GFawkes
2011-12-07, 05:00 AM
I've recently written my first bit of fanfiction (not sure whether to be proud or ashamed of myself), and need a couple of honest critiques/pre-readings of it. Feel free to be harsh if you need to, it's not anything my life depends on.
Advisory: Rated P for Pony, be warned.
Masked (https://docs.google.com/a/codeclinic.com/document/d/1-VXe1SbIh90nYjpKMwunvp2RTMY0OjN50btYCG-OV8k/edit?hl=en_US)
And since part two is (almost) ready, here it is, with a similar need for critique:
Part 2 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HyZuMa3KU6W2CzP83pfFZBpMuNEKKoqjcHtYLU__BE4/edit)
Advisory: Rated P for Pony, be warned.
Masked (https://docs.google.com/a/codeclinic.com/document/d/1-VXe1SbIh90nYjpKMwunvp2RTMY0OjN50btYCG-OV8k/edit?hl=en_US)
And since part two is (almost) ready, here it is, with a similar need for critique:
Part 2 (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HyZuMa3KU6W2CzP83pfFZBpMuNEKKoqjcHtYLU__BE4/edit)