BLIND! A comic I've been working on for a long while now.

[ChrisFS]

BLIND - An experimental comic where I continuously develop my art style while telling a story. It's also poorly written and jenky looking at the beginning because I started years ago.

http://static1.squarespace.com/static/53219922e4b04f88d11b90eb/t/5473490ae4b0866193a07385/1416841484467/promo.jpg?format=1500w

Synopsis: The world ended in 1914, leaving a handful of people to rebuild it. It's now 2010 and the land of Echetrathe has gotten back on it's feet. The story follows Baxter, who has been blinded since he was an infant, and Kienna could never really fit in as they hid away from the most populated city of Puritune, only to feel the need to save it and the rest of Echetrathe from immediate danger.

Let me know what you guys think! I've been writing this comic for a while and finally finished the writing so I'm excited get further along in the art aspect of it!

COMIC BELOW

http://i.imgur.com/98cpIXV.png?1 (https://cmetzner.squarespace.com/config#/|/blind-chapter-1) http://i.imgur.com/Fu0dxFW.jpg?1 (https://cmetzner.squarespace.com/blind-chapter-2) http://i.imgur.com/KlbBkPV.jpg?2 (https://cmetzner.squarespace.com/blind-chapter-3) http://i.imgur.com/YVcimFb.jpg?1 (https://cmetzner.squarespace.com/blind-chapter-4) http://i.imgur.com/5CTnHpH.jpg?2 (https://cmetzner.squarespace.com/blind-chapter-5)


Here are the links!

http://www.cmetzner.com/comics/

http://i.imgur.com/kZ16Aq5.jpg (https://www.facebook.com/BLiNDcomic?ref=hl)http://i.imgur.com/KoP48Wy.jpg (http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=149267)

[Agi Hammerthief]

interesting so far, like the art: easy to follow
bookmarking

[Agi Hammerthief]

soo...
is this going anywhere?

[fifacome08]

Peter was a clever boy. On his first day at school, he learned three words: I, You and She. The teacher taught him how to make sentences with those words. The teacher said, I, I am your teacher; (then pointing to a girl) She, She is your classmate; You, You are my student.