PEACH Exchange

[Jeff the Green]

It's not an uncommon occurrence that a piece of homebrew that someone worked for days on goes unPEACHed, which is a shame. So here's the deal. Use this thread to do one of three things:

Post links to one or more of your homebrew that you would like PEACHed.
Offer to PEACH a piece of homebrew someone has already posted in exchange for PEACHing a piece of your own homebrew.
Agree to or decline an offer of PEACH exchange.


Sound like a good idea?

I'll start us off with three 3.5 prestige classes I wrote recently as part of a triptych:

Faerie Champion (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263845), a class for warrior-types who want to devote themselves to serving a Faerie Lord in exchange for power.
Faerie Court Mage (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263847), a class for spellcasters who want to use the powers of faerie to enhance their own magic.
Faerie-Thrall Liberator (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263848), a class for anyone who wishes to combat fey and rescue those who were kidnapped by them.

[Sherishade]

Hello ya I was thinking the same thing, this is a good idea.

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think. So here's my link and I'll leave my comments on your original homebrew posts ^^

Dark Inheritor (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263835)

[Jormengand]

Hello ya I was thinking the same thing, this is a good idea.

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think. So here's my link and I'll leave my comments on your original homebrew posts ^^

Dark Inheritor (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263835)

On it. If you could do either/both of the things in my sig that'd be great.

[Zman]

Just gave a basic PEACH for Dark Inheritor prior to seeing this thread.


Here is my Dragon Ascendant Base Class (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14343476#post14343476)

[AmberVael]

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think.

You're right! PEACH stands for Please Evaluate And Criticize Honestly.
Or something along those lines. It has been a while since I've seen the acronym spelled out in full, so I'm too cautious to say it with 100% certainty, but I'll give it 90% confidence. :smalltongue:

I'm actually in the process of writing up a new set of invocations (9 out of 12 complete thus far), I may toss a link here once I have them done.

[Jormengand]

Just gave a basic PEACH for Dark Inheritor prior to seeing this thread.


Here is my Dragon Ascendant Base Class (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14343476#post14343476)

I'll have a look. Again, PEACHes on the Honour Guard PF class and Descend Into Madness game system (in my sig) would be appreciated.

[Grod_The_Giant]

I'll trade you a look at your system for a look at mine. (STaRS, in my sig)

[scarmiglionne4]

Hello ya I was thinking the same thing, this is a good idea.

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think. So here's my link and I'll leave my comments on your original homebrew posts ^^

Dark Inheritor (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263835)

I left you some feedback on the Dark Inheritor. Please check out my Enhancements (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14352092#post14352092).

[Jormengand]

I'll trade you a look at your system for a look at mine. (STaRS, in my sig)

Deal, although for all your S-ness I think mine's probably a little simpler. :p

[Grod_The_Giant]

Deal, although for all your S-ness I think mine's probably a little simpler. :p

I can always break out SuperSTaRS :smalltongue: (It's a thing)

[Jormengand]

I can always break out SuperSTaRS :smalltongue: (It's a thing)

Okaaaaay.

Anyway, consider yourself PEACHed. Clarification available on request.

[scarmiglionne4]

This thread was a good idea, but I don't think this is working as well as it could be.

[Zman]

This thread was a good idea, but I don't think this is working as would as it could be.


I agree, we need to keep it current and keep it active.

Here is my Homebrew. Dragon Ascendant Base Class (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14343476#post14343476)

[Jeff the Green]

True. Part of that is to spread the word; if you like, put it in your sig. Also, I posted PEACHes for Sherishade and Zman.

[toapat]

the problem with threads like these is that they end up being screwed by not becoming stickied.

In other news, i would like commentary on my Weapon of Destiny (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=250436) and Paladin (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14104896&postcount=1)

[Zman]

True. Part of that is to spread the word; if you like, put it in your sig. Also, I posted PEACHes for Sherishade and Zman.

And I posted for your Fairie Curt Mage and Champion classes.

[TheWombatOfDoom]

Someone interested in PEACHing my magic system in exchange for me PEACHing them? It's got a tad bit of reading, but I love how it's turning out. The Second Post (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263481) comprimises the magic portion of things, and you can ignore pretty much anything else in the other sections. Be aware it's a setting mechanics, not game mechanics.

Any takers?

[Jormengand]

Someone interested in PEACHing my magic system in exchange for me PEACHing them? It's got a tad bit of reading, but I love how it's turning out. The second post comprimises the magic portion of things, and you can ignore pretty much anything else in the other sections.

Any takers?

Give me a link, and go peach Descend Into Madness (in my sig).

[TheWombatOfDoom]

Give me a link, and go peach Descend Into Madness (in my sig).

Oops, meant to link that.... Post 2 (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263481)

Alright, I look into it. :) No promises on today being PEACHed, but soon.

[GoddessSune]

In other news, i would like commentary on my Weapon of Destiny (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=250436) and Paladin (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14104896&postcount=1)

How do we reply? post on this thread?

[Jormengand]

How do we reply? post on this thread?

Go "Yes, I'll have a look, but would you look at [whatever] for me?" on this thread, then actually do the evaluation on the separate thread.

[Grelna the Blue]

It's not an uncommon occurrence that a piece of homebrew that someone worked for days on goes unPEACHed, which is a shame. So here's the deal. Use this thread to do one of three things:

Post links to one or more of your homebrew that you would like PEACHed.
Offer to PEACH a piece of homebrew someone has already posted in exchange for PEACHing a piece of your own homebrew.
Agree to or decline an offer of PEACH exchange.


Sound like a good idea?

I'll start us off with three 3.5 prestige classes I wrote recently as part of a triptych:

Faerie Champion (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263845), a class for warrior-types who want to devote themselves to serving a Faerie Lord in exchange for power.
Faerie Court Mage (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263847), a class for spellcasters who want to use the powers of faerie to enhance their own magic.
Faerie-Thrall Liberator (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263848), a class for anyone who wishes to combat fey and rescue those who were kidnapped by them.


I just looked over and critiqued (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14368470&postcount=4) the Faerie Court Mage (like it a lot, btw). Anyone feel like giving some feedback on the design of the 5th level spell I just posted: Sun Scarabs (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=264220)?

[scarmiglionne4]

Jormengand, I PEACHed your Descend Into Madness.
Grelna, I PEACHED Sun Scarabs.

Links in my signature.

[Hanuman]

Links in my signature.

PEACH'd grit rules.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=153536

Working on an organ feature, the newest draft is as the back. Appreciate some feedback on expanding it and getting it polished. Lots of stuff to write.

[scarmiglionne4]

PEACH'd grit rules.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=153536

Working on an organ feature, the newest draft is as the back. Appreciate some feedback on expanding it and getting it polished. Lots of stuff to write.

I had seen this before you PEACHed my work. I didn't know what to say about it. I cannot say I have ever seen anything like it. ALthough it does sort of remind me of Zato from Guilty Gear.

It seems to be balanced well. I can honestly say I would have no interest in playing an Ozodrin. It is a little aberrant and chaotic for me, but I suppose that is the point, right? I wish I could offer a better critique, but I am just at a loss.

Anything else you need critiqued?

[Iamyourking]

I reviewed the Faerie Champion and am now looking for someone to critique Sons of the Fallen (in my signature). I'm willing to do more if they get posted, but so far most of them have already received more or less what I would say.

[Jeff the Green]

Okay. Everyone has pretty much ignored my original guidelines, which is fine, since they probably would have made things too cumbersome. The way it is now, though, may result in PEACH moochers without some sort of karma system. Would y'all prefer an explicit karma (probably PEACH given : PEACH received or PEACH given : PEACH requested ratios) that is kept on the first post, or an informal, generalized karma of not bothering to PEACH someone who has requested plenty of PEACHes and not given many back but without an official count?

And partially to remind myself, I owe PEACHes to Iamyourking and Grelna the Blue. If anyone else wants to PEACH the Faerie-Thrall Liberator (in my sig), I'd appreciate it since the only PEACH it's received was a generalized "maybe too powerful" one.

[Hanuman]

I had seen this before you PEACHed my work. I didn't know what to say about it. I cannot say I have ever seen anything like it. ALthough it does sort of remind me of Zato from Guilty Gear.

It seems to be balanced well. I can honestly say I would have no interest in playing an Ozodrin. It is a little aberrant and chaotic for me, but I suppose that is the point, right? I wish I could offer a better critique, but I am just at a loss.

Anything else you need critiqued?

Not at the moment, Kellus and I are thinking of whipping something up, and I will need a LOT of playtest for a project I've been ramping up after that. If you're interested in doing some early testing or critique shoot me a message and I'll leave it checked unread and I'll alert you when I need some freedback off the pre-release draft.

[Zman]

Did a quick PEACH on Faerie Thrall Liberator.

Still looking for more imput in my Dragon Ascendant (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263558)

[Tanuki Tales]

I would appreciate any PEACHing for my Limber Ones. I'd like to finally close the door on them so that I can move on to my next Project G entry.

I'll gladly give PEACHes in return, as I'm able.

[Iamyourking]

I gave the Limber Ones a look, and I think you'd be safe calling them finished. I also looked at the Dragon Ascendant, but didn't find anything that really caught my attention; although it certainly isn't bad.

