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Laughingcarp
2012-08-27, 07:08 PM
"DEEP CROW! OH NOOOOO! DEEP CROOOOOOW!"
Cheers to the guys at Penny-Arcade (http://penny-arcade.com/comic/2008/03/21)

For your enjoyment and critiquing pleasure, I present Brizvyll the Graceful Scourge, and her eidolon, NetherPetal the Deep Crow.
Pathfinder only, 20 point-buy. Built as a thought experiment, and as a potential back-up to my Mantis-style Vanara Monk in the Serpent's Skull campaign.

Brizvyll
NE Female Half-elf Summoner 10
Init +3, Perception +2
Defense
AC 21 (1 Dex, 4 Mage Armor, 4 Natural, 2 Shield)
HP 10d8+20 (~69hp)
Fort +10 (3,2,3,2) Ref +9 (3,1,3,2) Will +12 (7,0,3,2) +2 vs enchantment, immune sleep

Offense
Speed: 30ft
Melee: +1 Lance +10/+5 (1d8+3, x3, p, reach)
Ranged: Javelin + 8 (1d6+2, 30ft, x2, p, 5 ammo)
Special Attacks: Summon Monster V 9/day, Maker's Call/Transposition 2/day, Life Link, Drow Magic (1/day CL10 Dancing Lights, Faerie Fire, Darkness), Aspect (2pts, Improved Natural Armor x2), Shield Ally,
Summoner Spells known (CL 10th, Concentration +18, DC 16+lev)
0 (At will) -Detect Magic, Guidance, Message, Open/Close, Read Magic, Mage Hand
1 (6/day) -Mage Armor, Enlarge Person, Grease, Shield, Protection From Good
2 (5/day) -Haste, Barkskin, Lesser Evolution Surge, Create Pit, Summon Eidolon
3 (4/day) -Greater Invisibility, Fire Shield, Heroism, Charm Monster
4 (2/day) -Greater Evolution Surge, Infernal Healing

Tactics
Before Combat: Wakes up and summons her Deep Crow, then casts Mage Armor on herself and her precious Petal before brushing her teeth and consuming some poor innocent creature for breakfast.
During Combat: Enjoys starting battles with a mounted charge attack, then haste or invisitility. Apply other buffs while VoidPetal full attacks. Charm monster applied at the end to mop up survivors.
Morale: Ever a survivor, Brizvyll can often be heard cooing to VoidPetal "It's OK to leave them to die." Brizvyll has no compunctions against flying to safety to heal, and then returning to help allies if they yet live.

Statistics
Str 14, Dex 12, Con 14, Int 10, Wis 10, Cha 22
Base Atk +7/2, CMB +9, CMD 20
Feats: Extra Evolution (x2), Escape Route, Martial Weapon Proficiency (Lance), Mounted Combat
Skills: Ride +14 (10,3,1), Spellcraft +13 (10,3,0)
Traits: Elven Reflexes, Focused Mind
Languages: Common, Elven
Special Qualities: Drow-Blooded (Darkvision 60ft, light sensitivity), Elf Blood, Bond Senses
Combat Gear: Wand of Lesser Eidolon Rejuvenation, Rod of Extend (lesser) x2,
Other Gear: Headband of Alluring Charisma +4, Cloak of Resistance +3,
Spell Component Pouch


NetherPetal
NE Eidolon Quadruped Outsider
Perception +11

Defense
AC 27 (10 natural, 4 dex, -1 size, 4 mage armor)
HP 8d10+40 (84hp)
Fort +13 (6,5,0,2), Ref +12 (6,4,0,2), Will +6 (2, 0, 2, 2), +2 vs enchantment

Offense
Speed: 40ft, Fly 40ft (average)
Melee: Bite +18 (1d8+14+1d6 acid, x2) and 2 claws +18 (2d6+10+1d6 acid, x2, 10ft reach) and tail slap +18 (1d8+10+1d6 acid, x2)
Special Attacks: Pounce,

Tactics
Before Combat: Eat anything that moves.
During Combat: Charge, power attack, then eat anything that moves.
Morale: A Deep Crow is ancient as time itself, bigger than you, and hungry.

Statistics
Str 29, Dex 18, Con 20, Int 7, Wis 10, Cha 11
Base Atk +8/3, CMB +18, CMD 32
Feats: Iron Will, Escape Route, Improved Natural Attack (bite), Power Attack (-3/+6)
Skills: Fly +13 (8,3,4,-2), Perception +11 (8,3,0), Knowledge (The Planes) +9 (8,3,-2), Stealth +11 (8,3,4,-4)
Languages: Common, Elven
Evolutions: (Free: Bite, Limbs (legs)x2), Bite, Claws, Improved Damage (Claws), Reach (Claws), Mount, Pounce, Tail, Tail Slap, Large, Flight, Energy Attacks
Gear: Amulet of Mighty Fists +1, Belt of Physical Perfection +2, Ring of Resistance +2


Tips, ideas, and a general thoughts are greatly appreciated!

Crasical
2012-08-27, 10:20 PM
Tips, ideas, and a general thoughts are greatly appreciated!

Why would you brush your teeth -before- eating? Isn't it better to do that last before heading out in the morning?

Laughingcarp
2012-08-27, 10:31 PM
'Cause she's evil, and enjoys perverting the natural order of things.