Xerlith
2013-04-11, 06:53 PM
DISOWNED
{table=head]Level|
BAB|Fort Save|Ref Save|Will Save|Special|1st|2nd|3rd|4th|5th|Man. Known|Man. Readied|Stances Known
1st|
+1|
+0|
+2|
+0|Twin Disciplines, Track|-|-|-|-|-|3|2|1
2nd|
+2|
+0|
+3|
+0|Diverse Style I|0|-|-|-|-|3|2|1
3rd|
+3|
+1|
+3|
+1|Archery Weapon Focus|1|-|-|-|-|4|3|1
4th|
+4|
+1|
+4|
+1|+1 Dodge AC, Spell Channel|1|-|-|-|-|4|3|1
5th|
+5|
+1|
+4|
+1|+10ft movement|1|0|-|-|-|5|4|2
6th|
+6/+1|
+2|
+5|
+2|Diverse Style II|2|1|-|-|-|5|4|2
7th|
+7/+2|
+2|
+5|
+2|Woodland Stride|2|1|-|-|-|5|4|2
8th|
+8/+3|
+2|
+6|
+2|Archery Weapon Specialization|2|1|0|-|-|6|4|2
9th|
+9/+4|
+3|
+6|
+3|Evasion|2|2|1|-|-|6|4|2
10th|
+10/+5|
+3|
+7|
+3|Smart Shooting |3|2|1|-|-|6|4|3
11th|
+11/+6/+1|
+3|
+7|
+3|+2 dodge AC|3|2|1|0|-|7|5|3
12th|
+12/+7/+2|
+4|
+8|
+4|Diverse Style 3|3|2|2|1|-|7|5|3
13th|
+13/+8/+3|
+4|
+8|
+4|Agile Marksman|3|3|2|1|-|7|5|3
14th|
+14/+9/+4|
+4|
+9|
+4|+20ft Movement|4|3|2|1|0|8|5|3
15th|
+15/+10/+5|
+5|
+9|
+5|Sharp Reflexes|4|3|2|2|1|8|5|3
16th|
+16/+11/+6|
+5|
+10|
+5|Hide In Plain Sight|4|3|3|2|1|8|5|3
17th|
+17/+12/+7|
+5|
+10|
+5|+4 Dodge AC|4|4|3|2|1|9|6|4
18th|
+18/+13/+8|
+6|
+11|
+6|Improved Evasion|5|4|3|2|2|9|6|4
19th|
+19/+14/+9|
+6|
+11|
+6|Piercing Arrows|5|4|3|3|2|9|7|4
20th|
+20/+15/+10 |
+6|
+12|
+6|Supreme Archery|5|4|4|3|2|10|7|4[/table]
HD: d10
Skill Points: 4+int
Class Skills: Climb, Craft, Heall, Intimidate, Knowledge (Martial), Knowledge (geography), Knowledge (nature), Perception, Profession, Ride, Spellcraft, Stealth, Survival, Swim
Profficient with: Light armors, simple melee weapons, simple and martial ranged weapons.
1st lvl available disciplines: Diamond Mind, Shadow Hand, Heaven's Arc
Maneuver Recovery: After all the maneuvers have been expended, after two rounds they are automatically recovered again.
Initiator level: Equal to the class level.
Upon reaching 5th level and every odd-numbered level after you can choose to learn a new maneuver in place of one you already know. You need not replace the old maneuver with a maneuver of the same level.
Class Features:
Twin Disciplines(Ex): The maneuvers from all disciplines granted by this class can be used with a ranged weapon.
Diverse Style X: Add another martial discipline from which you can learn maneuvers and stances.
Archery Weapon Focus: You are treated as if you have Weapon Focus with any ranged weapon you are profficient with.
Spell Channel(Su): As a standard action, you can infuse one arrow with a touch spell you can cast. If you succeed on a ranged attack roll, the target takes normal arrow damage + the spell damage.
Woodland Stride: As the ranger's feat.
Archery Weapon Specialization: As the fighter feat, any ranged weapon you're profficient with.
Smart Shooting(Ex): Twice the INT bonus to damage dealt with ranged weapons.
Agile Marksman(Ex): You threaten with your bow as if it is a reach weapon (Not the adjacent squares).
Sharp Reflexes(Ex): 1/encounter - you can make a standard action as immediate
Piercing Arrows(Ex): Critical multiplier with ranged weapons is enhanced by +1
Supreme Archery(Ex): you can use a maneuver with bow and take a full-round action in one round. You cast spells that would normally take a standard action as swift.
Cantrips: 0th level spells can be cast at will and do not count against the spells limit.
