smoke prism
2013-05-07, 01:55 PM
This is my firs PC, so PEACH will be much appreciated.
Also I am thinking of makig some feats for this PC (PM me with any idears you have) (I have underlined the problems i am having).
Chaos warrior of Khorne
“I have become death destroyer of worlds “
Ebus the destroyer, after his ascension.
HELP HEAR
Becoming a Chaos warrior of Khorne.
To qualify to become a chaos warrior of Khorne, a character must fulfil all of the following criteria.
ENTRY REQUIREMENTS:
BAB: +7
Feats: Evil brand and willing deformity.
Alignment: chaotic evil
Deity: Must worship Khorne (or you’re regional equivalent)
special: Must have killed 100 sentient creatures in Khornes name.
Class Skills
class skills: Climb, intimidate, jump, listen, ride, spot, survival, swim
Skills Points at Each Level: 4 + int
Hit Dice: d10
{table=head]Level|Base Attack Bonus|Fort Save|Ref Save|Will Save|Special
1st|+1|+2|+0|+2| Skin of steel, Bloodlust (1)
2nd|+2|+3|+0|+3| Mettle
3rd|+3|+3|+1|+3| Bloodlust (2)
4th|+4|+4|+1|+4| Skin adamantine
5th|+5|+4|+1|+4| Bloodlust (3)
6th|+6/+1|+5|+2|+5|Ruinous soul
7th|+7/+2|+5|+2|+5| Bloodlust (4)
8th|+8/+3|+6|+2|+6| Improved mettle
9th|+9/+4|+6|+3|+6| More than a man
10th|+10/+5|+7|+3|+7| Ascension
[/table]
Weapon Proficiencies: You gain proficiency with all material weapons.
Skin of steel(Ex):
“As the arrow strikes Ebuses chest, he grins as the arrow crumples against his un-relenting skin.”
At level 1st the chaos warrior of Khorne gains DR 10/adamantine
Demonic boost (Ex):
As the knight’s hammer strikes Ebus chest he feels his ribs his crack and organs rupture, a felling of pain rip’s into his rib cage. Then a different sensation, like a fire condensing in his rib cage. Ebus gives the knight a toothy smile and spits “you’ll regret that worm”.
Starting at 1st level, when the chaos warrior of Khorne is reduced to ¼ its full hit points, it enters a state of bloodlust. This state lasts for a number of rounds equal to its con modifier. Whilst in an state of bloodlust the Chaos Warrior of Khorne gains fast healing 5 and a +2 profane bonus to str and con, at 3rd level and every two class levels afterward (excluding 9th level) the fast healing granted by this ability increases by 5 and the profane bonuses increase by an additional 2.
Mettle(Ex):
As the poison courses through Ebuse veins like an inferno, Ebuses grimaces in pain. Then moments later Ebuse fells an ice cold sensation trickles through his vein quickly quells the fire. Ebuse smiles to himself “lucky me”
At 2rd level a chaos warrior of Khorne can resist magical and unusual attacks with great willpower or fortitude. If he makes a successful Will or Fortitude save against an attack that normally would have a lesser effect on a successful save (such as any spell with a saving throw entry of Will half or Fortitude partial), he instead completely negates the effect. An unconscious or sleeping warrior of Khorne does not gain the benefit of mettle.
Skin of adamantine(Ex):
As the paladins grate sword strikes Ebuse neck, the blade bounces of. The paladin stunned is only able to stare in disbelief as Ebuse leaps at him.
At 4th level a chaos warrior of Khorne gains DR 15/- .
Ruinous soul(Ex):
As the fireball explodes in the mites of the chaotic horde of men, Ebuse sees the flames that are burn these lesser men, but all he fells is the demonic forces inside him quelling the fire around him.
At 6th level a chaos warrior of Khorne gains spell resistance equal to 15 + con modifier.
Improved Mettlel(Ex):
"You illusion will not fool me, wizard"
When you make a successful Will save, you completely avoid damage or effects from any spell or ability that would normally cause a partial effect or half damage when a save is made. (In other words, “Will partial” in a spell’s description becomes “Will none” for you.) You still take normal damage or receive the full effect on a failed save.
