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ilovefire
2007-06-09, 09:24 PM
Well, Short-ish story. Based on the Dresden Codak comic 'Epilogue'. Hope it dosen't suck to bad, here's part 1 of I don't know how many yet. I know this is short, but all of the parts are like that, since I'm writing all of them to be excactly one page in 12 point times new roman font, double spaced in MSword. I'll try to post one every day or two, if people like them.


Introduction

Just like a paperback novel. That basically describes these past few centuries, to me at least. After all, I practically grew up on paperback novels—bad sci fi ones, at that, with robots taking over mankind. Never would have thought it’d actually happen… or that robotics would then take over itself. And to think, it all started because I was afraid of death. Now, the only thing I have to look forwards to is what I once feared.

Cancer’s a deadly thing. Especially if you didn’t know you had it. I was feeling sick—very sick. Sicker than I had ever felt before, not that I let it affect my research. Just went to the doctor for a checkup, he convinced me to get a CAT scan. And I found the truth. I had cancer in all my limbs and most of my organs, and it was heading for my brain. I think that’s when I first snapped, when I realized that I was going to die if I didn’t do something about it.

So I turned to cybernetics. My field of study, I was the best in the world. I locked myself in my lab for… weeks? Months? Maybe years, I can’t remember anymore, it was so long ago. My only consolation… I can’t talk about that, yet, the memories are to… painful. I worked tirelessly, replacing parts of my body with robotics. I started with limbs, then organs. I moved on to my skin and bones, my spine was replaced, and parts of my face and skull that had been cancerous. Leaving me with an organic brain, but little else. I guess anyone accessing this file will want me to go in-depth, but that’s for after the introduction. After all, what’s a paperback without the proper cheesy intro? *Bitter laughter* I just wish I could cry right now. But machines cannot cry.

Icewalker
2007-06-09, 11:42 PM
Huh, not bad.

The writing itself seemed a little mediocre at first, but I really like how it's pulled together in the last paragraph there.

I would/will certainly read it.

RationalGoblin
2007-06-10, 12:58 PM
Same, it looks interesting. Please continue writing, for the sake of my sanity! :smallbiggrin:

(Really, I've been looking for a story that features a robot or cyborg as the main character for quite a while.)

ilovefire
2007-06-10, 02:13 PM
Allright. Here's Today's part, and thanks for the compliments.


Beginnings

I was in my mid twenties, already a master of the newest science of cybernetic technology, or cybertech. I had never settled down for a family, or made many friends even when I was young. Just didn’t interest me. I always preferred playing video games, or writing, or reading the latest paperback novel. I was always laughed at for that last one; after all, why read a paperback when you can just watch a holographic video of it? I didn’t answer; I just always like to read.

I was just starting college when cybernetics first came onto the world scene. It was like something never before seen, something that could make the crippled whole, replace lost limbs and organs without any harm or bodily rejection. It was equal parts biology, technology, programming and robotics, and I quickly decided that I was going to be a Cybernetics Specialist. I was the first to declare Cybertechnology as my major, and it sort of rolled from there. I minored in pre-medicine, eventually went to Med School to learn how to do Cybernetic Implantation Surgery. CIS, as it started to be called, was profitable and it helped me get by, but it wasn’t my passion. My passion was in developing and building the cybernetics.

I guess that’s why I threw my entire heart and mind into recreating my body, after I found out about my cancer. Isn’t that an irony, though? Before it, I didn’t have any implants or replacements. After it… I was more machine than human. A society that could cure anything still couldn’t cure cancer, and as I soon found, not even extensive cybertech implants could get rid of it. Not without a full robotization of the body.

It only takes one day of that before you realize that machines cannot cry.