AstralFire
2013-12-12, 12:37 PM
Wanted to throw together a Bard masterpiece and get feedback on its quality and balance. May add more as appropriate, thematically.
Vespers of the Dawnrose Wind
Prerequisite: Perform (Dance, Oratory or Song) 7 ranks
Cost: Feat or 3rd-level bard spell known.
This prayer must be performed in the presence of the sun and is a complex ritual offering praise to the divinity of dawn itself. Upon completion of the rite, you are blessed by the Dawnrose Wind for a maximum of 24 hours.
While so blessed, you're surrounded by a very faint glow of light. As a swift action, you may use an additional bardic performance round to spread luminous wings and gain a fly speed of 60 ft. (good) for 1 minute or until dismissed, as the spell. These wings shed light as a sunrod. Magical darkness of 3rd level or higher suppresses the effect as-if in an anti-magic field until you leave the area of magical darkness.
If the wings are activated outside of the presence of daylight, they require 4 rounds of Bardic Performance to summon rather than 1.
Use: 2 Bardic Performance Rounds, +1 for every activation of the wings, which last one minute or until dismissed. Wing activation costs 4 rounds instead if done outside of daylight.
Action: 15 minutes to perform the basic prayer. Swift to activate the wings.
Vespers of the Dawnrose Wind
Prerequisite: Perform (Dance, Oratory or Song) 7 ranks
Cost: Feat or 3rd-level bard spell known.
This prayer must be performed in the presence of the sun and is a complex ritual offering praise to the divinity of dawn itself. Upon completion of the rite, you are blessed by the Dawnrose Wind for a maximum of 24 hours.
While so blessed, you're surrounded by a very faint glow of light. As a swift action, you may use an additional bardic performance round to spread luminous wings and gain a fly speed of 60 ft. (good) for 1 minute or until dismissed, as the spell. These wings shed light as a sunrod. Magical darkness of 3rd level or higher suppresses the effect as-if in an anti-magic field until you leave the area of magical darkness.
If the wings are activated outside of the presence of daylight, they require 4 rounds of Bardic Performance to summon rather than 1.
Use: 2 Bardic Performance Rounds, +1 for every activation of the wings, which last one minute or until dismissed. Wing activation costs 4 rounds instead if done outside of daylight.
Action: 15 minutes to perform the basic prayer. Swift to activate the wings.