View Full Version : The Town--The Comic: We're Back

2006-12-06, 02:31 AM
We're back, baby!

I'm sorry to have been gone so long...being sent to Dallas after your scanner decides to take a holiday does that to you.

I honestly have no idea how long the scanner will be in commission...it's dying quickly. But hopefully it will last til the new year, right? Yea...

Anyway, for those of you that don't know us, you can find us at:


We're based off of the Town here in the GitP forums, so we've tried to give the page a GitP feel. We even have an OotSy type comic located:
created by our very own Hawkeye.

2006-12-06, 02:56 PM
Hawkeye's text is a little small, and it strains my eyes. A look of surprise on Llama's face in the newest comic (like this :eek:) would help to add some emotion to the strip. Visibly different mouths like in the Order of the Stick would also help with this. Also, the amount of juice in Ceika's glass changes from scene 2 to 3.

Those are my only critiques.

2006-12-06, 07:30 PM
So..nothing against mine?

Yay! I'm loved!

2006-12-06, 08:04 PM
Great comics so far! It's a bit hard to see the lettering in OotT, but otherwise, keep up the good work!