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Trixie
2011-08-25, 05:50 PM
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Trixie's Great and Powerful Guide v1.94m
Minty & Pinkie Edition


Brief Introduction

My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic is a reboot of the MLP franchise by Powerpuff Girls artist Lauren Faust, currently viewed by (almost) the entire Internet, not only the intended audience. Here is a place where we discuss the joy of friendship.

> My Little Pony? Seriously?

It's a clever show. It has excellent writing, character dynamics, humor, animation, and generally treats kids seriously rather than condescending to them. It has every right to be a 20 minute corporate committee designed infomercial, but it's not.

> Isn't this a show for little girls?

Pixar technically makes shows for little boys, and produce some of the best animation in the world.

> Okay, fine. I'll give it a try. Where do I start?

No Brony could ask for more. I recommend watching the episodes in order. They're all up on Youtube. Unusually, Hasbro seems fine with having the entire series up in public because they've made no move to bring down any of the episodes. Search for "Friendship is Magic Episode 1" and you should find the series pretty easily... Or search for "Sharing is Magic" Google Doc. That is all.

> Okay, I'm going to watch it but this had better live up to the hype!

Whoa, calm down there. The show is light hearted, optimistic fun but it's not for everyone. It's good fun, the community is good fun, and everyone can do with a reminder that friendship is magic but if it doesn't gel for you we'll love and tolerate you anyway. Plus, you might hit the wrong episode. Ask first?

> Iron Hoof/Fan Theories/Shipping/Binding

All in good fun! If it's not your cup of tea, skim it, but this show has triggered a great creative outpouring from the Internet. Pony themed fan-art is abundant and often excellent. See below for some examples.

> Derpy Hooves/Doctor Whoof

Two minor background characters who were adopted as emblems of 4chan. Derpy Hooves is so named due to an animation error in the first episode that had her eyes facing in different directions; 4chan has assigned her the role of Ponyville's mailpony, and her only line so far has been "Muffins". The show's animators are aware of Derpy's popularity and she's shown up a few times recently with her eyes obviously derped. Currently made canon in Feeling Pinkie Keen and in Faust's picture showcased below, Derpy was deemed important enough to appear in storyboards for Season II.

Dr. Whoof is a pony with an hourglass cutie mark; he and his kin save time and space very quietly off camera.


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Ponytar Artists

Alarra
Alterform
Crown of Thorns
Dirtytabs
Irbis
Kairaven
Khosan
...and a lot more, too many to keep track of, now.

If you do/don't want to be here, make a note in the thread.

Note that we're looking for more as the above are a bit swamped with requests currently.

New: Official PonyPic Request Thread (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=10616651)!

General Resources

Fan Fiction and News: Equestria Daily (http://www.equestriadaily.com/)
FF... Darkly: Equestria after Dark (http://equestria-after-dark.blogspot.com/)
Discussion Image Forum: Ponychan (http://www.ponychan.net/chan/)
Pony Emotes: FiM Emotes (http://kefkafloyd.imgur.com/J8S59)
More Emotes: MC's Emotes (http://gitpmcerberus.imgur.com/ponymote)
Pony Images: Ponibooru (http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/list)
More Images: 20% Cooler (http://twentypercentcooler.net/)
Know Your Meme: Ponies! (http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic)
Allspark MLP Discussion Thread (http://www.allspark.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=76678&st=0&start=0)

Art Resources


OC Pony Creation Guide:

>How to make OC Pony (http://ponibooru.413chan.net/_images/048648773b808749ecbcd93b7825d545/22629%20-%20original_character_tutorial%20tutorial.png)<
>How to clothe a Pony (http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/10448a8bf5139a93e47ee0ab2185d577/23650%20-%20Touhou%20artist%3Awhy485%20drawing_guide%20fash ion%20guide%20pony%20tutorial.png)<

Deviant Art Links:

Lauren Faust (http://fyre-flye.deviantart.com/)

14 Bis (http://14-bis.deviantart.com/)
ButterSS (http://buttersc0tchsundae.deviantart.com/)
Csimadmax (http://csimadmax.deviantart.com/)
DonKoRR (http://don-komandorr.deviantart.com/)
Irving Zero (http://irving-zero.deviantart.com/)
Johnjoseco (http://johnjoseco.deviantart.com/)
Kloudmutt (http://kloudmutt.deviantart.com/)
Palestorm (http://palestorm.deviantart.com/)

Tutorials:

How to Draw Luna (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I1YoOgNwPp4)
MLP Art Guides (http://s1208.photobucket.com/albums/cc361/DJPon-3/)
MLP Colour Guides (http://kefkafloyd.deviantart.com/)

Kloud TV (http://www.livestream.com/kloudmutt)

Concepts:

On the Design of the Mane Cast (http://cdn0.knowyourmeme.com/i/000/107/092/original/122%20-%20applejack%20chart%20fluttershy%20pinkie_pie%20r ainbow_dash%20rarity%20twilight_sparkle.jpg)

Concept art by L. Faust:

AJ/AJ (http://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZtv1PUCI/AAAAAAAABPg/aTDHM_vJ3Ek/Applejack-08.jpg)
Pinkie/Surprise (http://lh6.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZtjpEWrI/AAAAAAAABPc/vlcKpVmK1FY/Pinkie_08.jpg)
Rarity/Sparkler (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZuba65VI/AAAAAAAABPo/o7oJ1OI4bcE/Rarity_08.jpg)
Twilight/Twinkle (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZuS8XZtI/AAAAAAAABPs/9CPSE6Je1Y0/Twilight_08.jpg)
Derpy/Ditzy (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZtusFdII/AAAAAAAABPk/4VbhxajIt1o/Derpy_11.jpg)

Group Shot (https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-zPGxLKSxqsI/Tet-724kmrI/AAAAAAAABoc/74J43JjtvVc/mlplegroupruff.jpg)

5 Best Pictures :

TG&P Trixie 1 (http://lh6.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYlPoSj31bI/AAAAAAAABKc/yhAESX1bWDU/129879022202-fim_thebestmagic2.png) 2a (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYevesc6Z3I/AAAAAAAABJE/wqYR1YU8-xM/129878791125-Magic_for_Friendship.png) 2b (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYlPoV0tFSI/AAAAAAAABKg/UIrpK2_XUDk/345%20-%20filly%20flower%20Magic%20noel%20Trixie.jpg) 3 (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYevn1UZNyI/AAAAAAAABJI/JQaTPZ7u9kk/1295392718493.png)
Twilight Sparkle 1 (http://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYlQKpEFW1I/AAAAAAAABKo/PJmzRBt_g0o/twilight-%28n1298746506900%29.jpg) 2 (http://lh6.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYgEWabUv0I/AAAAAAAABJg/S1emWO9FjbE/1297919269027.png) 3 (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TYlQAwKvFvI/AAAAAAAABKk/08Q9f1BaGa0/1298478186234.png)
Rainbow Dash 1 (http://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TY-tuXX0V5I/AAAAAAAABOE/vPLwNGpCsU8/rainbows_are_awesome_by_adamrbi-d3awtkv.jpg) 2 (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TY-tugAF4JI/AAAAAAAABOI/RYGrQCZySJo/1298478713223.jpg) 3 (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TY-tutzFrYI/AAAAAAAABOM/QP22FdlygtA/1299129766866.png) 3.6 (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TY-vxE-8GgI/AAAAAAAABOY/ktOwjPQ3eiI/130057856759.png)
Fluttershy 1 (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZiSMaDSI/AAAAAAAABPQ/FNLXj6WE0ss/yofluttershybyarborishd.png) 2 (http://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZiUXQlvI/AAAAAAAABPU/SCs7qzer-6E/129860262040.png) 3 (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TZPZiWhyIWI/AAAAAAAABPY/r6ClIhygmw0/1297113141466.png)

Pony Games

The most recent one. (http://www.yoyogames.com/games/168448-mlp-fim-the-way-home#)
Pacderpy (http://www.derpyhooves.com/games/pacderpy.html)
Two very similar dash based (http://www.derpyhooves.com/games/dashattack.html) cloud gathering sidescrollers (http://www.derpyhooves.com/games/rainbowdashmini.html)
Pony generator I (http://www.derpyhooves.com/games/custompony.html)
Pony generator II (http://derpyhooves.com/games.php?id=3)
Pony generator III (http://generalzoi.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FiM-Pony-Creator-Beta-210228500)

New: Pinkie licks cupcakes. (http://yeaka.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FiM-Flash-Game-202202384?q=boost%3Apopular%20max_age%3A8h%20frien dship%20is%20magic&qo=22) And a playthrough for it, too. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mUy1UtuNet0)
Collect Cupcakes, Lick Ponies! 2.0 (http://yeaka.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FiM-Flash-Game-TWO-202342576)

Nice Fanwork


AMVs:[BR]Always (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JhgzpnTYCXQ)[BR]Communism is Magic (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XJHZ4E9tRHM)[BR]Freeze Ray (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMXhEXQSXSw)[BR]I can go the distance (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYonN9in668)[BR]PonyCraft 2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJbAT1wzS8U)[BR]Still Alive (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=za9f1c93FHY)[BR][BR][B]Equestria Girls EE! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pTPqjKk_xCo)[BR]Hub Summer Promo (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rKjBViIt-y8)[BR]Hop-Skip-Jump [original] (http://soundcloud.com/dannyimusic/mlp1-hop-skip-jump-song)[BR]Old Pony Songs 1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHLqc8BSQMg) & 2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCpBYLHIEuI)[BR]Ponies! (http://ponyvspony.com/)[BR][BR][BR][B]Comics:[BR]The Damn Best Comic (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/359/5/9/pinkiedeadpool_by_csimadmax-d35ms08.jpg). Ever.[BR]And The Prequel (http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/107/1/f/pinkiedeadpool_origins_by_csimadmax-d3e936w.png).[BR]And part two (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/147/8/b/battle_for_equestria_02_by_csimadmax-d3hdr5c.png).[BR]And three (http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/154/2/1/battle_for_equestria_03_by_csimadmax-d3hz63e.png).[BR]And four (http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/160/a/f/battle_for_equestria_04_by_csimadmax-d3iighp.png).[BR]And five (http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/168/4/0/battle_for_equestria_05_by_csimadmax-d3j5nlu.png).[BR][BR]Metaponies (http://gavalanche.deviantart.com/gallery/29877487).[BR]Trollestia 1 (http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/200/0/b/trickster_goddess_nr_1_by_adcoon-d40tt3d.png) 2 (http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/201/a/4/trickster_goddess_nr_2_by_adcoon-d414fzw.png) 3 (http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/214/1/3/trickster_goddess_nr_3_by_adcoon-d42h2hx.png) 4 (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/229/0/d/trickster_goddess_nr_4_by_adcoon-d46vksj.png).[BR][BR][BR][B]ED Fics:[BR]Twilight Sky Over Canterlot (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-twilight-sky-over-canterlot.html)[BR]Sidelines / Midnight's Tale (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/conversion-bureau-compilation.html)[BR]World Without Rainbows (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html)[BR]Luxury Lotus Spa Follies (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-luxury-lotus-spa-follies.html)[BR]How Lyra Met Bon-Bon (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-how-lyra-met-bon-bon.html)[BR]Letters from Bubbly (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/01/story-letters-from-bubbly-1-10.html)[BR]Swayback Mountain (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/01/story-swayback-mountain.html)[BR]And Life Goes On (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/01/story-your-greatest-fan.html)[BR]The Three Notes (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-three-notes.html)[BR]TGaP Trixie (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-great-and-powerful-trixie.html)[BR]Antipodes (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-antipodes.html)[BR]Progress (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-progress-luna-versus-microwave.html)[BR]Bubbles (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-bubbles.html)[BR][BR]Pony Drinking Game (http://buttersc0tchsundae.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3cng5n)|
[BR][B]GitP Fics:[BR]AmishPirate:[BR][BR]New Moon Wanes (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-new-moon-wanes.html)[BR][BR]Darth BC:[BR][BR]Always Sunny in Fillydelphia (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-its-always-sunny-in-fillydelphia.html)[BR]...And Apple Accessories (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/storyand-apple-accessories.html)[BR]Beyond Forever (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-beyond-forever.html)[BR]Fair Feather Friend (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-fair-feather-friend.html)[BR]Forever (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-forever.html)[BR][BR]Deadly:[BR][BR]Fillystata (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-fillystata.html)[BR][BR]EsperDerek:[BR][BR]Letters, Letters, Letters (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-letters-letters-letters.html)[BR]Out in the Cold (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-out-in-cold.html)[BR][BR]Grif:[BR][BR]Pony Effect (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-pony-effect_23.html)[BR][BR]Lix Lorn:[BR][BR]PhantomFox:[BR][BR]No Tame Forest (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-no-tame-forest.html)[BR]Pride Goes Before a Folly (http://phantomfox7.deviantart.com/art/Pride-Goes-Before-A-Folly-211724143)[BR]Sunny Skies All Day Long (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-sunny-skies-all-day-long.html)[BR][BR]PhoeKun:[BR][BR]Catching Rainbows (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-catching-rainbows_17.html)[BR]Chasing Rainbows (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-chasing-rainbows.html)[BR]Fluttering Heart (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/02/story-fluttering-heart.html)[BR]Shades of Midnight (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-shades-of-midnight.html)[BR]Space Oddpony (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-space-oddpony.html)[BR][BR]Raz Fox:[BR][BR]All Hallows Night (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-all-hallows-night.html)[BR]Bright New Days (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-bright-new-days.html)[BR]Misted Stage (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-misted-stage.html)[BR][BR]Thanqol:[BR][BR]Grounded (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-grounded.html)[BR]Study in Rainbows (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-study-in-rainbows.html)[BR]Through A Glass, Derply (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/03/story-through-glass-derply.html)

Art Challenges

MyLP Challenge:

Do you want to try your hand at something fun? Feeling need to draw fanart? How about trying MyLP Challenge?

What it is? Just click on the linked template (http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/363/3/a/my_little_pony_fim_meme_by_don_komandorr-d35y2mv.jpg).

How does that work? Don't be scared, just complete the template to the best of your ability. Have one (http://lh6.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TbFTvCFELvI/AAAAAAAABas/3RaVVEnJms0/my_little_pony_meme_by_gothzilla_alena-d38os5c.jpg) two (http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TbFTvRf19mI/AAAAAAAABaw/glvBh-QkZ-c/mlp_friendship_is_magic_meme_by_peppersupreme-d37wpkl.png) three (http://lh5.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TbFTvA47e6I/AAAAAAAABa0/h3zzuNlxp80/mlp___fim_meme_by_kitty_kitty_koneko-d35zovy.png) four (http://lh3.googleusercontent.com/_THRVNyZ8xf0/TbFTwJJdSkI/AAAAAAAABa4/oFOMSgU0MHk/my_little_pony_memes_are_magic_by_scruffytoto-d37x352.jpg) examples made by other ponies :smalltongue:

Starting thread and more examples can be found here (http://don-komandorr.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d35y2mv).


***


[B]ATTENTION EVERYPONY!!!

[I]Great & Powerful Trixie made a bet. A bet I'll procure 12 pictures of Trixie - like the one in my sig, of similar quality - before next weekend. Trixie cosplaying, doing weird stuff, finding herself in unusual situations. So! I need ideas! Sketches of Unicorn ponies (I'm willing to vectorize them for free if they're good enough)! Moments from the show showing ponies with unusual poses and/or designs I could use to inspire myself! Finally, if someone would also like to draw something, I'd be glad to repay in some manner :P

Any takers? :smalltongue:

Important GitP Links

Thread I - Because Friendship Is Magic
Thread II - Now About 20% Cooler
Thread III - The Great & Powerful Thread
Thread IV - Friendship is Sufficiently Advanced Technology
Thread V - Art of the Thread
Thread VI - MUFFINS!
Thread VII - The Grand Galloping Thread
Thread VIII - Friendship is Music
Thread IX - The Best Thread Ever
Thread X - We Trot 'til We Drop
Thread XI - "Mmph!"
Thread XII - No One Can Groove Like the Girls with the Hooves
Thread XIII - Fast/Fine/Fierce Thread
Thread XIV - Boots on Hooves / Bikinis on Top
Thread XV - The Greater and Powerful-er Thread
Thread XVI - There's a Pony for That!
Thread XVII - Call Upon the Thread Ponies!
Thread XVIII - Perfect Isn't Easy
Thread XIX - I Emptied Your Thread
Thread XX & Thread XX - Appletastic Treats

Operation: Indiscriminate Friendship
Pony Week Discussion Thread
Pony Crime Pulp Fic/Game Thread


Want to RP? My Little Pony: FiM RP Recruitment Thread.
Want to join the list of GitP Bronies (https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ApgaWduo83XldFhETWUtWm96b1BFS1dHOF84dTBGM lE&hl=en_US#gid=0)?

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 05:51 PM
Yeeeeehaw! New thread!

http://ponibooru.413chan.net/_images/26f9d38ccd2a59502d056d719a4ab5f7/262%20-%20applejack%20macro%20meme.jpg

Sunken Valley
2011-08-25, 06:01 PM
New thread! Shame it wasn't epic level pony. Only 23 days to go

Trixie
2011-08-25, 06:01 PM
Also, imagedump #1 for one of the best old gen ponies?

Seriously, just check her voice actress :P

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/5552999ff7142033cce2f806952f8e58/44520%20-%20G3%20Minty.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/b0c2fd7cdeb31a6893cb80dd1c59f93c/44486%20-%20Minty%20artist%3Ashinepawpony%20candy%20candy_c ane%20socks.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/d838d9db1b31ab9454ab64b202a142b7/44485%20-%20G3%20Minty.jpg

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/8badda528e8f455d918c8407f7016eb7/44484%20-%20Cookies%20Minty%20artist%3Aspiritofamerica%20cu te%20filly%20filly_scouts%20puffcloud.jpg

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/30df07eb32f5a8816d076747f66584a0/44790%20-%20G3%20Minty.png

Lix Lorn
2011-08-25, 06:02 PM
I like ponies.

Kurgan
2011-08-25, 06:09 PM
Ah, I always love the feel of a new pony thread. Think this is my eighth one now.

erikun
2011-08-25, 06:10 PM
Minty and Twist image dump? Sure.

A little bit of Minty
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/88d30c71742f1107bd3496b06238021b/46310%20-%20G3%20G4%20Minty%20socks.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/331a0d14446846220d441e47716d78eb/44483%20-%20G3%20Minty.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/8e788804395dec0b1be109f897582190/44480%20-%20Minty%20snow%20snowboard.png

And a little bit of Twist
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/e9568ff1f904f931c28b37bd16a2f66f/41358%20-%20Twist%20artist%3Aswiftcutter%20glasses.jpg

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/209/b/7/b7c3a5ce279f30e489df1fab9fc292db-d41z8s1.png (http://crappyunicorn.deviantart.com/art/Twist-245188657)

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/71bfb1032960b601256bf26aa300c8b5/33582%20-%20Cutie_Mark_Crusaders%20Sweetie_Belle%20Twist%20 apple_bloom%20artist%3Akymsnowman%20cmc%20human%20 humanized%20scootaloo.png

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 06:11 PM
Just re-watched The Best Night Ever.

And Now, I am reminded that I still owe Blue blood the worst beating of rainbow dashes life (I'd say of Blue Bloods life, but honestly he's NEVER so much as been slapped, and Rainbowdash is arguably THE rough and Tumble Pony.)

And that Fluttershy is a Striking Scary Goddess of Breserkers.




P.S., has anyone ever noticed that when she tries to save the statue, Rainbow Dash ends up reenacting a scene form the Disney version of Hercules?

Or that When Twilight is greeting guests, the one who shakes her Hoof and the rest of he with it has the constellation Hercules as his Cutie Mark?

Hmmm, suddenly, I have a minor Background character who, in so far as I know, doesn't even have a name, to ship with Twilight. Ponythread, GO!

Trixie
2011-08-25, 06:11 PM
And #2, for good measure :P

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/8e788804395dec0b1be109f897582190/44480%20-%20Minty%20snow%20snowboard.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/b65fd01d879b7394b892b942f4dbdb89/40174%20-%20G3%20Minty%20artist%3AMocha_Delight%20socks.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/bbdbe3cc2c923bd7d3922334b0d561d8/41241%20-%20Abby%20G3%20Minty%20abacus%20artist%3Adotrook%2 0battle%20g1%20luna%20socks.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/331a0d14446846220d441e47716d78eb/44483%20-%20G3%20Minty.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/4ec7320f9ac1620701d1a1461088b702/9547%20-%20Artist%3ASponsz%20Minty%20Trixie%20Yellowstar.p ng

MCerberus
2011-08-25, 06:12 PM
Ponythread has been classified a Level 5 cuteness hazard. Read at own warning.
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/warncute2.png


Many Moods of Ponythead: Repost
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/0003moodsofpony.png

More ponymotes:
they're in the OP, silly filly.

Trixie
2011-08-25, 06:14 PM
So, did I missed anything I was supposed to add to OP? :P

BTW, Luna comic is also by Deadly, yes?

Lix Lorn
2011-08-25, 06:19 PM
Hmmm, suddenly, I have a minor Background character who, in so far as I know, doesn't even have a name, to ship with Twilight. Ponythread, GO!
Mighty Hoof?

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-25, 06:28 PM
Alright, so, that thing I was going to post in the last thread, but was afraid it'd get ignored when switching threads. I intend to do a little research for a fic idea I got, and so I post a question to you all:

What do you think makes the ships between Rainbow Dash and the rest of the Mane Cast work, individually?

By which I mean, why would Twilight Sparkle be attracted to Rainbow Dash, why would Pinkie Pie be attracted to RD, why would Rarity be attracted to RD, and so on. Stuff like, "Applejack would be attracted to Rainbow because she's a challenge, stubborn enough to hold her ground against her," and, "Fluttershy would be attracted to Rainbow Dash because she provides stability and courage that she wouldn't have otherwise." And the more reasons I can get, the better, so don't be afraid of answering for somebody who's already been covered, even if it's completely contradictory!

If anybody wants to know the concept of the fic (it's not imperative to answering the question, though if I do end up writing it, the concept could help you help me think of a title :smallredface:), it's spoilered at the bottom of the post.

Also, quoting my fic recommendations so THEY don't get lost in the movement to the new thread.


First is You Can't Be Missed If You Never Leave (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-you-cant-be-missed-if-you-never.html) by Staeg Masque. I won't waste your time summarizing it since you'll see the summary when you click to the Equestria Daily post. I'll just say it's TwiDash and leave the rest for you.

Next is A Precious Rainbow (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7132369/1/A_Precious_Rainbow) by milesprower06. It's a sequel to Cupcakes that relies on a tiny little change near the end of the story, but it's definitely worth reading (and it's worth reading Cupcakes to read this one, it's amazing). If you like it, the author's written a few sequels and is writing a side story too, which you can find on his profile, and the sequel links spin-offs written by two other people.

Last would be several of Ebon Mare's stories, but In The Rain (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6848261/1/In_The_Rain) is the one I'll focus on. I've also read In The Dark and Crumbling, which are both amazing stories as well, but much much darker than this one. Anyway, In The Rain is a cute little TwiDash story with two different endings, which I thought was interesting.

Fic concept, do not peek if you want to be surprised if/when I write it:
Basically, the Mane Cast decide to get revenge on Rainbow Dash for the various pranks she's pulled on them, and all decide to "admit their feelings for her" on the same day. The above question is so I can believably have them fake interest in her.

Kurgan
2011-08-25, 06:35 PM
Ok, so its not a great job, but I did ponify Hellfire to go along with Trixie's Gaston and Prince Ali:

Princess Celestia
You know Trixie is a great showmare
Of Trixie’s magic she is justly proud

Princess Celestia
You know Trixie’s so much better than
The common, boring, weak, moronic mare.