[scarmiglionne4]

@ Troll Brau I looked at you Limber Ones and I think it is perfect. I did not leave anything on that thread because I don't think you should change anything else at this point that has not already been suggested.

[Zman]

Limber Ones look very polished. I can't see any problems. Well done.

[Tanuki Tales]

Thank you three for your feedback. :smallsmile:

King and Scar, I've left my comments in your threads. Zman, I'll be getting to your Dragon Ascendant when I can in the next few days.

[Cipher Stars]

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=264831

Anything for me to look at in exchange :3?

And I'm trading for PEACHes, not sour apples :smallmad:

[scarmiglionne4]

@Cipherthe3vil
I did my best offer you some PEACHes on you Naturally Sacred Something. If you found my critique adequate you may PEACH anything in my signature.

[Cipher Stars]

@Cipherthe3vil
I did my best offer you some PEACHes on you Naturally Sacred Something. If you found my critique adequate you may PEACH anything in my signature.

I've looked through your stuff. I have nothing more to add, nothing I see wrong with it, or I'm not experienced enough to help with the something, like paths.

[inuyasha]

I would like a PEACH for my Cthulu stats I made a while back using Bhu's kaiju template
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=13500777#post13500777

and here is bhu's template

http://community.wizards.com/go/thread/view/75882/19547202/Weekly_Monster_Thread?pg=96

P.S. please tell me if you think my homebrew sucks, I want honest answers
P.S.S Bhu if your reading this I am a huge fan of all your work

[Iamyourking]

Ok, done. I guess you can PEACH Sons of the Fallen if you think you have something constructive to add, but don't bother if you can't; I'd just like to encourage new homebrewers and show them where they went wrong.

[AttilaTheGeek]

I'm looking for a PEACH or two on my Lightning Bloodline for Sorcerers. It's an attempt to add new options and combat spells to the blasty caster.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14398903&postcount=1

I'll also check out those Cthulhu stats, those seem cool.

[Durksmurf]

Please PEACH my sig and I'll return the favor and more.

[Cipher Stars]

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14404038#post14404038

[Durksmurf]

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14404038#post14404038

Hey want to PEACH exchange? I'm up for it.

[AttilaTheGeek]

I think this is a great thread, especially for new homebrewers, and I'd hate to see it fall into disuse. I'm going to start it back up again with a PEACH request for my Elementalist (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14451580) class.

[Frathe]

Attila--I'll PEACH your Elementalist if you PEACH my crystalline creature template (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266074).

[AmberVael]

If anyone is interested, I'd like to have some more feedback on my latest invocation set. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265919)

[SirAxealot]

I'd like some comments on this class I've been working on, the Blackthorn Savage. It's a sort of mix of Druid, barbarian, and martial initiator

Before you do review it, be aware that 1) it is very much a work in progress 2) it is probably going to be tier 1 when we're done with it. After all, anyone playing a druid needs a reason to not take straight druid or planar shepherd.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265023

[Deepbluediver]

I recently posted a monk fix (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266147), that I would love some feedback on. It's quite extensive (i.e. long and complex) so I will try and PEACH several people's work in this thread, and hope that they can all drop a small comment or two in mine.


I think this is a great thread, especially for new homebrewers, and I'd hate to see it fall into disuse. I'm going to start it back up again with a PEACH request for my Elementalist (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14451580) class.

I've given a few thoughts in to your elementalist. I'll try to work through the most recent posters in order, though if anyone reviews my monk I'll bump them to the top of the list.



Attila--I'll PEACH your Elementalist if you PEACH my crystalline creature template (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266074).

Left a few comments on your crystaline creature template.

[WaylanderX]

If somebody wants to PEACH my Delirionist (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265575), especially the spell section, I would be thrilled. Just give me a PM with that you want to have PEACHed in return. ^^

[JoshuaZ]

Some PEACHING of my Forsaken Blade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265912) would be greatly appreciated.

[AttilaTheGeek]

This thread is now so full of cool new homebrew, I can't keep up!


Attila--I'll PEACH your Elementalist if you PEACH my crystalline creature template (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266074).

Done. Looks awesome.



If anyone is interested, I'd like to have some more feedback on my latest invocation set. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265919)

I am almost done with a PEACH of your invocations. However, I don't usually play 3.5, nature-related classes, or warlocks, so take my comments with a several grains of salt.


I'd like some comments on this class I've been working on, the Blackthorn Savage.

I've taken a glance at it, and it seems interesting, but I don't want to skip Vael and leave him in the lurch. I'm going to look at it more in depth later tonight.

After that, I'll leave some comments on Deep's monk, Waylander's Delerionist, and Joshua's Forsaken Blade.

I'm also looking for some comments on my Rune Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14458379) archetype (ACF) for Pathfinder's magus (http://paizo.com/pathfinderRPG/prd/ultimateMagic/spellcasters/magus.html).

[Razanir]

(Hope this isn't thread necro yet)

I'm making (more or less) a PF rebalance (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=267407). Peaches are welcome, both the fruit and the acronym.

[Jeff the Green]

(Hope this isn't thread necro yet)

I'm making (more or less) a PF rebalance (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=267407). Peaches are welcome, both the fruit and the acronym.

Nope, not necroing yet. Only if a thread has been dead for six weeks is it necromancy. As 'tis, it's resuccitation. :smallsmile:

Alas, never having played PF, I can't give a meaningful critique of yours, but I'm sure someone else can.

Also, a note, I finally PEACHed Grelna's spell. I also looked over Iamyourking's Sons of the Fallen, but I couldn't think of anything to say other than "that's awesome," which is too close to spam for my taste.

If anyone wants to, I'm still open to critiques of the three classes in my signature (or any of the ones in my extended sig, though those are past the necromancy date). I'm working on another triptych of classes at the moment, this time of theurges, which I hope will be done soon, but needing to come up with brand new abilities for every official vestige is killing me.

[Iamyourking]

Well, I wouldn't consider it to be spam if you noted which parts you found to be especially awesome; because if I know what people like I can build on it and make it even more awesome.

[Nightgaun7]

Still looking for input on the Blackthorn Savage, a druid/barbarian/martial initiator. SirAxealot and I have been working on some changes already, but they're not up yet.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265023

Also looking for input on a new discipline, Frenzied Beast.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=267279

Be aware that these are both very much WIP, since we are both relatively new to this.

[Razanir]

Update on my rebalance– The shaman is now posted. It's a cross between druids and barbarians. I'd greatly appreciate someone stopping by and PEACH'ing it. And yes, I realize there are dead levels. Feel free to suggest ideas for how to fill them. One note, however– Spell lists are coming later once I have the classes otherwise written.

[Deepbluediver]

Meant to get back to this sooner, but I've unexpectedly busy. Still plan to try and PEACH more of this as promised.

My comments on the Blackthorn Savage are up, since it seemed the easiest to start with. I've got a barbarian fix I've been meaning to type up. If I get that done within the next weak maybe I can trade it for a Peach of the Frenzied Beast Discipline (which sounds odd right off the bat; maybe we need some word other than "Discipline" to describe it)

I'll try to get to Vael's invocations tonight yet (no one hold their breath). I've scanned over WaylanderX's crazy-magic class, and the concept is so odd I'm not exactly where to start. Maybe I can post something by mid week though.
And JoshuaZ's post is a PrC that is partially based on other Homebrew. I will need to knock the rust off of my ToB skills before I dig into that one.


Edit: Have PEACHed the Invocations (furry creatures huzzah!)

[AttilaTheGeek]

Raz, I'm an avid Pathfinder player; I'll PEACH your rebalance if you check out my Rune Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266101) magus archetype?

(actually, I was going to look at it anyway, because it seems interesting)

[Razanir]

Raz, I'm an avid Pathfinder player; I'll PEACH your rebalance if you check out my Rune Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266101) magus archetype?

(actually, I was going to look at it anyway, because it seems interesting)

Sure. Don't be surprised though if my comments are more what looks good/bad and a complementary spelling and grammar check

[Zireael]

I want this (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265279) homebrew system P.E.A.C.H.ed, in exchange I'll P.E.A.C.H. anything that's D&D 3.5 or Pathfinder.

Already P.E.A.C.H.ed Frenzied Beast and Blackthorn Savage.

[Amoren]

Hey, I'd love to hear some advice/critiques/PEACHness of the Homebrew class in my signature (The Nightblade), particually since its my first real fleshed out homebrew class attempt, and I'm still worried about certain aspects of it (particularly the later levels not being desirable enough to go a full 20 levels compared to jumping ship with a prestige class).

I'm a bit busy at the moment, but I'll be glad to take a look at anyone elses work in exchange sometime soonish. :)

[Mephibosheth]

Hey! Here's a PEACH (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14531864&postcount=13) of nightblade. I hope the comments are helpful and accrue me some of that good karma people were talking about :smallwink:! I'm planning on going through some more pieces of homebrew as I have time.

If someone could take a look at my skiprider's of the icy sea (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=267668) PrC, I'd very much appreciate it.

[AttilaTheGeek]

My comments on SirAxeAlot's Blackthorn Savage and Razar's PF Rebalance are up. Still looking for responses to my Rune Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14455807).

