5 Minute Workday

[Jester David]

Pluggling my webcomic 5 Minute Workday (http://www.5mwd.com/) at http://www.5mwd.com (http://www.5mwd.com/).

It's a single panel Dungeons & Dragons/ Pathfinder, with updates every Tuesday and Thursday.

I also post 5th Edition D&D content periodically here (http://www.5mwd.com/gaming-blog/5e-content).

[Domochevsky]

Hm, having checked it out now... I'm noticing with the art that it seems rather ...overloaded? Too many lines for too little return, if that makes sense. Especially the faces seem to have that issue, making everyone look twice as old as they're probably meant to be. Grinning mouths also tend to be just black zones, with an indetermined amount of fill in them, likely from you trying to draw in every single tooth. You might wanna avoid that for more clarity and open surfaces. [/art advice] :smallsmile:

Oh yeah, content-wise I have found one comic strip that was pretty good (the Bee-holder). The rest left me rather "yeah ok. Seems fine.", but that could just as well be me not being the immediate target audience.