Surrealistik
2014-08-25, 12:55 PM
(WIP)
Class Features:
Spell Mastery & Signature Spell (Wizard): Spell Mastery and Signature Spell switch level prerequisites; you get Spell Mastery at level 20 and Signature Spell at level 18.
Why: This is intended to force players to go pure Wizard in order to acquire use of the Shield spell in perpetuity; having unarmored defense/heavy armour + perpetual Shield is far too strong, to say nothing of Blur, Misty Step, Mirror Image, etc usage at will.
Eldritch Master, Revised (Warlock): "At 20th level, you can draw on your inner reserve of mystical power while entreating your patron to regain expended spell slots. While all of your Pact Magic spell slots are expended and you're not incapacitated, you may take 4d8 necrotic damage that cannot be reduced or prevented and ignores temporary hit points. If you do, you regain a Pact Magic spell slot. Your hit point maximum is reduced by the damage taken in this way until you take a long or short rest. This ignores any effect that would prevent your hit point maximum from being reduced."
Why: Eldritch Master was laughably weak in its initial form for a capstone, effectively acting as little more than a short rest for your pact spells only that was compressed into a span of 1 minute once per long rest.
Pact of the Chain, (Warlock):"Your familiars have a bonus to their attack rolls, skill checks, damage rolls, saving throws and DCs equal to the proficiency bonus that would be granted by your Warlock levels only, and have hit dice equal to the greater of their existing hit dice, or your Warlock level (their maximum HP equals the average roll of those dice, rounded up)".
Why: Allows Pact of the Chain to better scale with alternatives like Pact of the Tome.
Perfect Self, Revised (Monk): "At the start of each of your turns (or every 6 seconds outside of combat), you regain 1 Ki if you have less Ki than 8 minus the total Ki cost (if any) of any of your effects created by a Monk class feature with a minute duration or longer that are active."
Why: Perfect Self as it stands is too weak for a capstone that furthermore requires combat to benefit from. Further, this version of the capstone will be of value to a PC with much greater consistency, and allows a Monk to always be able to use some kind of Ki ability without trivializing the value of a short rest in relation to Ki acquisition.
Wholeness of Body, Revised (Monk):"
At 6th level, you gain the ability to heal yourself. As an Action, you can do one of the following:
Spend X Ki to regain hit points equal to 5 times X. If you were restored to maximum hit points in this way (your current maximum hit points if they were reduced), this effect also cures any diseases or poisons you're currently subject to.
Spend 4 Ki to subject yourself to the effects of the Remove Curse spell.
You must finish a short or long rest before you can use this feature again."
Why: The original version was anemically weak compared to abilities provided by alternative paths at the same class level.
Tranquility, Revised (Monk):
"Beginning at 11th level, you can enter a special meditation that surrounds you with an aura of peace. At the end of a long rest or short rest, or when you spend 3 Ki as an Action, you may gain the effect of a Sanctuary spell that lasts until the end of your next long rest (the spell can end early as normal). The saving throw DC for the spell equals 8 + your Wisdom modifier + your proficiency bonus or your Ki DC, whichever is higher."
Why: The original version was anemically weak compared to abilities provided by alternative paths at the same class level.
Action Surge (Fighter): "You cannot use actions gained via the Action Surge feature to cast non-cantrip spells except those granted by a Fighter Martial Archetype using a 4th level or lower spell slot."
Why: Reduces the overwhelming appeal of a 2 Fighter dip for casters, and prevents the abuse of a feature that becomes too powerful when used to cast high level magic.
Two-Weapon Fighting Extra Attack (Fighter): "At Fighter level 11, whenever you expend a Bonus Action to use Two-Weapon Fighting (PHB Page 195), you can make two attacks with your off-hand weapon instead of one."
Why: Allows Fighter builds orientated towards dual wielding and use of Two-Weapon Fighting to keep pace with the damage output of Fighter builds using large two-handed weapons.
Relentless, Revised (Fighter): "At Fighter level 10, whenever you start your turn (or every 6 seconds outside of combat) and have no superiority die, you regain 1 superiority die. At Fighter level 15, you regain this die per these conditions while you have 1 or less superiority die."
Why: Improves and gives earlier access to a class feature that is both far too weak and deferred.