In addition, you receive only half damage or partial effects from spells or abilities that normally grant partial effecct on a successful Fortitude save, even if you fail the saving throw, and no damage or effect at all if you succeed.
More than a man(Ex):
“I AM MORE”.
At 9th level a Chaos Warrior of Khornes type changes to outsider (With the following subtypes; Native, chaotic, evil). Unlike other outsiders, the Chaos Warrior of Khorne can still be brought back from the dead as if they were a member of their previous creature type. .The Chaos Warrior of Khorne also has a 75% chance to negate the effects of critcal hits and sneak attacks, instead rolling damage normally.
Ascension(Ex):
Ebuse fells his skin boil, his muscles thicken and his bones elongate, but through all this pain Ebuse does not scream or cry, “no” he thort to himself “I’ve come too far, endured too much to shrink away from my rewarded”.
Then suddenly the pain stops and Ebuse looks down to sees the floor 20 feet below him. He lifts his hands to see massive claws and large muscular hands covered in red leathery skin. Then, suddenly there is a splitting sensation down his back, as large, members wings burst out of his back.
At 10th level a chaos warrior of Khorne gains the following ability’s:
• Re-forged: You gain a +2 bonus to str and con. You also grow 1 size categories (with all the bonuses and penalties).
• Weapons of Khorne: you gain 2 claw attacks a bite attack and a slam attack, with damage appropriate for its size. All of these attacks are treated as magical and adamantine for the purposes overcoming damage reduction.
• Death is not the end: If the chaos warrior of Khorne dies in battle, his soul is taken to Khorne personal domain. Were his soul and body are reattached. The chaos warrior of Khorne re-materialises on the spot where it died in 24 hours.
• Wings: the chaos warrior of Khorne gains fly speed 50 feet (poor).
• Frightful presence: Whenever the chaos warrior of Khorne charges, fly’s over head or attacks, every creature within 70 feet must make a will save, or be effected by the fightful presence.I would reccomend adding Those who successfully make their save against this effect are immune to the Chaos Warrior of Khorne's Frightful presence until 24 hours have passed.
• Demonic skin: The DR gained from skin of adamantine goes up by 5. The chaos warrior of Khorne also gains fire immunity.
Also I am thinking of makig some feats for this PC (PM me with any idears you have) (I have underlined the problems i am having).
Chaos warrior of Khorne
“I have become death destroyer of worlds “
Ebus the destroyer, after his ascension.
HELP HEAR
Becoming a Chaos warrior of Khorne.
To qualify to become a chaos warrior of Khorne, a character must fulfil all of the following criteria.
ENTRY REQUIREMENTS:
BAB: +7
Feats: Evil brand and willing deformity.
Alignment: chaotic evil
Deity: Must worship Khorne (or you’re regional equivalent)
special: Must have killed 100 sentient creatures in Khornes name.
Class Skills
class skills: Climb, intimidate, jump, listen, ride, spot, survival, swim
Skills Points at Each Level: 4 + int
Hit Dice: d10
{table=head]Level|Base Attack Bonus|Fort Save|Ref Save|Will Save|Special
1st|+1|+2|+0|+2| Skin of steel, Bloodlust (1)
2nd|+2|+3|+0|+3| Mettle
3rd|+3|+3|+1|+3| Bloodlust (2)
4th|+4|+4|+1|+4| Skin adamantine
5th|+5|+4|+1|+4| Bloodlust (3)
6th|+6/+1|+5|+2|+5|Ruinous soul
7th|+7/+2|+5|+2|+5| Bloodlust (4)
8th|+8/+3|+6|+2|+6| Improved mettle
9th|+9/+4|+6|+3|+6| More than a man
10th|+10/+5|+7|+3|+7| Ascension
[/table]
Weapon Proficiencies: You gain proficiency with all material weapons.
Skin of steel(Ex):
“As the arrow strikes Ebuses chest, he grins as the arrow crumples against his un-relenting skin.”
At level 1st the chaos warrior of Khorne gains DR 10/adamantine
Demonic boost (Ex):
As the knight’s hammer strikes Ebus chest he feels his ribs his crack and organs rupture, a felling of pain rip’s into his rib cage. Then a different sensation, like a fire condensing in his rib cage. Ebus gives the knight a toothy smile and spits “you’ll regret that worm”.