Then tell me Celestia
Why Trixie sees her standing there
Why her glowing horn still burns her soul

She feels her, She sees her
The moonlight in her purple hair
Is blazing in her all out of control

Like fire
Hellfire
This fire in Trixie’s skin
This burning
Desire
Is turning her to shame

It’s not Trixie’s fault

She’s not to blame

It is that unicorn
It ‘s she who sent this shame

It’s not Trixie’s fault

If in Celestia’s plans

She trained a unicorn much
Stronger than Trixie

Protect me, Celestia
Don’t let this siren cast her spell
Don’t let her fire sear Trixie’s flesh and bone
Destroy Twilight Sparkle
And let her taste her own demise
Or let her be for Trixie and her alone

Hellfire
Darkfire
Now unicorn it’s your turn
Choose Trixie or
Your pyre
Be Trixie’s or you will burn

Celestia have mercy on her

Celestia have mercy on Trixie

But she will be Trixie’s
Or she will burn
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EyS3weMlxLA)

She is either planning on killing Twilight, or instantly making out with her. Sounds about right based on the fanfics I've read.

Still, I think this is rough around the edges at best, so if anyone has better ideas, feel free to speak up.

Trixie
2011-08-25, 06:38 PM
Rainbow Dash is blank card. All we know she is competitive and likes Wonderbolts. You can paint virtually anything you want into her, which is how you can make virtually any pairing with her work. I'm not sure if this is helpful with 6 pairings, as you'd need to add too much to her, so just use things she has in common with the rest of the cast? AJ, FS, and PP work almost without adjustments, Rarity can claim she loved her posing as model, and Twilight... It's the only one that requires a bit of work, but certainly doable :smalltongue:

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 06:50 PM
For Twilight: Simply have her play it at Dash as an opposites attract angle. Twilights smart and not particularly outgoing, Dash is Brash, Athletic, and in your face.


For Rarity: have her play it as Blue Blood left such a god awful taste in her mouth that she doesn't even want a technical prince anymore. No, she want's a Pony who was born to no special status, but has preformed such feats as legends are made of (Sonic Rainboom comes to mind.) and has the body of the hero's of Old. *Cought, Dash is Uber Athlete and pulled off Greek Goddess look at Gala, Cought.*

As already Stated, AJ, FS, and PP pretty much write themselves via the shows canon.

Mando Knight
2011-08-25, 06:52 PM
What do you think makes the ships between Rainbow Dash and the rest of the Mane Cast work, individually?

Because Dash is 20% cooler than any other pony. (Except maybe that shot of badass-Celestia in the fall lineup commercial.)

Kindablue
2011-08-25, 07:04 PM
anyone ever noticed that when she tries to save the statue, Rainbow Dash ends up reenacting a scene form the Disney version of Hercules?
Rarity does a Tyler Durden impression near the end.



Or that When Twilight is greeting guests, the one who shakes her Hoof and the rest of he with it has the constellation Hercules as his Cutie Mark?

Hmmm, suddenly, I have a minor Background character who, in so far as I know, doesn't even have a name, to ship with Twilight. Ponythread, GO!

No, we already named him. He's Blues Mayne, billionaire playcolt by day, crime fighting vigilante by night. Of course, there's almost no crime in Equestria, so he spends most of his time in setting one.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 07:15 PM
Rarity does a Tyler Durden impression near the end.



No, we already named him. He's Blues Mayne, billionaire playcolt by day, crime fighting vigilante by night. Of course, there's almost no crime in Equestria, so he spends most of his time in setting one.


...Oh my god. There is literally nothing left untouched by this fandom. @_@

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 07:15 PM
Rarity does a Tyler Durden impression near the end.



No, we already named him. He's Blues Mayne, billionaire playcolt by day, crime fighting vigilante by night. Of course, there's almost no crime in Equestria, so he spends most of his time in setting one.

Of course Ponythread already named him. And of course he's a Qusai Batman with flavorings of Superman.

This is why we need season 2. More material to work with.

Lix Lorn
2011-08-25, 07:16 PM
No, we already named him. He's Blues Mayne, billionaire playcolt by day, crime fighting vigilante by night. Of course, there's almost no crime in Equestria, so he spends most of his time in setting one.
It's a dirty job... xD

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 07:18 PM
It's a dirty job... xD

But somepony's gotta... want to... do it!

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 07:19 PM
So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 07:22 PM
So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?

Oh Celestia. Please don't be another OTP debate... Please don't be another OTP debate...

Rarijack.

Aotrs Commander
2011-08-25, 07:23 PM
So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?

Spike.

Always Spike.

What, did you really think I was going to give up on that one, ponythread?

I'm still planning on doing the companion to Raritank when I have the time...

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 07:25 PM
OTP?

Let's just tell me what that is and assume that I havn't had time to read every page of every thread.

Kindablue
2011-08-25, 07:27 PM
Of course Ponythread already named him. And of course he's a Qusai Batman with flavorings of Superman.

This is why we need season 2. More material to work with.

Oh, come on! Blues Mayne! That's a great pun! I think Dexam came up with it. You do mean this guy, right?
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/6000897169_5eb56623c2.jpg

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-25, 07:29 PM
OTP?

Let's just tell me what that is and assume that I havn't had time to read every page of every thread.

One True Pairing. It's not really a Pony-exclusive term, so feel free to throw it around everywhere!

Anyway, thanks for the insights, Trixie and Meta. If anybody else wants to add, I'll still be listening.


Rainbow Dash is blank card. All we know she is competitive and likes Wonderbolts. You can paint virtually anything you want into her, which is how you can make virtually any pairing with her work. I'm not sure if this is helpful with 6 pairings, as you'd need to add too much to her, so just use things she has in common with the rest of the cast?

More stuff about that fic I may or may not write follows, for those who still don't want spoilers.

Well, the thing about this story is that it doesn't need to be flawless and convince the audience, it just needs to be good enough to
convince Rainbow Dash.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 07:29 PM
OTP?

Let's just tell me what that is and assume that I havn't had time to read every page of every thread.

It stands for "One True Pairing". Basically "who is the best couple". I'm surprised. Usually people over on Ponychan are fiercely defensive of their favorite pairing. But over here on Ponythread, not so much.

Jahkaivah
2011-08-25, 07:29 PM
I like ponies.

What a strange and unusual post.

Kindablue
2011-08-25, 07:30 PM
One True Pairing. It's not really a Pony-exclusive term, so feel free to throw it around everywhere!


For example, this thread's OTP is Lich/Lorn.

Lix Lorn
2011-08-25, 07:33 PM
What a strange and unusual post.
If I have reached far, it is because I have posted from the back of giants.

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 07:34 PM
Oh, come on! Blues Mayne! That's a great pun! I think Dexam came up with it. You do mean this guy, right?
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/6000897169_5eb56623c2.jpg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4kyhZolQHM


Freeze 1:53 of the vid. It's that Pony. I think there the same one.

And ok, now that I know what the OTP means,

No, this is not a debate. This is a "Who could it be".

And your welcome Fiddler.

Thanqol
2011-08-25, 07:35 PM
So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?

My reaction is a Toretts-like "Rainbow Dash". I'll never be able to justify why, especially because I'm at heart a Flutterdasher.

erikun
2011-08-25, 07:35 PM
So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?
I say that she wasn't really interested in him, but rather interested in the fantasy of getting swept off her feet by a handsome prince. Needless to say, the actual day involved very little sweeping.

Unless it gets replaced by another fantasiful relationship, such as a millionare from Manehatten, I don't forsee another "love interest". Rarity hasn't really shown any interested in a specific pony as opposed to the prestige or title.

Although, an episode with Rarity and Applejack's big-shot cousin Orange from Manehatten may be interesting to watch...

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 07:38 PM
I say that she wasn't really interested in him, but rather interested in the fantasy of getting swept off her feet by a handsome prince. Needless to say, the actual day involved very little sweeping.

Unless it gets replaced by another fantasiful relationship, such as a millionare from Manehatten, I don't forsee another "love interest". Rarity hasn't really shown any interested in a specific pony as opposed to the prestige or title.

Although, an episode with Rarity and Applejack's big-shot cousin Orange from Manehatten may be interesting to watch...

I suddenly want to see this + the Blues Mayne X Twilight item appear in the same fic as separate plot-lines that breifly touch on one another at the end of the fic, to hilarious results.


Rarity, please don't hate me.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 07:43 PM
I say that she wasn't really interested in him, but rather interested in the fantasy of getting swept off her feet by a handsome prince. Needless to say, the actual day involved very little sweeping.

Unless it gets replaced by another fantasiful relationship, such as a millionare from Manehatten, I don't forsee another "love interest". Rarity hasn't really shown any interested in a specific pony as opposed to the prestige or title.

Although, an episode with Rarity and Applejack's big-shot cousin Orange from Manehatten may be interesting to watch...

I would most definitely enjoy seeing this myself.

Ah, Rarity? Yah do realize yer marryin into tha family.
Whaaaaaat?

Kurgan
2011-08-25, 07:52 PM
So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?

Well...I dunno. I really don't see her with anypony in particular. I could see her going on a date with one or two others. We know that the colts like her, as Caramel and his friend were pretty easily convinced to do tedious manual labor for her in the finale.

That or she starts a harem.



My reaction is a Toretts-like "Rainbow Dash". I'll never be able to justify why, especially because I'm at heart a Flutterdasher.

Flutterdash for life. Though it could be some creepy love triangle, with Rarity being into Rainbow Dash and trying to woo her away from Fluttershy with the help of a certain dating advice book.

Aotrs Commander
2011-08-25, 07:54 PM
For example, this thread's OTP is Lich/Lorn.

*glare*

You are so lucky that I have to go meditate to regain my spells now.

Because otherwise, some form of non-specific unpleasantness would ensue.

But tomorrow is another day...

Kairaven
2011-08-25, 07:55 PM
From last thread


Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Now we just need ponified Hellfire and we'll be golden.


..... I am a horrible pony. Heaven's light/hellfire parody.
I made up the latin, so it's likely inaccurate.
So many times out here
I've watched a happy pair
Of ponies trotting in the night
They had a kind of glow around them
It almost looked like rainbow's light

I knew one'd never know
That fun and loving glow
Though I might wish with all my might
No family as serious as my own
Was ever meant for a joyfull sight

But suddenly a Rainboom has shined at me
And paint my cheek with a smile so bright

I dare to dream for me
to throw a big party
And as I deck these walls tonight
My cold rock farm will seem so bright
I swear it must be rainbow's light

-----------------
Celestia Dea Omnipotenti
Beatae Luna semper Fortuna
Beatae Twilighti Sanctifica
consensia elementum omnibus equus

Beata Luna
You know I am a joyous mare
Of my parties I am justly proud

Et Celebritas

Beata Luna
You know I'm so much funner than
The common, average, sad, and boring crowd

Quia turba taedium

Then tell me, Luna
Why they refuse my invites then
Why their weak excuses still cause me woe

Vae dolor tristis

I see them, I hear them
Hiding from me every where
and plotting plans without me in tow

Verbo et opere

my ire
all liars
This mire that I'm in
This charming
flyer
Is printed for nothing!

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

They won't attend

Mea culpa

It is the party girl
That drove away her friends

Mea maxima culpa

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

and I despair

Mea culpa

that all my friends dislike my party fare

Mea maxima culpa


so call me pinkamena
Cakes and punch served out alone
turnips and rocks will be my party friends
Despicable ponies
And let me party all on my own
on lints and a bag of flour that I'll depend

-----------------------

"I’m just glad none of dem Ponies showed up!"

"Oh, they’re not so bad."

"Not so bad?! Pu-lease! Dey’re a bunch’a losahs!"

"Oh, c’mon now. “Losers” might be a little strong, don’cha think?"

"After the way they treated you? I say “losers” isn’t strong enough!"

"Well, it was pretty rude."

"Prettee roode?! It waz down right deespecable!"

"It was, wasn’t it?!"

"If I were you, I wouldn’t speak to them ever again."

"You know what? I’m not gonna speak to them ever again! And I’m not gonna invite them to another party as long as I live! They don’t deserve to be invited to my parties... not after the way they’ve been acting."
------------------

Pink ire
conspire
Now ponies, it's your turn
Choose me or
retire
join me or you I'll spurn

Party on forever

Have some more cake for her

Party on forever

Have some more punch for me

Party on forever

But they will be mine
Or they're all spurned!!

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 07:56 PM
Three words Lich. Anit Magic Field.

Kurgan
2011-08-25, 07:59 PM
From last thread

..... I am a horrible pony. Heaven's light/hellfire parody.
I made up the latin, so it's likely inaccurate.
Awesome Pinkie Song

That is...wow, that is impressive. Thanks!

Aotrs Commander
2011-08-25, 08:04 PM
Three words Lich. Anit Magic Field.

Three words.

Starships.

Rocket Launcher.

Now I really, really must go meditate.

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 08:10 PM
Three Letters.

E.M.P.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 08:17 PM
From last thread



..... I am a horrible pony. Heaven's light/hellfire parody.
I made up the latin, so it's likely inaccurate.
So many times out here
I've watched a happy pair
Of ponies trotting in the night
They had a kind of glow around them
It almost looked like rainbow's light

I knew one'd never know
That fun and loving glow
Though I might wish with all my might
No family as serious as my own
Was ever meant for a joyfull sight

But suddenly a Rainboom has shined at me
And paint my cheek with a smile so bright

I dare to dream for me
to throw a big party
And as I deck these walls tonight
My cold rock farm will seem so bright
I swear it must be rainbow's light

-----------------
Celestia Dea Omnipotenti
Beatae Luna semper Fortuna
Beatae Twilighti Sanctifica
consensia elementum omnibus equus

Beata Luna
You know I am a joyous mare
Of my parties I am justly proud

Et Celebritas

Beata Luna
You know I'm so much funner than
The common, average, sad, and boring crowd

Quia turba taedium

Then tell me, Luna
Why they refuse my invites then
Why their weak excuses still cause me woe

Vae dolor tristis

I see them, I hear them
Hiding from me every where
and plotting plans without me in tow

Verbo et opere

my ire
all liars
This mire that I'm in
This charming
flyer
Is printed for nothing!

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

They won't attend

Mea culpa

It is the party girl
That drove away her friends

Mea maxima culpa

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

and I despair

Mea culpa

that all my friends dislike my party fare

Mea maxima culpa


so call me pinkamena
Cakes and punch served out alone
turnips and rocks will be my party friends
Despicable ponies
And let me party all on my own
on lints and a bag of flour that I'll depend

-----------------------

"I’m just glad none of dem Ponies showed up!"

"Oh, they’re not so bad."

"Not so bad?! Pu-lease! Dey’re a bunch’a losahs!"

"Oh, c’mon now. “Losers” might be a little strong, don’cha think?"

"After the way they treated you? I say “losers” isn’t strong enough!"

"Well, it was pretty rude."

"Prettee roode?! It waz down right deespecable!"

"It was, wasn’t it?!"

"If I were you, I wouldn’t speak to them ever again."

"You know what? I’m not gonna speak to them ever again! And I’m not gonna invite them to another party as long as I live! They don’t deserve to be invited to my parties... not after the way they’ve been acting."
------------------

Pink ire
conspire
Now ponies, it's your turn
Choose me or
retire
join me or you I'll spurn

Party on forever

Have some more cake for her

Party on forever

Have some more punch for me

Party on forever

But they will be mine
Or they're all spurned!!

And this is why I bucking LOVE this fandom. This right here. This kind of stuff. It's amazing.


*glare*

You are so lucky that I have to go meditate to regain my spells now.

Because otherwise, some form of non-specific unpleasantness would ensue.

But tomorrow is another day...

*Cackles* Lich Lorn! Lich Lorn!

MCerberus
2011-08-25, 08:29 PM
About that first image dump...

pony...
selling thin mints.

I am yours to command.

the_druid_droid
2011-08-25, 08:36 PM
Flutterdash for life. Though it could be some creepy love triangle, with Rarity being into Rainbow Dash and trying to woo her away from Fluttershy with the help of a certain dating advice book.

It isn't ponythread without creepy love triangles!


..... I am a horrible pony. Heaven's light/hellfire parody.
I made up the latin, so it's likely inaccurate.
So many times out here
I've watched a happy pair
Of ponies trotting in the night
They had a kind of glow around them
It almost looked like rainbow's light

I knew one'd never know
That fun and loving glow
Though I might wish with all my might
No family as serious as my own
Was ever meant for a joyfull sight

But suddenly a Rainboom has shined at me
And paint my cheek with a smile so bright

I dare to dream for me
to throw a big party
And as I deck these walls tonight
My cold rock farm will seem so bright
I swear it must be rainbow's light

-----------------
Celestia Dea Omnipotenti
Beatae Luna semper Fortuna
Beatae Twilighti Sanctifica
consensia elementum omnibus equus

Beata Luna
You know I am a joyous mare
Of my parties I am justly proud

Et Celebritas

Beata Luna
You know I'm so much funner than
The common, average, sad, and boring crowd

Quia turba taedium

Then tell me, Luna
Why they refuse my invites then
Why their weak excuses still cause me woe

Vae dolor tristis

I see them, I hear them
Hiding from me every where
and plotting plans without me in tow

Verbo et opere

my ire
all liars
This mire that I'm in
This charming
flyer
Is printed for nothing!

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

They won't attend

Mea culpa

It is the party girl
That drove away her friends

Mea maxima culpa

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

and I despair

Mea culpa

that all my friends dislike my party fare

Mea maxima culpa


so call me pinkamena
Cakes and punch served out alone
turnips and rocks will be my party friends
Despicable ponies
And let me party all on my own
on lints and a bag of flour that I'll depend

-----------------------

"I’m just glad none of dem Ponies showed up!"

"Oh, they’re not so bad."

"Not so bad?! Pu-lease! Dey’re a bunch’a losahs!"

"Oh, c’mon now. “Losers” might be a little strong, don’cha think?"

"After the way they treated you? I say “losers” isn’t strong enough!"

"Well, it was pretty rude."

"Prettee roode?! It waz down right deespecable!"

"It was, wasn’t it?!"

"If I were you, I wouldn’t speak to them ever again."

"You know what? I’m not gonna speak to them ever again! And I’m not gonna invite them to another party as long as I live! They don’t deserve to be invited to my parties... not after the way they’ve been acting."
------------------

Pink ire
conspire
Now ponies, it's your turn
Choose me or
retire
join me or you I'll spurn

Party on forever

Have some more cake for her

Party on forever

Have some more punch for me

Party on forever

But they will be mine
Or they're all spurned!!

Bravo! Bravo!


About that first image dump...

pony...
selling thin mints.

I am yours to command.

And it isn't even filly Twilight this time...

Also, hello everypony; I'm back after dropping off the grid for a bit there.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 08:40 PM
It isn't ponythread without creepy love triangles!



Bravo! Bravo!



And it isn't even filly Twilight this time...

Also, hello everypony; I'm back after dropping off the grid for a bit there.

Glad to have you back!

Oh yaaaaaaaay! Druid Droid is back! You know what this calls for? A welcome back robot pony party! Yaaaaaaaayyyyy!

Rebelhero
2011-08-25, 08:45 PM
And now! the moment... at least I have been waiting for.
My completed backgrounds. [/showoff]

I would like to know what you all think though.....

Twilight Sparkle
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/twilight-sparklebackground2.png

Rarity
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Raritybackground2.png

Rainbow Dash
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/rainbow-dashbackground2.png

Pinkie Pie
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/pinkie-piebackground2.png

Fluttershy
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/fluttershybackground2.png

Applejack
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/applejackbackground2.png

Legacy of the Elements -unedited
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground2.png

Legacy of the Elements- Neon
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground3.png

Legacy of the Elements -Poster
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground4.png


*gulp* Just a note... The ponies themselves are Megasweet's the photos are google image search and celestia, luna and the elements are unknown to me.

*hides in a corner*

tonberrian
2011-08-25, 08:45 PM
I would most definitely enjoy seeing this myself.

Ah, Rarity? Yah do realize yer marryin into tha family.
Whaaaaaat?

Of course, this brings back my thoughts for Rarity's good-for-nothing scoundrel of a brother settling down into the Apples.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 08:48 PM
And now! the moment... at least I have been waiting for.
My completed backgrounds. [/showoff]

I would like to know what you all think though.....

Twilight Sparkle
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/twilight-sparklebackground2.png

Rarity
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Raritybackground2.png

Rainbow Dash
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/rainbow-dashbackground2.png

Pinkie Pie
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/pinkie-piebackground2.png

Fluttershy
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/fluttershybackground2.png

Applejack
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/applejackbackground2.png

Legacy of the Elements -unedited
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground2.png

Legacy of the Elements- Neon
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground3.png

Legacy of the Elements -Poster
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground4.png


*gulp* Just a note... The ponies themselves are Megasweet's the photos are google image search and celestia, luna and the elements are unknown to me.

*hides in a corner*

These look good! There's just a little bit of critique that I have.

>Twilight: The edges around the actual model of Twilight seem a little grainy.
>Twilight: The background you used for the image seems like it was far too low of a resolution for the image itself. AKA, the space scene in the background appears stretched, disproportionate, and grainy.
>Rarity: See second critique from Twilight.

Other than that, they look extremely good. As I go down from the first to the last, I can see the improvement!

Metahuman1
2011-08-25, 08:50 PM
Rebel: I'm saddened that I can only use one at a time. And that is the only thing about this that saddens me.

ton: Rarity has a brother? *Jaw Drop.*

You know, that raises a good question. Why is Sweetybelle Living with Rarity? Where the heck are that little Filly's parents?

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 08:53 PM
Rebel: I'm saddened that I can only use one at a time. And that is the only thing about this that saddens me.

ton: Rarity has a brother? *Jaw Drop.*

You know, that raises a good question. Why is Sweetybelle Living with Rarity? Where the heck are that little Filly's parents?

This is the only explanation I've ever seen that comes close to satisfying that answer. And honestly, even this doesn't come close enough.

WARNING. SPOILERED DUE TO SWEETIE BELL ABUSE. VIEW IMAGE AT OWN RISK. (No Gore)
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/797120523b7a07e98e60e84f99977b50/39247%20-%20Sweetie_Belle%20artist%3Agavalanche%20comic%20e vil%20rarity%20sweetiebuse.png

gooddragon1
2011-08-25, 08:54 PM
http://s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/photos/images/newsfeed/000/131/564/blah.png?1307505715

lolol stormtrooper pony.

Betropper
2011-08-25, 09:00 PM
Random weird pony thing, but today I was looking through my dream journal and saw a dream from way back in Febuary that caught my attention. In it, a pink horse creature followed me through the entire dream, taunting as I did certain things. Also, Pinkie Pie happens to be my second favorite, and has also appeared in many dreams since then, although not as creepy looking.

PONYS HAVE INVADED MY MIND BEFORE I DISCOVERED THEM. :smalleek:

erikun
2011-08-25, 09:01 PM
This is the only explanation I've ever seen that comes close to satisfying that answer. And honestly, even this doesn't come close enough.

WARNING. SPOILERED DUE TO SWEETIE BELL ABUSE. VIEW IMAGE AT OWN RISK. (No Gore)
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/797120523b7a07e98e60e84f99977b50/39247%20-%20Sweetie_Belle%20artist%3Agavalanche%20comic%20e vil%20rarity%20sweetiebuse.png
I'll take the tragedy in Simply Rarity (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-simply-rarity.html) over that one. The fanfic was actually sad; that just looks painful.