[Amoren]

Alright, I've done a lot of touches upon the Nightblade, changing and simplifying class features, and also filling in the lore and fluff sections at the start of the post. once more, I'm also free to help PEACH anyone else's homebrew now. :)

[Razanir]

I'll get to PEACH'ing the Rune Knight tomorrow afternoon. Two notes:
1) When I PEACH, I proofread, comment on what I do and don't like, and point out anything that seems broken. Don't expect me to look for balance
2) My homebrew system is still up for PEACH. It's in my sig. Tomorrow when I have free time, I'll be clarifying a bunch of stuff with the magic system itself, and adding shaman totems

[readordie18]

Looking for some PEACH's for my enchanted gambler class,
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268294
I'll be more then willing to reply to anything you link after your description, I'll likely due so within the fallowing day or so.
Just did a review of Amoren's Nightblade, over all I feel it's very playable.

[Deepbluediver]

I have completed my review of WaylanderX's Delirionist.

If some one doesn't want to tackle the review for an entire class, I have a some Revised Combat Manuevers (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=249818) and new Combat Style Feat (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=267778) chains posted.

PM with what you would like PEACHed in return.


I'd also like to give everyone some advice: lots of posters are leaving links, but I think more people need to step up and review things first, rather than waiting for some one else to take the initiative.
PEACH any number of the links provided, mention how you found the homebrew (it helps direct more people to this thread) and PM them when complete.

And one more thing, make sure you put some effort into it. A single line saying "Yeah this looks OK" is about as useless as you can get. Be specific about what you like or don't like, or what may not work well.
If it's terrible, suggest ways to fix it.
If it's overpowered, suggest ways to tone it down.
If you think something is perfect, as rare as that is, explain why.


Thank you very much for reading, have a nice day.

[Zireael]

I've P.E.A.C.H.ed Faerie Champion, I'll do the same to Faerie Court Mage if I get any comments on my entry to the exchange.

[WaylanderX]

PEACHed DeepblueDiver's Monk fix, will maybe add a few things later, but nothing major.

[CinuzIta]

Hi, I'd like to have some peaches, suggestions etc on my new base class for D&D 3.5, the Ghost Rider (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268521) (name not confirmed, may be Diabolical Rider or something like that):smallsmile:

Edit- Peached Nightblade

[JeminiZero]

Hi, I'd like to have some peaches, suggestions etc on my new base class for D&D 3.5, the Ghost Rider (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268521) (name not confirmed, may be Diabolical Rider or something like that):smallsmile:

PEACH (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14566687&postcount=2) given. A lot of clarification needed.

[CinuzIta]

PEACH (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14566687&postcount=2) given. A lot of clarification needed.

Thank you! As you have seen, suggestions were really needed:)

[Zireael]

I P.E.A.C.H.ed Ghost Rider, still waiting on input on my homebrew...

[bobthe6th]

Looking for some PEACH's for my enchanted gambler class,
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268294
I'll be more then willing to reply to anything you link after your description, I'll likely due so within the fallowing day or so.
Just did a review of Amoren's Nightblade, over all I feel it's very playable.

Gah... PEACH/edited.

Mind looking at my Razor?

[Gnomes2169]

I'll just throw this PEACH (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268605) in here while I look around at the things you guys have created...

[PairO'Dice Lost]

I've PEACHed Deepbluediver's combat style feats and I can probably get to Zireael's stuff if I have time later today.

As for what I'd like critiqued, my Divine Champion is languishing un-PEACHed and could use a look.

[AttilaTheGeek]

I've just made a whole bunch of huge changes to my Rune Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14455807). The Divine Champion seems really interesting- I'll be sure to check it out.

[Trodon]

Requesting a PEACH for my Monk class. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268699) I'll gladly PEACH something in return, however I can't promise anything regards to balance, although I'll try.

[Gnomes2169]

Divine champion got a short PEACH, I should be around to add more later.

[CinuzIta]

Any peach on my new faery race?

Also, I'm looking for some other peach on the Ghost Rider (and if anyone has a good suggestion for a cap ability for these class, please inform me!)

You can find links to both in my signature!

[Deepbluediver]

I've now peached both the Nightblade and the Divine Champion. I've got some very good feeback from everything so far, but by now I'm feeling both happy with most of my homebrew, and a little worn out. Until I get around to writing up something else significant, if anyone wants to exchange 'brews, please send me a PM first.

[Zireael]

PairO'DiceLost, I'd love to see your comments ;)

[JoshuaZ]

If anyone has time, I'd appreciate a PEACHINg of my Stance Master (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268421)

[Jormengand]

If anyone has time, I'd appreciate a PEACHINg of my Stance Master (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268421)

I'm on it.

If you could have a go at the Honour Guard in my sig that'd be nice, but what I really want PEACHED is the Mechanical Warrior, (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=269287) even though it's a work in progress.

EDIT: Rune knight is getting a PEACH too, if you'd be so kind as to return it?

[Iamyourking]

Just a reminder that Sons of the Fallen is still open for review.

[Jormengand]

Just a reminder that Sons of the Fallen is still open for review.

Re-link, and I'll have a look. If you could do the mechanical warrior that'd be great.

EDIT: Ah, your sig. Oh well.

[PairO'Dice Lost]

PairO'DiceLost, I'd love to see your comments ;)

I'm looking it over now, PEACH incoming.

[AttilaTheGeek]

EDIT: Rune knight is getting a PEACH too, if you'd be so kind as to return it?

I certainly would. I'm partway through it right now, just thought I'd let you know.

[Maquise]

I'd like my Psychanuan (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14619078#post14619078) monster PEACHed.

[Jormengand]

I certainly would. I'm partway through it right now, just thought I'd let you know.

Cool, thanks.

[AttilaTheGeek]

Re-plugging my Rune Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=266101). I'm going to be playing it in the 3.5/PF homebrew playtest game (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=267671), so I'm looking for some more feedback before I roll up a character, so I don't have to retcon too much stuff.

[SirAxealot]

Just a quick update on the Blackthorn Savage (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265023)

We've redone things a bit, and would appreciate some feedback on it. Both of us are pretty busy but we've appreciated the feedback so far and are busy tinkering away when we get the time.

For anyone who hasn't looked at it yet, it's a combination of Druid, Barbarian, and Martial Initiator. Yes it is a bit full-on! But take a look : )

PS: I've taken a look at some of the other projects of people that responded in our thread, but I fear I'm not experienced enough to comment purposefully : /

[Zireael]

I'd love to see some P.E.A.C.H on Deus Ex homebrew RPG (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270235).

So far, I need some questions answered. Basic rules, skills and combat rules are already partially done, but not yet ready for posting.

***
P.E.A.C.H.ed the new version of Blackthorn Savage.

[Jormengand]

I'd love to see some P.E.A.C.H on Deus Ex homebrew RPG (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270235).

So far, I need some questions answered. Basic rules, skills and combat rules are already partially done, but not yet ready for posting.

Aye, it's done. Mech Warrior (in my sig) is still there.

[Zireael]

Mechanical Warrior P.E.A.C.H.ed.

[Plato Play-Doh]

I'd love it if I could get the Commander (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270065) PEACHed. I'm not exactly an expert by any stretch of the imagination, but I'd be happy to give feedback to the extent of my ability to any other threads.

Edit: I've responded a bit to Zireael's Deus Ex thread. Would look at Mech Warrior, but I'm not really familiar with Pathfinder.

[Jormengand]

I'd love it if I could get the Commander (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270065) PEACHed. I'm not exactly an expert by any stretch of the imagination, but I'd be happy to give feedback to the extent of my ability to any other threads.

Edit: I've responded a bit to Zireael's Deus Ex thread. Would look at Mech Warrior, but I'm not really familiar with Pathfinder.

It's almost exactly the same as 3.5.

[Plato Play-Doh]

OK, then I'll take a look!

[Zireael]

I'd love it if I could get the Commander (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270065) PEACHed. I'm not exactly an expert by any stretch of the imagination, but I'd be happy to give feedback to the extent of my ability to any other threads.

Edit: I've responded a bit to Zireael's Deus Ex thread. Would look at Mech Warrior, but I'm not really familiar with Pathfinder.

P.E.A.C.H.ed the Commander, and thanks for replying!

[killer_monk]

I'd really appreciate if somebody who has played the NEXT play-test packet could take a look. I know that that is kind of a big thing to ask for a PEACH on but i'd hate to see the work i put into this class go to waste-http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=269888

If anybody could just say something other than their hate for Next i'd really appreciate it!

Also, PEACHed the Rune Knight.

[CinuzIta]

Hi again. I'd like to have some suggestion and peaches on these one

Nanto and Hokuto fighting styles (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14644903#post14644903)

[Zireael]

I'd peach Nanto, but I don't know a thing about the Japanese martial combat you're trying to emulate.

I need more PEACH on my Deus Ex, as I've taken the replies into consideration and posted a bit about movement and equipment.

[Plato Play-Doh]

I'm pretty much done with the commander, so I don't think I really need any more PEACHing to that. If anyone is willing to PEACH the Eldritch Outcast (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270265), that would be great, though!