Starting at 1st level, when the chaos warrior of Khorne is reduced to ¼ its full hit points, it enters a state of bloodlust. This state lasts for a number of rounds equal to its con modifier. Whilst in an state of bloodlust the Chaos Warrior of Khorne gains fast healing 5 and a +2 profane bonus to str and con, at 3rd level and every two class levels afterward (excluding 9th level) the fast healing granted by this ability increases by 5 and the profane bonuses increase by an additional 2.
Mettle(Ex):
As the poison courses through Ebuse veins like an inferno, Ebuses grimaces in pain. Then moments later Ebuse fells an ice cold sensation trickles through his vein quickly quells the fire. Ebuse smiles to himself “lucky me”
At 2rd level a chaos warrior of Khorne can resist magical and unusual attacks with great willpower or fortitude. If he makes a successful Will or Fortitude save against an attack that normally would have a lesser effect on a successful save (such as any spell with a saving throw entry of Will half or Fortitude partial), he instead completely negates the effect. An unconscious or sleeping warrior of Khorne does not gain the benefit of mettle.
Skin of adamantine(Ex):
As the paladins grate sword strikes Ebuse neck, the blade bounces of. The paladin stunned is only able to stare in disbelief as Ebuse leaps at him.
At 4th level a chaos warrior of Khorne gains DR 15/- .
Ruinous soul(Ex):
As the fireball explodes in the mites of the chaotic horde of men, Ebuse sees the flames that are burn these lesser men, but all he fells is the demonic forces inside him quelling the fire around him.
At 6th level a chaos warrior of Khorne gains spell resistance equal to 15 + con modifier.
Improved Mettlel(Ex):
"You illusion will not fool me, wizard"
When you make a successful Will save, you completely avoid damage or effects from any spell or ability that would normally cause a partial effect or half damage when a save is made. (In other words, “Will partial” in a spell’s description becomes “Will none” for you.) You still take normal damage or receive the full effect on a failed save.
In addition, you receive only half damage or partial effects from spells or abilities that normally grant partial effecct on a successful Fortitude save, even if you fail the saving throw, and no damage or effect at all if you succeed.
More than a man(Ex):
“I AM MORE”.
At 9th level a Chaos Warrior of Khornes type changes to outsider (With the following subtypes; Native, chaotic, evil). Unlike other outsiders, the Chaos Warrior of Khorne can still be brought back from the dead as if they were a member of their previous creature type. .The Chaos Warrior of Khorne also has a 75% chance to negate the effects of critcal hits and sneak attacks, instead rolling damage normally.
Ascension(Ex):
Ebuse fells his skin boil, his muscles thicken and his bones elongate, but through all this pain Ebuse does not scream or cry, “no” he thort to himself “I’ve come too far, endured too much to shrink away from my rewarded”.
Then suddenly the pain stops and Ebuse looks down to sees the floor 20 feet below him. He lifts his hands to see massive claws and large muscular hands covered in red leathery skin. Then, suddenly there is a splitting sensation down his back, as large, members wings burst out of his back.
At 10th level a chaos warrior of Khorne gains the following ability’s:
• Re-forged: You gain a +2 bonus to str and con. You also grow 1 size categories (with all the bonuses and penalties).
• Weapons of Khorne: you gain 2 claw attacks a bite attack and a slam attack, with damage appropriate for its size. All of these attacks are treated as magical and adamantine for the purposes overcoming damage reduction.
• Death is not the end: If the chaos warrior of Khorne dies in battle, his soul is taken to Khorne personal domain. Were his soul and body are reattached. The chaos warrior of Khorne re-materialises on the spot where it died in 24 hours.
• Wings: the chaos warrior of Khorne gains fly speed 50 feet (poor).
• Frightful presence: Whenever the chaos warrior of Khorne charges, fly’s over head or attacks, every creature within 70 feet must make a will save, or be effected by the fightful presence.I would reccomend adding Those who successfully make their save against this effect are immune to the Chaos Warrior of Khorne's Frightful presence until 24 hours have passed.
• Demonic skin: The DR gained from skin of adamantine goes up by 5. The chaos warrior of Khorne also gains fire immunity.