And you might as well ask where everyone else's parents are. Twilight's are obviously still in Canterlot, but Pinkie is mysteriously living with her aunt and uncle(?), Applejack's and Rarity's are missing, and pegasi apparently never associate with family.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-25, 09:03 PM
Random weird pony thing, but today I was looking through my dream journal and saw a dream from way back in Febuary that caught my attention. In it, a pink horse creature followed me through the entire dream, taunting as I did certain things. Also, Pinkie Pie happens to be my second favorite, and has also appeared in many dreams since then, although not as creepy looking.

PONYS HAVE INVADED MY MIND BEFORE I DISCOVERED THEM. :smalleek:


Dude. This is TOTALLY proof that Pinkie Pie is real, and that she is extremely close to breaking the fourth wall. IT'S ONLY A MATTER OF TIME.

Wait... What is thi-

OH CELESTIA HELP ME. SHE'S ESCAPING!

http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/4158/toomanypinkies.png


I'll take the tragedy in Simply Rarity (http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-simply-rarity.html) over that one. The fanfic was actually sad; that just looks painful.

And you might as well ask where everyone else's parents are. Twilight's are obviously still in Canterlot, but Pinkie is mysteriously living with her aunt and uncle(?), Applejack's and Rarity's are missing, and pegasi apparently never associate with family.

Haven't read that fic. Going to remedy that now.

Also, Pinkie Pie's origins have been covered. I'm assuming they're still out on the Rock Farm without her.

Rebelhero
2011-08-25, 09:06 PM
These look good! There's just a little bit of critique that I have.

>Twilight: The edges around the actual model of Twilight seem a little grainy.
>Twilight: The background you used for the image seems like it was far too low of a resolution for the image itself. AKA, the space scene in the background appears stretched, disproportionate, and grainy.
>Rarity: See second critique from Twilight.

Other than that, they look extremely good. As I go down from the first to the last, I can see the improvement!

Yeah i noticed that, but didn't know why that was until now. I actually copied the thumbnail for Twilight instead of the full size image...
As for the background, its a picture through a telescope i believe, and that was the only one that seemed to go well, but my googlefu is weak, if you could find me a better one ill replace it!
As for rarity's background.... finding a pile of gems is nigh impossible. so i took a small pile and copy pasted it a dozen times....

Rebel: I'm saddened that I can only use one at a time. And that is the only thing about this that saddens me.



Thats why i made the LegacyOTE pictures, so you can get the mane 6 plus 3 bonus pics! XD

erikun
2011-08-25, 09:07 PM
Also, Pinkie Pie's origins have been covered. I'm assuming they're still out on the Rock Farm without her.
True, but you have to wonder why they sent Pinkie to live with relatives while her sisters stayed behind. Or perhaps to other relatives? That would be something they could touch on in season 2.

Of course, this being Pinkie, I'm still not certain if any of it was true or just her making everything up.

the_druid_droid
2011-08-25, 09:12 PM
Glad to have you back!

Oh yaaaaaaaay! Druid Droid is back! You know what this calls for? A welcome back robot pony party! Yaaaaaaaayyyyy!

Woohoo!

*Does the robot dance*


True, but you have to wonder why they sent Pinkie to live with relatives while her sisters stayed behind. Or perhaps to other relatives? That would be something they could touch on in season 2.

Of course, this being Pinkie, I'm still not certain if any of it was true or just her making everything up.

My personal hypothesis is that they sent her to Ponyville so she could have an opportunity to make use of her partying skills. There just aren't as many opportunities for event planners in the rock-farming boondocks...

otakuryoga
2011-08-25, 09:15 PM
I would most definitely enjoy seeing this myself.

Ah, Rarity? Yah do realize yer marryin into tha family.
Whaaaaaat?

that was brilliant

and as for
"i like ponies" being a strange post.....

i agree, it obviously should have read

"i absolutely, freakishly, LOVE our benevolent hooved overlords"

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-25, 09:16 PM
True, but you have to wonder why they sent Pinkie to live with relatives while her sisters stayed behind. Or perhaps to other relatives? That would be something they could touch on in season 2.

Of course, this being Pinkie, I'm still not certain if any of it was true or just her making everything up.

I thought Pinkie just sort of left so she could share parties with everyone.

Kindablue
2011-08-25, 09:16 PM
Pinkie is mysteriously living with her aunt and uncle(?),
I don't think they're related; she just works there. She bakes cupcakes with wrapped hard candies, so I would guess that she does the cleaning up around the shop.



Applejack's and Rarity's are missing, and pegasi apparently never associate with family.

Applejack's are dead, probably, though there's no way the writers intended to imply that; Rarity's parents take care of Sweetie Belle, but they have Rarity take care of her when they go out of town; Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are both adults without any siblings that we know of, so there's been no reason to show their parents.

TheAmishPirate
2011-08-25, 09:19 PM
pegasi apparently never associate with family.

With how free-spirited pegasi on a whole seem to be, that's not all that surprising. Certainly less than the other two pony races by my reckoning.

tonberrian
2011-08-25, 09:20 PM
ton: Rarity has a brother? *Jaw Drop.*

In one of the multitude of fics that I am probably never going to write, especially since college starts up again next week for me.

Dexam
2011-08-25, 09:21 PM
Just re-watched The Best Night Ever.

And Now, I am reminded that I still owe Blue blood the worst beating of rainbow dashes life (I'd say of Blue Bloods life, but honestly he's NEVER so much as been slapped, and Rainbowdash is arguably THE rough and Tumble Pony.)

Sigh... this reminds me that I *really* need to write that fanfic that's been percolating in my brain-meats.


Of course Ponythread already named him. And of course he's a Qusai Batman with flavorings of Superman.

This is why we need season 2. More material to work with.


Oh, come on! Blues Mayne! That's a great pun! I think Dexam came up with it.

Eeeyup, because I just love puneriffic pony names. The idea came from another planned fanfic that I probably won't get to write:

By day he is Blues Mayne, billionaire playcolt, entrepreneur, and one of Equestria's most elligible bachelors. But once the sun goes down he becomes Night Hunter, masked defender of innocent ponies and dispenser of vigilante justice to the streets of Coltham City.

Blues was not expecting the need for Night Hunter to have to make an appearance when he attended this year's Grand Galloping Gala in Canterlot; but all that changed when the Gala was disrupted by an attack from a new, evil villainess dubbed "Flutterrage" and her horde of enraged animal minions.

Tracking this mysterious filly to the quiet rural town of Ponyville, Blues Mayne/Night Hunter discovers that numerous animal attacks have taken place on the Ponyville populace - could this be the work of Flutterrage leading up to her assault on the Grand Galloping Gala? Can Night Hunter stop her before her next diabolical plan comes to fruition? Will Blues Mayne be able to fend off the amorous advances of the stunning Ponyville boutique owner and fashionista, Rarity? Or has Flutterrage already committed her most daring crime - stealing the heart of our intrepid hero? Find out in the next exciting installment of Night Hunter: Vigilante Pony!


Random weird pony thing, but today I was looking through my dream journal and saw a dream from way back in Febuary that caught my attention. In it, a pink pony creature followed me through the entire dream, laughing as I did certain things. Also, Pinkie Pie happens to be my second favorite, and has also appeared in many dreams since then, although not as creepy.

PONYS HAVE INVADED MY MIND BEFORE I DISCOVERED THEM. :smalleek:

That's just Pinkie Pie up to her usual fourth-wall shattering shenannigans:

http://i.imgur.com/DBY1G.jpg


And you might as well ask where everyone else's parents are. Twilight's are obviously still in Canterlot, but Pinkie is mysteriously living with her aunt and uncle(?), Applejack's and Rarity's are missing, and pegasi apparently never associate with family.

I'm fairly certain that Mr & Mrs Cake aren't related to Pinkie Pie. I do recall somepony positing that Pinkie showed up Sugarcube Corner one day and just wouldn't leave, so Mr & Mrs Cake employed her as an apprentice baker out of sheer embarrassment.

Regarding the cutie mark discussion earlier, I'm of the opinion that the cutie mark is an abstract or semi-abstract representation of an event or item that was a key contribution to that pony discovering their "special talent".

otakuryoga
2011-08-25, 09:22 PM
just watched the episode last night with the CMC doing the talent show and at the end of the talent show Rarity, Applejack, and Dash came backstage to congratulate the lil fillies which i took as implying that Scootaloo was related to Dash?
havent got past episode 20 though so if there is a different family mentioned for Scootaloo i havent seen it yet

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-25, 09:33 PM
I don't remember Scoot having any shown family, but I recall Lauren outright saying Rainbow Dash isn't her sister, and would be a bad one (which inspire Scootabuse?).

MCerberus
2011-08-25, 09:34 PM
True, but you have to wonder why they sent Pinkie to live with relatives while her sisters stayed behind. Or perhaps to other relatives? That would be something they could touch on in season 2.

Of course, this being Pinkie, I'm still not certain if any of it was true or just her making everything up.

One sister took over the farm, and one is a classical musician!

About the only missing/disappeared parent thing I'll believe is mom and dad apple. Poor AB

Grif
2011-08-25, 09:41 PM
Psych!

Reposta Elements of Ponythread now.

Elements of Ponythread v1.9

Pony, EsperDerek
Insanity, Grif
Awesome, DBC
Bondage, PhoeKun
Heartburn, MCerberus
Logical Inconsistency, Shadowydragon
Hipster, tonberrian
Lurking, Level8Mudcrabs
Quotes, SiuiS
Happiness, Irbis
Surprise, Thanqol
Pirates, TheAmishPirate
Moustache, Welf
Clockwork, the_druid_droid
Phantasy, Raz_Fox
Adventure, Rebelhero
Bacon, Kris_Strife
Snarking, Etcetera
Stealth, Kyouhen
Chemical Reactions, Gamerlord
Not Being Significant Enough to Be an Element, erikun
Paranoia, Titanium_Fox
Insomnia, Gadora
Great and Powerful, Trixie
Boron, Bayonet Priest
Taking Things Too Personally, Soft Serve
Recursion, DeadManSleeping
Apathy, Lord Raziere
Ink, InkwellPony
Hope, ScionoftheVoid
Duels, dromer
Lead, RdMarquis
Hot Pony Kisses, Benson
Killjoy, Brazen Shield
Corruption, Vent Reynold
Persuasion, Anarion
Shipping, Lix Lorn
Quietness, Lex-Kat
Compassion, Blue Ghost
Evlul Bastard Spears, Aotrs Commander
Ancient Pony History, WJMill
Demanding, Pokonic
Style, Kindablue
Silly Hats, Capt. Ido Nos
Flow, Metahuman1

Kindablue
2011-08-25, 09:56 PM
I trusted you, Grif. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=11614724#post11614753)

Grif
2011-08-25, 09:57 PM
I trusted you, Grif. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=11614724#post11614753)

Goddamnit. That'll remind me not to do things early in the morning without coffee. Remedying this error now.

RdMarquis
2011-08-25, 10:10 PM
Every day, on the way home from work, I pass by an Octavia street. Needless to say, it always makes me think of a grey earth pony. :smallbiggrin:

Grif
2011-08-25, 10:13 PM
Every day, on the way home from work, I pass by an Octavia street. Needless to say, it always makes me think of a grey earth pony. :smallbiggrin:

Clearly ponies corrupted your mind.... and mine.

Lyra now means a mint green unicorn for me... Forever.

MCerberus
2011-08-25, 10:13 PM
Every day, on the way home from work, I pass by an Octavia street. Needless to say, it always makes me think of a grey earth pony. :smallbiggrin:

Sticker.
Street Sign.
Make it happen.

Kindablue
2011-08-25, 10:20 PM
Sticker.
Street Sign.
Make it happen.

This one's cool. (http://www.redbubble.com/products/configure/7380870-sticker) Expensive, though.

WJMill
2011-08-25, 10:29 PM
Also, imagedump #1 for one of the best old gen ponies?

Old Gen Minty in New Gen format. (Edit: Also G3 Minty in G4 format!)

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/031/7/b/g1_mlp_minty_g4_pony_style_by_omg_chibi-d38i0wg.png

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/247/e/1/g4_style_minty_mlp_by_omg_chibi-d2y13sz.png

[Just making an obligated hipster-ppearance. Back to schoolwork. http://i.imgur.com/xNUoP.jpg]

Capt. Ido Nos
2011-08-25, 11:04 PM
Here are some pictures, posted for no raison.
(spoiler'd for huge)
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4199/20110825214428.png
Oh sweet, minecraft! That's fun right? Huh, it looks like this mountain got cut in half by a chunk error. Man, it just drops off, you wouldn't even know it was there unless you walked right off the edge!

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5167/20110825214600.png
Man, here's a great natural little vantage point to look at this blank wall. It's quite... picturesque, wouldn't you say?

http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/6950/20110825215631.png
Well we can't have *too* much unspoilt nature here in the way. It obscures the view of the wall! It is a nice wall, after all.

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/7445/20110825224803.png
While I'm at it, might as well throw some scaffolding up everywhere. Just in case I might, oh you know...

http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/374/20110825234326.png
need it for something http://i.imgur.com/ROEne.jpg

TheAmishPirate
2011-08-25, 11:04 PM
Every day, on the way home from work, I pass by an Octavia street. Needless to say, it always makes me think of a grey earth pony. :smallbiggrin:

There's a Braeburn street not ten minutes from my house. :smallbiggrin:

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-25, 11:18 PM
Three words Lich. Anit Magic Field.

Nothing you can't spell will ever work! :smalltongue:


Psych!

Reposta Elements of Ponythread now.

Elements of Ponythread v1.9

See my above response; I'll leave you to figure out why. :smalltongue:


Since we have a ponified Prince Ali/ Great Trixie, I thought it would be appropriate to Ponify the Reprise of that song:

Great Trixie, Yes it is she
but not as you know her
Take a look out of your books into reality
Yes, meet this mare who would dare
to try to start an affair
say hello to the real Great Trixie

So Trixie turns out to be merely an Earth Mare
Just a fraud, a talentless broad
as you can see
Her stage show is a sham
nothing more than a scam
All just because she wanted to impress
the hoof picked student of this land's princess
the truth displayed to your dismay
all your friends want her gone - whoopee!
So long ex-Great Trixie! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_FguEpJ3fo)

I'm sorry for doing this.

EsperDerek
2011-08-25, 11:29 PM
Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:

Thanqol
2011-08-25, 11:37 PM
Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:

I'm going to read this instead of playing Human Revolution. I hope you appreciate the enormity of that decision.

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 12:17 AM
Hmmmmmmm... i has an idea. but i dont know if i have the talent to pull it off.

Turn this
http://www.sandraandwoo.com/images/misc/megasweet-twilight-sparkle.png

Into Midnight. Id need the correct colors and such.... Put then if i or some pony else could do it, i could add midnight and Trixie to the Legacy wall papers ive made.

Repost for those who missed it a few post ago...Its actually cause i'm kinda proud of it but got very little reaction to it.../

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground4.png

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 12:24 AM
So, I laid down to go to bed. I flipped on the TV. Ugly Americans was playing. I was greeted with this.

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3518/mlpblanket2.png

Ponies. On Ugly Americans. WE HAVE SPREAD OUT INFLUENCE TO EVERYTHING UNDER CELESTIA'S SUN.

I'm going back to bed now. Night Everypony!

Kris Strife
2011-08-26, 12:26 AM
Applejack's are dead, probably, though there's no way the writers intended to imply that

They're either out exploring the world or the three hour cruise they went on, with all the other pony parents we haven't seen, shipwrecked onto an uncharted tropical island. They're all perfectly safe and will be back as soon as one of them builds a helicopter out of coconuts and bamboo.

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 12:32 AM
Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating notes:



Twilight Sparkle had learned much in the nearly twenty years that she had lived in Ponyville. She had learned many things, friendship, love, and motherhood prime amongst them

Colon rather than comma here.


As she watched her only daughter, one of the lights in her life, a pony that she would lay her life

Scans weird. End part feels unnecessary, particularly from Twilight.


“I'm...not even going to ask what happened here.”
“Fire.”
“W-We'll be leaving. Good luck with all this?”
“So much fire!”

This is the best story ever.


It does not matter if you have ever been to the restaurant before, by ordering "The Usual", you make it look like you are a regular and know your way around luxury.

Ever = Never.


“ATTENTION, FILLIES AND GENTLECOLTS!”

Having worked that shift, by the end of it I don't think one'd raise your voice even for a parasprite infestation.


“It...heh, funny thing, it turns out that I’m immune to Poison Joke...”

Kinda weak. Maybe his special talent is picking Azure Lillies and, upon stepping into Poison Joke he lost the ability to tell the difference? Blue spots on his eyes?


“This date was supposed to be perfect. It was supposed to be my second chance!”

Reverse these, and consider cutting down a bit. This was supposed to be PERFECT is a line you can really snarl.


“And what’s worse, I just kept screwing up! Everything I did to try and impress her backfired, and made things worse!”

On the same note, that's not the kind of thing you yell in the face of an enormous starbear. "And the worst part is that it's MY fault! EVERYTHING I did BACKFIRED! EVERYTHING I did made things WORSE!"


“I just wanted us to have a good night! I just wanted to impress her! But now! But now!”

"I just wanted ONE NIGHT. I just wanted ONE NIGHT without any DISASTERS. But now! But now!”

Try practise shouting lines out loud. Some lines you just can't say while you're being loud and angry.


The Ursa Minor’s eyes widened, perhaps realizing just what the purple unicorn was planning.

He was about to learn all about potential-to-kinetic energy.

That line doesn't follow from the first. Perhaps realising = not realising.


“Step 1: Remember to be yourself."

And that's the truth you don't need any book to tell you.



Overall: Excellence :smallbiggrin: Pacing could perhaps be tweaked a bit - I'd almost like a little bit more stability in between disasters, just enough to give the impression that things are going right before another nosedive. That was certainly present, I just think it could be accentuated a little more.

Sadly, none of the truly awful suggestions were followed through on. Perhaps that's for the best, though, at least as far as the happy ending is concerned. :smallbiggrin:

Nomar
2011-08-26, 02:36 AM
What if the ponies have a tradition of leaving home once they are old enough and become apprentices/students/whatever elsewhere? Then the only parents actually missing would be AJs.

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 02:58 AM
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/twilight-sparklebackgroundupdated.png

Twilight Sparkle's background has been fixed! Check it out!

Trixie
2011-08-26, 03:46 AM
Imagedump #3: or why we have Pinkie/Minty edition :smalltongue:

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/d401b8eea9dbccd86d70ad39eef1b23c/48740%20-%20Minty%20artist%3Atopshot%20hi-res%20pinkie_pie.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6e764a976f12757305f1195710119f8d/5089%20-%20Minty%20lesbian%20pinkie_pie.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/0ba5c327cb1a1d5604a4c16cb5d72a30/44788%20-%20G3%20Minty%20filly%20pinkie_pie.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/78ca8d28ec9c64b2156b588136ab1902/44791%20-%20Minty%20socks.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/df6a40b54af265948a48e3f791933bcc/47475%20-%20G3%20Minty%20g3_to_g4%20star_song%20toy.jpg

Hmmm, looks like Pinkie/Minty was OTP in older generations. WJ, can you say anything about that?

Also, seeing she is one of the new blindbag ponies... Maybe she will become a character in S2? After all, they already have her voice actress for brief cameo :smalltongue:

Deadly
2011-08-26, 04:52 AM
BTW, Luna comic is also by Deadly, yes?

If you're thinking of these (http://adcoon.deviantart.com/art/Trickster-Goddess-nr-4-253415683), then yes.

Aotrs Commander
2011-08-26, 05:13 AM
Three Letters.

E.M.P.

Who said I need to fire the rocket launcher? Snake Launchers are quite capable of being used to beat things into a messy pulp...



Not that Aotrs technology isn't, like most technology in the galaxy, heavily EM shielded (partly through sheer dint of taking power surges of phenominal value through normal usage, as well as for that exact reason), and you'd have to get through a starship's shields first. Just sayin'.

Kurgan
2011-08-26, 05:43 AM
Of course, this brings back my thoughts for Rarity's good-for-nothing scoundrel of a brother settling down into the Apples.

Wow, I had forgotten he existed. What was his name again?


Rebel: I'm saddened that I can only use one at a time. And that is the only thing about this that saddens me.

ton: Rarity has a brother? *Jaw Drop.*

You know, that raises a good question. Why is Sweetybelle Living with Rarity? Where the heck are that little Filly's parents?

I figured that she just watched over Sweety Belle on occasions when their parents were out, be it for a night in town alone or on a business trip.


They're either out exploring the world or the three hour cruise they went on, with all the other pony parents we haven't seen, shipwrecked onto an uncharted tropical island. They're all perfectly safe and will be back as soon as one of them builds a helicopter out of coconuts and bamboo.

The only problem is that they keep getting thwarted by Pony Gilligan. That and headhunters.

But don't worry! They will get off, and then return to open up a hotel there! They'll even get the Equestrian Globetrotters to make a few appearances!




lolol stormtrooper pony.

Not 100% sure, but I'm guessing you are referring to me? The people over in the ponitar thread to a fantastic job if you are looking to add a little extra pony to your avatar.


One sister took over the farm, and one is a classical musician!

About the only missing/disappeared parent thing I'll believe is mom and dad apple. Poor AB


What of Photo Finish? Do you want to make Bobcat cry? :smallwink:


Psych!

Reposta Elements of Ponythread now.

Elements of Ponythread v1.9

Huh, just realized I don't have an element. I need to remedy this at some point...



[Just making an obligated hipster-ppearance. Back to schoolwork. http://i.imgur.com/xNUoP.jpg]

Quick! Somepony grab her before she leaves!


Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:

Ooooh! Makes me regret working till 6 in the morning, since I missed this by a good number of hours. I'll have to break into it when I have some time! Thanks for posting it!

Grif
2011-08-26, 05:58 AM
Huh, just realized I don't have an element. I need to remedy this at some point...


[mortal kombat]Choose your Element![/mortalkombat] :smallbiggrin:

Kurgan
2011-08-26, 06:42 AM
Well, read the Guide to Dating, and I enjoyed it. One or two nitpicks:


Instead, however, he turned from the seething Princess, to Shimmer, who was still sitting down, casting an almost scornful gaze upon her.

Is Shimmer glaring at Midnight or Blueblood? I thought from the previous sections that she was giving looks of confusion at Midnight and anger at Blueblood, but this confuses me on it a bit.


Prince Blueblood The Second

Not 100% on this, but I do not think you need to capitalize "the" in a pony's title. ex: Alexander the Great. The "the" is more of a connector for the other two words rather than a word itself, if that makes sense.


Shimmer must have been wondering just what she had seen in Midnight at this point, she was surprised that the pegasus hadn’t of completely given up on her at this point...

Don't know why, but I think this might read slightly better as "must be"


The Ursa roared, but Midnight’s horn flared to light. Much akin to her azure mother, vines and roots began to pull up around her, starting to lash around the beasts limbs!

Are the vines and roots gathering around Midnight or the Ursa? The sentence reads: gathering around Midnight, but actually touching the Ursa. Might read better as "vines and roots began to pull up around it, starting to lash around the beast's limbs.

Also: beast's, not beasts, unless there is more than one Ursa (in which case it would be beasts' :smallwink:)




One more note:


Midnight began to bounce around, giggling with glee, unaware of her surroundings, the surrounding ponies looking at her with confusion.

“Yesyesyesyesyes!”

Daaaaaaaaaw!







[mortal kombat]Choose your Element![/mortalkombat] :smallbiggrin:

So many to choose from, how can I decide?!

Grif
2011-08-26, 06:51 AM
Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:

I forgot to comment!