Wild Shape & Polymorph Effects (Druids and Spells): "Any damage taken while polymorphed or otherwise in a form other than your default form applies to your default form when that effect ends."
Why: Prevents abuse of polymorph effects as a massive and recurring HP buffer, particularly in the case of Circle of the Moon Druids.
Spells:
Wild Shape & Polymorph Effects (Druids and Spells): "Any damage taken while polymorphed or otherwise in a form other than your default form applies to your default form when that effect ends."
Why: Prevents abuse of polymorph effects as a massive and recurring HP buffer, particularly in the case of Circle of the Moon Druids.
Create Undead: Create Undead has been replaced with Animate Dead as written below.
Why: Create Undead rendered redundant.
Simulacrum: Simulacrums cannot cast spells above the 5th level.
Why: Simulacrums being able to self-replicate and cast high level spells such as Wish is too powerful.
Wish: Any use of Wish to do anything other than cast a level 8 spell or lower is explicitly subject to DM arbitration. Though Wish can cast any level 8 spell or lower, the greater cast time of that spell and Wish is utilized in order to cast any spell in this way, otherwise doing so counts as having used an effect other than casting a level 8 spell or lower.
Why: Wish can be potentially abused to achieve unlimited wealth, permanent resistance in perpetuity and other game breaking effects if this limitation isn't in place, as well as creating a Simulacrum instantly.
Conjure Spells (Conjure Animals, Conjure Minor Elementals, Conjure Woodland Beings, Conjure Celestial, Conjure Elementals, etc...): These spells now have a duration of Concentration, up to 1 minute. Further, creatures summoned by these spells can take no actions on their turn other than the Dodge action, and will only defend themselves against hostile creatures unless their summoner used an Action to command them, or summon them prior to their turn.
Why: The duration of 1 hour these spells have effectively allow their users to obviate the need for melee classes and give them inordinate power through multiplied action economies for long periods of time.
Animate Dead:
Animate Dead
3rd-level necromancy
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: 10 feet
Components: V, S, M (a drop of blood, a piece of flesh, a pinch of bone dust and a black onyx worth 50 gp; if used to create undead, it is consumed by the spell)
Duration: Instantaneous
You can create or reassert control over a total 1 CR worth of zombie, ghoul, wight, skeleton, ghost, spectre, shadow or wraith creatures from up to 2 corpses and bone piles within range (The DM has that creature's game statistics). Each undead created in this way must come from a different intact corpse or set of bones as appropriate (zombies, wights and ghouls must come from corpses as an example). Any of these remains that were used by this spell but do not comprise an undead created in this way turn to dust. Corporeal undead created in this way are of the same size and shape of the remains they were created with, and turn to dust upon being destroyed. Creatures created by this spell are under your control for 24 hours or until you cast this spell again, whichever comes first (if you cast this spell and don't use it to reassert control over an undead creature you created with it, it is no longer under your control). Undead creatures controlled with this spell lose the ability to spawn new undead. On your turn, as an Action, you can mentally command any creature you made with this spell if that creature is within 60 feet of you. You decide what actions the creature will take and where it will move during its next turn, or you can issue a general command, such as to guard a particular chamber or corridor. If you issue no commands, the creature only defends itself against hostile creatures. A creature given orders in this way continues to follow it until its task is complete or you no longer control it.
At Higher Levels: For each spell level beyond the 3rd this spell is cast at, you create or reassert control over +1 CR worth of undead creatures targeting up to +2 extra corpses, and it requires +1 extra minute to cast and +25 extra gp worth of black onyx material components.
Why: Prevents creation of overtly large necrohorde armies that invalidates the need for physical fighters.
Mirror Image:
Mirror Image:
2nd-level illusion
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Self
Components: V, S
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 minute
Effect: Three illusory duplicates of yourself appear in your space. Until the spell ends, the duplicates move with
you and mimic your actions, shifting position so it’s impossible to track which image is real. You can use your action to dismiss the illusory duplicates.
Each time a creature targets you with an attack during the spell’s duration, roll a d20 to determine whether the attack instead targets one of your duplicates as follows:
3 Duplicates: Roll 6+
2 Duplicates: Roll 8+
1 Duplicate: Roll 11+
A duplicate’s AC equals 10 + your Dexterity modifier. If an attack hits a duplicate, the duplicate is destroyed. A duplicate can be destroyed only by an attack that hits it. It ignores all other damage and effects. As an Action or Bonus Action, you can make a destroyed duplicate reappear.
