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Turneround360
2014-07-15, 08:39 PM
Name: Errain Bronte (https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AgQJFC8kiRqldGhLLWNjT3BWLWZINWZIVmVZMkhEb EE&usp=sharing)
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Nationality: Asthurian
Class(s): Spark Master / Martial Artist
Game: Into Aevum (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?361857-Into-the-Aevum-Character-Creation)


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Errain is a young woman not long coming of age in her society, average of height and sleight of build her looks deceivingly hide her superior strength. Whilst a rather striking beauty herself, her practical sense of dress and active life style tends to have looks falling to a lesser priority, not that she doesn't care about her appearance, she just doesn't tend to go beyond making herself presentable and doesn't 'doll' herself up. Pale blonde hair that is practically white once placed under the light a hallmark of those of the Asthurian nation, and her amber eyes reveal the vast potential she has yet to harness for manipulating their signature element, Electricity.

Born and raised amongst the middle class, her parents ran an alchemical business to manufacturer goods for sale, creating artifacts and tools by mixing Alchemical knowledge and Asthurian talents. From a young age Errain has always exhibited an exceptional talent for destruction, her innate abilities to manipulate electricity were almost uncontrollable as a child and an outlet had to be found to channel those forces lest their home be reduced to a smouldering crater, fortunately for the Asthurians they had long been mastering their arts for combat and other offensive purposes, by channeling her energies and placing them under constant use through martial training Errain began to control her powers.

However there was one thing about Errain, she was competitive, and what started out as an exercise in control and restrain for her own benefit became an opportunity to push herself, to challenge herself, to hit her limits go beyond and exhaust herself. Every act become a moment to improve her technique, her strength and her will. Simple Kata turned into precise and deadly strikes that even impressed her mentors. Whilst Asthura has not been in an active war for a very long period of time, but that is not to say they did not have enemies. And whilst their military is more of a standing force purely for defense, having none to do battle with, the combination of their highly trained soldiers and a number of specialized alchemist and artificers made them a forced to be scared of. Unfortunately, the surrounding nations were scared, but they were not culled, and they banded together and launched a preemptive strike against what they though to be a nation building for war. To Errain, weather or not her country was preparing for war didn't matter, she leapt to the defense of her country gaining valuable combat experience in numerous skirmishes in the early days of the war.

To Errain and in fact most of Asthura, the tales of Aevum where so old, that if there was any truth to them no one was around to verify their claims, that is not to say no one believed. There where only two Flames of Glory which continued to burn in Asthura, one in the high temple from which the palace is build upon, its flame continues to burn at the peak of the tallest spire in the kingdom, the other was nearer to the outskirts of the kingdom, out in the Durias Plains, the site of an ancient battlefield, where now sits one of the largest garrisons built, the large inner grounds which surround the flame is used as training grounds where recruits can draw inspiration from is presence. It was here in the aftermath of an extended battle, the perimeter had been breached and the battle was reduced to infighting inside the fortress walls that the Flame of Glory lay claim to Errain, the last of her squadron standing, she claimed victory from the jaws of defeat and pushed back those who had lead the charged against her. Little did she know that this small victory paved the way for something potentially greater.

Personality
Errain is a serious and highly competitive individual, she is also fiercely loyal, both to her country and her friends. She doesn't like to take the slow path, and prefers to take the most direct option available at the time. That is not to say she is reckless and jumps into everything without a moments notice, it's just that indirect and fiddly approaches annoy her to no end, but if there is due reason to use them, then she will not complain (too much). She is not prone to hate, and generally slow to anger, deeming most things ignorable if they get too annoying, but once angered she is slow to calm and can carry grudges to the ends of the earth. Having being suddenly sent to Aevum, her immediate response will be to try and return home to resume the war effort, should this not prove possible, she will make the most of what the world has to offer her and use it to push her limits above and beyond anything she could reach back home.