Wait, I don't know what to comment. Rainbow Dash, would you do the honours?
http://s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/entries/icons/medium/000/005/787/i%20wub%20woo%20every%20day.jpg?1309843986


@Kurgan
This is where you must seek guidance from the Pink One! http://i.imgur.com/ROEne.jpg

Gamerlord
2011-08-26, 07:11 AM
Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:
Brilliant. Just plain brilliant.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 07:23 AM
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/twilight-sparklebackgroundupdated.png

Twilight Sparkle's background has been fixed! Check it out!

Looks really good man!


Imagedump #3: or why we have Pinkie/Minty edition :smalltongue:

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/d401b8eea9dbccd86d70ad39eef1b23c/48740%20-%20Minty%20artist%3Atopshot%20hi-res%20pinkie_pie.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6e764a976f12757305f1195710119f8d/5089%20-%20Minty%20lesbian%20pinkie_pie.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/0ba5c327cb1a1d5604a4c16cb5d72a30/44788%20-%20G3%20Minty%20filly%20pinkie_pie.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/78ca8d28ec9c64b2156b588136ab1902/44791%20-%20Minty%20socks.png

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/df6a40b54af265948a48e3f791933bcc/47475%20-%20G3%20Minty%20g3_to_g4%20star_song%20toy.jpg

Hmmm, looks like Pinkie/Minty was OTP in older generations. WJ, can you say anything about that?

Also, seeing she is one of the new blindbag ponies... Maybe she will become a character in S2? After all, they already have her voice actress for brief cameo :smalltongue:

I kind of hope they don't try to force her into the mane cast. Recurring or one shot character would be cool though.


Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:

This book was made out of absolute derp and I love it to death. I have to say, you really have a knack for making Midnight fit in extremely well with canon, something a lot of OC writers lack. And this story is no exception.

Kurgan
2011-08-26, 07:25 AM
@Kurgan
This is where you must seek guidance from the Pink One! http://i.imgur.com/ROEne.jpg

*Lights some incense, and kneels before a likeness of the Pink One*

Oh Great and Mighty One, the Bringer of Parties, the Mistress of Cakes, Prize Winner of the Regional Dance Contest, please tell me, your humble servant, what my Element shall be!

See my offering of cupcakes (only partially eaten), muffins, kazoos, and icing! All this I give to you, and all I ask in return is the knowledge of what my Element of Ponythread shall be.

Your Element is....oooooh! Are those cupcakes!? For me For me For me!? Oooooh and I must must put some of that icing on it! Wanna dance dance dance? This song's my favorite!

Hmmmm....we seem to be having some complications. Perhaps a good nights sleep will work better...

Kris Strife
2011-08-26, 07:53 AM
*Lights some incense, and kneels before a likeness of the Pink One*

Oh Great and Mighty One, the Bringer of Parties, the Mistress of Cakes, Prize Winner of the Regional Dance Contest, please tell me, your humble servant, what my Element shall be!

See my offering of cupcakes (only partially eaten), muffins, kazoos, and icing! All this I give to you, and all I ask in return is the knowledge of what my Element of Ponythread shall be.

Your Element is....oooooh! Are those cupcakes!? For me For me For me!? Oooooh and I must must put some of that icing on it! Wanna dance dance dance? This song's my favorite!

Hmmmm....we seem to be having some complications. Perhaps a good nights sleep will work better...

I think inaccuracy might be a good fit, considering your avatar. :smallbiggrin:

Grif
2011-08-26, 08:04 AM
I think inaccuracy might be a good fit, considering your avatar. :smallbiggrin:

Element of Stormtrooper Academy! :smallbiggrin:

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 08:06 AM
*Lights some incense, and kneels before a likeness of the Pink One*

Oh Great and Mighty One, the Bringer of Parties, the Mistress of Cakes, Prize Winner of the Regional Dance Contest, please tell me, your humble servant, what my Element shall be!

See my offering of cupcakes (only partially eaten), muffins, kazoos, and icing! All this I give to you, and all I ask in return is the knowledge of what my Element of Ponythread shall be.

Your Element is....oooooh! Are those cupcakes!? For me For me For me!? Oooooh and I must must put some of that icing on it! Wanna dance dance dance? This song's my favorite!

Hmmmm....we seem to be having some complications. Perhaps a good nights sleep will work better...

I think that's just her version of "Unsure, ask again later". The magic pinkie ball.

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6600/magicpball2.jpg

Confound these ponies they drive me to photomanipulate!

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 08:33 AM
I think that's just her version of "Unsure, ask again later". The magic pinkie ball.

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6600/magicpball2.jpg

Confound these ponies they drive me to photomanipulate!

You just lack the wisdom to hear the answer answer answer

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 10:13 AM
Thanks, everypony, both for all of your compliments, and all of your nitpicks! This sort of stuff is exactly what I need to grow as a writer, and I'm a tough guy, I can take criticism well. :smallsmile:

@Thanqol:

Yeah, some of your absolutely truly awful suggestions really would have made the date go from 'disaster but salvageable' to 'Welp, we're done here.' Thanks for the critiques on the language, both in dialogue and outside it, I'll go back and review them to tighten them up. I'll probably end up swiping some of your quotes there. :smallsmile:

@Kurgan

Thank you for all the nitpicks, I partly blame the fact that I'm using a different keyboard for some of them, but on the other hand...I do tend to do that even with a keyboard I'm used to. :smallbiggrin:

@Grif & Gamerlord

Yay! So awesome!

@Titanium Fox

Aw, thank you. I really do strive hard to make Midnight 'fit' in with the rest of Equestria, and show that it, as a world, has evolved some over the decades that Midnight has been alive.

Now, to get to work on editing. I'm going to make this thing as strong as I can.

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-26, 10:38 AM
This thread needs 50 Cc of cuteness. STAT! So have an imagedump, Helloooooo Nurse edition:
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/226/2/c/bon_bon_nurse_by_pyruvate-d46hlzb.jpg
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/205/c/f/rarity_nurse_by_pyruvate-d41h32q.jpg
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/220/6/6/princess_luna_nurse_by_pyruvate-d45tcnt.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/203/a/5/fluttershy_nurse_by_pyruvate-d3k1068.jpg

You can find the more "Tick tick (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPhDcP9y76Y)" pics of the set here. (http://pyruvate.deviantart.com/gallery/31611537)

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 10:42 AM
This thread needs 50 Cc of cuteness. STAT! So have an imagedump, Helloooooo Nurse edition:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/205/c/f/rarity_nurse_by_pyruvate-d41h32q.jpg
You can find the more "Tick tick (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPhDcP9y76Y)" pics of the set here. (http://pyruvate.deviantart.com/gallery/31611537)

http://i.imgur.com/UwGCn.jpg
I... Erm... How did you get that photograph? I demand that you return it this instant! I was just... Erm... Modeling a commissioned design for Photo Finish! Yes indeed. That is exactly what that photograph is. Now give it here!

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-26, 10:54 AM
http://i.imgur.com/UwGCn.jpg
I... Erm... How did you get that photograph? I demand that you return it this instant! I was just... Erm... Modeling a commissioned design for Photo Finish! Yes indeed. That is exactly what that photograph is. Now give it here!

So you want me to return it... hmmmm nah. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClXAaGoT5eE)

Besides, what's the point of modeling a commission if you don't want anypony to see it? :smallamused:

Lix Lorn
2011-08-26, 11:10 AM
I think that's just her version of "Unsure, ask again later". The magic pinkie ball.

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6600/magicpball2.jpg

Confound these ponies they drive me to photomanipulate!


You just lack the wisdom to hear the answer answer answer
===> Look again with your vision 8fold


This thread needs 50 Cc of cuteness. STAT! So have an imagedump, Helloooooo Nurse edition:
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/226/2/c/bon_bon_nurse_by_pyruvate-d46hlzb.jpg
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/205/c/f/rarity_nurse_by_pyruvate-d41h32q.jpg
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/220/6/6/princess_luna_nurse_by_pyruvate-d45tcnt.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/203/a/5/fluttershy_nurse_by_pyruvate-d3k1068.jpg

You can find the more "Tick tick (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPhDcP9y76Y)" pics of the set here. (http://pyruvate.deviantart.com/gallery/31611537)I uh. ._.
Wow.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 11:15 AM
http://i.imgur.com/UwGCn.jpg
I... Erm... How did you get that photograph? I demand that you return it this instant! I was just... Erm... Modeling a commissioned design for Photo Finish! Yes indeed. That is exactly what that photograph is. Now give it here!

I think you look great like that, Aunt Rarity. :smallbiggrin:

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 11:18 AM
This thread needs 50 Cc of cuteness. STAT! So have an imagedump, Helloooooo Nurse edition:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/205/c/f/rarity_nurse_by_pyruvate-d41h32q.jpg

DAT PLOT.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 12:15 PM
So you want me to return it... hmmmm nah. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClXAaGoT5eE)

Besides, what's the point of modeling a commission if you don't want anypony to see it? :smallamused:

Hush you! It... it was for her to examine the design, alright? In private. Alone. With nopony else to see it.


I think you look great like that, Aunt Rarity. :smallbiggrin:

Midinight, dear! That really isn't something to... I-I mean, that picture is... Oh Celestia. Don't you have a marefriend?

Kindablue
2011-08-26, 12:21 PM
United Forever, In Friendship and Neighbor,
Our Great Equine Empire shall ever endure,
The Mighty Celestia in all of her grace,
Created this world to be our sacred place,

Long live our Equine Motherland,
Long live our Empire so Grand,
Long live Equestria united and Free,
Strong in our Friendship Trialed by Fire,
Long may that Violet flag Inspire,
Shining new glory for Ponies to see,

With Luna our princess, Our Ever Loved Goddess,
The Elements of Harmony Returned her to Grace,
The Night was Eternal, Her punishment Infernal,
Nightmare Moon was put in her Rightful Place,

Long live our Equine Motherland,
Long live our Empire so Grand,
Long live Equestria united and Free,
Strong in our Friendship Trialed by Fire
Long may that Violet flag Inspire,
Shining new glory for Ponies to see,

The struggle continues, The parasprites are bad news,
But we see right through them, we know they were abused,
With Faust our creator, we destroyed the invader,
And see Them become a Cutie Mark Crusader,

Long live our Equine Motherland,
Long live our Empire so Grand,
Long live Equestria united and Free,
Strong in our Friendship Trialed by Fire
Long may that Violet flag Inspire,
Shining new glory for Ponies to see (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwERapuM17k)

http://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/c/c4/User_RainbowDash_RainbowDashSalute.png

Beacon of Chaos
2011-08-26, 12:27 PM
Hush you! It... it was for her to examine the design, alright? In private. Alone. With nopony else to see it.

Was this one a "private" picture too?

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/236/1/9/192c857ee2912cce7f3c5b7f30245873-d47ojxe.jpg (http://renkoji.deviantart.com/art/She-s-a-Lady-second-version-254767586)

:smallamused:

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 12:29 PM
Was this one a "private" picture too?

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/236/1/9/192c857ee2912cce7f3c5b7f30245873-d47ojxe.jpg (http://renkoji.deviantart.com/art/She-s-a-Lady-second-version-254767586)

:smallamused:

All of you ponies out of my Boutique! Every last one! Outoutoutoutout! http://i.imgur.com/fhwi8.jpg

Nopony goes through my horseshoe box!

...Midnight, dear, do you think you're getting away from me that easily? You stay. I need to have a word with you. Now.

Zevox
2011-08-26, 12:31 PM
http://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/c/c4/User_RainbowDash_RainbowDashSalute.png
This reminds me - how is it that no one has made a smiley-size version of the Rainbow Dash salute?
http://i.imgur.com/cUkh2.jpg

Zevox

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 12:38 PM
Midinight, dear! That really isn't something to... I-I mean, that picture is... Oh Celestia. Don't you have a marefriend?

What? I'm just saying that you look really good in that picture. I mean, it accentuates your figure nicely!


Was this one a "private" picture too?

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/236/1/9/192c857ee2912cce7f3c5b7f30245873-d47ojxe.jpg (http://renkoji.deviantart.com/art/She-s-a-Lady-second-version-254767586)

:smallamused:

Ooh, I like that one too! See, Aunt Rarity? You look good in nearly anything that you wear!


All of you ponies out of my Boutique! Every last one! Outoutoutoutout! http://i.imgur.com/fhwi8.jpg

Nopony goes through my horseshoe box!

...Midnight, dear, do you think you're getting away from me that easily? You stay. I need to have a word with you. Now.

*Midnight has already stolen copies of the pictures, and was trying to sneak out of the Boutique when Rarity catches her.

"Yeep! A-About what, Aunt Rarity? *whistles innocently*"

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 12:41 PM
What? I'm just saying that you look really good in that picture. I mean, it accentuates your figure nicely!



Ooh, I like that one too! See, Aunt Rarity? You look good in nearly anything that you wear!



*Midnight has already stolen copies of the pictures, and was trying to sneak out of the Boutique when Rarity catches her.

"Yeep! A-About what, Aunt Rarity? *whistles innocently*"

Young lady. You do know just how rude it is to dig through another lady's private belongings, do you not? And don't think I don't see the corners of those pictures in your saddlebags. How would you like it if I showed your mothers the pictures you keep hidden away in that old book on Equestrian Law that you know momma Twilight hasn't touched in fifteen years? Hm?

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 12:50 PM
Young lady. You do know just how rude it is to dig through another lady's private belongings, do you not? And don't think I don't see the corners of those pictures in your saddlebags. How would you like it if I showed your mothers the pictures you keep hidden away in that old book on Equestrian Law that you know momma Twilight hasn't touched in fifteen years? Hm?

In my self-defense, I wasn't the one who was peeking through your horseshoe box in the first place, I was...

I was....

Y-You know about those? How can you know about those?!

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-26, 12:51 PM
Hush you! It... it was for her to examine the design, alright? In private. Alone. With nopony else to see it.

Fine. I'll return this one... but whatever will I do with the rest of the set, I wonder. :smallamused:


All of you ponies out of my Boutique! Every last one! Outoutoutoutout! http://i.imgur.com/fhwi8.jpg

Nopony goes through my horseshoe box!

Because Rarity is cutest when she is all frazzled, have some more of her secret dossier:
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/ff1c1a9a38502a30478f70014046f636.png
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/9570ed5c2a893fdc01fc558b35d23a54.jpg
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/72d4b770d5d03d826d239a138a21778c.png
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/48231b5bc4b22053dc134f8a490a10d7.png
^ Hipster Rarity? How'd that one get in there?
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/29a79d49527d20d7de98ba88050d7ec2.jpg
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/sample/360f08b957dc94b3a780fea90b36ffb8.jpg
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6e949aa97f6a0affc4413e7396ac8dc2/5543%20-%20%3A%29%20artist%3Ajohn_joseco%20rarity%20shower .jpg
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/480e47a87f732010c1a3a972832e630a.jpg
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/f11918e0f08d0baac973e96e58963d5e/48182%20-%20artist%3Ashad-o-ren%20plot%20rarity.jpg



She's going to kill me! Take the pictures and run!

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 01:03 PM
In my self-defense, I wasn't the one who was peeking through your horseshoe box in the first place, I was...

I was....

Y-You know about those? How can you know about those?!

Oh I have my sources, my dear niece... You'll just have to figure that out for yourself. You're a smart girl. Now, back in the box with those.


Fine. I'll return this one... but whatever will I do with the rest of the set, I wonder. :smallamused:



Because Rarity is cutest when she is all frazzled, have some more of her secret dossier:
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/ff1c1a9a38502a30478f70014046f636.png
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/9570ed5c2a893fdc01fc558b35d23a54.jpg
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/72d4b770d5d03d826d239a138a21778c.png
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/48231b5bc4b22053dc134f8a490a10d7.png
^ Hipster Rarity? How'd that one get in there?
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/29a79d49527d20d7de98ba88050d7ec2.jpg
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/sample/360f08b957dc94b3a780fea90b36ffb8.jpg
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6e949aa97f6a0affc4413e7396ac8dc2/5543%20-%20%3A%29%20artist%3Ajohn_joseco%20rarity%20shower .jpg
http://bronibooru.mlponies.com/data/480e47a87f732010c1a3a972832e630a.jpg
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/f11918e0f08d0baac973e96e58963d5e/48182%20-%20artist%3Ashad-o-ren%20plot%20rarity.jpg



She's going to kill me! Take the pictures and run!

*Deadpan* You do know what will happen to you if I do not have those pictures in my hoof within the next instant, correct?

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 01:07 PM
In my self-defense, I wasn't the one who was peeking through your horseshoe box in the first place, I was...

I was....

Y-You know about those? How can you know about those?!

Well Rarity's cutie mark means she is a GEM finder. i guess that extends to more then just rocks. :smallwink:

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 01:08 PM
Well Rarity's cutie mark means she is a GEM finder. i guess that extends to more then just rocks. :smallwink:

Does that mean she can find diamonds in the rough? Ponies with stones? Music with rocks in it?

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 01:13 PM
Oh I have my sources, my dear niece... You'll just have to figure that out for yourself. You're a smart girl. Now, back in the box with those.

"T-This isn't fair! Especially since my pictures are far worse than these are! This is blackmail!"

*Midnight protests feebly,but sighs, pulling the pictures from her saddlebags, and gives them back to Rarity.

"You really do look nice in those..."

Trixie
2011-08-26, 01:13 PM
Hmmm... Can someone explain the joke? ^^"

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/0546f5c00d73fef69f6f4960dfea0e1c/23331%20-%20G3%20Minty%20artist%3Atheartrix%20human%20pizza %20political_cartoon.jpg

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/5c01e5f6a6fb41b56af1bcf3942eaf2c/23328%20-%20G3%20Minty%20artist%3Atheartrix%20human%20pizza %20political_cartoon.jpg

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 01:16 PM
Hmmm... Can someone explain the joke? ^^"

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/0546f5c00d73fef69f6f4960dfea0e1c/23331%20-%20G3%20Minty%20artist%3Atheartrix%20human%20pizza %20political_cartoon.jpg

http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/5c01e5f6a6fb41b56af1bcf3942eaf2c/23328%20-%20G3%20Minty%20artist%3Atheartrix%20human%20pizza %20political_cartoon.jpg

Not being political cartoon-savvy, I find amusement in the idea of putting so much faux-symbolism in and then saying what it all represents. In my case, it's funny simple because I have absolutely no idea what's going on.

Orzel
2011-08-26, 01:17 PM
Blizzard
Heatwave
Earthquake
now a Hurricane.

I know its not your fauly Rainbow Dash but you are now my least favorite mane cast pony.

You better tell your pegasus friends to CUT IT OUT!!

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 01:23 PM
Blizzard
Heatwave
Earthquake
now a Hurricane.

I know its not your fauly Rainbow Dash but you are now my least favorite mane cast pony.

You better tell your pegasus friends to CUT IT OUT!!

Don't Earth Ponies do earthquakes? You know, with all that earthy-earth earth?

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 01:25 PM
Blizzard
Heatwave
Earthquake
now a Hurricane.

I know its not your fauly Rainbow Dash but you are now my least favorite mane cast pony.

You better tell your pegasus friends to CUT IT OUT!!

Yeah..... This is kinda bad. I live on long island. you know, the disaster death trap?
Impossible to evacuate, get relief to, its coastal, AN ISLAND. So uh..... if no pony hears from me in a few days.... you will know why.

Kindablue
2011-08-26, 01:25 PM
Not being political cartoon-savvy, I find amusement in the idea of putting so much faux-symbolism in and then saying what it all represents. In my case, it's funny simple because I have absolutely no idea what's going on.

Yep, it's poking fun at the habit a lot of political cartoonists have of pointing out their own symbolism; taking it to the extreme of labeling his leg, in case you didn't know what that line represented.

Trixie
2011-08-26, 01:25 PM
Not being political cartoon-savvy, I find amusement in the idea of putting so much faux-symbolism in and then saying what it all represents. In my case, it's funny simple because I have absolutely no idea what's going on.

...All I got from that is that somehow invisible hand of market feeds our pizza to ponies ^^"

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 01:26 PM
Earthquake


That was sort of my fault fault fault.
You see the latest party I organized was...

*summons 20 foot tall cake, then places sunglasses on it*

Earth-shattering shattering shattering.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAH

@Trixie: I don't think the message was anything other than "political cartoons don't make sense, I like ponies"

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-26, 01:29 PM
*Deadpan* You do know what will happen to you if I do not have those pictures in my hoof within the next instant, correct?

Alright. Here you go. I'm sorry for taking your secret pictures. Just please stop staring with that look that screams "death."

Rarity is very scary when she's angry.

I guess you'll be wanting the rest of these back as well then:
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6b4d9907182a456e633ce7dde6c5b300/7160%20-%20artist%3Ajohn_joseco%20dress%20plot%20rarity.jp g
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/cf2e45d27d24a5dc8361fc9c86a46cea/27874%20-%20artist%3Adarkpandax%20coloured%20dat_plot%20gla sses%20not_a_dupe%20plot%20rarity%20transparent.pn g
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/3199f7cf9fa7f19de367d9173810375f/35969%20-%20artist%3Akayla-san%20hooves%20plot%20rarity.png
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/16b62481445b778552b7ecfc1d2727c9/35592%20-%20artist%3Afurrydinner%20photo%20plot%20rarity.pn g
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/7f24fcbc848ae98803c8c2a4fcb478dc/29354%20-%20artist%3Ajenasu%20plot%20rarity.png
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/e11c837545608e3bcbf2b244519bd1aa/15166%20-%20plot%20rarity%20spike%20transparent.png
Next two spoiled for being extra "tick-tick (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPhDcP9y76Y)"
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6b71d5b26cb562f81326091c9eee61b8/12773%20-%20artist%3Akloudmutt%20bondage%20plot%20rarity%20 saliva.jpg
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/8f8cea8ee833a3ef3f43fed4425dcf02/40878%20-%20artist%3ARayo%20plot%20rarity.png


If you don't hear from me tomorrow, Blame Rarity and not Irene!

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 01:34 PM
There's too much plot going on in this thread! And now for something... completely different.

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/162/1/0/artist_training_grounds_day_15_by_crunchnugget-d3ilg2o.png

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 01:36 PM
There's too much plot going on in this thread! And now for something... completely different.

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/162/1/0/artist_training_grounds_day_15_by_crunchnugget-d3ilg2o.png

Is that Twilight Sporkle?

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-26, 01:46 PM
There's too much plot going on in this thread! And now for something... completely different.

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2011/162/1/0/artist_training_grounds_day_15_by_crunchnugget-d3ilg2o.png

Ha! I get it! It's Twilight Sporkle!

Everypony loves plot. Studies that I don't need to link because they are so complex and technical that you don't need to read them to understand them show that this show is about 63.7% more enjoyable because of the plot... roughly speaking.

Edit: ninja'd
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6235765457cdf2c2af9b6a38310edafc/6614%20-%20ninja%20pinkie_pie.jpg

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 01:55 PM
"T-This isn't fair! Especially since my pictures are far worse than these are! This is blackmail!"

*Midnight protests feebly,but sighs, pulling the pictures from her saddlebags, and gives them back to Rarity.

"You really do look nice in those..."

...You do know how to make a lady feel bad. You do of course know I can't just let you have these though. Come here, give Auntie Rarity a hug.


Alright. Here you go. I'm sorry for taking your secret pictures. Just please stop staring with that look that screams "death."

Rarity is very scary when she's angry.