Also, I have replied to Nanto/Hokuto.

[Belial_the_Leveler]

Requesting PEACH for the Blood Maiden, a vampiric nymph for Pathfinder. It is mostly a specific character rather than homebrew, given that 90% she follows the standard rules.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270349


I'm willing to PEACH any homebrew creatures.

[Zireael]

Peached both Eldritch Outcast and Blood Maiden.

In need of PEACH for Deus Ex RPG, as I've updated it and I need help to work out some kinks...

[killer_monk]

PEACHed eldritch outcast, blood maiden, deus ex rpg and rune knight. I still severely need help with my Demon Slayer. mostly in checking for loop-holes and and for too many skills.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=269888

[Zireael]

I'm afraid I can't help with the Demon Slayer, I don't know enough of D&D N.

I need input when it comes to Deus Ex, I've added equipment and character creation.

[TheWombatOfDoom]

If anyone would be interested in a longer read, I'd like some more PEACH on my magic system - http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=263481

The body at the moment is in the second post.

[killer_monk]

@WombatofDoom: what's the name of your novel? and it's looking pretty good!

Still need a general consensus on me Demon Slayer for Next. Next is kinda like a mix of 2e and 3.5e if that helps...http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=269888

[TheWombatOfDoom]

@WombatofDoom: what's the name of your novel? and it's looking pretty good!

Still need a general consensus on me Demon Slayer for Next. Next is kinda like a mix of 2e and 3.5e if that helps...http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=269888

Thanks! The working title is "The Hawk Brothers of Andoria" but I don't have the actual one yet. I just worked a lot on fate and luck last night, so know that I'll have much more PEACH needed soon.

I don't suppose you have any questions, ideas, so on on the system?

As for Next, I'm not familiar with it at all. :/

[Zireael]

A timeline for the Deus Ex RPG is up, so I could use some PEACH.

[Belial_the_Leveler]

PEACHed Eldritch Outcast and Demon Slayer.



PEACH requested for my Judgement Archon;
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14677396#post14677396



Also, if anyone has creatures or templates or NPCs to PEACH, those are my specialty.

[killer_monk]

Thanks! The working title is "The Hawk Brothers of Andoria" but I don't have the actual one yet. I just worked a lot on fate and luck last night, so know that I'll have much more PEACH needed soon.

I don't suppose you have any questions, ideas, so on on the system?

As for Next, I'm not familiar with it at all. :/

I left some stuff for you to check out! And best of luck with your novel! As for my Demon Slayer, I'm really just getting people who tell me about my dead levels. So it's no biggy. But thanks anyways!

[Zireael]

Judgement Archon PEACHed.

[Zireael]

I've added several very specific questions to my Deus Ex thread, and I need answers ASAP while I work on Skills.

[Zman]

Looking for PEACHes of my Zman's DnD 3.5 Overhaul. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showpost.php?p=14687166&postcount=1)

Yes, it's pretty large, I promise reciprocal peaches to the best of my knowledge in return.

[Gnomes2169]

Alright, new class guys. Will someone please PEACH my Vita Dominus (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270967) class?

[Zireael]

Zman, I'll try to give more PEACH on your overhaul today.

[bobthe6th]

Ye Gods, the Dominus is filled with words.


If you would PEACH the telikenetist in my sig that would be cool.

[CinuzIta]

Hello, I'd like to have some suggestions/opinions on my Legionary (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=272491) prestige class. I'll now check these thread to see if I can peach something!

[TuggyNE]

So, I resurrected one of my older homebrews to see if I could garner some critiques: Persevering Spell metamagic. Also, Equalization is new and has no comments.

Gonna try to run through the Legionary and Telekineticist.

[Plato Play-Doh]

I've peached persevering spell. I would like to have the noble in my signature peached.

[Maquise]

Given the Noble class a lookover, made a suggestion.

Would like some ideas on how to turn the Psychanuan Drone (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14619078#post14619078) into a more powerful melee variant.

[Jeff the Green]

Okay, I've PEACHed Vita Dominus, Persevering Spell, Equalization, and the Psychanuan.

I'd appreciate it if anyone would PEACH the theurge triptych of Twice-Bound Soul, Inspired Inventor, and/or Nightwearer, in my signature. Particularly the first two, since I'm having trouble with certain parts of those (see the author note at the top).

[DracoDei]

Alright, new class guys. Will someone please PEACH my Vita Dominus (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=270967) class?
I am in the process of reviewing this. Have posted, edited in more, and plan to post/edit in more.

. Also, Equalization is new and has no comments.
I PEACHED this.


I could use PEACH of my low-angst, non-evil, low LA vampire variant template, the Eripmav (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=260051). Yes, I know the name is cheesy, but there is a very good reason I am using it. Not that I couldn't be talked into changing it for D&D purposes, but I did justify it.

There have been comments on this thread, but next to nothing that actually said anything about the template itself, other than something that was more about my homebrewing style in general (and which I provided a fix for) than to do with the template itself.

Going to go ahead and bump it...

[Maquise]

Peached Inspired Inventor. Would like a PEACH of my finished Psychanuan Warrior. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14619078#post14619078)

[Plato Play-Doh]

Done with the Noble. It would be nice to get the system in my signature PEACHed.

[Belial_the_Leveler]

PEACHed:
Concentration Metamagic, Deep fey, Equalization, Persevering Spell.

Requesting PEACH:
Greater Succubus; http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=274619

[Tesla]

Just posted in the Inspired Inventor thread, and Plato's system thread.

I could use some critique on the Zealous Scholar (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=274171).

Thank you very much.

[Belial_the_Leveler]

Seeing as I'm not seeing any PEACH on the Greater Succubus, I am requestiong PEACH for the Generic Fighter:
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=274874

[Grindle]

Will someone PEACH the redone version of the Detective (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=271469&page=2)?

[Jeff the Green]

Seeing as I'm not seeing any PEACH on the Greater Succubus, I am requestiong PEACH for the Generic Fighter:
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=274874

Be patient, it's only been a few days. As soon as I have time (tomorrow?) I'm going to go through and PEACH most of the things that have been posted since I did last and request more PEACHes of my own.

[DracoDei]

Just so nobody thinks I am falling down on my share of things, I will quote the end of a series of PMs I had with Gnomes2169 today.

Don't particularly need you to PEACH the rest, but I do appreciate what you have done. You are actually rather good at critiquing others' creations, and I found your advice rather helpful, I just seriously don't have time to work on it right now.

I'll be sure to shoot you a message when I get around to editing things, in case you still want to see version 2.0.

Admittedly it did take me a while to start this series of PMs after I had posted a partial PEACH, but I didn't want to triple-post and several other people have already PEACHed it by the time I got there.

[Jeff the Green]

I PEACHed the Psychanauan Warrior, the Detective, and the Zealous Scholar. I'm still looking on input on the three theurges in my signature, but as the Nightwearer hasn't seen any love (and I'm in the middle of revising the other two based on feedback), that's the specific one I'd like to see PEACHed.

(Oh, and if you PEACHed me and I didn't return the favor, PM me or mention it in your next request; I've been a little scatterbrained lately.)

[Empedocles]

Anyone for my proteus (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=238419)? Working on any homebrew right now would really help me kickstart the creative process a bit. Willing to PEACH whatever you need feedback on.

[DracoDei]

I'd PEACH the Nightwearer, but I don't feel I know enough about incarnum.

[Empedocles]

Will someone PEACH the redone version of the Detective (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=271469&page=2)?

Peached! :smallsmile: I'd appreciate feedback on my proteus though

[Jeff the Green]

I did the Proteus, hopefully it helps. If you feel like it, the nightwearer in my sig could use some attention. :smallsmile:

[Maquise]

I would help with Nightwearer, but I don't know anything about incarnum.

[Nightgaun7]

Working on the Bladesinger (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14903601#post14903601).

I'd be happy to take a look at other people's stuff, but I fear I'm not experienced enough to give a whole lot of feedback of my own.

[Waker]

I'm still looking on input on the three theurges in my signature, but as the Nightwearer hasn't seen any love (and I'm in the middle of revising the other two based on feedback), that's the specific one I'd like to see PEACHed.

Made a few suggestions for your Inventor and Nightwearer. Wouldn't object to you taking a peak at my Mage Scholar, link in my signature.

[DracoDei]

Still at Con, but on laptop for once.

Checking in to say that I got some P.E.A.C.H. going on the Eripmav, independent of this thread.

More would be welcome of course.

[anacalgion]

Peach my Shadowlord (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=276501)? Its my first bit of homebrew, so all ideas are appreciated. I'll peach anything people want me to, but it might take me a bit to get around to it.

[Maquise]

PEACHED Proteus, Shadowlord. Looked at Bladesinger.

Just posted the last of the psychanuan (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14619078#post14619078). Probably needs the most work done.

[bobthe6th]

Peach my Shadowlord (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=276501)? Its my first bit of homebrew, so all ideas are appreciated. I'll peach anything people want me to, but it might take me a bit to get around to it.

Done. Mind PEACHing the Razor?

[anacalgion]

Not at all. Let me fix up what you mentioned and then I'll get right on it.