Spellcasting: Spontaneous arcane casting off Int. No ASF with light armor. Caster level is class level -3 (not lower than 1). Starting 6th and every two levels after you can exchange one of your spells known for another. They must be of the same level, and this level must be at least one level lower than the highest level spell you know.
{table=head]Spells Known
{table=head]Level | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5
1st | 3 | - | - | - | - | - |
2nd | 3 | 1 | - | - | - | - |
3rd | 3 | 2 | - | - | - | - |
4th | 3 | 2 | - | - | - | - |
5th | 4 | 2 | 1 | - | - | - |
6th | 4 | 3 | 2 | - | - | - |
7th | 4 | 3 | 2 | - | - | - |
8th | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | - | - |
9th | 5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | - | - |
10th | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | - | - |
11th | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | - |
12th | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 | - |
13th | 6 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 2 | - |
14th | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
15th | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
16th | 6 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 2 |
17th | 7 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 |
18th | 7 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
19th | 7 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
20th | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 |
[/table][/table]
Spell List:
0th level: Jolt, Acid Splash, Ray of Frost, Read Magic, Detect Magic, Mage Hand, Spark, Message, Flare
1st level: Gravity Bow, Abundant Ammunition, Bowstaff, Obscuring Mist, Magic Weapon, Deflect(Lesser), Vanish, Feather Fall, Longshot, Burning Hands, Shocking Grasp
2nd level: Dimension Hop, Acid Arrow, Cat's Grace, Gust of Wind, Blur, Invisibility, Arrow Eruption, Spider Climb, Eldritch Conduit, See Invisibility, Comprehend Languages, Vampiric Touch, Resist Energy
3rd level: Burst of Speed, Greater Magic Weapon, Venomous Bolt, Mirror Image, Blood Biography, Heroism, Haste, Dimension Door, Clairaudience/Clairvoyance
4th level: Freedom of Movement, Bow Spirit, Hold Person, Flame Arrow, Find Quarry, Dispel Magic, True Seeing, Mislead, Arcane Eye, Arcane Sight
5th level: Icy Prison, True Seeing, Dismissal, Overland Flight, Fickle Winds, Greater Heroism, Tongues, Vision
As it is, it's pretty... Random. I am painfully aware of the flaws but I'm not sure what to do to make it work properly. It seems too strong (numbers) and too weak (feats) at the same time.
{table=head]Level|
BAB|Fort Save|Ref Save|Will Save|Special|1st|2nd|3rd|4th|5th|Man. Known|Man. Readied|Stances Known
1st|
+1|
+0|
+2|
+0|Twin Disciplines, Track|-|-|-|-|-|3|2|1
2nd|
+2|
+0|
+3|
+0|Diverse Style I|0|-|-|-|-|3|2|1
3rd|
+3|
+1|
+3|
+1|Archery Weapon Focus|1|-|-|-|-|4|3|1
4th|
+4|
+1|
+4|
+1|+1 Dodge AC, Spell Channel|1|-|-|-|-|4|3|1
5th|
+5|
+1|
+4|
+1|+10ft movement|1|0|-|-|-|5|4|2
6th|
+6/+1|
+2|
+5|
+2|Diverse Style II|2|1|-|-|-|5|4|2
7th|
+7/+2|
+2|
+5|
+2|Woodland Stride|2|1|-|-|-|5|4|2
8th|
+8/+3|
+2|
+6|
+2|Archery Weapon Specialization|2|1|0|-|-|6|4|2
9th|
+9/+4|
+3|
+6|
+3|Evasion|2|2|1|-|-|6|4|2
10th|
+10/+5|
+3|
+7|
+3|Smart Shooting |3|2|1|-|-|6|4|3
11th|
+11/+6/+1|
+3|
+7|
+3|+2 dodge AC|3|2|1|0|-|7|5|3
12th|
+12/+7/+2|
+4|
+8|
+4|Diverse Style 3|3|2|2|1|-|7|5|3
13th|
+13/+8/+3|
+4|
+8|
+4|Agile Marksman|3|3|2|1|-|7|5|3
14th|
+14/+9/+4|
+4|
+9|
+4|+20ft Movement|4|3|2|1|0|8|5|3
15th|
+15/+10/+5|
+5|
+9|
+5|Sharp Reflexes|4|3|2|2|1|8|5|3
16th|
+16/+11/+6|
+5|
+10|
+5|Hide In Plain Sight|4|3|3|2|1|8|5|3
17th|
+17/+12/+7|
+5|
+10|
+5|+4 Dodge AC|4|4|3|2|1|9|6|4
18th|
+18/+13/+8|
+6|
+11|
+6|Improved Evasion|5|4|3|2|2|9|6|4
19th|
+19/+14/+9|
+6|
+11|
+6|Piercing Arrows|5|4|3|3|2|9|7|4
20th|
+20/+15/+10 |
+6|
+12|
+6|Supreme Archery|5|4|4|3|2|10|7|4[/table]
HD: d10
Skill Points: 4+int
Class Skills: Climb, Craft, Heall, Intimidate, Knowledge (Martial), Knowledge (geography), Knowledge (nature), Perception, Profession, Ride, Spellcraft, Stealth, Survival, Swim
Profficient with: Light armors, simple melee weapons, simple and martial ranged weapons.