I guess you'll be wanting the rest of these back as well then:
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6b4d9907182a456e633ce7dde6c5b300/7160%20-%20artist%3Ajohn_joseco%20dress%20plot%20rarity.jp g
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/cf2e45d27d24a5dc8361fc9c86a46cea/27874%20-%20artist%3Adarkpandax%20coloured%20dat_plot%20gla sses%20not_a_dupe%20plot%20rarity%20transparent.pn g
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/3199f7cf9fa7f19de367d9173810375f/35969%20-%20artist%3Akayla-san%20hooves%20plot%20rarity.png
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/16b62481445b778552b7ecfc1d2727c9/35592%20-%20artist%3Afurrydinner%20photo%20plot%20rarity.pn g
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/7f24fcbc848ae98803c8c2a4fcb478dc/29354%20-%20artist%3Ajenasu%20plot%20rarity.png
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/e11c837545608e3bcbf2b244519bd1aa/15166%20-%20plot%20rarity%20spike%20transparent.png
Next two spoiled for being extra "tick-tick (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPhDcP9y76Y)"
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/6b71d5b26cb562f81326091c9eee61b8/12773%20-%20artist%3Akloudmutt%20bondage%20plot%20rarity%20 saliva.jpg
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/8f8cea8ee833a3ef3f43fed4425dcf02/40878%20-%20artist%3ARayo%20plot%20rarity.png


If you don't hear from me tomorrow, Blame Rarity and not Irene!

Thank you kindly de- Wait, what are those last two? These aren't mine... SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKKKKKKEEEEEEE!

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 02:00 PM
...You do know how to make a lady feel bad. You do of course know I can't just let you have these though. Come here, give Auntie Rarity a hug.

*Midnight gives over the pictures, and then reaches to give Rarity a hug as well!


Thank you kindly de- Wait, what are those last two? These aren't mine... SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKKKKKKEEEEEEE!

*Midnight's eyes widen, as she realizes something. "Wait a second...of course! Your 'source' was Spike, wasn't it?! That little fink, he must have seen me hide them, and babbled it to you!"

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 02:03 PM
*Midnight gives over the pictures, and then reaches to give Rarity a hug as well!



*Midnight's eyes widen, as she realizes something. "Wait a second...of course! Your 'source' was Spike, wasn't it?! That little fink, he must have seen me hide them, and babbled it to you!"

*Chuckles softly from the hug* No actually, but that is quite the good guess. You must keep in mind... One of your mothers is indeed the Princess of the Night.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 02:09 PM
*Chuckles softly from the hug* No actually, but that is quite the good guess. You must keep in mind... One of your mothers is indeed the Princess of the Night.

*Midnight trails off for a moment, and then lets out a sigh.

"You know, this is exactly why I built that little shelter for myself that doesn't have any windows!"

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 02:12 PM
*Chuckles softly from the hug* No actually, but that is quite the good guess. You must keep in mind... One of your mothers is indeed the Princess of the Night.

*ponyard fall through the ceiling*
Ouch. Also, one of my companions becomes invisible during the night time.... and hes quite the creep.

PONYARD! You are lucky its day time... if you hope to live, dont ever go to sleep...

Hes just grouchy because i discovered his stash of peeping tom photos.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 02:24 PM
*Midnight trails off for a moment, and then lets out a sigh.

"You know, this is exactly why I built that little shelter for myself that doesn't have any windows!"

Midnight, dear. You know your mother. She most likely took it as quite a challenge. Oh I see that look, don't fret. You know I am a trustworthy mare. It is only between Luna, You, and I, alright? I think it's quite the romantic gesture, actually.

Your aunt Rarity is indeed a bit of a gossip, but only when it won't hurt anypony, of course. http://i.imgur.com/6ZURl.jpg


*ponyard fall through the ceiling*
Ouch. Also, one of my companions becomes invisible during the night time.... and hes quite the creep.

PONYARD! You are lucky its day time... if you hope to live, dont ever go to sleep...

Hes just grouchy because i discovered his stash of peeping tom photos.

...I can not. Even begin. To describe. The indignation I feel right now. OUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUTOUT!

So does this mean I'm now the thread's token Rarity? *iamokaywiththis*

TheAmishPirate
2011-08-26, 02:29 PM
Just finished reading the Guide to Dating, thoughts below:

The intro moves a little too fast for my tastes. I think if you added something between "Doing what?" and Shimmer's explanation, or even just lengthened the explanation and turned it into a bit more back-and-forth, you'd fix it. Just a suggestion.

It seems like after the dinner, Midnight stops following the bad advice. That just struck me as odd.

Overall: Very good. It still needs some tweaking (and other ponies have pointed out more nitpicky things) but it does a good job of keeping the tone of the series and being overall full of pony, if that makes any sense.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 02:34 PM
Midnight, dear. You know your mother. She most likely took it as quite a challenge. Oh I see that look, don't fret. You know I am a trustworthy mare. It is only between Luna, You, and I, alright? I think it's quite the romantic gesture, actually.

Your aunt Rarity is indeed a bit of a gossip, but only when it won't hurt anypony, of course. http://i.imgur.com/6ZURl.jpg

So does this mean I'm now the thread's token Rarity? *iamokaywiththis*

*Midnight sags in relief, and smiles slightly.

"I know Momma Luna can be...naughty. I do take after her a little. But..thanks, Aunt Rarity. I do trust you, and I know you won't tell anypony else. I'm...sorry I tried to take some of your pictures.

Although, I'm still going to move my pictures when I get home. :smallredface:"

Congrats! You're Rarity!

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 02:38 PM
*Midnight sags in relief, and smiles slightly.

"I know Momma Luna can be...naughty. I do take after her a little. But..thanks, Aunt Rarity. I do trust you, and I know you won't tell anypony else. I'm...sorry I tried to take some of your pictures.

Although, I'm still going to move my pictures when I get home. :smallredface:"

Congrats! You're Rarity!

Good girl. Run along now, we wouldn't aunt Rarity to change her mind now, would we? *She giggles, reassuring the filly with a warm, joking smile.*

Just marvelous! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3suGfhnT2Sg)

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 02:46 PM
Meanwhile, in the spaceship Woona:

Yes, princess the surveillance equipment has been upgraded as per your request.

*monocle!Luna claps*

May I ask why it's all trained on a specific block of Ponyville?

no.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 03:00 PM
Just finished reading the Guide to Dating, thoughts below:

The intro moves a little too fast for my tastes. I think if you added something between "Doing what?" and Shimmer's explanation, or even just lengthened the explanation and turned it into a bit more back-and-forth, you'd fix it. Just a suggestion.

It seems like after the dinner, Midnight stops following the bad advice. That just struck me as odd.

Overall: Very good. It still needs some tweaking (and other ponies have pointed out more nitpicky things) but it does a good job of keeping the tone of the series and being overall full of pony, if that makes any sense.

It doesn't surprise me you found the intro a little weak, it was actually the last thing that I wrote, and I only rewrote it because I lost the first intro, so I was trying to rewrite from memory without much ambition to do so. I'll see what I can do to strengthen it.

I'd like to explain the bad advice a little: Midnight follows the first three pieces, and inadvertently follows the fourth (If you can get your voice louder than the ponies on stage, you have succeeded. ). The fifth was there mainly as wordplay-the humor advice starts off the section where they get infected with Poison Joke. The sixth is there to solidify that, yes, it's absolutely bad advice, and Midnight has essentially given up on it at this point.

I'm glad that, overall, you liked it. As for the tweaks, this is why it's a 'rough draft', after all. :smallwink:


Good girl. Run along now, we wouldn't aunt Rarity to change her mind now, would we? *She giggles, reassuring the filly with a warm, joking smile.*

Just marvelous! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3suGfhnT2Sg)

*Midnight scampers off, and goes to absolutely hide those pictures in a much safer spot than before. :smallwink:

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 03:04 PM
*Midnight scampers off, and goes to absolutely hide those pictures in a much safer spot than before. :smallwink:

Oh youth... Somehow I doubt that new hiding place shall be a secret to me for very long at all. *She glances to her horseshoe box* Apparently it is time for me to move my collection as well. Now how in the name of Celstia herself did that filly find it?

Somewhere in the distance, some could say they heard a girlish giggle, ringing throughout the night.

Hehe.

Metahuman1
2011-08-26, 03:05 PM
*Postcard arrives at Rarity's five minutes later, dated last week, from the Island Paradise of Hanahoofhoof, with a general sentiment that he's gonna be gone a round trip of a month and wishes she was there.

Thus giving him an alibi for the pictures.*

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 03:53 PM
Oh youth... Somehow I doubt that new hiding place shall be a secret to me for very long at all. *She glances to her horseshoe box* Apparently it is time for me to move my collection as well. Now how in the name of Celstia herself did that filly find it?

Somewhere in the distance, some could say they heard a girlish giggle, ringing throughout the night.

Hehe.

*ponyard still collapsed on the floor looks up* Hey Rarity, my companion would like to know if that stallion that sneaks in here every other night is SUPPOSED to be here, or if he is perhaps the source of the pictures you DIDN'T take.

Kurgan
2011-08-26, 04:11 PM
Element of Stormtrooper Academy! :smallbiggrin:

Perfect! I shall be the Element of Stormtrooper Academics!

Mando Knight
2011-08-26, 04:23 PM
All the FFRP is good and all, but could we please keep it contained in, I dunno, a Silly Message Board Game/Free Form Roleplaying (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=32) thread? Character chat isn't exactly what I go to the Media Discussions forum for...

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 04:26 PM
All the FFRP is good and all, but could we please keep it contained in, I dunno, a Silly Message Board Game/Free Form Roleplaying (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=32) thread? Character chat isn't exactly what I go to the Media Discussions forum for...

I think we should all remember that we seemed to have agreed long ago that when this kind of stuff happens, we'd keep it in spoilers and post something pony with it.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 04:31 PM
I'd argue that there's a difference between a goofy impromptu thing that is over and done in about 30-40 posts, based around actual pony content (pictures), and the 10+ page epics that the previous threads have contained, though.

Metahuman1
2011-08-26, 04:36 PM
I'm with Esper on this one. But if you want to go back too media discussions, here's something.

What preparations are everyone taking for the debut of season 2?

Kindablue
2011-08-26, 04:41 PM
Rainbow Factory (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRx_iXgLAyw) (I really like this one)
Are You Proud to be a Brony [PMV] (Fixed Audio) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X0sW8KrZF5s) (a little too Jack Johnson for me, but it's well put together)

----

Did this get posted?
Something's WRONG with MY LITTLE PONY Friendship is magic (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a27oq09lhPw&feature=related)

----


I'd argue that there's a difference between a goofy impromptu thing that is over and done in about 30-40 posts, based around actual pony content (pictures), and the 10+ page epics that the previous threads have contained, though.

A difference that can only be detected in hindsight.

otakuryoga
2011-08-26, 04:44 PM
sadly there is not much i can do since my cable company doesnt carry the hub :smallfrown: :smallfrown:

we get it at the hospital where i work, but thats a 35 minute drive.

so i just gotta troll youtube and hit refresh every 5 minutes til somepony gets the show up


in other news watched the last two episodes this morning before coming in to work so i can now properly join everyone else in their hatred for Prince Blue Blood :smallfurious:

Metahuman1
2011-08-26, 04:52 PM
*Gives you offical Doom to Blueblood Campaign Pin.*

Welcome too the club!

Deadly
2011-08-26, 04:57 PM
So just wanted to drop by to Announce my upcoming sequel to Fillystata, entitled "Mare in the Mirror". (http://adcoon.deviantart.com/journal/43610599/) First chapter should be up in a day or two I hope.

Capt. Ido Nos
2011-08-26, 04:59 PM
Well, I'm afraid Ima have to say goodbye for this weekend. Weekend retreat with like NO service. See yall later!

Trixie
2011-08-26, 05:03 PM
Or that When Twilight is greeting guests, the one who shakes her Hoof and the rest of he with it has the constellation Hercules as his Cutie Mark?

Wasn't that constellation of Orion, though? :smallconfused:


Hmmm, suddenly, I have a minor Background character who, in so far as I know, doesn't even have a name, to ship with Twilight. Ponythread, GO!

You mean the above? :smallconfused:


Many Moods of Ponythead: Repost
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/0003moodsofpony.png

More ponymotes:

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/seewhatyoudid.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/ajhappy.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/whatthehay.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/pinkone.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/cantsleep.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/derp.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/fluttershy.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/hungry.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/cute.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/really.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/arf.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/insane.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/angry.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/scared.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/urk.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/mischief.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/confusedemote.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/confounded.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/clown.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/applesurprise.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/naughtyemote.pnghttp://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/whatponyl.png
http://s152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/
Imgur folder (http://gitpmcerberus.imgur.com/ponymote)


Btw, aren't these ones I added to OP? :P


Rarity does a Tyler Durden impression near the end.

No, we already named him. He's Blues Mayne, billionaire playcolt by day, crime fighting vigilante by night. Of course, there's almost no crime in Equestria, so he spends most of his time in setting one.

Tyler who? :smallconfused:

You mean he actually commits crime himself?


So, another item, Rarity, Love interest now that Blue Blood is OFFICIALLY off the table, for season 2. Thoughts?

Well, if fanwork is to be believed it would be AJ... :smalltongue:


More stuff about that fic I may or may not write follows, for those who still don't want spoilers.

Well, the thing about this story is that it doesn't need to be flawless and convince the audience, it just needs to be good enough to
convince Rainbow Dash.

Ah, in that case, Rainbow is rather naive and flattery-hungry. Just watch second episode for arguments Nightmare Moon used?

You can even make her loyalty her weakness this time :smalltongue:


It stands for "One True Pairing". Basically "who is the best couple". I'm surprised. Usually people over on Ponychan are fiercely defensive of their favorite pairing. But over here on Ponythread, not so much.

Eh, you just haven't read many AotRS or Esper's posts... :smallwink:

Beacon of Chaos
2011-08-26, 05:12 PM
You know who else looks good in the nurse outfit?

The one who's actually a nurse
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/645971e6909acc7db6d416d7a106d669/49906%20-%20nurse%20nurse_outfit%20nurse_redheart.jpg


Well, I'm afraid Ima have to say goodbye for this weekend. Weekend retreat with like NO service. See yall later!
Later dude!

Kindablue
2011-08-26, 05:20 PM
Tyler who? :smallconfused:


At one point in the movie, Brad Pitt's character in Fight Club gets punched in the face several times and, instead of fighting back, jumps on top of his attacker and shakes his head around until they're both covered in blood. It looks a lot like this (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oRTMcbz4Co8), though I don't know if that was intentional.


Well, I'm afraid Ima have to say goodbye for this weekend. Weekend retreat with like NO service. See yall later!

Have fun!

dromer
2011-08-26, 05:27 PM
Finished revisions on Blue Moon in a Red Sky. Now no longer in a browser-breakingly huge document! Hopefully, I made things a bit more interesting than forty pages of exposition. As always, reviews are welcome- and encouraged! Be sure to PM me your thoughts, even if it is just a TL;DR.

Anyway, here's the links.
Blue Moon in a Red Sky (Still a Working Title) [Crossover][Dark][Adventure?][Also tons of OCs]
Chapter 1 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lcW6of-2wzLaSRWwOXfSFJ1CM6lddNuz1-vvPiXw19w/edit?hl=en_US)
Chapter 2 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DuHw3dHANgkqKstFopY6xHJF7T9kyovkb3ype53zmk8/edit?hl=en_US)
Chapter 3 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B7JhhzFM5BOgxqdzpyM-GgbB9ueTIwlFg5zjRcxo6Ic/edit?hl=en_US)
Chapter 4 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zRFdo4MayarFcq-6AmDSfmJiXLIkCX-e1Tp70V_mmpw/edit?hl=en_US)
Thanks in advance.

Trixie
2011-08-26, 05:34 PM
I say that she wasn't really interested in him, but rather interested in the fantasy of getting swept off her feet by a handsome prince. Needless to say, the actual day involved very little sweeping.

Unless it gets replaced by another fantasiful relationship, such as a millionare from Manehatten, I don't forsee another "love interest". Rarity hasn't really shown any interested in a specific pony as opposed to the prestige or title.

Eh, If you watch Ticket Master again, you'll see she cared more about the jewels and grand wedding than him, IMHO. Search will just continue, I don't see Rarity digging lower than Twilight in whole of Ponyville :smallwink:


..... I am a horrible pony. Heaven's light/hellfire parody.
I made up the latin, so it's likely inaccurate.
So many times out here
I've watched a happy pair
Of ponies trotting in the night
They had a kind of glow around them
It almost looked like rainbow's light

I knew one'd never know
That fun and loving glow
Though I might wish with all my might
No family as serious as my own
Was ever meant for a joyfull sight

But suddenly a Rainboom has shined at me
And paint my cheek with a smile so bright

I dare to dream for me
to throw a big party
And as I deck these walls tonight
My cold rock farm will seem so bright
I swear it must be rainbow's light

-----------------
Celestia Dea Omnipotenti
Beatae Luna semper Fortuna
Beatae Twilighti Sanctifica
consensia elementum omnibus equus

Beata Luna
You know I am a joyous mare
Of my parties I am justly proud

Et Celebritas

Beata Luna
You know I'm so much funner than
The common, average, sad, and boring crowd

Quia turba taedium

Then tell me, Luna
Why they refuse my invites then
Why their weak excuses still cause me woe

Vae dolor tristis

I see them, I hear them
Hiding from me every where
and plotting plans without me in tow

Verbo et opere

my ire
all liars
This mire that I'm in
This charming
flyer
Is printed for nothing!

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

They won't attend

Mea culpa

It is the party girl
That drove away her friends

Mea maxima culpa

It's all my fault

Mea culpa

and I despair

Mea culpa

that all my friends dislike my party fare

Mea maxima culpa


so call me pinkamena
Cakes and punch served out alone
turnips and rocks will be my party friends
Despicable ponies
And let me party all on my own
on lints and a bag of flour that I'll depend

-----------------------

"I’m just glad none of dem Ponies showed up!"

"Oh, they’re not so bad."

"Not so bad?! Pu-lease! Dey’re a bunch’a losahs!"

"Oh, c’mon now. “Losers” might be a little strong, don’cha think?"

"After the way they treated you? I say “losers” isn’t strong enough!"

"Well, it was pretty rude."

"Prettee roode?! It waz down right deespecable!"

"It was, wasn’t it?!"

"If I were you, I wouldn’t speak to them ever again."

"You know what? I’m not gonna speak to them ever again! And I’m not gonna invite them to another party as long as I live! They don’t deserve to be invited to my parties... not after the way they’ve been acting."
------------------

Pink ire
conspire
Now ponies, it's your turn
Choose me or
retire
join me or you I'll spurn

Party on forever

Have some more cake for her

Party on forever

Have some more punch for me

Party on forever

But they will be mine
Or they're all spurned!!

Parody of what it is, exactly? :smallconfused:

Also, maybe we should begin collecting all the song parodies in one place? :P


About that first image dump...

pony...
selling thin mints.

I am yours to command.

Glad you liked it :smalltongue:


And now! the moment... at least I have been waiting for.
My completed backgrounds. [/showoff]

I would like to know what you all think though.....

Twilight Sparkle
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/twilight-sparklebackground2.png

Rarity
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Raritybackground2.png

Rainbow Dash
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/rainbow-dashbackground2.png

Pinkie Pie
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/pinkie-piebackground2.png

Fluttershy
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/fluttershybackground2.png

Applejack
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/applejackbackground2.png

Legacy of the Elements -unedited
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground2.png

Legacy of the Elements- Neon
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground3.png

Legacy of the Elements -Poster
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/furystriker/backgrounds/Legacyoftheelementsbackground4.png


*gulp* Just a note... The ponies themselves are Megasweet's the photos are google image search and celestia, luna and the elements are unknown to me.

*hides in a corner*

I see this already been critiqued, so I'll only mention the blurs. Also, last two seem to be rather... It needs more concept than just applying a simple effect, IMHO. You need to have a bit more direction, and edit it a bit. For example, neon lines dividing parts of the image are a bit distracting, and posterized version isn't that different from unedited one.

Plus, Photobucket really isn't the best place for posting art, unless you prepared it in this resolution (do you have a netbook?).


Yeah i noticed that, but didn't know why that was until now. I actually copied the thumbnail for Twilight instead of the full size image...
As for the background, its a picture through a telescope i believe, and that was the only one that seemed to go well, but my googlefu is weak, if you could find me a better one ill replace it!
As for rarity's background.... finding a pile of gems is nigh impossible. so i took a small pile and copy pasted it a dozen times....

Better sky (http://hubblesite.org/gallery/wallpaper/)? :smallconfused:

Pile of Gems (http://www.dreamstime.com/stock-photography-pile-of-gems-image1694852)?


True, but you have to wonder why they sent Pinkie to live with relatives while her sisters stayed behind. Or perhaps to other relatives? That would be something they could touch on in season 2.

Well, somepony has to inherit the farm, no? :smallwink:

Pinkie might just have been declared the least fit to do that, and sent away.

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 05:42 PM
I see this already been critiqued, so I'll only mention the blurs. Also, last two seem to be rather... It needs more concept than just applying a simple effect, IMHO. You need to have a bit more direction, and edit it a bit. For example, neon lines dividing parts of the image are a bit distracting, and posterized version isn't that different from unedited one.

Plus, Photobucket really isn't the best place for posting art, unless you prepared it in this resolution (do you have a netbook?).



Better sky (http://hubblesite.org/gallery/wallpaper/)? :smallconfused:

Pile of Gems (http://www.dreamstime.com/stock-photography-pile-of-gems-image1694852)?



Ah thank you Trixie! Ok, i fixed up Twilight. Also i messed up AGAIN on the pony resolutions. (i have NO training on photoshop, i am quite the noob... These we all hastily done at 4am. i will work on updating them..again. :smallannoyed:

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 05:42 PM
Thanks, everypony, both for all of your compliments, and all of your nitpicks! This sort of stuff is exactly what I need to grow as a writer, and I'm a tough guy, I can take criticism well. :smallsmile:

@Thanqol:

Yeah, some of your absolutely truly awful suggestions really would have made the date go from 'disaster but salvageable' to 'Welp, we're done here.' Thanks for the critiques on the language, both in dialogue and outside it, I'll go back and review them to tighten them up. I'll probably end up swiping some of your quotes there. :smallsmile:

But what part of cutting off your own hoof in a crowded restaurant as a 'joke' isn't salvageable? Okay, actually, yes, you've got a point.

Really, practise shouting in front of a mirror. It seems silly and difficult to explain to your housemates but some words are strong and shoutable and some words just aren't.


Now, to get to work on editing. I'm going to make this thing as strong as I can.

Further stuff:

After reflecting on it a bit more, I actually came to the conclusion that this might benefit from more direct structuring. As in, a clearly labelled chapter, a terribad piece of advice, and then a scene. The formality gives you a few advantages, like letting the reader breathe and relax after one particular disaster, making the quotes fit into the narrative a bit better, and invokes the feel of reading a book which is kind of a point when the story's about misreading a book.

I also feel that the book gets almost absolved for responsibility for it's terrible advice on the grounds of being fifty years out of date. That advice is so bad it transcends space and time, and also, there's quite few actual outdated statements in there (no references to stallions gadding about with unshorn fetlocks, monocle etiquette etc [which, as we all know, was what fifty years ago WAS LIKE!]). I think a more direct "Nope, this is dumb" kinda verdict on it is what the book is screaming for and what it should get.

Oh yes, and I'm also not sure I picked up on how Shimmer found Midnight's secret spot?

Trixie
2011-08-26, 05:57 PM
"i absolutely, freakishly, LOVE our benevolent hooved overlords"

I had feeling that most of the regulars here already morphed into that category :P


With how free-spirited pegasi on a whole seem to be, that's not all that surprising. Certainly less than the other two pony races by my reckoning.

Ponies - how to make three dozen unfortunate implications in PG show :smalltongue:


One sister took over the farm, and one is a classical musician!

So, we accepted Photo Finish = RD when I wasn't looking? :smallconfused:


Clearly ponies corrupted your mind.... and mine.

Lyra now means a mint green unicorn for me... Forever.