[DracoDei]

Going to post something I said in a PM to someone who was requesting PEACH from me, but said that he didn't know enough about either PEACHing, or Homebrew/balance/enjoyability to PEACH in return.


If your problem is NOT (or not ONLY) with discerning game balance/playability in the work of others, here is something that may help. For ideas on discerning balance, look in the "Formerly Stickied Threads" thread of the homebrew forum, and look for the "How to Homebrew" and "Philosophy of Homebrewing"... plus read a lot of Homebrew threads and/or balance discussions in the other areas of the forum.

My general advice for giving PEACH:
Consider carefully whether to read other people's comments (if any) before critiquing. A completely fresh perspective can help, but so can considering the ideas of others.


Be specific as you can afford the time to be. List specific abilities at least, and maybe go through and quote each part you are commenting on, or even the specific phrases.

Being specific has two main parts to it, what you say, and where you direct it.

First part: For instance, try to avoid simply saying something is overpowered. Give a reason it is overpowered, and if necessary, a specific example from play that you make up (or from actual play-test data if you do that). Also, whenever you say something needs to be changed, it is EVEN BETTER to be specific about how it should be changed. For instance, a lot of times people say my work needs to be "clarified". Which is something I can't usually do (maybe short of adding a play example, but that adds a LOT of words). I write things as clearly as I know how the first time. Which brings me to a side-point: People also say I should "simplify" things. Sometimes this falls under "clarify" (see previous sentence), but sometimes it is just something I am flat-out not willing to do, except MAYBE as a separate version of the homebrew. The lesson for critiquers here is to be at peace with having your advice rejected.


The second part: Be specific about what part you are critiquing with each thing that you say by quoting the post with the work in it, then closing the quotation right after the first part you want to comment on, then hitting enter twice, and pasting in the FULL opening quotation (or just opening it without a reference in the forum code if you are feeling really lazy). Then copy the closing, blank line, and opening. Keep this in your copy buffer as much as possible so you can insert it where necessary before starting each of your individual comments. Use those blank lines to start each comment. Delete any parts that are at least a paragraph (or three sentences) long of the stuff you are quoting that aren't necessary for other people to understand your quotes. If you do this in the middle of a quote, replace the missing part with <SNIP> which is NOT a forum code, but just lets people know that you removed stuff.


Lastly, really good critique should be a several part dialogue. The original work and the initial critique will usually be the longest parts, but check back occasionally to see if anything was said about your critique.


Should I post this in its own thread?

[Maquise]

Been a couple days, and I haven't heard anything yet on my Hive Master (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14619078#post14619078).

[Nightgaun7]

Been a couple days, and I haven't heard anything yet on my Hive Master (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=14619078#post14619078).

I took a look and posted my thoughts.

Did you have any thoughts on the Bladesinger (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=275933) when you looked at it? I made some revisions, and I'm working on some more now.

[Waker]

Did you have any thoughts on the Bladesinger (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=275933) when you looked at it? I made some revisions, and I'm working on some more now.
Critiqued your Bladesinger. Wouldn't object to someone taking a peek at either my Meister or Mage Scholar. Preferably my Meister.

[Gotterdammerung]

Great idea O.P.

Here is my P.E.A.C.H.
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273431

It is also in my sig.

I am currently playing a home-brewed wind adaption of the Dragonfire adept/warlock style of casting. I am fleshing out an incomplete skill, and hope to have it complete b4 I actually level past what is written.

I don't frequent this sub-forum very often. So if you want me to P.E.A.C.H. something for you in exchange, then just send me a message with a link.

[Byzantine]

Looking for more opinions on my Soulless Template (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268813). I'll PEACH what I can here, need to go over the various things posted.

[Gotterdammerung]

Looking for more opinions on my Soulless Template (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=268813). I'll PEACH what I can here, need to go over the various things posted.

Ok I put in my 2 cents on your soulless template :smallsmile:


Sidenote: really pleased at the amount of incarnum support I am finding on this sub-forum. I very much enjoy incarnum and it just wasn't properly supported by first party content. I wish the forum was a little more organized for ease of perusal.

[Tanuki Tales]

If any one could be obliged to run my Bard (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=278685) through the ringer, I'd be more than happy to throw some PEACH's back. :smallsmile:

[TheWombatOfDoom]

If any one could be obliged to run my Bard (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=278685) through the ringer, I'd be more than happy to throw some PEACH's back. :smallsmile:

Tanuki! I'll PEACH that when I get back from my weekend. I won't give you something to PEACH until then, however. :smallwink:

[DracoDei]

I had around my "Full to bursting" mailbox, so I am going to dump it here so I can delete the message that includes a quote of where I originally wrote it.

Well, if your problem is NOT (or not ONLY) with discerning game balance/playability in the work of others, here is something that may help. For ideas on discerning balance, look in the "Formerly Stickied Threads" thread of the homebrew forum, and look for the "How to Homebrew" and "Philosophy of Homebrewing"... plus read a lot of Homebrew threads and/or balance discussions in the other areas of the forum.

My general advice for giving PEACH:
Consider carefully whether to read other people's comments (if any) before critiquing. A completely fresh perspective can help, but so can considering the ideas of others.


Be specific as you can afford the time to be. List specific abilities at least, and maybe go through and quote each part you are commenting on, or even the specific phrases.

Being specific has two main parts to it, what you say, and where you direct it.

First part: For instance, try to avoid saying something is overpowered. Give a reason it is overpowered, and if necessary, a specific example from play that you make up (or from actual play-test data if you do that). Also, whenever you say something needs to be changed, it is EVEN BETTER to be specific about how it should be changed. For instance, a lot of times people say my work needs to be "clarified". Which is something I can't usually do (maybe short of adding a play example, but that adds a LOT of words). I write things as clearly as I know how the first time. Which brings me to a side-point: People also say I should "simplify" things. Sometimes this falls under "clarify" (see previous sentence), but sometimes it is just something I am flat-out not willing to do, except MAYBE as a separate version of the homebrew. The lesson for critiquers here is to be at peace with having your advice rejected.


The second part: Be specific about what part you are critiquing with each thing that you say by quoting the post with the work in it, then closing the quotation right after the first part you want to comment on, then hitting enter twice, and pasting in the FULL opening quotation (or just opening it without a reference in the forum code if you are feeling really lazy). Then copy the closing, blank line, and opening. Keep this in your copy buffer as much as possible so you can insert it where necessary before starting each of your individual comments. Use those blank lines to start each comment. Delete any parts that are at least a paragraph (or three sentences) long of the stuff you are quoting that aren't necessary for other people to understand your quotes. If you do this in the middle of a quote, replace the missing part with <SNIP> which is NOT a forum code, but just lets people know that you removed stuff.


Lastly, really good critique should be a several part dialogue. The original work and the initial critique will usually be the longest parts, but check back occasionally to see if anything was said about your critique.

[JonathonWilder]

I was wondering if it would be possible for me to PEACH others works in exchange for them giving me advice and suggestions on some of the ideas I have in the works or questions I have asked?
-------------------------------------

Ideas/Classes that I would like help on is suggestions on a rewrite on d20 material called Colors of Magic for 3.5 to even Pathfinder: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=254519

Another is I need House Ruling Help involving the Planes and Resurrection based spells: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=15040530#post15040530

Lastly, which would lead to PEACHing I wish to put together a place involving the Shadowcraft (of Drow of Underdark) and the Shadowcraft Mage called the Shadow Weaver: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=279200

[ngilop]

Take a look at my Ninja (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=277587)please

also my samurai (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=278499)

I am aiming for 'tier' 3 for them but 'tier' 4 will suffice.

[inuyasha]

I would like my Bloodlines (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=277607) to be peached please

:)

[unbeliever536]

ngilop, I'm taking a look at your Samurai.

I'd be very happy if someone would take a look at these races (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=276913).

[inuyasha]

ngilop, I'm taking a look at your Samurai.

I'd be very happy if someone would take a look at these races (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=276913).

Ok I just replied in that thread for your races, their cool :D

[Tanuki Tales]

Tanuki! I'll PEACH that when I get back from my weekend. I won't give you something to PEACH until then, however. :smallwink:

Take your time. :smallsmile:

[NikitaDarkstar]

So I would like some feedback (PEACH?) on my 3.5 -> Pathfinder Warlock adaptation. Also this is my first homebrew attempt, so I'll do my best to PEACH back if I can, but some classes or ideas might just leave me all confused and possibly a tiny bit terrified.

Also this is not perfect yet. my main worry right now is the change to the Elemental Resistance, and if I should just go back to the "default" one and think up something else to fill that otherwise dead 16th level with.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=279270

[TheWombatOfDoom]

I was wondering if it would be possible for me to PEACH others works in exchange for them giving me advice and suggestions on some of the ideas I have in the works or questions I have asked?
-------------------------------------

Ideas/Classes that I would like help on is suggestions on a rewrite on d20 material called Colors of Magic for 3.5 to even Pathfinder: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=254519

Another is I need House Ruling Help involving the Planes and Resurrection based spells: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=15040530#post15040530

Lastly, which would lead to PEACHing I wish to put together a place involving the Shadowcraft (of Drow of Underdark) and the Shadowcraft Mage called the Shadow Weaver: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=279200

I'd bite on that! PM me and we'll talk!

