Nothing Comic

[Dib]

Hey guys 'n' galls :smile: Just finished the first page of my web comic... yes its only 1 page (and that's only 4 panels) but I wanted to get to a quick start asI was tired of saying I'd do something and never do it... anyway, here it is...

http://nothingcomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/75285/

..Obviously there isn't much story to it yet, so am just wondering what everyone else thinks of the look so far... cheers :smallsmile:

[Dib]

New comic is up

[Brickwall]

Well...not sure if it warrants the rating (yet). Make a cast page ASAP too.

[Dib]

Cast page eh? will work on that :smallsmile:

oh and pages 3-5 are up

[Neo]

I'd make the angel lady's text a bit darker as towards the end when you have the smaller bubbles its impossible to read what she's saying.

[Dib]

I was looking at the latest strip and was thinking the same thing... I'll make it darker on the next one...