View Full Version : Amazing superteam

2007-02-23, 12:13 AM
well, i had a thread about this before but it's lost somewhere and i cant find it so...

please check out my webcomic about a team of superheroes. i've finally gotten to the villain plot of the story line and i'm having a lot of fun with it.

most recent comic

start from the beginning

feedback is always appreciated.

2007-02-23, 11:29 AM
Well the art is pretty basic, which is okay, but it would be nice to take it to the next level. The writing is good though and you've got some funny jokes! Keep at it!

2007-03-05, 02:25 PM
i'm surprised that only 1 person responded. it's getting amazing feedback over at drunkduck.com


it got featured and is ranked #20 in comic book story after only 3 weeks.

Viscount Einstrauss
2007-03-05, 03:27 PM
You've got some writing skill on you, but you seem afraid to try and improve your art. 'Course, you might be terrible at it, but fortunately artwork is a skill that can be improved through practice and (perhaps) instruction. Try signing up for a class or two. If you could match your dialogue with your art a little, you could quickly propel into e-stardom.

2007-03-05, 05:44 PM
:) i made the art simple on purpose. it's a direct result of what made me stop reading comics in the 1990's. every artist was trying so hard to outdo the next artist that the art actually sucked due to the overly complicated panels with too much in them. it took away from the story so much that it killed comics for me. so i doubt that the art will change much at all because i like it the way it is. as for art classes i took a lot of those in high school and college. i learned a lot from them including simpler is sometimes better. besides my art isn't that much simpler than oots.