A creature is unaffected by this spell if it can’t see, if it relies on senses other than sight, such as blindsight, or if it can perceive illusions as false, as with truesight.
Why: Mirror Image is too good without Concentration and shouldn't be an exception to the Concentration duration rule. In reciprocity, I've given the caster the ability to recover destroyed duplicates at the cost of Actions and Bonus Actions, and stopped the spell from ending when all duplicates are destroyed.
Sleep:
Sleep
1st-level enchantment
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: 90 feet
Components: V, S, M (a pinch of fine sand, rose petals, or a cricket)
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 minute
Effect: This spell sends creatures into a magical slumber. Roll 5d8; the total is how many hit points of creatures
this spell can affect. Creatures within 20 feet of a point you choose within range are affected in ascending order of their current hit points (ignoring unconscious creatures). Starting with the creature that has the lowest current hit points, each creature affected must make a Wisdom saving throw or fall unconscious until the spell ends, the sleeper takes damage, or someone uses an action to shake or slap the sleeper awake. Subtract each creature’s hit points from the total before moving on to the creature with the next lowest hit points. A creature’s hit points must be equal to or less than the remaining total for that creature to be affected.
Undead, constructs, and creatures immune to being charmed aren’t affected by this spell.
At Higher Levels: When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 2nd level or higher, roll an additional 4d8 for each slot level above 1st.
Why: Originally this spell was far too powerful at early levels, and too weak later on due to its lack of a saving throw, and its poor scaling.
Telekinesis:
Telekinesis
5th-level transmutation
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: 60 feet
Components: V, S
Duration: Concentration, up to 10 minutes
Effect: You gain the ability to move or manipulate creatures or objects by thought, and form localized barriers of telekinetic force. When you cast the spell, and as your action each round for the duration, you can exert your will on one creature or object that you can see within range, subjecting it to one effect of your choice below.
If the target of the chosen effect is unwilling, you must succeed on an ability check with your spellcasting ability contested by the target’s Strength check (or the Strength check of the creature possessing an attended object. Unattended objects automatically fail) for that effect to occur. You can only Fling and Move/Crush objects that weigh 1000 pounds or less. These effects last on a target until you change that target, or until the end of your next turn.
Fling: Make a ranged weapon attack against a target with proficiency using your caster ability modifier in place of your Dexterity modifier. It has a range equal to your caster ability modifier x 10 feet and a long range equal to twice that. On a hit, the flung object or creature deals 1d6 damage for every 100 pounds it weighs (minimum 1d6, maximum 10d6) + your caster ability modifier. A creature or object hit in this way must make a Strength saving throw or be knocked prone. The flung object or creature also takes this damage, and ends its movement adjacent to the target, falling prone.
Move/Crush: You can move the target up to your caster ability modifier x 10 feet in any direction, including upward but not beyond the range of this spell, or you can crush it, dealing 8d6 bludgeoning damage. While this effect is active, you may have the target be restrained in your telekinetic grip. A target lifted upward is suspended in mid-air. If the target is an object you can manipulate it per the Use an Object action, or have it make an attack, using your caster ability modifier in place of your Strength or Dexterity modifier for its attack and damage rolls. If that object isn’t a weapon, or if it is a weapon you don’t have proficiency with, it counts as an improvised weapon.
Shield: You can form a telekinetic shield around you or a creature or object within range that you can see. This shield grants a bonus to the target’s AC, Strength and Dexterity saves equal to your caster ability modifier (minimum 1). If an attack, spell or effect would have an effect on the target protected by your shield on a miss or successful Strength or Dexterity save (such as half damage) it instead has no effect on that target.
Casting At Higher Levels: For each spell level above the 5th this spell is cast at the following benefits apply to it:
You can target a creature or object weighing an extra 1000 pounds.
Crush damage increases by +2d6.
The range of this spell extends by 30 feet.
For every two spell levels above the 5th this spell is cast at, the Shield effect bonuses increase by +1, and you can target an additional creature or object.
Why: I didn't feel that Telekinesis as it stood appropriately defined the scope of this spell. This is a change that's more nice to have than one that significantly impacts the game or a class.