Technically, Minty is mint green, Lyra is more cyan/teal combo... :smallwink:


Old Gen Minty in New Gen format. (Edit: Also G3 Minty in G4 format!)

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/031/7/b/g1_mlp_minty_g4_pony_style_by_omg_chibi-d38i0wg.png

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/247/e/1/g4_style_minty_mlp_by_omg_chibi-d2y13sz.png


Ah. Old one, you say? I was wondering why there seem to be 2 versions of her, and what clovers had to do with her :smallconfused:


Here are some pictures, posted for no raison.
(spoiler'd for huge)
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4199/20110825214428.png
Oh sweet, minecraft! That's fun right? Huh, it looks like this mountain got cut in half by a chunk error. Man, it just drops off, you wouldn't even know it was there unless you walked right off the edge!

Hunk error? :smallconfused:

To me, it looks like camouflaged fortress, especially due to these stairs.


http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/374/20110825234326.png
need it for something http://i.imgur.com/ROEne.jpg

Out of curiosity, what are the colored squares? :smallconfused:


Since we have a ponified Prince Ali/ Great Trixie, I thought it would be appropriate to Ponify the Reprise of that song:

Great Trixie, Yes it is she
but not as you know her
Take a look out of your books into reality
Yes, meet this mare who would dare
to try to start an affair
say hello to the real Great Trixie

So Trixie turns out to be merely an Earth Mare
Just a fraud, a talentless broad
as you can see
Her stage show is a sham
nothing more than a scam
All just because she wanted to impress
the hoof picked student of this land's princess
the truth displayed to your dismay
all your friends want her gone - whoopee!
So long ex-Great Trixie! (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_FguEpJ3fo)

I'm sorry for doing this.

... http://i.imgur.com/UwGCn.jpg

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 06:01 PM
Further stuff:

After reflecting on it a bit more, I actually came to the conclusion that this might benefit from more direct structuring. As in, a clearly labelled chapter, a terribad piece of advice, and then a scene. The formality gives you a few advantages, like letting the reader breathe and relax after one particular disaster, making the quotes fit into the narrative a bit better, and invokes the feel of reading a book which is kind of a point when the story's about misreading a book.

I also feel that the book gets almost absolved for responsibility for it's terrible advice on the grounds of being fifty years out of date. That advice is so bad it transcends space and time, and also, there's quite few actual outdated statements in there (no references to stallions gadding about with unshorn fetlocks, monocle etiquette etc [which, as we all know, was what fifty years ago WAS LIKE!]). I think a more direct "Nope, this is dumb" kinda verdict on it is what the book is screaming for and what it should get.

Oh yes, and I'm also not sure I picked up on how Shimmer found Midnight's secret spot?

Hitchhiker's Guide to Dating!

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 06:17 PM
Further stuff:

After reflecting on it a bit more, I actually came to the conclusion that this might benefit from more direct structuring. As in, a clearly labelled chapter, a terribad piece of advice, and then a scene. The formality gives you a few advantages, like letting the reader breathe and relax after one particular disaster, making the quotes fit into the narrative a bit better, and invokes the feel of reading a book which is kind of a point when the story's about misreading a book.

I also feel that the book gets almost absolved for responsibility for it's terrible advice on the grounds of being fifty years out of date. That advice is so bad it transcends space and time, and also, there's quite few actual outdated statements in there (no references to stallions gadding about with unshorn fetlocks, monocle etiquette etc [which, as we all know, was what fifty years ago WAS LIKE!]). I think a more direct "Nope, this is dumb" kinda verdict on it is what the book is screaming for and what it should get.

Oh yes, and I'm also not sure I picked up on how Shimmer found Midnight's secret spot?

Hmn. You might be right about the structure, it is pretty close to that as it is already, pulling the trigger and going all the way with it might be an idea way going about that...

So you think I should be more savage to the book itself? I suppose I could add to that, I just need to think of how to go about it, part of the reason why I went with date is because it's pretty snappy, so I'll think on it.

And I do mention it off-hand, maybe I should emphasize it more.

Trixie
2011-08-26, 06:33 PM
Also: beast's, not beasts, unless there is more than one Ursa (in which case it would be beasts' :smallwink:)

Why? :smallconfused:


See my offering of cupcakes (only partially eaten), muffins, kazoos, and icing! All this I give to you, and all I ask in return is the knowledge of what my Element of Ponythread shall be.

Your Element is....oooooh! Are those cupcakes!? For me For me For me!? Oooooh and I must must put some of that icing on it! Wanna dance dance dance? This song's my favorite!

Hmmmm....we seem to be having some complications. Perhaps a good nights sleep will work better...

Pink One: How about Element of Butterscotch? I love (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxHgexVmHXE) butterscotch! :smalltongue:


United Forever, In Friendship and Neighbor,
Our Great Equine Empire shall ever endure,
The Mighty Celestia in all of her grace,
Created this world to be our sacred place,

Long live our Equine Motherland,
Long live our Empire so Grand,
Long live Equestria united and Free,
Strong in our Friendship Trialed by Fire,
Long may that Violet flag Inspire,
Shining new glory for Ponies to see,

With Luna our princess, Our Ever Loved Goddess,
The Elements of Harmony Returned her to Grace,
The Night was Eternal, Her punishment Infernal,
Nightmare Moon was put in her Rightful Place,

Long live our Equine Motherland,
Long live our Empire so Grand,
Long live Equestria united and Free,
Strong in our Friendship Trialed by Fire
Long may that Violet flag Inspire,
Shining new glory for Ponies to see,

The struggle continues, The parasprites are bad news,
But we see right through them, we know they were abused,
With Faust our creator, we destroyed the invader,
And see Them become a Cutie Mark Crusader,

Long live our Equine Motherland,
Long live our Empire so Grand,
Long live Equestria united and Free,
Strong in our Friendship Trialed by Fire
Long may that Violet flag Inspire,
Shining new glory for Ponies to see (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwERapuM17k)

http://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/c/c4/User_RainbowDash_RainbowDashSalute.png

...Is it bad that I immediately knew what the song was? :smalltongue:


Because Rarity is cutest when she is all frazzled, have some more of her secret dossier:

[cut]

She's going to kill me! Take the pictures and run!

All the Rarity pictures in this thread - awww :smallbiggrin:

Twilight RP:


Oh I have my sources, my dear niece... You'll just have to figure that out for yourself. You're a smart girl. Now, back in the box with those.

[to herself] Pffft, like she can do that even given all the evidence plainly before her nose http://i.imgur.com/N2nfK.jpg


*Midnight's eyes widen, as she realizes something. "Wait a second...of course! Your 'source' was Spike, wasn't it?! That little fink, he must have seen me hide them, and babbled it to you!"

[facehoof heard from the other room] See? Toldya http://i.imgur.com/N2nfK.jpg


*Midnight trails off for a moment, and then lets out a sigh.

"You know, this is exactly why I built that little shelter for myself that doesn't have any windows!"

[to herself] ...You mean, one that one can break into and not be seen from outside, giving ample time to... Exercise parental control, shall we say? http://i.imgur.com/N2nfK.jpg


Oh youth... Somehow I doubt that new hiding place shall be a secret to me for very long at all. *She glances to her horseshoe box* Apparently it is time for me to move my collection as well. Now how in the name of Celstia herself did that filly find it?

Somewhere in the distance, some could say they heard a girlish giggle, ringing throughout the night.

Hehe.

[mutters] Gee, Rarity, you though I won't keep the playing field even for all interested sides? http://i.imgur.com/N2nfK.jpg

Especially seeing that way I get to keep all the copies of the photos for myself.

Anyway, my work here is done [throws smoke bomb to cover tactical retreat] :P

Gadora
2011-08-26, 06:42 PM
Well, I did promise this, so I'm gonna follow through, even though it's currently in 'rough copy' mode, and will be worked on over the next few days by myself and others to get it in really good condition, so any editing advice from here would be nice, too:

Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating (Rough Copy):

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

I hope that ponies enjoy it! And now I am off to bed. :smallsmile:

It was a fun read, but there's one thing in particular that's bugging me. Midnight needed to go to Rarity's to get the dress and three hours of help with putting on the dress, yes?

How is it that, in three hours, the subject of why Midnight wanted the dress never came up? Or did Rarity think that the book's advice sounded sound?

Strife Warzeal
2011-08-26, 06:57 PM
My brother is definitely ignorant and a bit of a bigot, small story as follows:

So I recently made a full set of pocket (http://oceanbreezebrony.deviantart.com/art/Pocket-Pony-Cutouts-253876594) ponies (http://oceanbreezebrony.deviantart.com/art/Pocket-Pony-Cutouts-PART-TWO-254240588)and until school starts, I'm going to be putting them in my notebooks and the like, I had a few of them sitting in unused parts of my keyboard. I had fluttershy and rarity sitting in f1-f4, David Tennant Doctor Whoof and Ditzy sitting in f7-f8 and f9-f10 respectively, with the Great and Powerful Trixie sitting over printscreen. So he comes up into my room and after talking for ~10 minutes he finally notices the ponies sitting in my keyboard, and I guess freaks out is the best word, over the fact I have ponies on my keyboard. I honestly don't care what he thinks, but I thought it was a bit immature of him to react like that and leave before I could give the arguments on why people watch it. My brother is in his low 20s(and I'm 16 if it matters) if anyone cares and put this into any kind of perspective.

People don't share it that often on others' hissy fits over [you] liking ponies so I thought I would. Anyone else deal with things like this?

Metahuman1
2011-08-26, 07:08 PM
My mother has thus far not gotten her head around the idea, nor has an old freind who is an ex I broke up with on good terms with years ago.

I just tell everyone I'm in it for the combination slapstick and Innuendo biased Dialog. (Hey look guys, the Punch has been SPIKED! from the ep Owls Well that Ends Well is my go too for this purpose, becuase so far no one I've hit with that has been able to deny that mental image!)

But I have had some people give me some "What the hell, who are you and what have you done with the real person I've known forever?!" looks.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 07:08 PM
*Postcard arrives at Rarity's five minutes later, dated last week, from the Island Paradise of Hanahoofhoof, with a general sentiment that he's gonna be gone a round trip of a month and wishes she was there.

Thus giving him an alibi for the pictures.*

*She just sighs, filing away the post card in a small drawer underneath the writing desk in her room on the second floor.*


*ponyard still collapsed on the floor looks up* Hey Rarity, my companion would like to know if that stallion that sneaks in here every other night is SUPPOSED to be here, or if he is perhaps the source of the pictures you DIDN'T take.

You have five seconds. Five. *A pair of almost comically long sewing needles float into the air, bathed in a pale, almost blue light.* Four. *They slowly begin to approach the pony on the floor.*


I'd argue that there's a difference between a goofy impromptu thing that is over and done in about 30-40 posts, based around actual pony content (pictures), and the 10+ page epics that the previous threads have contained, though.

Agreed. This was two pages, extremely impromptu, and there was no intention for it to last longer than well... Now. I'm just wrapping up the last few loose ends from when I went off to dinner. It's not like it distracted from anything, and heck. It sped up the thread a little, which is never a bad thing.


So just wanted to drop by to Announce my upcoming sequel to Fillystata, entitled "Mare in the Mirror". (http://adcoon.deviantart.com/journal/43610599/) First chapter should be up in a day or two I hope.

I can't wait to read it when it's done!


Well, I'm afraid Ima have to say goodbye for this weekend. Weekend retreat with like NO service. See yall later!

Have fun this weekend! Try not to get swept away by the hurricane!

I'm actually going to the beach to watch the hurricane come in. Is anypony else this crazy? http://i.imgur.com/9QvF1.jpg


Finished revisions on Blue Moon in a Red Sky. Now no longer in a browser-breakingly huge document! Hopefully, I made things a bit more interesting than forty pages of exposition. As always, reviews are welcome- and encouraged! Be sure to PM me your thoughts, even if it is just a TL;DR.

Anyway, here's the links.
Blue Moon in a Red Sky (Still a Working Title) [Crossover][Dark][Adventure?][Also tons of OCs]
Chapter 1 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lcW6of-2wzLaSRWwOXfSFJ1CM6lddNuz1-vvPiXw19w/edit?hl=en_US)
Chapter 2 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DuHw3dHANgkqKstFopY6xHJF7T9kyovkb3ype53zmk8/edit?hl=en_US)
Chapter 3 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B7JhhzFM5BOgxqdzpyM-GgbB9ueTIwlFg5zjRcxo6Ic/edit?hl=en_US)
Chapter 4 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zRFdo4MayarFcq-6AmDSfmJiXLIkCX-e1Tp70V_mmpw/edit?hl=en_US)
Thanks in advance.

Another fanfic added to my (admittedly massive) list to read.

On that note, I'm also working on a project to convert all fanfics on EqD with the "completed" tag to PDF and maintain the database of them for my fellow kindle users. Before I go pony-wild on this though, I figure I'll just get a quick interest check. Is this a resource that anypony would utilize?


My brother is definitely ignorant and a bit of a bigot, small story as follows:

So I recently made a full set of pocket (http://oceanbreezebrony.deviantart.com/art/Pocket-Pony-Cutouts-253876594) ponies (http://oceanbreezebrony.deviantart.com/art/Pocket-Pony-Cutouts-PART-TWO-254240588)and until school starts, I'm going to be putting them in my notebooks and the like, I had a few of them sitting in unused parts of my keyboard. I had fluttershy and rarity sitting in f1-f4, [S]David Tennant Doctor Whoof and Ditzy sitting in f7-f8 and f9-f10 respectively, with the Great and Powerful Trixie sitting over printscreen. So he comes up into my room and after talking for ~10 minutes he finally notices the ponies sitting in my keyboard, and I guess freaks out is the best word, over the fact I have ponies on my keyboard. I honestly don't care what he thinks, but I thought it was a bit immature of him to react like that and leave before I could give the arguments on why people watch it. My brother is in his low 20s if anyone cares and put this into any kind of perspective.

People don't share it that often on others' hissy fits over [you] liking ponies so I thought I would. Anyone else deal with things like this?

Why yes I have actually! I have two roomates, and one just moved in today, three months after signing the lease. He moves in (we're sharing the master bedroom) and notices Twilight and Applejack on my iHome. He says some very unsavory things I can not repeat due to offensive terminology regarding my sexuality, my... sexual fetishes, my level of intelligence, and the same subjects of my friends who watched the show at my convincing and found it to be of quality as well.

Yes, he meant it mostly in jest. No, I wasn't offended. However, I was more than annoyed. I can only imagine what my brother would say if he ever found out. I grew up on a farm, and Ray is the most redneck drunkard person I know. He would probably beat me senseless.

I wish you the best of luck in dealing with your brother. I'm sure he'll cool it eventually, and you'll be able to actually get a word in edgewise after a day or so.

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 07:16 PM
Hmn. You might be right about the structure, it is pretty close to that as it is already, pulling the trigger and going all the way with it might be an idea way going about that...

So you think I should be more savage to the book itself? I suppose I could add to that, I just need to think of how to go about it, part of the reason why I went with date is because it's pretty snappy, so I'll think on it.

And I do mention it off-hand, maybe I should emphasize it more.

Formal chapters might result in some quite short chapters. This is okay because feeling the need to strengthen each chapter would help with that pacing thing I mentioned earlier; making each a resilient, self-contained apocalypse works structurally in my mind.

And sure, it sounds snappy and it works in the moment, but when thinking about it, it starts to fray a bit at the seams. The book could have been written yesterday and still be just as terrible. There was never a time when that advice was useful :smallwink: . One way to do it is make it written by Blueblood.



My brother is definitely ignorant and a bit of a bigot, small story as follows:

People don't share it that often on others' hissy fits over [you] liking ponies so I thought I would. Anyone else deal with things like this?

The following quote has been applied to me in the past:

"Going completely crazy and descending into cartoonish super-villainy was pretty much the most logical way for his character arc to end really."

It has since been amended "Into cartoonish ponies". So no, people pretty much saw that one coming where I was concerned.

MCerberus
2011-08-26, 07:26 PM
So, we accepted Photo Finish = RD when I wasn't looking? :smallconfused:


I was more thinking that one Octavia Pie was playing at the Gala before her sister interrupted.

ninja edit- and yah, I'm just too lazy to edit my usual page 1 spiel.

TheAmishPirate
2011-08-26, 07:29 PM
My brother is definitely ignorant and a bit of a bigot, small story as follows:

People don't share it that often on others' hissy fits over [you] liking ponies so I thought I would. Anyone else deal with things like this?

Not really, but then again, I've done a good job of hiding it. I imagine some people in my life would give me a lot of grief for it, and others would probably have a reaction similar to your brother's. Others would see it as perfectly in line with my character, so it really depends on who I told.

Sorry to hear your brother hasn't been too accepting. Give him some time, hopefully things will work out/I'll be praying about it.

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 07:31 PM
[color="purple"]You have five seconds. Five. *A pair of almost comically long sewing needles float into the air, bathed in a pale, almost blue light.* Four. *They slowly begin to approach the pony on the floor.*





*Ponyard scrambles to his hooves* Err.... im not into Kama sutra... I MEAN ACUPUNCTURE, ACUPUNCTURE... Oh buck. *ponyard stammers* I-I know a spell to keep out peepers! as-as well as hide anything you need! *he moves toward the window.*

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 07:36 PM
*Ponyard scrambles to his hooves* Err.... im not into Kama sutra... I MEAN ACUPUNCTURE, ACUPUNCTURE... Oh buck. *ponyard stammers* I-I know a spell to keep out peepers! as-as well as hide anything you need! *he moves toward the window.*

THREE... *She begins to advance, only a few short feet behind the needles, finessing them just so as to force them to glint in the soft lights adorning her boutique; the streak of reflected light traveling from the base of the needle straight down its length, accentuating and pronouncing just how sharp it truly was. TWO... *Her weapons of choice now slid back just barely an inch, rotating so that the tips of the massive implements now pointed at the offending stallion.

So, does everypony else still this this is well within character for her? I know I do, but then again I'm not the one I'm writing this for.

It is too much fun to write out detail oriented forms of intimidation.

Gamerlord
2011-08-26, 07:39 PM
I just realized something...
Discord escapes from a stone prison.
Pinkie's family manages a rock farm. Stones are rocks.
Pinkie's family- Dull,humorless, rock farmers, or secret guardians of the prison of Discord?

Kurgan
2011-08-26, 07:41 PM
Why? :smallconfused:


It comes down to possessiveness. In the original excerpt (spoilered for those who haven't read it yet):



The Ursa roared, but Midnight’s horn flared to light. Much akin to her azure mother, vines and roots began to pull up around her, starting to lash around the beasts limbs!


Spoilered for dull and overly technical explanation.
We are talking about the limbs attached to the beast.

The original "beasts limbs" are two disconnected words, just two plural nouns sitting next to each other. It could be talking about dozens of creatures and their limbs, or just one (though admittedly the context tells us just one). Theoretically, since there is no connector there at all saying that the limbs belong to the beast, we cannot even be sure of that.

Changing it to "beast's" marks it as possessive, it is saying that the limbs in this statement belong to the beast, without using that many words to describe the relationship. It also marks that it is a single beast being talked about.

If it were instead "beasts' ", it would be saying that there are several beasts, and the limbs belong to all of them.

Rebelhero
2011-08-26, 07:42 PM
THREE... *She begins to advance, only a few short feet behind the needles, finessing them just so as to force them to glint in the soft lights adorning her boutique; the streak of reflected light traveling from the base of the needle straight down its length, accentuating and pronouncing just how sharp it truly was. TWO... *Her weapons of choice now slid back just barely an inch, rotating so that the tips of the massive implements now pointed at the offending stallion.

So, does everypony else still this this is well within character for her? I know I do, but then again I'm not the one I'm writing this for.

It is too much fun to write out detail oriented forms of intimidation.

Curse my lack of social skills! *ponyard suddenly turns into Sweetie Bell and jumps out the window*

Yeah i think your in her logical reaction right now. Also i find it funny how no matter how hard Ponyard tires he ALWAYS causes someone to freak out.

Also! Fox, whats your name on steam? I forgot to ask while we were on champions.

Strife Warzeal
2011-08-26, 07:42 PM
Not really, but then again, I've done a good job of hiding it. I imagine some people in my life would give me a lot of grief for it, and others would probably have a reaction similar to your brother's. Others would see it as perfectly in line with my character, so it really depends on who I told.

Sorry to hear your brother hasn't been too accepting. Give him some time, hopefully things will work out/I'll be praying about it.

I plan to talk with him soon, Trixie has given me some advice that might help, but really time is probably the most key thing hear. And without a pinkie sense, who knows whats going to happen then, maybe I'll even convert him (unlikely, I'll admit).
Just so everyone knows I am fine with the, ordeal is too strong of a word, event I guess. I have a loose plan on what to do. I'm just a tad exasperated over his knee-jerk reaction. I'm just going to wait a day or two for this to blow over and then start the plan and possibly put an episode on his x-box for gits and shiggles(probably a bad idea).

Kindablue
2011-08-26, 07:44 PM
Have fun this weekend! Try not to get swept away by the hurricane!

I'm actually going to the beach to watch the hurricane come in. Is anypony else this crazy? http://i.imgur.com/9QvF1.jpg

Come to Texas! We have a magical wizard named Dr'out protecting us from tropical storms! (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tropical_Storm_Don_(2011))


So just wanted to drop by to Announce my upcoming sequel to Fillystata, entitled "Mare in the Mirror". (http://adcoon.deviantart.com/journal/43610599/) First chapter should be up in a day or two I hope.

Looking forward to it!



I just realized something...
Discord escapes from a stone prison.
Pinkie's family manages a rock farm. Stones are rocks.
Pinkie's family- Dull,humorless rock farmers, or secret guardians of the prison of Discord?

That'd be cool. I do hope they get revisited.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 07:46 PM
It was a fun read, but there's one thing in particular that's bugging me. Midnight needed to go to Rarity's to get the dress and three hours of help with putting on the dress, yes?

How is it that, in three hours, the subject of why Midnight wanted the dress never came up? Or did Rarity think that the book's advice sounded sound?

Rarity is somepony who wore her Gala dress to brunch. Sure, it was brunch with a Princess, but it was still brunch, and nopony else, even Twilight, was wearing anything. I simply figured that Rarity probably wouldn't question that it was too dressy for a date. :smallbiggrin:


Formal chapters might result in some quite short chapters. This is okay because feeling the need to strengthen each chapter would help with that pacing thing I mentioned earlier; making each a resilient, self-contained apocalypse works structurally in my mind.

And sure, it sounds snappy and it works in the moment, but when thinking about it, it starts to fray a bit at the seams. The book could have been written yesterday and still be just as terrible. There was never a time when that advice was useful :smallwink: . One way to do it is make it written by Blueblood.


This is true. There is no place or time where this advice would be considered 'Good', unless there was a very odd trend in dating fifty years ago. I think I'll probably go back and fix it to emphasize that, yes, this advice was NEVER good.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 07:47 PM
Curse my lack of social skills! *ponyard suddenly turns into Sweetie Bell and jumps out the window*

Yeah i think your in her logical reaction right now. Also i find it funny how no matter how hard Ponyard tires he ALWAYS causes someone to freak out.

Also! Fox, whats your name on steam? I forgot to ask while we were on champions.

Awesome! My steam name is "tfawks". It should come back as having added "=LAG= Medicshy". I believe I played on the pony server with you the other day, actually.


Come to Texas! We have a magical wizard named Dr'out protecting us from tropical storms! (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tropical_Storm_Don_(2011))

My only reaction: ...Wut? http://i.imgur.com/2c0gc.jpg

Grif
2011-08-26, 07:50 PM
So, I'll be going on an extended vacation for six days. Where I'm going to miss catching up on this.