1st lvl available disciplines: Diamond Mind, Shadow Hand, Heaven's Arc
Maneuver Recovery: After all the maneuvers have been expended, after two rounds they are automatically recovered again.
Initiator level: Equal to the class level.
Upon reaching 5th level and every odd-numbered level after you can choose to learn a new maneuver in place of one you already know. You need not replace the old maneuver with a maneuver of the same level.
Class Features:
Twin Disciplines(Ex): The maneuvers from all disciplines granted by this class can be used with a ranged weapon.
Diverse Style X: Add another martial discipline from which you can learn maneuvers and stances.
Archery Weapon Focus: You are treated as if you have Weapon Focus with any ranged weapon you are profficient with.
Spell Channel(Su): As a standard action, you can infuse one arrow with a touch spell you can cast. If you succeed on a ranged attack roll, the target takes normal arrow damage + the spell damage.
Woodland Stride: As the ranger's feat.
Archery Weapon Specialization: As the fighter feat, any ranged weapon you're profficient with.
Smart Shooting(Ex): Twice the INT bonus to damage dealt with ranged weapons.
Agile Marksman(Ex): You threaten with your bow as if it is a reach weapon (Not the adjacent squares).
Sharp Reflexes(Ex): 1/encounter - you can make a standard action as immediate
Piercing Arrows(Ex): Critical multiplier with ranged weapons is enhanced by +1
Supreme Archery(Ex): you can use a maneuver with bow and take a full-round action in one round. You cast spells that would normally take a standard action as swift.
Cantrips: 0th level spells can be cast at will and do not count against the spells limit.
Spellcasting: Spontaneous arcane casting off Int. No ASF with light armor. Caster level is class level -3 (not lower than 1). Starting 6th and every two levels after you can exchange one of your spells known for another. They must be of the same level, and this level must be at least one level lower than the highest level spell you know.
{table=head]Spells Known
{table=head]Level | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5
1st | 3 | - | - | - | - | - |
2nd | 3 | 1 | - | - | - | - |
3rd | 3 | 2 | - | - | - | - |
4th | 3 | 2 | - | - | - | - |
5th | 4 | 2 | 1 | - | - | - |
6th | 4 | 3 | 2 | - | - | - |
7th | 4 | 3 | 2 | - | - | - |
8th | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | - | - |
9th | 5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | - | - |
10th | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | - | - |
11th | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | - |
12th | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 | - |
13th | 6 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 2 | - |
14th | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
15th | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
16th | 6 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 2 |
17th | 7 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 |
18th | 7 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
19th | 7 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
20th | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 |
[/table][/table]
Spell List:
0th level: Jolt, Acid Splash, Ray of Frost, Read Magic, Detect Magic, Mage Hand, Spark, Message, Flare
1st level: Gravity Bow, Abundant Ammunition, Bowstaff, Obscuring Mist, Magic Weapon, Deflect(Lesser), Vanish, Feather Fall, Longshot, Burning Hands, Shocking Grasp
2nd level: Dimension Hop, Acid Arrow, Cat's Grace, Gust of Wind, Blur, Invisibility, Arrow Eruption, Spider Climb, Eldritch Conduit, See Invisibility, Comprehend Languages, Vampiric Touch, Resist Energy
3rd level: Burst of Speed, Greater Magic Weapon, Venomous Bolt, Mirror Image, Blood Biography, Heroism, Haste, Dimension Door, Clairaudience/Clairvoyance
4th level: Freedom of Movement, Bow Spirit, Hold Person, Flame Arrow, Find Quarry, Dispel Magic, True Seeing, Mislead, Arcane Eye, Arcane Sight
5th level: Icy Prison, True Seeing, Dismissal, Overland Flight, Fickle Winds, Greater Heroism, Tongues, Vision
As it is, it's pretty... Random. I am painfully aware of the flaws but I'm not sure what to do to make it work properly. It seems too strong (numbers) and too weak (feats) at the same time.