Class Features:
Spell Mastery & Signature Spell (Wizard): Spell Mastery and Signature Spell switch level prerequisites; you get Spell Mastery at level 20 and Signature Spell at level 18.
Why: This is intended to force players to go pure Wizard in order to acquire use of the Shield spell in perpetuity; having unarmored defense/heavy armour + perpetual Shield is far too strong, to say nothing of Blur, Misty Step, Mirror Image, etc usage at will.
Eldritch Master, Revised (Warlock): "At 20th level, you can draw on your inner reserve of mystical power while entreating your patron to regain expended spell slots. While all of your Pact Magic spell slots are expended and you're not incapacitated, you may take 4d8 necrotic damage that cannot be reduced or prevented and ignores temporary hit points. If you do, you regain a Pact Magic spell slot. Your hit point maximum is reduced by the damage taken in this way until you take a long or short rest. This ignores any effect that would prevent your hit point maximum from being reduced."
Why: Eldritch Master was laughably weak in its initial form for a capstone, effectively acting as little more than a short rest for your pact spells only that was compressed into a span of 1 minute once per long rest.
Pact of the Chain, (Warlock):"Your familiars have a bonus to their attack rolls, skill checks, damage rolls, saving throws and DCs equal to the proficiency bonus that would be granted by your Warlock levels only, and have hit dice equal to the greater of their existing hit dice, or your Warlock level (their maximum HP equals the average roll of those dice, rounded up)".
Why: Allows Pact of the Chain to better scale with alternatives like Pact of the Tome.
Perfect Self, Revised (Monk): "At the start of each of your turns (or every 6 seconds outside of combat), you regain 1 Ki if you have less Ki than 8 minus the total Ki cost (if any) of any of your effects created by a Monk class feature with a minute duration or longer that are active."
Why: Perfect Self as it stands is too weak for a capstone that furthermore requires combat to benefit from. Further, this version of the capstone will be of value to a PC with much greater consistency, and allows a Monk to always be able to use some kind of Ki ability without trivializing the value of a short rest in relation to Ki acquisition.
Wholeness of Body, Revised (Monk):"
At 6th level, you gain the ability to heal yourself. As an Action, you can do one of the following:
Spend X Ki to regain hit points equal to 5 times X. If you were restored to maximum hit points in this way (your current maximum hit points if they were reduced), this effect also cures any diseases or poisons you're currently subject to.
Spend 4 Ki to subject yourself to the effects of the Remove Curse spell.
You must finish a short or long rest before you can use this feature again."
Why: The original version was anemically weak compared to abilities provided by alternative paths at the same class level.
Tranquility, Revised (Monk):
"Beginning at 11th level, you can enter a special meditation that surrounds you with an aura of peace. At the end of a long rest or short rest, or when you spend 3 Ki as an Action, you may gain the effect of a Sanctuary spell that lasts until the end of your next long rest (the spell can end early as normal). The saving throw DC for the spell equals 8 + your Wisdom modifier + your proficiency bonus or your Ki DC, whichever is higher."
Why: The original version was anemically weak compared to abilities provided by alternative paths at the same class level.
Action Surge (Fighter): "You cannot use actions gained via the Action Surge feature to cast non-cantrip spells except those granted by a Fighter Martial Archetype using a 4th level or lower spell slot."
Why: Reduces the overwhelming appeal of a 2 Fighter dip for casters, and prevents the abuse of a feature that becomes too powerful when used to cast high level magic.
Two-Weapon Fighting Extra Attack (Fighter): "At Fighter level 11, whenever you expend a Bonus Action to use Two-Weapon Fighting (PHB Page 195), you can make two attacks with your off-hand weapon instead of one."
Why: Allows Fighter builds orientated towards dual wielding and use of Two-Weapon Fighting to keep pace with the damage output of Fighter builds using large two-handed weapons.
Relentless, Revised (Fighter): "At Fighter level 10, whenever you start your turn (or every 6 seconds outside of combat) and have no superiority die, you regain 1 superiority die. At Fighter level 15, you regain this die per these conditions while you have 1 or less superiority die."
Why: Improves and gives earlier access to a class feature that is both far too weak and deferred.
Wild Shape & Polymorph Effects (Druids and Spells): "Any damage taken while polymorphed or otherwise in a form other than your default form applies to your default form when that effect ends."