I fully expect another thread by the time I get back.

The horror, the horror!

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 07:54 PM
So, I'll be going on an extended vacation for six days. Where I'm going to miss catching up on this.

I fully expect another thread by the time I get back.

The horror, the horror!

Enjoy your vacation! :smallsmile:

Kurgan
2011-08-26, 07:58 PM
I just realized something...
Discord escapes from a stone prison.
Pinkie's family manages a rock farm. Stones are rocks.
Pinkie's family- Dull,humorless, rock farmers, or secret guardians of the prison of Discord?

Turns out rock farm was just an exaggeration. Her father was the warden of Pony Azkaban.

Gamerlord
2011-08-26, 07:59 PM
So, I'll be going on an extended vacation for six days. Where I'm going to miss catching up on this.

I fully expect another thread by the time I get back.

The horror, the horror!
Hope you enjoy it.


Turns out rock farm was just an exaggeration. Her father was the warden of Pony Azkaban.
I never really read/watched much of the Harry Potter books/films, that is some kind of magical Alcatraz right?

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 08:03 PM
So, I'll be going on an extended vacation for six days. Where I'm going to miss catching up on this.

I fully expect another thread by the time I get back.

The horror, the horror!

Have fun Grif! We'll miss you, see you soon!

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-26, 08:08 PM
...All I got from that is that somehow invisible hand of market feeds our pizza to ponies ^^"

Well, I'd imagine that pizza isn't very healthy for ponies...


All the FFRP is good and all, but could we please keep it contained in, I dunno, a Silly Message Board Game/Free Form Roleplaying (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=32) thread? Character chat isn't exactly what I go to the Media Discussions forum for...

I feel so relieved that I'm not the only one who was thinking this. I mean, it's nice that everybody likes to roleplay and all, but that's not really what this thread's for...


So just wanted to drop by to Announce my upcoming sequel to Fillystata, entitled "Mare in the Mirror". (http://adcoon.deviantart.com/journal/43610599/) First chapter should be up in a day or two I hope.

Waiting with bated breath! :smallsmile:

Metahuman1
2011-08-26, 08:19 PM
Hope you enjoy it.


I never really read/watched much of the Harry Potter books/films, that is some kind of magical Alcatraz right?


Think Wizard Alcatraz on Steroids. when the series starts no one has ever escaped. One person doing it is a central part of the third novel/movie plot as no one can figure out how he pulled it off! That, granted, changes when the dementors, the guards who are a very large part of making the place so inescapable, swear loyalty too the evil dark lord who's going around killing everyone and trying to take over, but still.

Gamerlord
2011-08-26, 08:22 PM
Think Wizard Alcatraz on Steroids. when the series starts no one has ever escaped. One person doing it is a central part of the third novel/movie plot as no one can figure out how he pulled it off! That, granted, changes when the dementors, the guards who are a very large part of making the place so inescapable, swear loyalty too the evil dark lord who's going around killing everyone and trying to take over, but still.
Ah, I see.
Pinkie's father being the warden of the pony equivalent of that would be very interesting indeed.

Gadora
2011-08-26, 08:24 PM
Rarity is somepony who wore her Gala dress to brunch. Sure, it was brunch with a Princess, but it was still brunch, and nopony else, even Twilight, was wearing anything. I simply figured that Rarity probably wouldn't question that it was too dressy for a date. :smallbiggrin:

This is a very good point you raise, and I'm a wee bit disappointed in myself for not anticipating it. (Though I will point out that Applejack dressed more formally than normal by not wearing her hat.:smalltongue:) That said, I would have expected Rarity to have learned otherwise by now, but I suppose that depends on what she's been up to in the Midnightverse.

Regardless, you've resolved it well enough for me that it isn't nagging at me, so yay!

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 08:24 PM
Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?

Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.

Pokonic
2011-08-26, 08:32 PM
Turns out rock farm was just an exaggeration. Her father was the warden of Pony Azkaban.

This needs to be a fanfic. And Pinkie would have to eventualy take up the mantle.


Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?
Magic

Besides, ponys have been shown to talk about france and duch apple pie. The fact that they have a tool made for humans does not mean anything.

And besides, this mearly shows that ponys have very flexable tongues and know how to use them.:smalltongue:

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 08:33 PM
Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.

That's terrible.

Terrible.

I can't even come up with a proper metaphor to tell how terrible that is.

A world without Friendship is Magic comes close, but not quite bad enough to get the point across.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 08:34 PM
This is a very good point you raise, and I'm a wee bit disappointed in myself for not anticipating it. (Though I will point out that Applejack dressed more formally than normal by not wearing her hat.:smalltongue:) That said, I would have expected Rarity to have learned otherwise by now, but I suppose that depends on what she's been up to in the Midnightverse.

Regardless, you've resolved it well enough for me that it isn't nagging at me, so yay!

http://i.imgur.com/6ZURl.jpgMany things have changed in the decades of the Midnightverse, but my commitment to fashion is eternal, darling.


Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?

Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.

i kno, rite? i fink its embarrashing two. i wunder y peoples fink dat its aright?

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-26, 08:37 PM
Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?

i was going to say it was for the unicorns who could manipulate them with magic, but would they be at all superior to normal blades in that case?


Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.

i know exactly where you're coming from here, although for me it's less to do with writing students and more the friends i go to school with, normal students. i hate it so much when people don't capitalize properly, it's one of my biggest pet peeves with grammar :smallannoyed:

tonberrian
2011-08-26, 08:38 PM
i kno, rite? i fink its embarrashing two. i wunder y peoples fink dat its aright?

Please don't do that. Every time I read that some of my brain implodes. Damage control is keeping it to unnecessary sections (like fancy math'matics and fashion sense) for now, but it's only a matter of time before something life-critical gets nuked, like ponies!

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 08:40 PM
Please don't do that. Every time I read that some of my brain implodes. Damage control is keeping it to unnecessary sections (like fancy math'matics and fashion sense) for now, but it's only a matter of time before something life-critical gets nuked, like ponies!

The funny thing is that it took me longer, and with more concentration, to write that sentence out as poorly as it is, than it does for me to type things out properly.

Gamerlord
2011-08-26, 09:09 PM
i kno, rite? i fink its embarrashing two. i wunder y peoples fink dat its aright?
....Excuse me while I find something sharp to stab my computer monitor with.

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 09:10 PM
....Excuse me while I find something sharp to stab my computer monitor with.

Y'know, looking at it again, I totally screwed up, the punctuation is alright!

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 09:12 PM
Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?

Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.


That's terrible.

Terrible.

I can't even come up with a proper metaphor to tell how terrible that is.

A world without Friendship is Magic comes close, but not quite bad enough to get the point across.

You ponies are the best writers ever. Seriously. Like to the point where in the recent past I have looked at critically acclaimed novels and just shrugged my shoulders at the quality of them. And thought to an exact fanfiction or author that I can hold above them.

Hell, some of the things I've read here hold up to classic literature in terms of prose and technical / mechanical aspects, as well as general feel. Of course, Ponies will never hold up to Sir Arthur Ignatius Conan Doyle in terms of subject matter in my book (I am a massive literature nerd by the way), but seriously. The amount of talent just overflowing from the writers in this fandom is staggering. I have spent more time reading Fanfiction off of this thread and Equestria Daily in the past two months since becoming a Brony than I have reading through my book collection. That says something.


http://i.imgur.com/6ZURl.jpgMany things have changed in the decades of the Midnightverse, but my commitment to fashion is eternal, darling.



i kno, rite? i fink its embarrashing two. i wunder y peoples fink dat its aright?

Hey, you sound like most of my friends from college! *Involuntary Eye Twitch*

So, am I the only one who carries over his grammar nazi-ness to text messages as well as typed prose?


The funny thing is that it took me longer, and with more concentration, to write that sentence out as poorly as it is, than it does for me to type things out properly.

This doesn't surprise me one bit, to be honest. It does the same for me too. Having spent so long typing in proper grammar, it's a hard habit to break out of. Just like the people who type like that don't understand why we put all the "effort" into typing in full sentences. The habits you make are lifelong, huh?

Kyouhen
2011-08-26, 09:13 PM
Greetings pony thread! I have returned from my hilarity at work! And am not surprised to find that stuff happened! Anyone care to fill me in on anything interesting I missed the last few days? Except Season 2 starting soon. Didn't miss that. Never miss that.

Also, I need to start watching what I read. I got a new book last weekend and was reading through it. There were a few cases where a sentence would start with "Twilight settled in..." and my immersion of the book was shattered when my imagination stuck Twilight curled up at the scene. One such scene was in an evil troll army setting up camp. It only happens when 'twilight' has a capital 'T', but it happened twice before I finished the book. Confound that pony!


Not really, but then again, I've done a good job of hiding it. I imagine some people in my life would give me a lot of grief for it, and others would probably have a reaction similar to your brother's. Others would see it as perfectly in line with my character, so it really depends on who I told.

Sorry to hear your brother hasn't been too accepting. Give him some time, hopefully things will work out/I'll be praying about it.

One of my friends thought it would be funny to pull out a poorly-written OC pony and torment me by reading it's backstory. Didn't work too well when I kept pointing out all the silly inconsistencies with the show canon and gave the entire thing a proper critique. Another friend was there and thought it was funny too. He's one of us now.

Some other people I had met tried mocking me about it too. A lot of it fell flat when I was able to shrug it aside and prove I had superior wit. Hard to laugh at someone for liking ponies when (aside from it dominating my every thought) it doesn't have any visible effect on their abilities outside of ponies. (I like Repo!, listen to metal, and am a massive troll. The pony thing just comes out of nowhere.) Of course not letting their taunts get to you helps. I've long since stopped caring what others think of my interests, so it's really hard to get under my skin about anything. :smalltongue:



Have fun this weekend! Try not to get swept away by the hurricane!

[size="1"]I'm actually going to the beach to watch the hurricane come in. Is anypony else this crazy? http://i.imgur.com/9QvF1.jpg


Actually, that sounds like it would be fun. At the very least it's one of those things that would be awesome to do just to be able to say you did it. :smalltongue:


So, I'll be going on an extended vacation for six days. Where I'm going to miss catching up on this.

I fully expect another thread by the time I get back.

The horror, the horror!

One thread? You're going away for almost a week. I expect 2 threads. :smalltongue:


Rarity is somepony who wore her Gala dress to brunch. Sure, it was brunch with a Princess, but it was still brunch, and nopony else, even Twilight, was wearing anything. I simply figured that Rarity probably wouldn't question that it was too dressy for a date. :smallbiggrin:



This is true. There is no place or time where this advice would be considered 'Good', unless there was a very odd trend in dating fifty years ago. I think I'll probably go back and fix it to emphasize that, yes, this advice was NEVER good.

You totally posted more of that dating story didn't you? Bleh. I'm just going to wait until you finish it before I bother trying to catch up with what I missed.


Well, I'd imagine that pizza isn't very healthy for ponies...


So what you're saying is Socialists are poisoning our ponies. Those fiends.


That's terrible.

Terrible.

I can't even come up with a proper metaphor to tell how terrible that is.

A world without Friendship is Magic comes close, but not quite bad enough to get the point across.

Nope, not terrible enough. It would be like Pinkie Pie getting diabetes, Winona getting rabies and killing Angel, Fluttershy running away because of what happened to Angel, Applejack having to put down Winona, Rarity discovering her eyesight is decaying to the point where she'll be blind within a few months, Twilight having an accident and breaking her horn, and Gilda getting into the Wonderbolts. All as the finale for Season 2. Now that's terrible.



Magic

Besides, ponys have been shown to talk about france and duch apple pie. The fact that they have a tool made for humans does not mean anything.

And besides, this mearly shows that ponys have very flexable tongues and know how to use them.:smalltongue:

Oh! I was actually going to say something relevant to this. So I was watching Cutie Mark Chronicles while eating dinner tonight and I noticed something. When Applejack is having dinner with her relatives, immediately after she sees what 'dinner' consists of in the big sophisticated city, you can hear the clinking of silverwear. That's right, those ponies are so high-class they use silverware. This gets more bizarre when you realize everyone in the room is an earth pony. Except for that one unicorn. But that's still only one unicorn.

otakuryoga
2011-08-26, 09:14 PM
Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?

Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.

for that matter, why do vegetarian ponies raise chickens like Fluttershy does..or pigs as we saw when the CMC tried to feed them out in the barn at apple acres?

i could see apoint for the chickens being used for the eggs to use for the sweets baked at sugarcube corner
but i see no reason ponies would raise pigs...

no, wait, scratch that...maybe they use the pigs to find truffles


then there is the whole saddle thing

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 09:19 PM
You totally posted more of that dating story didn't you? Bleh. I'm just going to wait until you finish it before I bother trying to catch up with what I missed.

Actually, I did finish it, it's currently in a semi-rough cut stage, currently going through editing. I posted it a couple of pages back, but because I'm a kind pony:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

It's in rough draft mode, so things are likely going to be changed and improved upon. :smallsmile:

Kyouhen
2011-08-26, 09:22 PM
Actually, I did finish it, it's currently in a semi-rough cut stage, currently going through editing. I posted it a couple of pages back, but because I'm a kind pony:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y3qNnPAQ7FxMLpVG_gxTjes1XsV8yt_r7HuOhS0pVLA/edit?hl=en_US

It's in rough draft mode, so things are likely going to be changed and improved upon. :smallsmile:

Oh, well then.

>_>
<_<
*Bookmarks*
Busy right now, but I'll read it soonish. Probably tomorrow. Thanks for reposting it! :smallbiggrin:

WJMill
2011-08-26, 09:28 PM
Ah. Old one, you say? I was wondering why there seem to be 2 versions of her, and what clovers had to do with her :smallconfused:

Actually [original] Minty was one of the FIRST mane six from 1982.

http://mylittlewiki.org/w/images/4/43/Collectorsgroup.JPG

The toys were also re-released in original form when G3 came out. I don't believe most of them were in any of the animation, except for Cotton Candy (the pink one) who had a very small cameo in Rescue from Midnight Castle as one of the ponies who gets caught first by Tirek. I believe Cotton Candy was also re-released in G3 along with Minty with slightly different colors/hip mark. I think she was in a few of the G3 movies, but, again, I'm not well versed in G3, especially the media, so I can't tell you off the top of my head.

[EDIT]: Fun Fact: Snuzzle, the grey one with the pink hearts, was the ONLY pony (that I'm aware of) ever released in that color.

Kris Strife
2011-08-26, 09:30 PM
So he comes up into my room and after talking for ~10 minutes he finally notices the ponies sitting in my keyboard, and I guess freaks out is the best word, over the fact I have ponies on my keyboard.

You should have acted like they weren't there and you couldn't see them, that they were all in his head. :smalltongue:


Nope, not terrible enough. It would be like Pinkie Pie getting diabetes, Winona getting rabies and killing Angel, Fluttershy running away because of what happened to Angel, Applejack having to put down Winona, Rarity discovering her eyesight is decaying to the point where she'll be blind within a few months, Twilight having an accident and breaking her horn, and Gilda getting into the Wonderbolts. All as the finale for Season 2. Now that's terrible.

And Blueblood steals 40 cakes. That's as many as four tens.

And that's terrible.

The Dark Fiddler
2011-08-26, 09:34 PM
So, am I the only one who carries over his grammar nazi-ness to text messages as well as typed prose?

The few time's I've texted, I insisted on the most proper grammar I knew how to type (commas are surprisingly hard to find your first few times texting).

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 09:36 PM
Oh, well then.

>_>
<_<
*Bookmarks*
Busy right now, but I'll read it soonish. Probably tomorrow. Thanks for reposting it! :smallbiggrin:

You're welcome, of course! :smallbiggrin:

Kyouhen
2011-08-26, 09:37 PM
And Blueblood steals 40 cakes. That's as many as four tens.

And that's terrible.

Oooooohhhh, that's terrible. Though I just realized what would be more terrible. All of this doesn't happen in the finale, it happens in the second-last episode. The finale's a two-parter. And the series gets cancelled before the resolution to all this terribleness airs.

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 09:42 PM
You ponies are the best writers ever. Seriously. Like to the point where in the recent past I have looked at critically acclaimed novels and just shrugged my shoulders at the quality of them. And thought to an exact fanfiction or author that I can hold above them.

Hell, some of the things I've read here hold up to classic literature in terms of prose and technical / mechanical aspects, as well as general feel. Of course, Ponies will never hold up to Sir Arthur Ignatius Conan Doyle in terms of subject matter in my book (I am a massive literature nerd by the way), but seriously. The amount of talent just overflowing from the writers in this fandom is staggering. I have spent more time reading Fanfiction off of this thread and Equestria Daily in the past two months since becoming a Brony than I have reading through my book collection. That says something.

*Hugely flattered* :smallredface:


For reference, and if people are interested, I submitted this (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1phU_-ccxx9Ah8tPIvlPmyH_FYZRS2Cy49a_SrkxRaUg/edit?hl=en_US) and this (https://docs.google.com/document/d/19UEPKcrVRf-jkw9xvOBCtQ34SbQCFdPD5RBMpesuULI/edit?hl=en_US), both with veiled pony references. They're also the only two stories in that class so far with voice of any kind. Writing "Reads like a wikipedia article" on stories is harsh but I was left short of other options.

erikun
2011-08-26, 09:42 PM
You know who else looks good in the nurse outfit?

The one who's actually a nurse
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/645971e6909acc7db6d416d7a106d669/49906%20-%20nurse%20nurse_outfit%20nurse_redheart.jpg
I am now a fan of nurse Nurse Redheart. <3


Waiting with baited breath! :smallsmile:
Bated breath (http://www.worldwidewords.org/qa/qa-bai1.htm), unless you like snacking on the minnows during your fishing trip.


for that matter, why do vegetarian ponies raise chickens like Fluttershy does..
Eggs, for baking.


or pigs as we saw when the CMC tried to feed them out in the barn at apple acres?
I'm going to say a convenient source of manure. After all, Sweet Apple Acres covers several square miles, and buying that much fertilizer (or waiting for it to all go to fallow) would become prohibitive.

Kris Strife
2011-08-26, 09:43 PM
Oooooohhhh, that's terrible. Though I just realized what would be more terrible. All of this doesn't happen in the finale, it happens in the second-last episode. The finale's a two-parter. And the series gets cancelled before the resolution to all this terribleness airs.

...That's like saying "It can't get any worse." :smallyuk:

Strife Warzeal
2011-08-26, 09:48 PM
You should have acted like they weren't there and you couldn't see them, that they were all in his head. :smalltongue:


I have never more wished for a time machine than I am right now. Best idea ever of all time. OF ALL TIME.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 10:03 PM
Actually [original] Minty was one of the FIRST mane six from 1982.

http://mylittlewiki.org/w/images/4/43/Collectorsgroup.JPG

The toys were also re-released in original form when G3 came out. I don't believe most of them were in any of the animation, except for Cotton Candy (the pink one) who had a very small cameo in Rescue from Midnight Castle as one of the ponies who gets caught first by Tirek. I believe Cotton Candy was also re-released in G3 along with Minty with slightly different colors/hip mark. I think she was in a few of the G3 movies, but, again, I'm not well versed in G3, especially the media, so I can't tell you off the top of my head.

[EDIT]: Fun Fact: Snuzzle, the grey one with the pink hearts, was the ONLY pony (that I'm aware of) ever released in that color.

Actually, question Mr. "I was a fan before Friendship is Magic". Did any of the mane cast from G1 survive in some iteration all the way to G4? :smalltongue:


You should have acted like they weren't there and you couldn't see them, that they were all in his head. :smalltongue:

The pink one approves of these shenanigans. I can hear her in my head right now! http://i.imgur.com/Npxit.jpg


I'm going to say a convenient source of manure. After all, Sweet Apple Acres covers several square miles, and buying that much fertilizer (or waiting for it to all go to fallow) would become prohibitive.

This is the best explanation I've ever heard for this.


*Hugely flattered* :smallredface:


For reference, and if people are interested, I submitted this (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1phU_-ccxx9Ah8tPIvlPmyH_FYZRS2Cy49a_SrkxRaUg/edit?hl=en_US) and this (https://docs.google.com/document/d/19UEPKcrVRf-jkw9xvOBCtQ34SbQCFdPD5RBMpesuULI/edit?hl=en_US), both with veiled pony references. They're also the only two stories in that class so far with voice of any kind. Writing "Reads like a wikipedia article" on stories is harsh but I was left short of other options.

Just read through those, they are extremely well done. Although when I read "Radio Nowhere" as the title of the first, for a minute I thought it was from my role playing site, "Survival of the Fittest". Cause we had a topic by the same name. XD

Kindablue
2011-08-26, 10:14 PM
Actually, question Mr. "I was a fan before Friendship is Magic". Did any of the mane cast from G1 survive in some iteration all the way to G4? :smalltongue:

Applejack is the only one, but most of the G4 ponies are based on earlier generations:
http://www.determinismsucks.net/archive/My_Little_pony_Friendship_in_Magic_History-(n1290573491968).jpg

(and WJMill is a Ms.)

WJMill
2011-08-26, 10:16 PM
Actually, question Mr. "I was a fan before Friendship is Magic". Did any of the mane cast from G1 survive in some iteration all the way to G4? :smalltongue:

Miss. And yes, Applejack is the most prominent. She is the only pony to survive re-colorings and re-release from G1 to G4. I can't say much for G3, because I didn't like it, but watch Rescue from Midnight Castle if you can. She's one of the mane characters as perhaps an ancestor of our current Applejack. She still has an orange body, yellow mane/tail, and her trademark freckles. Though she was not in My Little Pony & Friends (1980s TV show) or MLP: The Movie, she still counts to me. She did have a re-color in G3 in the toy line, but they changed her to a more Big Macintosh-esque scheme (http://mylittlewiki.org/wiki/G3_Applejack). I don't believe she was in any of the G3 animation, but I'm not well versed in those. (Maybe someday I will watch these to increase my hipster knowledge..)

EDIT: After further research Applejack's G3 reincarnation WAS, in fact, in Princess Promenade. (Also played by Ashleigh Ball who voices her in FiM as well as Rainbow Dash!)

erikun
2011-08-26, 10:16 PM
Actually, question Mr. "I was a fan before Friendship is Magic". Did any of the mane cast from G1 survive in some iteration all the way to G4? :smalltongue:
I'm pretty sure her name is Mrs. "I was a fan before Friendship is Magic". :smalltongue: And I do remember that Applejack is from G1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3NUgUu2_gBc). I think the rest are based on G1 personalities - Rainbow Dash similar to G1 Firefly, Pinkie Pie similar to G1 Surprise - but they couldn't use the old names due to copyright/licensing issues.

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 10:17 PM
Just read through those, they are extremely well done. Although when I read "Radio Nowhere" as the title of the first, for a minute I thought it was from my role playing site, "Survival of the Fittest". Cause we had a topic by the same name. XD

That implies you haven't heard the song Radio Nowhere (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Gd6EhRRNJc), which is a travesty to say the least.

Though thank you very much! :smallsmile:

Pokonic
2011-08-26, 10:19 PM
Did any of the mane cast from G1 survive in some iteration all the way to G4?

A few, actualy. Among other things, Twilights mom is, according to Lauren Faust, meant to be G1 Twilight, and Bon-Bon is a splitting image of, well, Bon Bon.

WJMill
2011-08-26, 10:19 PM
I'm pretty sure her name is Mrs. "I was a fan before Friendship is Magic". :smalltongue: And I do remember that Applejack is from G1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3NUgUu2_gBc). I think the rest are based on G1 personalities - Rainbow Dash similar to G1 Firefly, Pinkie Pie similar to G1 Surprise - but they couldn't use the old names due to copyright/licensing issues.

