of the Blades of Emotion who finds the child will be able to determine from its name where to return it. For the first fifteen years of a Galean’s life, it remains a small and frail creature. It has not yet mastered its empathic powers, and so is overwhelmed by strong emotions or loud noises. At the age of fifteen, a Galean undergoes a quick and uncomfortable transformation, in which its empathic ability becomes so sensitive it feels the emotions of every creature in a five mile radius. It is for this reason that the communities where Galean children are raised are far from cities.

Once this time of change is over, after about a week’s time, the young Galean is now an adult, and begins to physically mature. It is during this time that the parents of this Galean begin teaching him or her about Galean culture and religion, and after three years of maturation and education, the now fully adult Galean is taken to the nearest city, where he or she live with his/her parents for one year. After this time, the Galean is expected to live and work in the city (or any other city if they want to move) on his/her own. Most Galeans procure jobs as actors or musicians, but any job that brings them into contact with others is highly valued.

Leisure
If a Galean’s job brings him/her into contact with other people, they find great enjoyment in their work. That being said, in order to relax, many Galeans perform an art of some sort. Even as children, before they learn much of anything, the Galeans instinctively know how to dance and to sing. Soon after learning words, Galean children compose songs and short plays or comedies to perform. In their own private lives, many adult Galeans have a passion for writing, painting or composing, and create works in line with their chosen form of performance expression. Many Galeans create these works in Common, so as to share with their friends, but just as many keep at least some of their work confined to the Galean language, so that only other Galeans (or the particularly learned) can appreciate it.

Art
As mentioned above, most Galeans love art, both creating and showcasing it, and it is this love of art that defines an otherwise mainly individualist race. For the art of the Galeans is not merely copied from the books and galleries of humans or elves, but is a unique entity of its own. Galeans favour art that evokes great emotion, and are drawn towards merging both abstract and realistic art into a surreal fusion. A Galean poet, for instance, might create a string of adjectives and epithets for the subject of his work that becomes a poem onto itself in length, just to pinpoint the exact meaning of a word in his poem. A Galean painter may not even paint his subject as it is, but instead use a varied splash of colours to show the emotions present in the subject. Galean jewelry is asymmetrical and flowing, symmetry representing boredom to a Galean.

Coming soon:

Technology and Magic
War

Galean Society and Culture

Galean Societal Roles
Religion
History and Folklore

Galeans and Other Races
Creating Galean Characters
Galeans as Characters

Galean Communities
Sample Community

Mayhem
2011-05-10, 02:12 AM
This is a really nice race, I like it. Can they hide their emotions from each other at all?

Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-10, 06:15 AM
This is a really nice race, I like it. Can they hide their emotions from each other at all?

You know, that's probably essential to co-existence. Now is it a special resistance to detection or just a sort of code of conduct about reading each other . . . hrmmm. Thoughts?

Mayhem
2011-05-10, 06:48 AM
Some kind of resistance would be nice, but it would have to be worded carefully or it might be better than intended. Perhaps they get a will save against that power, with a retry only if the reader concentrates on the target(or if they go out then back into range)?

As for a code of conduct, maybe the galeans could choose to ignore certain targets?

Do they need to concentrate to maintain the power, or are they always treated as concentrating?

Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-10, 06:51 AM
Some kind of resistance would be nice, but it would have to be worded carefully or it might be better than intended. Perhaps they get a will save against that power, with a retry only if the reader concentrates on the target(or if they go out then back into range)?

As for a code of conduct, maybe the galeans could choose to ignore certain targets?

Do they need to concentrate to maintain the power, or are they always treated as concentrating?

It's a psi-like ability, they activate it like an SLA or PLA (I believe standard action) and then gain the benefit.

Empathy (http://www.d20srd.org/srd/psionic/powers/empathy.htm)

I'll work something like that it.

DracoDei
2011-05-10, 12:05 PM
I would turn the bonus to Perform into a list that you pick one from at character creation. Let me get it started, but you will probably want to add to it.

Perform
Craft

Painting
Sculpture




.... OK so that turned out to be shorter than I thought it would be, but hopefully you get the idea and it is worth it to make the fluff match the crunch more closely (a focus of mine).

Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-10, 02:14 PM
I would turn the bonus to Perform into a list that you pick one from at character creation. Let me get it started, but you will probably want to add to it.

