Zahhak
2012-12-07, 02:06 AM
This seemed like the least-wrong forum for this.
So, every now and then I like to pretend I'm a writer (never gotten anything published, hardly ever even really try that part), and I had an idea for a story, or more of the setting. From the setting, I think the story tells itself. I was thinking about making this a DnD game, but I don't know if I want a bunch of players running around mucking up my world with their dirty shoes. So, I'm thinking about just making it a novella. What I was hoping for is some suggestions about how the setting's background would affect the societies and peoples in its present.
Eons ago there was a race whose name has been lost to time, but they are now called "the Ancients", they were an incredibly powerful, intelligent, and evil race who could change their shape at will, and considered any species that could not as not being truly conscience, or deserving of rights. Through means lost to time they altered any species they wanted, turning proto-humanoids into the majority of the humanoid races, making owlbears, gelatinous cubes, and all manner of monster and abomination.
Because they had a place to vent their malevolence, they rarely had internal conflict, instead they had a massive society that wrapped around the planet with little need for police or military. Unfortunately, some of their number didn't like the order, and so they splintered off. They had a slightly more radical opinion about who or what was deserving of respect. Dragons, being able to change shape, were mostly left alone, except by the radicals, who felt their daily limitations of shape change were reason enough to not consider them conscious beings. And so, the mighty dragons which already did not trust the Ancients, suddenly found themselves having plenty of reason to want to destroy the foul race. They were messing with forces beyond their ken.
Of the hundred or so dragons, six of the most powerful and mutated escaped and they launched a holy war. They exterminated the populations of whole continents, and left massive swaths of land completely uninhabitable. A mighty civilization indeed. It only took the dragons, called the Dread Reapers, a few months to completely destroy the whole race, save for a few who were hiding deep underground. What those ancients were doing is really anyone's guess, but they stayed in the depths until they were fairly sure the Dread Reapers were all dead of old age.
When the last of the Ancients came up from the underground centuries after the Reaping, they found the world very different. Humans, elves, dwarves, halflings, gnomes, and orcs had built civilizations on top of the bones of the civilization of the Ancients. Enraged, the remnants, who now called themselves the Iku Turso, tried to destroy the humanoids. They didn't expect to rebuild their own civilization, they just wanted to punish the humanoids for the perceived slight.
And so, the Iku Turso began their task of building an army of freakish monsters*. They planned this time for a possible rebellion. They made their armies into battalions, each one had a unique tattoo on the back of the neck, which was a remotely detonatable explosive ruin. If there was any dissention in the ranks, the whole battalion would simply be killed. As the Iku Turso were getting ready for their initial assault they realized they had forgotten something.
One of the Dread Reapers was still alive.
Malsumis, the most powerful of the Dread Reapers showed up as the Iku Turso were getting ready for their attack. He completely destroyed the castle they had been working from, and killed every remaining member of the race. When he showed up, the armies of the Iku Turso scattered, and wiped the populations of whatever continents unfortunate enough to have them show up. After time the armies of the Iku Turso, called the Abhorrents, settled in a few continents.
Now, the Abhorrents keep most would-be adventurers from daring to enter the continents, leaving humanoid civilization to stay on a single continent. But, the highly magical world keeps most needs satisfied. There's little need for food, water, or healing, and rising the dead to living removes the disincentive to prevent people from going to war. Now, the world is run by not states, but by massive mercenary companies and guilds. The ability to raise raise the dead tends to keep borders fairly static. Even if a region might be the site of a different battle every day of the year, the border as whole tends not to move. Some neutral cities remain, acting as meeting places for temporary alliances, but also as places for the indifferent to stay.
From these neutral cities come many adventurers who seek to leave the bleak ever present combat, and seek virtual immortality by going into the continents of the Abhorents and reclaim the riches, knowledge, or weapons of the lost civilization.
* As a point of interest, I'm heavily inspired in this by the Daleks in concept, and the Slivers, Baloths, and Wurms from Magic of the Gathering in terms of appearance/abilities
Good suggestions will be merit a mention in the "thanks" section of my novella if/when it gets published, in addition to possibly mentioning Gitp in general.
