Ectopic-Forms /Astral Constructs

[MyKLGuuL]

after a few hours of work i fit together a reference image that i could print
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I register up all this and present this first post to you hoping for some
critiq and ideas or perhaps inspiring someone to create thier own
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[bobthe6th]

alabaster ariel is already a entropic form... and the formatting is a new level of godawful. Is this a direct rip?

[AuraTwilight]

Hello plagiarism.

[MyKLGuuL]

ty, sorry navigating it as a big squished image can cause a headache and it was mostly copied and sized to fit a printed page

-this IS an alabaster aerial tho as homebrew suggests i made a few changes
flyby a slam, fly80, primary natural attack claw, lowering poison touch lvl

i also thought about changing fly from average for feats
like snatch and hover at higher manifests

really this is just flavored ectoplasm and a creative way to give a leg-up for shapers using Complete Psionic
if anyone wants with the sweet image by trance-bound just ask
looks like a blizzard style feathered harpy, or a toonish raptorian maybe

[AuraTwilight]

Why did you black out the image in the corner?

[MyKLGuuL]

not altogether sure about the stats for ranged entangle
corrections would be appreciated
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like before i blacked the image to mind posting rules, its a blue tentacle girl
---not a big stretch for ectoplasm
im going to start working an emerald gyre type of gorgon or perhaps anethemic drider after a while
--- feel free to submit your own in a format u feel is more bearable

[AuraTwilight]

This really does seem like you're just scanning other people's documents, blocking the art, and posting it. If it's your work, just make them as proper BBcode tables.

[MyKLGuuL]

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