Bahad
Bahad has been a constant companion to Errain since she was a child, her mentors often pitted her in mock combat with pokemon to train both the pokemon and herself, however her uncontrollable powers made holding back quite difficult and short of the ground types immune to her touch, basically all of her available training partners eventually refused to approach her, one however was different, a Makuhita. He was probably a bit on the small size compared to the rest of his species, but what he lacked in stature he made up in heart, he was just as if not even more determined than Errain was, every spar she won caused him to win two more as payback. Soon enough this relationship did not go unnoticed by her teachers, as sparing partners went they knew each others move in and out and when they worked together their actions were completely in sync, no bets were taken over who was going to be given him when their training was complete. Errain named him Bahad, an ancient Asthurian word synonymous with Determination or Force of Will.

Errain's homeland is the nation of Asthura, nestled along a flat stretch of coastline with a lone mountain rising out the surrounding plains, and it its at the base of this mountain the capital Astenbur lie. Frequent storms and wild weather is common for the region, but the surrounding plains are fertile land that regularly produce abundant harvests and the mountain is rife with unusual metals which Asthurian Artificers and Alchemist pride themselves on using to their full effects. Errain's set of gauntlets are an example of some of the fine craftsmanship which can be produced by their nation, both work in tandem with her powers of electricity, the larger one aiding the maximization of her outputs and redirecting any excess and wayward charges, the smaller works with affecting and repelling metals to deflect attacks while being sturdy enough to not buckle or bend against anything which might strike it.

By the large they are a warrior like culture, but intellectual pursuits are deemed just as worthy, above all they approve of people making the best of their talents and personal achievement is valued over any inherited status. Your family might help you get to where you might be, but unless you can do the job yourself and prove your fit for it, someone else will do the job for you. Martial Combat is something almost every Asthurian is trained in at some point, and they all universally have some degree of ability to manipulate electricity. How those talents are directed vary, but typically those with greater fine control go about using their talents to produce goods and crafts mixing their talents with Alchemical knowledge to produce unique tools and artifacts that cannot be replicated anywhere else and those with raw power get involved more heavily in the military.

Asthurian pokeballs, use apricots and line the interior and exterior with layers of leafed metal, which hardens and reinforces them as well as giving them a unique appearance, and allows them to be manipulated by Asthuian powers for those skilled enough

Asthura was once just a facet of a much larger empire, founded by a quartet of hero's who were have said to have returned from Aevum full of glory and untold powers not witnessed in this world before, united as friends they each founded cities and devoted themselves to teaching others of what they had learned and further honing the powers they gained. However no friendship lasts forever, as they aged and one of their number pasted away, the remaining 3 squabbled over who had the best claim. The outcome of who won and who killed who will change depending on which of the kingdoms one asks. To the Asthurians, Edaliass, the Hero of White Lighting took the rest in mortal combat, claiming victory but succumbing to his wounds afterwards. Generations of wars followed as students, friends and family of each of the hero's rose up to defeat the rest. The conflicts lasted until no side could battle no more and each returned to their kingdoms to raise them up to be greater than before. This is all ancient history to a present Asthurian, and war has never reached such a scale in any time in recorded history since, aside from the occasional border scuffle, that is until now...

Dragged this over from MW too, saves you putting it back in
Who?- Warrior culture believing in discipline and dedication in whatever they do.
What?- Electrical warriors, alchemists, and artificers backed by many miners and farmers. All battle-ready.
Where?- Mt. Astenbur, along the Golden-Storm Coast.
When?- ~200-300 years ago.
Why?- Edaliass, the Hero of White Lighting along with the other three Champions of the Aevum founded four empires. Edaliass founded Asthura.
How?- Through skirmish battles and conquest, Asthura has endured through pure martial prowess.

Special Notes- Most Asthurian citizens have pale blonde hair and amber eyes. The intensity of their eyes indicates their power over electricity. Most Asthurian citizens have some control over electricity.