Thanks in advance!
So, every now and then I like to pretend I'm a writer (never gotten anything published, hardly ever even really try that part), and I had an idea for a story, or more of the setting. From the setting, I think the story tells itself. I was thinking about making this a DnD game, but I don't know if I want a bunch of players running around mucking up my world with their dirty shoes. So, I'm thinking about just making it a novella. What I was hoping for is some suggestions about how the setting's background would affect the societies and peoples in its present.
Eons ago there was a race whose name has been lost to time, but they are now called "the Ancients", they were an incredibly powerful, intelligent, and evil race who could change their shape at will, and considered any species that could not as not being truly conscience, or deserving of rights. Through means lost to time they altered any species they wanted, turning proto-humanoids into the majority of the humanoid races, making owlbears, gelatinous cubes, and all manner of monster and abomination.
Because they had a place to vent their malevolence, they rarely had internal conflict, instead they had a massive society that wrapped around the planet with little need for police or military. Unfortunately, some of their number didn't like the order, and so they splintered off. They had a slightly more radical opinion about who or what was deserving of respect. Dragons, being able to change shape, were mostly left alone, except by the radicals, who felt their daily limitations of shape change were reason enough to not consider them conscious beings. And so, the mighty dragons which already did not trust the Ancients, suddenly found themselves having plenty of reason to want to destroy the foul race. They were messing with forces beyond their ken.
Of the hundred or so dragons, six of the most powerful and mutated escaped and they launched a holy war. They exterminated the populations of whole continents, and left massive swaths of land completely uninhabitable. A mighty civilization indeed. It only took the dragons, called the Dread Reapers, a few months to completely destroy the whole race, save for a few who were hiding deep underground. What those ancients were doing is really anyone's guess, but they stayed in the depths until they were fairly sure the Dread Reapers were all dead of old age.
When the last of the Ancients came up from the underground centuries after the Reaping, they found the world very different. Humans, elves, dwarves, halflings, gnomes, and orcs had built civilizations on top of the bones of the civilization of the Ancients. Enraged, the remnants, who now called themselves the Iku Turso, tried to destroy the humanoids. They didn't expect to rebuild their own civilization, they just wanted to punish the humanoids for the perceived slight.
And so, the Iku Turso began their task of building an army of freakish monsters*. They planned this time for a possible rebellion. They made their armies into battalions, each one had a unique tattoo on the back of the neck, which was a remotely detonatable explosive ruin. If there was any dissention in the ranks, the whole battalion would simply be killed. As the Iku Turso were getting ready for their initial assault they realized they had forgotten something.
One of the Dread Reapers was still alive.
Malsumis, the most powerful of the Dread Reapers showed up as the Iku Turso were getting ready for their attack. He completely destroyed the castle they had been working from, and killed every remaining member of the race. When he showed up, the armies of the Iku Turso scattered, and wiped the populations of whatever continents unfortunate enough to have them show up. After time the armies of the Iku Turso, called the Abhorrents, settled in a few continents.
Now, the Abhorrents keep most would-be adventurers from daring to enter the continents, leaving humanoid civilization to stay on a single continent. But, the highly magical world keeps most needs satisfied. There's little need for food, water, or healing, and rising the dead to living removes the disincentive to prevent people from going to war. Now, the world is run by not states, but by massive mercenary companies and guilds. The ability to raise raise the dead tends to keep borders fairly static. Even if a region might be the site of a different battle every day of the year, the border as whole tends not to move. Some neutral cities remain, acting as meeting places for temporary alliances, but also as places for the indifferent to stay.
From these neutral cities come many adventurers who seek to leave the bleak ever present combat, and seek virtual immortality by going into the continents of the Abhorents and reclaim the riches, knowledge, or weapons of the lost civilization.
* As a point of interest, I'm heavily inspired in this by the Daleks in concept, and the Slivers, Baloths, and Wurms from Magic of the Gathering in terms of appearance/abilities
Good suggestions will be merit a mention in the "thanks" section of my novella if/when it gets published, in addition to possibly mentioning Gitp in general.
Thanks in advance!