Millenia's Path of War Homebrew Stuff

[MilleniaAntares]

Hello, and welcome to my thread of homebrew stuff!

Most of it relates to Dreamscarred Press's material, but it may change later on.

The Gloryhound Warlord (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z4wxsWRWV4W1lTY6F04c5LfMkbQMuvFq-kKBrGMx9tg/edit) is my first archetype. This archetype is designed for someone who wishes to use a warlord that is less about teamwork, but still keeps many other aspects of the class.

The War Heart Soulknife (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rrRrYM0_CXFpfvnWD7an3CKrrcrplWeqZN3HcR-NJi8/edit) is my second archetype, intended to be an initiating version of the feral heart. I hope that the changes don't have it overpower the feral heart.

I also have some feats (https://docs.google.com/document/d/18O_7C6sM9xnxHsH-pUrV8uI97rLWgZPhCOQx7KwafCw/edit) for review.

Input on wording, flavor, mechanical effects, etc are appreciated. As are suggestions on what to use for tags...

Thank you for your time.

[Vhaidara]

Wrong subforum (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?15-Homebrew-Design)

[MilleniaAntares]

Wrong subforum (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?15-Homebrew-Design)
That's embarrassing. Thankfully, a mod moved it to the proper place...

[StygianRose]

I cannot access the War Heart as the document has not been made public.

[MilleniaAntares]

The Gloryhound Warlord (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1z4wxsWRWV4W1lTY6F04c5LfMkbQMuvFq-kKBrGMx9tg/edit) has been updated with a new presence option for all warlords: Presence of Freedom. It is intended to protect against external effects that reduce a person's speed, as well as allow more maneuverability in the face of difficult terrain.

Though, I wonder if I should include a bonus to CMD versus grappling, given that that restricts movement... Any thoughts?


I cannot access the War Heart as the document has not been made public.
Fixed, sorry about that.

You should be able to access all three files now.

[MilleniaAntares]

I have updated the main document (https://docs.google.com/document/d/18O_7C6sM9xnxHsH-pUrV8uI97rLWgZPhCOQx7KwafCw/edit) with new aegis customizations, a rogue talent, a new feat called Versatile Quick Draw, and a new power.

The aegis customizations are to help improve upon my mental image of aegii as explorers (such as astronauts) and firefighters.

[MilleniaAntares]

My new PrC, the Highwind Knight (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q_Aiv4Ola9CrzoW4v5i1aYZ8tgYAqp38_SautyXi-hE/edit) is up.

I'm rather unsure how well it'd do mechanically, and whether or not it thematically fits in with the idea of a Final Fantasy-style dragoon. And also whether I should have used Vital Strike instead of mounted charging as the basis...

[MilleniaAntares]

The Amaranthen (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jTVKiGLl_1DZrt2IyZRjBkTsHK3Cn_TWSIGrYeXAIsw/edit?usp=sharing) race is now posted. This is my attempt at a no LA oozelike race. The descriptive aspects may need some work, independent of feedback, but I think it's mechanically sound.

[MilleniaAntares]

I have statted up a new weapon for the pacifist sort called the Needle Gun (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZkCZLdmQ5rQJ6ZbIHY5ncAIi1qLk-c-fPcSSY8B6fAw/edit). It's meant to be partially patterned after Team Fortress 2's Medic's syringe gun (https://wiki.teamfortress.com/w/images/thumb/4/4a/RED_Syringe_Gun.png/250px-RED_Syringe_Gun.png?t=20111211034335).