Their Alchemy and Artificer constructs are fairly well known. You can tell an Asthurian Apricorn Ball by the leafed metal, making them significantly stronger. -5 Modifier to any Apricorn Ball made by an Asthurian smith.

Any chance you can bring over the descriptions of the other kingdoms I PM'ed you back on MW, I didn't keep a copy of them

Turneround360
2014-07-15, 08:42 PM
http://www.makeathumbnail.com/thumbnails/image275655.pngCondition: All Green
Hp: 67/67 AP: 5
Pokemon
Bahad: 53/53, 0 Injuries, Normal Condition
Sheet (https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AgQJFC8kiRqldGhLLWNjT3BWLWZINWZIVmVZMkhEb EE&usp=drive_web#gid=0)

Errain was exhausted, Bahad was not in any better of a condition. They where battered and bruised, bloodied and injured. The Durias garrison was so badly damage that it was on the verge of collapse and it was practically useless as a defensive position anymore, in that sense Asthura had defiantly lost this battle, but not without severely bloodying the nose of their opponents. She stood in the training grounds of the Durias Garrison, the night was cloudy and the stars refusing to make there appearance, the only light was the brightly burning Flame of Glory in the center of the courtyard. Around her where the fallen members of her unit, some might live through their injuries, others had already succumbed to them, but before her lay the Thekal commander and his men which had led the charge this night.

The night was virtually silent as the enemy retreated their purposes fulfilled even at great cost, the only sound was her own deep breaths and the constant crackle of a burning flame, Errain paused, giving a moment of silence to her fallen brethren and to pull herself back from the mind of battle. "Great work out there Bahad, now lets get our folk fixed up and outta here before the enemy regroups" before returning him to his apricot ball, he deserved a good rest after tonight's ordeal.

She reached for her sling bag which had been discarded in the fray of combat, it wasn't much but it had a stash of supplies in case one got separated from their unit in the mists of battle, but more importantly it had medicine. No sooner had she picked it up than did the Flame of Glory burst into a raging inferno which consumed the courtyard, it was hot, it burned but it was not painful. The warmth fought back the creeping fatigue and the fire burned away her wounds leaving not a scar behind, she barley even had a chance to raise her voice before the fire blinds her and its roar would cover any sound she could produce. And when it cleared everything had changed.

"Tch, Ok who threw Alchemical Drought into the fire" she starts complaining, more to herself as her vision clears and the heat fades, however what she see robs her of her next words. Clear blue skies an unfamiliar horizon. She had no idea where she was, but there was one thing she did recognize, that flame and that ring, it was a Flame of Glory arranged exactly like the training grounds she was taught at and had just fought on, she had no idea on what exactly was going on, but to her what was about to happen was as clear as the sky above her, and before the voice of the Flame called out to fight, she was in the ring with a vicious grin on her face waiting for her opponent, hoping they would be up to the task.

With a quick practiced ease, Bahad is sent out from his ball, he too felt the healing and invigorating effects of the flame and instantly picked up on his partners mood, "Whatever comes outta that ball of there's is yours Bahad, beat it black and blue, the others mine" Errain says, she was getting pumped, both of them were hoping they would be a worthy foe.

The moment her opponent places on foot in the ring, she's onto him, a single decisive blow to the sternum, it was direct and it had power and if they could take it she could deal more

Another_Poet
2014-08-01, 02:05 AM
Seems like a cool character. But I gotta say....

"average of height and sleight of build"

The girl in the picture is not slight of build.

"her practical sense of dress"

The girl in the picture definitely doesn't have a practical sense of dress.

"not that she doesn't care about her appearance, she just doesn't tend to go beyond making herself presentable and doesn't 'doll' herself up."

...did you look at the girl in the picture? :smalltongue:

Sith_Happens
2014-08-01, 02:09 AM
Ooh, another one. (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?362916-PTU-Into-the-Aevum-character-Kaiyou-Ship-s-Guardian)