[Zireael]

I'd love some feedback on my homebrew system.

[unbeliever536]

I'd love some feedback on my homebrew system.

Can we get a link?

[Zireael]

Can we get a link?

Sure: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=265279

[inuyasha]

I would like my Bloodlines (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=277607) to be peached please

:)

sorry for the repost but can I please get these peached? I really enjoy making bloodlines and I would love for these to be looked at (sorry welknair for stealin' your thing :smalleek:)

[TheWombatOfDoom]

sorry for the repost but can I please get these peached? I really enjoy making bloodlines and I would love for these to be looked at (sorry welknair for stealin' your thing :smalleek:)

While it may be Welknair's "thing", he generally welcomes people adding to the topic of bloodlines. However, he might also be someone you'd be good to have PEACH it, since you know, it is. :smallsmile:

[inuyasha]

is it just me or do I never see him around anymore though? :p

[TheWombatOfDoom]

Its true. He got eaten by running a roleplaying server on minecraft. I still see him once in awhile, but not as often indeed. Message him, i'd recommend. I speak with him often enough, I'll mention you to him!

[inuyasha]

thanks wombat :) Im going to PM him now, and if you see him tell him about me ;D

[ArcanistSupreme]

Howdy folks! If anyone would care to take a gander at my Rod of Natural Wonderment [PF] (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=279708), I'd be much obliged.

[Gotterdammerung]

sorry for the repost but can I please get these peached? I really enjoy making bloodlines and I would love for these to be looked at (sorry welknair for stealin' your thing :smalleek:)

I read through your bloodlines but I didn't feel I had anything to add. Most of them look perfectly in line with the recommendations for creating bloodlines given in the unearthed arcana. I didn't like the concept (non-race based) bloodlines just because bloodlines without blood does not compute. Sorry I couldn't be of help.

My peach is in my siggy but since I didn't actually help you out don't feel obligated.

[Gotterdammerung]

I'd be very happy if someone would take a look at these races (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=276913).

I took a look at you races unbeliever536

Could you take a look at this http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273431

[Rizban]

I'd like to get some thoughts on my classes and stuff (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273643).

I'm currently reviewing a couple of the more recent links in this thread.

[inuyasha]

I read through your bloodlines but I didn't feel I had anything to add. Most of them look perfectly in line with the recommendations for creating bloodlines given in the unearthed arcana. I didn't like the concept (non-race based) bloodlines just because bloodlines without blood does not compute. Sorry I couldn't be of help.

My peach is in my siggy but since I didn't actually help you out don't feel obligated.

The concept ones were the idea that although they arent actually based off of specific creatures, they follow the same rules as bloodlines, and have similar mechanics. Basically, you are that bloodline, you never got it from a relative, its more of a knack or a talent, you are a natural born sniper or broot, or you have a natural talent for summoning creatures. Stuff like that ;D

[Tanuki Tales]

If any one could be obliged to run my Bard (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=278685) through the ringer, I'd be more than happy to throw some PEACH's back. :smallsmile:

*polite cough*

[inuyasha]

*polite cough*

very cool I like it, I dont really have anything to say other than its much better than the musical, nagging, annoying slice of hell the PhB has :). Overall: pretty awesome :D. Im sorry :( I suck at peaching, and even though yours is cool, I dislike bards as a whole :p

could anyone peach my maniacal moonstruck magician?

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=280201

[Tanuki Tales]

very cool I like it, I dont really have anything to say other than its much better than the musical, nagging, annoying slice of hell the PhB has :). Overall: pretty awesome :D. Im sorry :( I suck at peaching, and even though yours is cool, I dislike bards as a whole :p

I'd love to hear the story that made you hate bards so. o.o


could anyone peach my maniacal moonstruck magician?

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=280201

Done. :smallsmile:

[Rizban]

*polite cough*Posted a PEACH for you.

[Rizban]

I'd be very happy if someone would take a look at these races (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=276913).


If any one could be obliged to run my Bard (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=278685) through the ringer, I'd be more than happy to throw some PEACH's back. :smallsmile:


could anyone peach my maniacal moonstruck magician?

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=280201I have posted on the three above quoted homebrews. I'm still looking for input on my homebrew...

I'd like to get some thoughts on my classes and stuff (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=273643).

[Quiddle]

I just put up a class, if someone would peach it that would be great. It is a barbarian alchemist prestige class for pathfinder. See Mutagenic Hulk in my signature.

[Rizban]

I just put up a class, if someone would peach it that would be great. It is a barbarian alchemist prestige class for pathfinder. See Mutagenic Hulk in my signature.I'll go ahead and PEACH it if you'll give mine a look too. Haven't gotten anyone from this thread to look at mine yet. :smallannoyed:

[Quiddle]

I'm not very familiar with E6 but I'll give it a look.

[TheWombatOfDoom]

I'll go ahead and PEACH it if you'll give mine a look too. Haven't gotten anyone from this thread to look at mine yet. :smallannoyed:

Hey! I'm on this thread and I've been PEACHing it. :smallbiggrin::smalltongue:


I'm not very familiar with E6 but I'll give it a look.

Don't worry, E6 isn't really much different from things. It's basically D and D, but you only go up to level 6 instead of level 20. Plus he has a link to the basic rules at the top of the thread, so there's that too.

[Rizban]

Yeah, but I got you to start via IM rather than this thread. I didn't even realize you were posting here until you said something. :smalltongue:

[TheWombatOfDoom]

Oh yes, I guess that's true. Haha.:smallbiggrin:

[thethird]

Hi!

This (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=15161869) is my first attempt at homebrew so if anyone has words of encouragement or critical comments... well mostly any feedback will be welcome. Thanks!

[Marcus Amakar]

2 very small pieces of homebrew here, both relating to my first ever homebrew attempt which is to adapt the skills system for a DnD 3.5 E6 game.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=282001

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=280553

Any and all feedback is gratefully accepted as I haven't had any replies so far.

I'll attempt to give feedback on some of the other pieces on this thread but having never homebrewed before, I'm not sure how valid it will be.

[Rizban]

2 very small pieces of homebrew here, both relating to my first ever homebrew attempt which is to adapt the skills system for a DnD 3.5 E6 game.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=282001

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=280553

Any and all feedback is gratefully accepted as I haven't had any replies so far.

I'll attempt to give feedback on some of the other pieces on this thread but having never homebrewed before, I'm not sure how valid it will be.

Responded to both of your threads.

[AttilaTheGeek]

NichG and I have just finished work on the Maleficant (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=284355), a class based around curses and damage-over-time effects. I don't know why this thread suddenly stopped a couple weeks ago, but it was a great resource for getting feedback. PEACH please!

[Rizban]

NichG and I have just finished work on the Maleficant (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=284355), a class based around curses and damage-over-time effects. I don't know why this thread suddenly stopped a couple weeks ago, but it was a great resource for getting feedback. PEACH please!It's because people don't actually exchange the PEACH. People make requests, and people rarely review them. When someone does review them, as I have done several times, they either never repay the favor or give a single sentence in review that offers no real insight.

As it stands, I have several homebrews in my sig on which I'd really like comprehensive reviews. Anyone who reviews any of my stuff will get a review from me on their stuff. The more comprehensive their review of my stuff, the more comprehensive my review of theirs.

Edit: Of the seven lengthy reviews I've given out, I've received one "yeah, that's cool" in return from this thread.

[wayfare]

Hey All:

I'm kinda desperate for some help -- I'm running a 10 level ToB game pretty soon (like e6, but goes up to level 10), and i'd like to know if these classes are balanced against the existing ToB classes.

thanks for any help you can offer!

Derp: forgot my link: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=283960

[Rizban]

Hey All:

I'm kinda desperate for some help -- I'm running a 10 level ToB game pretty soon (like e6, but goes up to level 10), and i'd like to know if these classes are balanced against the existing ToB classes.

thanks for any help you can offer!

You haven't actually linked anything...

[wayfare]

You haven't actually linked anything...

Sorry, getting used to my new tablet. Updated my post above with the link. Would be very interested in your opinions, rizban -- I like what you're doing with e6.

[AttilaTheGeek]

It's because people don't actually exchange the PEACH. People make requests, and people rarely review them. When someone does review them, as I have done several times, they either never repay the favor or give a single sentence in review that offers no real insight.

Yeah, I posted some stuff a couple pages back and got a couple reviews, but I ran into a similar problem. It could transform into an "everyone plug their stuff and review what sounds interesting" thread, which would be cool, but it looks like it died instead.


As it stands, I have several homebrews in my sig on which I'd really like comprehensive reviews. Anyone who reviews any of my stuff will get a review from me on their stuff. The more comprehensive their review of my stuff, the more comprehensive my review of theirs.

Any preference?

[Rizban]

Yeah, I posted some stuff a couple pages back and got a couple reviews, but I ran into a similar problem. It could transform into an "everyone plug their stuff and review what sounds interesting" thread, which would be cool, but it looks like it died instead.



Any preference?All of it. :smallwink: Seriously though,

The E6 project could always use help, but it's on hold for a little bit while we do some playtesting.

I'd really like comments on the Kreen.