Yep! You are correct. Lauren Faust released information that Hasbro lost rights to any characters EXCEPT Applejack and Spike. Thus why there are unfortunately not many characters that made it from G1 to G4. Though Minty was an original pony toy in the 80s, I guess Hasbro has maintained the name, but not the full color scheme or hip mark. G1 Minty was never in the 80s animation. (I think that's why Twilight Sparkle is named as such, because Hasbro lost rights to 'Twilight' who you can also see in Rescue from Midnight Castle.)

EDIT:
A few, actualy. Among other things, Twilights mom is, according to Lauren Faust, meant to be G1 Twilight, and Bon-Bon is a splitting image of, well, Bon Bon.

Bon Bon (http://mylittlewiki.org/wiki/Bon_Bon) was indeed technically G1, though they were released at the tale end. Bon Bon was a character in My Little Pony Tales TV Show in 1992. (Awful if you asked me..) They were not prominent in the original animations, but were more of a spin-off re-vamp to help transition MLP into G2 (yeeeeuck) which started in 1997.

The only problem I see when making Bon Bon's connection is that I don't believe they've canonized that name yet in FiM, have they?

erikun
2011-08-26, 10:24 PM
Lauren Faust released information that Hasbro lost rights to any characters EXCEPT Applejack and Spike.
I do have to wonder how exactly that happened. The only method I can think of is if they allowed another company to use the characters in a movie or something and some legal reasoning gave the other company rights to the characters. It does seem rather odd for Applejack and Spike to specifically be retained, after all.

Still, it gave us Rainbow Dash, who does look 20% cooler than Firefly, so I'm not inclined to complain too loudly.

[EDIT]
Bon-Bon isn't the official name, but I'm pretty sure the fans named her that specifically because of the resemblence. I'm fairly sure there are others, like Carrot Top and Berry Punch, that were fan-named for the same reasons.

Pokonic
2011-08-26, 10:33 PM
I do have to wonder how exactly that happened. The only method I can think of is if they allowed another company to use the characters in a movie or something and some legal reasoning gave the other company rights to the characters. It does seem rather odd for Applejack and Spike to specifically be retained, after all.

Still, it gave us Rainbow Dash, who does look 20% cooler than Firefly, so I'm not inclined to complain too loudly.

Yeah, I was wondering that to. Which is rather odd for in itself, but you have to wonder about the reasoning on keeping only two characters while giving the rights to the rest away. I wonder who owns them now?:smallconfused:

WJMill
2011-08-26, 10:36 PM
Yeah, I was wondering that to. Which is rather odd for in itself, but you have to wonder about the reasoning on keeping only two characters while giving the rights to the rest away. I wonder who owns them now?:smallconfused:

[Completely amateur opinion] I think there's a certain time period where Copyright laws hold, but if the company doesn't re-up or however they do it, they can lose all or partial rights to their characters. I don't know exactly how that works, but that would be my best guess. I haven't read anything else about this specific case that says why.

EDIT: Also, both Applejack and Spike were used in G3, so I'm assuming Hasbro kept the rights for those two characters for specifically that reason. (Though Spike was WAY less cool than he is now or was in G1..)

Kyouhen
2011-08-26, 10:48 PM
Y'know, I think Surprise is the only G1 pony I like in FiM style. (Aside from Applejack, but she's changed so little over the years she doesn't count) The rest of the ponies' colour schemes just look kind of washed out or something to me. There was one picture of the mane cast replaced by their original concepts floating around and it just didn't seem too pleasing to look at. Too many shades of pink floating around and everything was kind of faded. I'm really glad that we ended up with the ponies we got, the differences in colour just make everything look brighter and happier.

WJMill
2011-08-26, 10:51 PM
Y'know, I think Surprise is the only G1 pony I like in FiM style. (Aside from Applejack, but she's changed so little over the years she doesn't count) The rest of the ponies' colour schemes just look kind of washed out or something to me. There was one picture of the mane cast replaced by their original concepts floating around and it just didn't seem too pleasing to look at. Too many shades of pink floating around and everything was kind of faded. I'm really glad that we ended up with the ponies we got, the differences in colour just make everything look brighter and happier.

I agree with the FiM color scheme comment. Granted, MLP was originally made for little girls with no real marketing to adult audience (let alone males!), so I am glad that they really tried to make FiM and the G4 toy line appealing to just about everyone who likes fun and friendship.

Pokonic
2011-08-26, 10:55 PM
The only problem I see when making Bon Bon's connection is that I don't believe they've canonized that name yet in FiM, have they?



Bon-Bon isn't the official name, but I'm pretty sure the fans named her that specifically because of the resemblence. I'm fairly sure there are others, like Carrot Top and Berry Punch, that were fan-named for the same reasons.

Yeah, none of the backround ponys realy have any official names, but we all know who they are based on. Its rather funny, because they are the G1-3 ponys in all but the name or personality.


[Completely amateur opinion] I think there's a certain time period where Copyright laws hold, but if the company doesn't re-up or however they do it, they can lose all or partial rights to their characters. I don't know exactly how that works, but that would be my best guess. I haven't read anything else about this specific case that says why.

Yes, but we realy dont know much more about it than what Larun told us, so we dont realy know more about it than that Hasbro does not own the rights anymore. As such, no one in the community will know why unless Hasbro tells use, which is very unlikly.

On side ponys: The only one that has a "name" ( realy a stage name) is the one and only DJ Pon-3, who has his own freaken t-shirt ! (http://www.welovefine.com/product.php?id_product=486)

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 11:16 PM
Miss. And yes, Applejack is the most prominent. She is the only pony to survive re-colorings and re-release from G1 to G4. I can't say much for G3, because I didn't like it, but watch Rescue from Midnight Castle if you can. She's one of the mane characters as perhaps an ancestor of our current Applejack. She still has an orange body, yellow mane/tail, and her trademark freckles. Though she was not in My Little Pony & Friends (1980s TV show) or MLP: The Movie, she still counts to me. She did have a re-color in G3 in the toy line, but they changed her to a more Big Macintosh-esque scheme (http://mylittlewiki.org/wiki/G3_Applejack). I don't believe she was in any of the G3 animation, but I'm not well versed in those. (Maybe someday I will watch these to increase my hipster knowledge..)

EDIT: After further research Applejack's G3 reincarnation WAS, in fact, in Princess Promenade. (Also played by Ashleigh Ball who voices her in FiM as well as Rainbow Dash!)

Sorry about that! http://i.imgur.com/BsGGR.jpg

I have to say, this combined with Kindablue's image there were extremely educational in this regard. I feel significantly more proficient (read: barely acceptable) in the art of the g1 pony. I'll definitely try and check out Rescue from Midnight Castle.


That implies you haven't heard the song Radio Nowhere (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Gd6EhRRNJc), which is a travesty to say the least.

Though thank you very much! :smallsmile:

I actually haven't heard that song before. I feel like I need to fix that. >_>


I do have to wonder how exactly that happened. The only method I can think of is if they allowed another company to use the characters in a movie or something and some legal reasoning gave the other company rights to the characters. It does seem rather odd for Applejack and Spike to specifically be retained, after all.

Still, it gave us Rainbow Dash, who does look 20% cooler than Firefly, so I'm not inclined to complain too loudly.

[EDIT]
Bon-Bon isn't the official name, but I'm pretty sure the fans named her that specifically because of the resemblence. I'm fairly sure there are others, like Carrot Top and Berry Punch, that were fan-named for the same reasons.


[Completely amateur opinion] I think there's a certain time period where Copyright laws hold, but if the company doesn't re-up or however they do it, they can lose all or partial rights to their characters. I don't know exactly how that works, but that would be my best guess. I haven't read anything else about this specific case that says why.

Honestly, I think this may be the case. Copyright law only lasts for so long, you're correct. Another company could have snapped up the copyrights as soon as they expired from Hasbro, and basically just "squatted" them.


Y'know, I think Surprise is the only G1 pony I like in FiM style. (Aside from Applejack, but she's changed so little over the years she doesn't count) The rest of the ponies' colour schemes just look kind of washed out or something to me. There was one picture of the mane cast replaced by their original concepts floating around and it just didn't seem too pleasing to look at. Too many shades of pink floating around and everything was kind of faded. I'm really glad that we ended up with the ponies we got, the differences in colour just make everything look brighter and happier.

I have to say, I kind of like Firefly in g4 style. Somehow, Faust manages to make pink and electric blue badass.

Then again, she manages to make rainbows badass, so I can't say I'm surprised.

the_druid_droid
2011-08-26, 11:26 PM
Pony scissors. Scissors. Designed specifically for beings with fingers. How did ponies come up with scissors?

Secondly, urghhh, some people do not know how to write at all. Third year creative writing students should know how to capitalise the letter 'I'. I think I've been spoiled by this thread's general excellent quality of stuff.

A.) I find thinking about alternate-universe pony tools/appliances based off of hooves, rather than human-world ports to be an interesting (though difficult) creative exercise.

B.) I get the feeling that there's a story behind your second paragraph...peer review of some kind?


So, am I the only one who carries over his grammar nazi-ness to text messages as well as typed prose?


Nope. I do the same thing myself, and I can still text faster than many people...


Also, I need to start watching what I read. I got a new book last weekend and was reading through it. There were a few cases where a sentence would start with "Twilight settled in..." and my immersion of the book was shattered when my imagination stuck Twilight curled up at the scene. One such scene was in an evil troll army setting up camp. It only happens when 'twilight' has a capital 'T', but it happened twice before I finished the book. Confound that pony!


Twilight settled in, warm in front of a roaring fire blazing in her library-tree. Steam drifted slowly upward from the jasmine tea she had prepared, and all seemed right with the world. Outside, however, darkness waited... an army of misshapen things had lumbered out of the Everfree Forest, driven by the cold toward the warm glow of Ponyville's twinkling winter lights...


[EDIT]: Fun Fact: Snuzzle, the grey one with the pink hearts, was the ONLY pony (that I'm aware of) ever released in that color.

Hmm. Perhaps she's related to Pinkie's sister?


I am now a fan of nurse Nurse Redheart. <3


Nurse-ception!

Spoilered for unrelated:
So after creating a character for an FFRP on the Playground boards (the one in my sig, actually) who's pretty much everything I hate IRL, I find myself ridiculously excited to play him and full of creative ideas. Is this a normal side effect of giving birth to an antithesis? Thanqol, Mask? Comments?

EsperDerek
2011-08-26, 11:29 PM
Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating Update:

I'm gonna put this under spoilertags, so ponies who haven't read the rough draft aren't, well, spoiled.

Having taken everypony's advice, here's what I'm concentrating on to make the story stronger than it currently is:

1) Improve the 'good' times that Shimmer and Midnight have before each disaster. Make them longer, and make it clearer that they really are connecting on more than just a physical level. Show that Shimmer is right, there truly was a good date there, just hidden under the disaster.

2) Ham up Blueblood II! More ham! More ham for everypony!

3) In conjunction with this, rewrite and strengthen the conversation between Midnight, Shimmer and Blueblood II where he was demanding to know what Shimmer can offer Midnight, and onwards to where he is inspired to go on a grand Quest.

4) Strengthen the ending, and close some of the holes in the plot: The book not getting a good send-off, how Shimmer knows about Midnight's secret place when it was exactly the sort of place they could have used in Moonlight.

5) Possibly add a small scene with Rarity and Midnight during the fitting process of the dress.

6) Make clearer 'chapter' splits in between each incident, as suggested by Thanqol.

Titanium Fox
2011-08-26, 11:37 PM
Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating Update:

I'm gonna put this under spoilertags, so ponies who haven't read the rough draft aren't, well, spoiled.

Having taken everypony's advice, here's what I'm concentrating on to make the story stronger than it currently is:

1) Improve the 'good' times that Shimmer and Midnight have before each disaster. Make them longer, and make it clearer that they really are connecting on more than just a physical level. Show that Shimmer is right, there truly was a good date there, just hidden under the disaster.

2) Ham up Blueblood II! More ham! More ham for everypony!

3) In conjunction with this, rewrite and strengthen the conversation between Midnight, Shimmer and Blueblood II where he was demanding to know what Shimmer can offer Midnight, and onwards to where he is inspired to go on a grand Quest.

4) Strengthen the ending, and close some of the holes in the plot: The book not getting a good send-off, how Shimmer knows about Midnight's secret place when it was exactly the sort of place they could have used in Moonlight.

5) Possibly add a small scene with Rarity and Midnight during the fitting process of the dress.

6) Make clearer 'chapter' splits in between each incident, as suggested by Thanqol.

I am so tempted to read what's in the spoiler tags. But at the same time, I want to wait. SO TORN. @_@

Thanqol
2011-08-26, 11:48 PM
A.) I find thinking about alternate-universe pony tools/appliances based off of hooves, rather than human-world ports to be an interesting (though difficult) creative exercise.

B.) I get the feeling that there's a story behind your second paragraph...peer review of some kind?

Yeah, we commentate on other people's stories in a similar way as to what we do here. Except the class has a few people who like everything and will argue that obvious structural flaws are valid stylistic choices.

And while the joined scissor blades are a useful tool, ponies wouldn't need the finger handles. It's possible they'd have one handle, so they could carry it in their mouths if they had to, but not two. Non-unicorn barbers, I can't imagine at all.


Spoilered for unrelated:
So after creating a character for an FFRP on the Playground boards (the one in my sig, actually) who's pretty much everything I hate IRL, I find myself ridiculously excited to play him and full of creative ideas. Is this a normal side effect of giving birth to an antithesis? Thanqol, Mask? Comments?

Absolutely yes. And interestingly, Mask is not my antithesis - she's a reflection of a part of me I keep hidden from everyone else. She's insecurity and blindness, not knowing and not trusting, but she's also insight and empathy. She's the one who cares the most because she knows that feeling.

Jayden, however, is my antithesis. I made her to be the opposite of me in every way. She's good at everything I'm bad at - music, science, maths and sport. I find her political beliefs repugnant, her taste in music terrible, and her belief in her own invincibility doomed to disaster. She's got pride that runs directly into hubris and walked a path that'd end at Wisdom 3 and paradox everywhere. Exactly the sort of person I would never, ever get along with. And she became one of the most powerful voices in my head in record time.

And it's odd, because in the process of this ongoing argument I've been having with her, I've become reconciled to a lot of my own nature that I previously rejected. I've become able to take a more holistic view towards a lot of society. It's like our worst natures are cancelling each other out and allowing the common ground we do have - a deep, fundamental belief that human beings are Pretty Awesome - to really rise above. It's the most interesting, unexpected and wonderful evolutions my mind has ever gone through.



Midnight and Shimmer's Guide to Dating Update:

I'm gonna put this under spoilertags, so ponies who haven't read the rough draft aren't, well, spoiled.

Having taken everypony's advice, here's what I'm concentrating on to make the story stronger than it currently is:

1) Improve the 'good' times that Shimmer and Midnight have before each disaster. Make them longer, and make it clearer that they really are connecting on more than just a physical level. Show that Shimmer is right, there truly was a good date there, just hidden under the disaster.

2) Ham up Blueblood II! More ham! More ham for everypony!

3) In conjunction with this, rewrite and strengthen the conversation between Midnight, Shimmer and Blueblood II where he was demanding to know what Shimmer can offer Midnight, and onwards to where he is inspired to go on a grand Quest.

4) Strengthen the ending, and close some of the holes in the plot: The book not getting a good send-off, how Shimmer knows about Midnight's secret place when it was exactly the sort of place they could have used in Moonlight.

5) Possibly add a small scene with Rarity and Midnight during the fitting process of the dress.

6) Make clearer 'chapter' splits in between each incident, as suggested by Thanqol.

These look like excellent decisions, and I think implementing them will make a much better story :smallsmile:

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-26, 11:49 PM
I just realized something...
Discord escapes from a stone prison.
Pinkie's family manages a rock farm. Stones are rocks.
Pinkie's family- Dull,humorless, rock farmers, or secret guardians of the prison of Discord?

Personally, I prefer the idea that the rock farm grows gemstones. Having gemstones grow in Equestria would help explain why Gems can be found so easily in the ground, plus it would make more sense for dragons to be able to eat them. In my crazy interpretation, the reason the Pie family had to move the rocks around was because they need to carefully regulate the amount of light that the rocks get so they grow whatever type of gemstone that the Pie family chooses.

However, seeing them as a secret organization to keep an ancient evil imprisoned is awesome, especially if they are all secretly ninjas.
... And now we know where Pinkie's powers come from. :smallbiggrin:


... http://i.imgur.com/UwGCn.jpg

Yes! Shock and Awe, that's precisely the reaction I was going for.

Also, if it helps to channel your anger, imagine that it is Blueblood singing there. :smalltongue:


Well, I'm afraid Ima have to say goodbye for this weekend. Weekend retreat with like NO service. See yall later!

See you later!


You know who else looks good in the nurse outfit?

The one who's actually a nurse
http://img.ponibooru.org/_images/645971e6909acc7db6d416d7a106d669/49906%20-%20nurse%20nurse_outfit%20nurse_redheart.jpg

Who'd have thought that Ponyville's resident nurse would look so nice in a nurse outfit.


So, I'll be going on an extended vacation for six days. Where I'm going to miss catching up on this.

I fully expect another thread by the time I get back.

The horror, the horror!

Have fun on your vacation. Watch out for Parasprites!


Nope, not terrible enough. It would be like Pinkie Pie getting diabetes, Winona getting rabies and killing Angel, Fluttershy running away because of what happened to Angel, Applejack having to put down Winona, Rarity discovering her eyesight is decaying to the point where she'll be blind within a few months, Twilight having an accident and breaking her horn, and Gilda getting into the Wonderbolts. All as the finale for Season 2. Now that's terrible.

http://i.imgur.com/4sZHM.jpg...http://i.imgur.com/xNUoP.jpg...http://i.imgur.com/DrMmg.jpg... http://i.imgur.com/fhwi8.jpg

Kris Strife
2011-08-27, 12:24 AM
http://i.imgur.com/4sZHM.jpg...http://i.imgur.com/xNUoP.jpg...http://i.imgur.com/DrMmg.jpg... http://i.imgur.com/fhwi8.jpg

Kyouhen and I made it better, check the last post of page 7, and then again in this page.

But I think that's exactly the response we were looking for. :smallbiggrin:


Except the class has a few people who like everything and will argue that obvious structural flaws are valid stylistic choices.

As a random favor, ask them if they're fans of Dominic Deegan. :smallamused:

Grif
2011-08-27, 12:34 AM
Posting to say hi from the airport. Hurrah for free wifi.

Vent Reynolt
2011-08-27, 12:42 AM
Kyouhen and I made it better, check the last post of page 7, and then again in this page.

But I think that's exactly the response we were looking for. :smallbiggrin:

You're right. I'll go remedy that now.


And Blueblood steals 40 cakes. That's as many as four tens.

And that's terrible.

BLUEBLOOD! http://i.imgur.com/o7rww.jpg


Oooooohhhh, that's terrible. Though I just realized what would be more terrible. All of this doesn't happen in the finale, it happens in the second-last episode. The finale's a two-parter. And the series gets cancelled before the resolution to all this terribleness airs.

http://i.imgur.com/pi5Ee.jpg... http://i.imgur.com/vZNbC.jpg

RdMarquis
2011-08-27, 02:53 AM
And now, the dramatic conclusion to the Rubik's Cube saga (if that's what "The End" means).

http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/50259

gooddragon1
2011-08-27, 03:14 AM
Well obviously this may add some depth to the discussion. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5d7TBErQDo)

Aotrs Commander
2011-08-27, 04:44 AM
So, am I the only one who carries over his grammar nazi-ness to text messages as well as typed prose?

No, I have been know to send my friend's emails back to them with corrections done in red.

I don't text (don't have, nor want, a mobile) but if I did they would in in proper English, and woe betide anyone who even speaks in leet-speak - let alone text speak in my presense (that calls my patented double-rocket-launcher-stab-blast, twin-short-sword-disembowl, heart-ripper-claw-strike, Maximised Disintegrate-to-the-soul combo.)



I saw that once. Trust me, you do not want to see that. *shudder* And this is a lich, well a former lich, telling you this.




One thread? You're going away for almost a week. I expect 2 threads. :smalltongue:


You only managed one while I was out, and the thread speed has dropped notiably since Bobcat, SiuiS and Braz aren't currently posting.

Kurgan
2011-08-27, 06:08 AM
Oh ponythread, why do you speed up so much when I'm away?

Anyways, that is three posters on vacation/weekend leave/required school international travel now, and since I've only bid Bobcat so far a good time, I will now extend those well wishes to the rest of you (Grif and the Captain I believe).



So, am I the only one who carries over his grammar nazi-ness to text messages as well as typed prose?


Usually yes, there are times when I feel lazy though, and allow a spelling error or a lack of proper spacing to get through. Long story short, I'm not smart enough to use my smart phone by a long shot.


Think Wizard Alcatraz on Steroids. when the series starts no one has ever escaped. One person doing it is a central part of the third novel/movie plot as no one can figure out how he pulled it off! That, granted, changes when the dementors, the guards who are a very large part of making the place so inescapable, swear loyalty too the evil dark lord who's going around killing everyone and trying to take over, but still.

Come now, you didn't even mention the demontors' ability to suck people's souls out of their faces!


This needs to be a fanfic. And Pinkie would have to eventualy take up the mantle.


Oh oh oh oh oh! I have an idea! Lets play musical souls! Rules are simple, the dementor here, I call him Whiskers, for what I am sure are obvious reasons...anyways! Whiskers here will suck everyponys' souls out their bodies, we will then secretly take one of the empty husks and toss it away! We'll then randomly place the souls back into bodies, and the loser gets the best prize of all! That pony will get to share with me!

Can you imagine all of the fun we'll have! Parties and cupcakes and cakes and....MORE parties and dancing and pin the tail on the pony and so much fun. More fun that anypony can imagine. Ant it will last FOREVER!http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s168/murderouseagle/ponymote/insane.png

gooddragon1
2011-08-27, 07:25 AM
In response to I like ponies was this post...


What a strange and unusual post.

And, of course, I like dragons.

As evidenced here:
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/gooddragon1/sd1.png

And again here:
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/gooddragon1/ImprovedSD.jpg

But why are there no dragons in My Little Pony? :/

Aotrs Commander
2011-08-27, 07:29 AM
But why are there no dragons in My Little Pony? :/

...

You are joking, right?

Gamerlord
2011-08-27, 07:34 AM
I just realized something that might make the "Pinkie's family is guarding Discord's prison" theory more possible:
Pinkie's grandmother taught her to laugh at her fears "When she was a little filly"....even though the rock farm clearly had no laughter pre-sonic rainboom. "Giggle at the ghosty", cheerful song meant to remove fears, or ancient chant designed to protect one from Discord's powers?

Thanqol
2011-08-27, 07:36 AM
I just realized further proof of the "Pinkie's family is guarding Discord's prison" theory:
Pinkie's grandmother taught her to laugh at her fears "When she was a little filly"....even though the rock farm clearly had no laughter pre-sonic rainboom. "Giggle at the ghosty", cheerful song meant to remove fears, or ancient chant designed to protect one from Discord's powers?

I don't think 'proof' means what you think it means.

Gamerlord
2011-08-27, 07:37 AM
I don't think 'proof' means what you think it means.
Sorry, wrong word, I'm being distracted by Birdemic ATM, cannot think clearly due to awfulness.

EsperDerek
2011-08-27, 07:41 AM
I don't think 'proof' means what you think it means.

http://i.imgur.com/jaolo.jpg Ooh! I know what proof is! It's how they measure the strength of an alcoholic drink!

gooddragon1
2011-08-27, 07:44 AM
...

You are joking, right?

It's a show about ponies. How could there be dragons in it?

EDIT: A baby dragon? That doesn't count imo...