Why: Prevents abuse of polymorph effects as a massive and recurring HP buffer, particularly in the case of Circle of the Moon Druids.
Spells:
Wild Shape & Polymorph Effects (Druids and Spells): "Any damage taken while polymorphed or otherwise in a form other than your default form applies to your default form when that effect ends."
Why: Prevents abuse of polymorph effects as a massive and recurring HP buffer, particularly in the case of Circle of the Moon Druids.
Create Undead: Create Undead has been replaced with Animate Dead as written below.
Why: Create Undead rendered redundant.
Simulacrum: Simulacrums cannot cast spells above the 5th level.
Why: Simulacrums being able to self-replicate and cast high level spells such as Wish is too powerful.
Wish: Any use of Wish to do anything other than cast a level 8 spell or lower is explicitly subject to DM arbitration. Though Wish can cast any level 8 spell or lower, the greater cast time of that spell and Wish is utilized in order to cast any spell in this way, otherwise doing so counts as having used an effect other than casting a level 8 spell or lower.
Why: Wish can be potentially abused to achieve unlimited wealth, permanent resistance in perpetuity and other game breaking effects if this limitation isn't in place, as well as creating a Simulacrum instantly.
Conjure Spells (Conjure Animals, Conjure Minor Elementals, Conjure Woodland Beings, Conjure Celestial, Conjure Elementals, etc...): These spells now have a duration of Concentration, up to 1 minute. Further, creatures summoned by these spells can take no actions on their turn other than the Dodge action, and will only defend themselves against hostile creatures unless their summoner used an Action to command them, or summon them prior to their turn.
Why: The duration of 1 hour these spells have effectively allow their users to obviate the need for melee classes and give them inordinate power through multiplied action economies for long periods of time.
Animate Dead:
Animate Dead
3rd-level necromancy
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: 10 feet
Components: V, S, M (a drop of blood, a piece of flesh, a pinch of bone dust and a black onyx worth 50 gp; if used to create undead, it is consumed by the spell)
Duration: Instantaneous
You can create or reassert control over a total 1 CR worth of zombie, ghoul, wight, skeleton, ghost, spectre, shadow or wraith creatures from up to 2 corpses and bone piles within range (The DM has that creature's game statistics). Each undead created in this way must come from a different intact corpse or set of bones as appropriate (zombies, wights and ghouls must come from corpses as an example). Any of these remains that were used by this spell but do not comprise an undead created in this way turn to dust. Corporeal undead created in this way are of the same size and shape of the remains they were created with, and turn to dust upon being destroyed. Creatures created by this spell are under your control for 24 hours or until you cast this spell again, whichever comes first (if you cast this spell and don't use it to reassert control over an undead creature you created with it, it is no longer under your control). Undead creatures controlled with this spell lose the ability to spawn new undead. On your turn, as an Action, you can mentally command any creature you made with this spell if that creature is within 60 feet of you. You decide what actions the creature will take and where it will move during its next turn, or you can issue a general command, such as to guard a particular chamber or corridor. If you issue no commands, the creature only defends itself against hostile creatures. A creature given orders in this way continues to follow it until its task is complete or you no longer control it.
At Higher Levels: For each spell level beyond the 3rd this spell is cast at, you create or reassert control over +1 CR worth of undead creatures targeting up to +2 extra corpses, and it requires +1 extra minute to cast and +25 extra gp worth of black onyx material components.
Why: Prevents creation of overtly large necrohorde armies that invalidates the need for physical fighters.
Mirror Image:
Mirror Image:
2nd-level illusion
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Self
Components: V, S
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 minute
Effect: Three illusory duplicates of yourself appear in your space. Until the spell ends, the duplicates move with
you and mimic your actions, shifting position so it’s impossible to track which image is real. You can use your action to dismiss the illusory duplicates.
Each time a creature targets you with an attack during the spell’s duration, roll a d20 to determine whether the attack instead targets one of your duplicates as follows:
3 Duplicates: Roll 6+
2 Duplicates: Roll 8+
1 Duplicate: Roll 11+
A duplicate’s AC equals 10 + your Dexterity modifier. If an attack hits a duplicate, the duplicate is destroyed. A duplicate can be destroyed only by an attack that hits it. It ignores all other damage and effects. As an Action or Bonus Action, you can make a destroyed duplicate reappear.