The other projects are too old and would require necroposting to comment, so don't worry about those.

[Philemonite]

I could use some help with my own big project. Link is in my signature.

Rizban I read through your Kreen race.
I like it a lot, I just need to find a game that will allow me to use it.
I didn't wanna post just good work, and I really have nothing to add.
Waiting for ancestral memories.

[AttilaTheGeek]

I'd really like comments on the Kreen.

I'm working on it, but it's so polished already that all that's left to comment on is grammar and clarity.

[Philemonite]

Do not let this thread get lost in infinity of space!!!

I need help with my homebrew system. I am willing to PEACH any idea, but I can't really help with (almost) finished projects.

[Quintar]

Hi,

I'm not sure where the best place to post this is but I'm looking for gamers to try out a beta version of a free online SRD 3.5 character builder I have programmed, staged at www.herogoblin.com.

I've pasted a copy of the output below. There is also a filterable repository of created characters.

http://herogoblin.com/images/record.jpg

Thanks for considering this and for any feedback/testing you can provide. I aim to develop this for Pathfinder also once SRD is live.

Regards,

Quintar

[DMMike]

Do not let this thread get lost in infinity of space!!!

I need help with my homebrew system. I am willing to PEACH any idea, but I can't really help with (almost) finished projects.

Fair enough. My PEACH is here:
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=15354708#post15354708
Questions:
1) In Physical Rules/Combat, do you see a problem with leaving Reserve Actions open to actions besides defending?
2) In Physical Rules/Combat, is the Battle Space simple enough for fast combat, but complex enough to make combat interesting?
3) In Metaphysical Rules/Magic, do the Casting Spells rules make sense?
4) What else looks confusing/reworkable?

Your PEACH:

-Changing abilities to affinities: you're going very abstract here. As such, you'll need very specific definitions to be able to understand how everything interacts. Start with these definitions:
1) Character
2) Ability
3) Affinity
4) Power or Defense.

- The archetypes: are there classes or not? Do you mean each Character is defined by three archetypes? Is each character required to have all three archetypes?
Again, slow down and figure out what the point of archetypes is. Or classes. Ask yourself: what are you trying to say about characters, and what parts of this are really necessary?

- General mechanics changes: if each action type requires a certain number of actions, why the rule, "You can use only one basic action ability and one higher level ability per round?" Just let the players buy whatever actions they want with the actions that they have available.

TTFN...

[zhdarkstar]

Can I get an honest opinion on my Super Fighting Robot (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=286298) archetype for gunslingers?

I will return the favor but I'm not versed enough to give reviews of full-blown homebrew systems like Asteron Questar's and DMMike's requests. My specialties lie mostly in archetypes and progression PrCs.

[Philemonite]

Fair enough. My PEACH is here:
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=15354708#post15354708
Questions:
1) In Physical Rules/Combat, do you see a problem with leaving Reserve Actions open to actions besides defending?
2) In Physical Rules/Combat, is the Battle Space simple enough for fast combat, but complex enough to make combat interesting?
3) In Metaphysical Rules/Magic, do the Casting Spells rules make sense?
4) What else looks confusing/reworkable?

Your PEACH:

-Changing abilities to affinities: you're going very abstract here. As such, you'll need very specific definitions to be able to understand how everything interacts. Start with these definitions:
1) Character
2) Ability
3) Affinity
4) Power or Defense.

- The archetypes: are there classes or not? Do you mean each Character is defined by three archetypes? Is each character required to have all three archetypes?
Again, slow down and figure out what the point of archetypes is. Or classes. Ask yourself: what are you trying to say about characters, and what parts of this are really necessary?

- General mechanics changes: if each action type requires a certain number of actions, why the rule, "You can use only one basic action ability and one higher level ability per round?" Just let the players buy whatever actions they want with the actions that they have available.

TTFN...

1) I see no problem with that. Digimon World 2 has an interesting system where interrupt abilities can be used to interrupt enemies action. Some reduce the attack power, some are preemptive counter-attacks... It adds to the tactical aspect.
2) Posture and Obstacle use is nice and simple. Flanking and Fleeing seams a bit complexed at first glance, but I guess it gets simple once you start playing.
3) This is very interesting. I like the idea of using your own energy to cast spells. I especially like the idea of higher level spells costing more energy. This makes lower level spells useful even if you can use high level spells.
4) I will have to read it all when I get time.

-Will do

-Archetype determine abilities you can use. Classes add some extra features.
So a Witch has all 3 Psonic trees, 2 Tricks and one Swashbuckler(dual wield). She also has some class features.(Hexes, or something similar)
Aside from some variations every class will have 3 archetypes.(tech, skill and magic)

-I was thinking about allowing for some action points to be stored and used later, that's why I have the restriction. I will have to give that some more thought.

Thank you for your answer.

[BladeTempest]

I consider my homebrew mostly done. however, it needs some balancing done to it before i put the last few touches on it because most of what is left that i want to do is strongly based off of what is done. The thread received some love in the past but i don't think too many people want to touch it now as i have had to preform necromancy on it. link in sig.

PEACH's for me please?

[ngilop]

My Soul Blade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=288404)

and

My Hexblade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=283621)

please :)

[AuraTwilight]

As long as the thread's been bumped, http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=289237

[Jormengand]

*Bump, because this is a pretty good idea.*

I'd like someone to have a go at the Justicar, Liberator and Enforcer (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=290176) if you're feeling lazy or the Honour Guard (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=289919) if you're feeling less lazy.

[zhdarkstar]

The other projects are too old and would require necroposting to comment, so don't worry about those.

Oops...I didn't even look at the date of the last post when I just dissected your Pyrokineticist. I just liked the class so much that I wanted to comment. I hate to see large-scale projects fall by the wayside because they're not continually talked about. Sometimes it finds the right audience later than expected.

If you do add anything else to that project, I'll gladly take a look at it for ya.

I'd like an honest opinion about any of the brews in my sig other than the War Machine or of my entry in the current PrC contest, Radiant Senshi.

[Network]

I'd like to receive reviews of my homebrew feats (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=290662). I did get some, just not recent ones.


Hi,

I'm not sure where the best place to post this is but I'm looking for gamers to try out a beta version of a free online SRD 3.5 character builder I have programmed, staged at www.herogoblin.com.
I tested it, but I find it very limited in content. I noticed some bugs : it allows you to take Leadership at first level, and you cannot take Alertness if you have a familiar (technically, you have it as a bonus feat, but only if your familiar is next to you). I made only one character, so my review is in no way complete.

[Overneath]

I hit up Network's feats list. I'm not sure how well I can do most PEACHing, but I'll try my best on some more on request. In return, Planar Conduit and Favored Communionist (posted by Everynone, created by both of us) could use some feedback.

[DracoDei]

I hit up Network's feats list. I'm not sure how well I can do most PEACHing, but I'll try my best on some more on request. In return, Planar Conduit and Favored Communionist (posted by Everynone, created by both of us) could use some feedback.
Including a link to that class, rather than making them look for it here or elsewhere might streamline the process.

[Network]

I posted my review on the Planar Conduit (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=293594). The Favored Communionist is here (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=293595), but even after reading it, I don't find much to say about it.

[Wyrmhero]

I would be very grateful if someone could have a look at my Bloodsword class: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303610.

I'm not sure how well I could PEACH for other people, but I'm certainly willing to give it a go, though I have little experience with higher-level campaigns.

EDIT: Sorry, misread the last post date in the thread - Hopefully this doesn't count as thread necromancy :smallredface:

[Jormengand]

I would be very grateful if someone could have a look at my Bloodsword class: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303610.

I'm not sure how well I could PEACH for other people, but I'm certainly willing to give it a go, though I have little experience with higher-level campaigns.

EDIT: Sorry, misread the last post date in the thread - Hopefully this doesn't count as thread necromancy :smallredface:

The topic is still relevant, so it should be fine.

I'll give it a look. If I make something new, you owe me. :p

[Belial_the_Leveler]

I'd be grateful if you guys took a look at my feat-based Warrior here;
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304478

[Perseus]

What does PEACH stand for?

Seriously, is there a terminology thread somewhere?

[Belial_the_Leveler]

Please Examine And Critique Honestly.

Physiologic Evaluation After Coronary Hyperemia.

Promotions Entertainment and Corporate Hospitality.



There are others but those are the most widely used IMHO.

[Philemonite]

Please Evaluate and Critique Honestly.:smallwink:

[Wyrmhero]

The topic is still relevant, so it should be fine.

I'll give it a look. If I make something new, you owe me. :p

Thank you very much. If you make something, let me know, I'd be happy to return the favour.


I'd be grateful if you guys took a look at my feat-based Warrior here;
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304478

I would have a look, but I'm afraid I have almost no idea about Epic Feats, so I'm afraid I can't judge your character. Sorry. :smallfrown:

[ngilop]

Take a look at my Grappler (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=247200) and let me know whats up.


I'll be taking a look at your fighter now bvelial.

[Perseus]

Please Examine And Critique Honestly.

Physiologic Evaluation After Coronary Hyperemia.

Promotions Entertainment and Corporate Hospitality.



There are others but those are the most widely used IMHO.