Perform
Craft

Painting
Sculpture




.... OK so that turned out to be shorter than I thought it would be, but hopefully you get the idea and it is worth it to make the fluff match the crunch more closely (a focus of mine).

I went somewhere along the lines of the warforged from Eberron, where they like to craft in their spare time, but don't have a bonus to Craft. What would you suggest?

1) Leave as is

2) Give them a bonus to Craft on top of everything (it's not a very broken skill as far as I know, besides basketweaving)

3) Give the player a choice between a bonus to Craft or Perform? (or possibly Profession)

DracoDei
2011-05-10, 04:22 PM
I went somewhere along the lines of the warforged from Eberron, where they like to craft in their spare time, but don't have a bonus to Craft.
Ok, let me first ask: Why do they have a racial bonus to Perform? I thought that it was just that they tend to have a hobby that lets them express themselves many of which would fall under perform, whereas I was trying to point out that others of the ones that you mentioned would fall under craft.


What would you suggest?

1) Leave as is

2) Give them a bonus to Craft on top of everything (it's not a very broken skill as far as I know, besides basketweaving)

3) Give the player a choice between a bonus to Craft or Perform? (or possibly Profession)
I WAS suggesting (3), but you have raised doubts in my mind.

Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-10, 04:25 PM
Ok, let me first ask: Why do they have a racial bonus to Perform? I thought that it was just that they tend to have a hobby that lets them express themselves many of which would fall under perform, whereas I was trying to point out that others of the ones that you mentioned would fall under craft.


I WAS suggesting (3), but you have raised doubts in my mind.

Mainly it's because they're natural performers due to their latent empathy. They can "read" those they are performing to. Crafting is generally a solitary project with no target.

Edit: Perhaps an alternate class feature for Galean Artificers?

Ilriyn
2011-05-14, 12:03 AM
I really like this race (as I'm sure you're already aware). Their culture has an interesting feel, and I can see that you've put a lot of thought into it. I am curious about these 'blades of emotion'. Are they the ruling class? some sort of police? Also, I'd like to see what music would be like in galean culture,.

Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-17, 11:19 AM
I really like this race (as I'm sure you're already aware). Their culture has an interesting feel, and I can see that you've put a lot of thought into it. I am curious about these 'blades of emotion'. Are they the ruling class? some sort of police? Also, I'd like to see what music would be like in galean culture,.

I had conceived the Blades of Emotion as a sort of guard force, keeping outsiders out of the colonies to protect the children. They're Galeans who don't feel emotion, instead channeling it into their weapons.

Well, as a bard leaning race, music is important. Danged if I can think of wat it would be right now. Any ideas?

Silverscale
2011-05-17, 12:12 PM
My guess is their music would rival that of most real world renound Instumental/Orcestral composers/musicians; John Williams, Yo Yo Ma, Bethoveen, Holst, Gershwin, Louis Armstrong, etc, etc, etc.......

Sir_Chivalry
2011-05-17, 12:15 PM
My guess is their music would rival that of most real world renound Instumental/Orcestral composers/musicians; John Williams, Yo Yo Ma, Bethoveen, Holst, Gershwin, Louis Armstrong, etc, etc, etc.......

The issue is they're kind of social symbiotes. Their own culture is mainly just a fairly simple hunter gatherer society to protect the children, all the adults glom on to other cultures top define themselves. Makes me think, what would a stone age Galean do?

Tibbaerrohwen
2011-06-13, 10:13 AM
Mainly it's because they're natural performers due to their latent empathy. They can "read" those they are performing to. Crafting is generally a solitary project with no target.

Edit: Perhaps an alternate class feature for Galean Artificers?

I think the bonus to perform is sufficient for standard, but I would love to see VCF for an Artificer or Bard.


Also, I'd like to see what music would be like in galean culture,.

I'm also curious about this. Are they taught the rules of musical composition when they begin singing, or is just a natural need to express themselves and channel their emotions? If it's the latter, I would think it would be post-modern (as much as I can't stand post-modern music) until they are exposed to other influences that guide the development of their music in a more organized fashion.


Makes me think, what would a stone age Galean do?

I would imagine they would act much as they already do, though maybe a little in reverse. Currently they seek out other cultures and interact with them; I don't see why it wouldn't be the same in the stone age.
Perhaps they are the ones that introduced early man to the concept of cave drawings. If they outdate elves, maybe they introduced elves to music.
Their natural afinity toward art could have spawned the artistic cultures in other races.