A creature is unaffected by this spell if it can’t see, if it relies on senses other than sight, such as blindsight, or if it can perceive illusions as false, as with truesight.
Why: Mirror Image is too good without Concentration and shouldn't be an exception to the Concentration duration rule. In reciprocity, I've given the caster the ability to recover destroyed duplicates at the cost of Actions and Bonus Actions, and stopped the spell from ending when all duplicates are destroyed.
Sleep:
Sleep
1st-level enchantment
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: 90 feet
Components: V, S, M (a pinch of fine sand, rose petals, or a cricket)
Duration: Concentration, up to 1 minute
Effect: This spell sends creatures into a magical slumber. Roll 5d8; the total is how many hit points of creatures
this spell can affect. Creatures within 20 feet of a point you choose within range are affected in ascending order of their current hit points (ignoring unconscious creatures). Starting with the creature that has the lowest current hit points, each creature affected must make a Wisdom saving throw or fall unconscious until the spell ends, the sleeper takes damage, or someone uses an action to shake or slap the sleeper awake. Subtract each creature’s hit points from the total before moving on to the creature with the next lowest hit points. A creature’s hit points must be equal to or less than the remaining total for that creature to be affected.
Undead, constructs, and creatures immune to being charmed aren’t affected by this spell.
At Higher Levels: When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 2nd level or higher, roll an additional 4d8 for each slot level above 1st.
Why: Originally this spell was far too powerful at early levels, and too weak later on due to its lack of a saving throw, and its poor scaling.
Telekinesis:
Telekinesis
5th-level transmutation
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: 60 feet
Components: V, S
Duration: Concentration, up to 10 minutes
Effect: You gain the ability to move or manipulate creatures or objects by thought, and form localized barriers of telekinetic force. When you cast the spell, and as your action each round for the duration, you can exert your will on one creature or object that you can see within range, subjecting it to one effect of your choice below.
If the target of the chosen effect is unwilling, you must succeed on an ability check with your spellcasting ability contested by the target’s Strength check (or the Strength check of the creature possessing an attended object. Unattended objects automatically fail) for that effect to occur. You can only Fling and Move/Crush objects that weigh 1000 pounds or less. These effects last on a target until you change that target, or until the end of your next turn.
Fling: Make a ranged weapon attack against a target with proficiency using your caster ability modifier in place of your Dexterity modifier. It has a range equal to your caster ability modifier x 10 feet and a long range equal to twice that. On a hit, the flung object or creature deals 1d6 damage for every 100 pounds it weighs (minimum 1d6, maximum 10d6) + your caster ability modifier. A creature or object hit in this way must make a Strength saving throw or be knocked prone. The flung object or creature also takes this damage, and ends its movement adjacent to the target, falling prone.
Move/Crush: You can move the target up to your caster ability modifier x 10 feet in any direction, including upward but not beyond the range of this spell, or you can crush it, dealing 8d6 bludgeoning damage. While this effect is active, you may have the target be restrained in your telekinetic grip. A target lifted upward is suspended in mid-air. If the target is an object you can manipulate it per the Use an Object action, or have it make an attack, using your caster ability modifier in place of your Strength or Dexterity modifier for its attack and damage rolls. If that object isn’t a weapon, or if it is a weapon you don’t have proficiency with, it counts as an improvised weapon.
Shield: You can form a telekinetic shield around you or a creature or object within range that you can see. This shield grants a bonus to the target’s AC, Strength and Dexterity saves equal to your caster ability modifier (minimum 1). If an attack, spell or effect would have an effect on the target protected by your shield on a miss or successful Strength or Dexterity save (such as half damage) it instead has no effect on that target.
Casting At Higher Levels: For each spell level above the 5th this spell is cast at the following benefits apply to it:
You can target a creature or object weighing an extra 1000 pounds.
Crush damage increases by +2d6.
The range of this spell extends by 30 feet.
For every two spell levels above the 5th this spell is cast at, the Shield effect bonuses increase by +1, and you can target an additional creature or object.
Why: I didn't feel that Telekinesis as it stood appropriately defined the scope of this spell. This is a change that's more nice to have than one that significantly impacts the game or a class.