Please Evaluate and Critique Honestly.:smallwink:


Ooh... Well then... I'll need to remember that. I'm almost ready for my Juggernaut to be PEACH'ed

[Belial_the_Leveler]

Grappler PEACHed.


Anyone want to take a look at my three fairy-tale themed classes?
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303561
I had plans for a fourth (a dragon) but it didn't work out.

[Maginomicon]

I've created a number of things that I'd like PEACHed.

Real Alignments (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=283341)

This kind-of got PEACHed, but not really (at least not in my book). It's so far been "oh hey that's neat" and not enough "here's some problems you might run into in practice narratively or in character creation". Even those to this point that seemed to put thought into their responses didn't seem to actually read the full text. It's infuriating. The clarification post I added later on that discussed the apparent sticking-points was left hanging.

Metamagic Access (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=284296)

Saying essentially "Scrap this idea entirely and go with this other thing" is not a PEACH, it's like spitting in your face. :smallmad:

Vitalizing Subvariant Fix (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=285871)

No replies period. :smallconfused:

"Make Elan" Psionic Communal (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=299864)

Not PEACHed, just people whining about the premise. No replies to the actual draft. :smallmad:

------------ RECENTLY

Passive Ability Checks (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=303726)

*sigh* One small suggestion... one. Yeah that thread's well on the way to "buried" status. :smallfrown:

Recruiting for Futuristic Campaign Setting (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304652)

Not exactly a PEACH request so much as calling for regular PEACH for helping with building for a project that has already a massive amount of effort put in. So much source material is available (110+ pages) that I can't really say "here's this thing, PEACH". I need volunteers. :smalleek:

[ArcturusV]

Link that I'd like looked at is in my Signature there. "Vampire Monster Class". Want to have some eyes on it and hammer out any potential kinks before I test it live with a group.

Thank you for anyone who does.

I don't claim master kitbasher status, but if anyone does look, I'll take a look at their stuff and give my thoughts.

[ngilop]

My Soul Blade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=288404)

and

My Hexblade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=283621)

please :)

Still looking for pcritiques for these 2.

i'll be looking at your real alignments Maginomicon

[Wyrmhero]

ArcturusV, I have PEACHed your Vampire Monster Class, so if you could return the favour with my Bloodsword, if you would be so kind.

Maginomicon, I have posted a few ideas for Passive Ability Checks, though I couldn't think of that many unfortunately.

[Perseus]

So my Warrior isn't done yet but I just placed this up

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=305065

If anyone wants to take a stab at it. It is a FFT Knight Prestige Class.

Im working on a FF Tactics type of summoner PrC that whose summons just hit the entire battlefield instead of sticking around. I was thinking of waiting on that for after the Warrior (juggernaut/savage) is made but I got sucked into FF Tactics recently haha.

[ArcturusV]

Been PEACH'd to the best of my ability Wyrmhero. Hope it helped some. Sorry I couldn't do more.

[ddude987]

Hello all! I prefer to PEACH classes, though I find feats fun too. The thing I would really appreciate being PEACHed is my fighter rework (see signature). I know fighter is nothing new but I would like some fresh input on it as I have gotten all or most grammar and poorly written abilities fixed up and am looking forward to some nitty gritty constructive criticism. Will PEACH anybody else's classes who is willing to look at my fighter. Thanks.

edit: Perseus, I couldn't resist taking a look at your knight class and then once I looked I decided to go ahead and PEACH it for you to the best of my ability.
edit: edit: Also checked out your vampire homebrew arcturusV. Pretty awesome.

[Philemonite]

I made my (small) contribution to The Ivalice Knight, I hope you continue with FFT classes.

I could use some advice for a little something (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304944) I'm trying to create.

[Jormengand]

All those with a Tome of Magic and a clue why truenamers are bad, could you look at the Worldspeaker (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=305453) please?

[Rephath]

I need some PEACH on this game, and will PEACH a game in return.

http://archons.wikia.com/wiki/Archons_Wiki

[TheFamilarRaven]

So, despite the number of views and a PEACH request, my homebrew base class for 3.5 has gone un-critiqued, which I think it needs. If you happen to critique it, please either PM me a link or leave a comment with something you'd like PEACH'd and I'll be happy to do so! Provided said request is 3.5 (i'm not too familiar with other systems).

The Havoc Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=305278)

[Jormengand]

So, despite the number of views and a PEACH request, my homebrew base class for 3.5 has gone un-critiqued, which I think it needs. If you happen to critique it, please either PM me a link or leave a comment with something you'd like PEACH'd and I'll be happy to do so! Provided said request is 3.5 (i'm not too familiar with other systems).

The Havoc Knight (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=305278)

Hmmm... do you have access to the Tome of Magic?

[TheFamilarRaven]

Indeed i do, I shall PEACH your WorldSpeaker, in exchange for a PEACH of my Havoc Knight, and I'll pay you Tuesday for a hamburger today, as well, (and perhaps tell u why tuenamers are bad.) but i'll have to go over the turenamer

[Palanan]

Hey, folks. I wouldn't mind a PEACH of my Jade Empress Longwing (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=302823), since it hasn't received any comments yet.

Yes, it's a butterfly, and not rawr-optimized. But sometimes...sometimes, you just want a butterfly. That helps with acid spells.

[Plato Play-Doh]

PEACHED the Havoc Knight and Asteron's Commander project. I'd like some PEACH for the defenses overhaul in my signature.

[Jormengand]

Hey, folks. I wouldn't mind a PEACH of my Jade Empress Longwing (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=302823), since it hasn't received any comments yet.

Yes, it's a butterfly, and not rawr-optimized. But sometimes...sometimes, you just want a butterfly. That helps with acid spells.

Done. Not going to expect you to do an entire class in return, though.

[Palanan]

Originally Posted by Jormengand
Done. Not going to expect you to do an entire class in return, though.

Thanks for your comments, it's great to get some feedback.

I'd be game for the Worldspeaker, except I don't know anything about Truenamers or subsystems in general. If you've got a mean critter or two, that I could do.

[Zaydos]

I'd be game for a few.

Right now the things I'd want most are:
Incarnation (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=306621): Aimed to be about sorcerer power level, unfortunately I'm not sure I know how powerful domains or sorcerers are.

Courtier (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304975): A noble/aristocrat class worth using, hopefully even by PCs.

Morphic Claw (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=306674) A year old base class contest entry I was never happy with, has 2 martial disciplines to go with it.

The other one I'm interested in asking for PEACHes for is in the current Base Class Contest and I'd feel bad asking for it here until that is done.

Do you still need people for the Warrior/Fairy-Tale classes (Belial) and World Speaker (Jormengand)?

[Jormengand]

I'd be game for a few.

Right now the things I'd want most are:
Incarnation (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=306621): Aimed to be about sorcerer power level, unfortunately I'm not sure I know how powerful domains or sorcerers are.

Courtier (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=304975): A noble/aristocrat class worth using, hopefully even by PCs.

Morphic Claw (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=306674) A year old base class contest entry I was never happy with, has 2 martial disciplines to go with it.

The other one I'm interested in asking for PEACHes for is in the current Base Class Contest and I'd feel bad asking for it here until that is done.

Do you still need people for the Warrior/Fairy-Tale classes (Belial) and World Speaker (Jormengand)?

Yes. I'll catch up with your brew once I've taken my DM'ing hat off, so do the Speaker whenever you're ready.

[TheFamilarRaven]

So I created this Base Class, and thanks to all those who PEACHed my work, I managed to re-work the class using all their suggestions to what I think is a vast improvement.

The reason why i'm posting is, I haven't received any feedback on my re-work, (I don't know if i'm allowed to re-post for the same homebrew or not :smallfrown:) But i would really like some PEACHing done to my re-work of this class (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=16116765#post16116765). It's a base class for 3.5

As always, I'd be willing to PEACH any and all homebrews in exchange for some feedback, provided the request is 3.5 (not too familiar with other systems). Thank you.

[Iamyourking]

I gave it a look, although there wasn't much wrong with it.

I have not gotten any commentary on Sons of the Fallen (See my signature) in months, so that's what I would like you to review. The same goes for anyone else willing to give it a look.

[Proud Tortoise]

I gave it a look, although there wasn't much wrong with it.

I have not gotten any commentary on Sons of the Fallen (See my signature) in months, so that's what I would like you to review. The same goes for anyone else willing to give it a look.

I will do so if you review http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307113

[Iamyourking]

Done. If you don't think you can properly assess the mechanical side, feel free to discuss the setting.

[CinuzIta]

hello! I'd like to have my Abjurer class peached! I'm gonna use it in a campaign soon, so I need your opinions pretty urgently:)

The class is complete, I just need to post the shield skills (thing that I'm going to do soon).

Here is the link to the class:

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307084

[Alabenson]

Would someone be able to take a look at the my Nightblade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307331) class? It's supposed to be a hybrid skillmonkey/initiator class, and is my first attempt at homebrewing a base class from scratch.

[Proud Tortoise]

Would someone be able to take a look at the my Nightblade (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307331) class? It's supposed to be a hybrid skillmonkey/initiator class, and is my first attempt at homebrewing a base class from scratch.

I could handle that if you look at my skirmisher (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=307113).