Andion Isurand
2011-10-09, 07:24 PM
Looking for any tweaks that might help the wording or balance of this spell and any of my others (http://andionisurand.blogspot.com/2011/10/spellbook.html).
Temporal Battle Tide
Transmutation [Time]
Level: Sor/Wiz 7
Components: V, S
Targets: One creature/level, no two of which can be more than 60 ft. apart
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates (harmless) or Will negates
This spell functions like haste (PH 239) and slow (PH 280), except that each targeted creature that fails its save is either hasted or slowed as desired. Each targeted creature to be hasted may attempt a Fortitude save to negate the effect, which is considered harmless. Each targeted creature to be slowed may attempt a Will save to negate the effect.
This spell may not be countered or dispelled by haste or slow.
Temporal Battle Tide
Transmutation [Time]
Level: Sor/Wiz 7
Components: V, S
Targets: One creature/level, no two of which can be more than 60 ft. apart
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates (harmless) or Will negates
This spell functions like haste (PH 239) and slow (PH 280), except that each targeted creature that fails its save is either hasted or slowed as desired. Each targeted creature to be hasted may attempt a Fortitude save to negate the effect, which is considered harmless. Each targeted creature to be slowed may attempt a Will save to negate the effect.
This spell may not be countered or dispelled by haste or slow.