Broken Circle

[Evil DM Mark3]

http://brokencircle.thecomicseries.com/

Mine and my wife's. New and updating Saturdays. Exalted with a fairly serious story.

[Evil DM Mark3]

Anyone? :smallfrown::frown::smallfrown:

[Domochevsky]

You need a better pitch than that.

And make the site more navigatable. (That is, have the latest comic on the frontpage.)
And work more on the art. (It's expressive in a way, but lacks refinement)
And have text in an actual font, not handwriting (for readability purposes).
And not have speech bubbles lead directly into the mouth of a character. (Distance is important.)

>_>

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Yah. Can't bring myself to actually read any of it. Handwritten text is terrible. :smallfrown: