Levism84
2015-12-05, 11:31 PM
I like this 3rd party spell and would like to use it for a future character, but it seems like it needs some work in its current state. I was hoping I could get some feedback from the forums as to how to address some of its issues, such as how often a saving throw is made against it, whether the psychic damage requires a save, and whether or not "Concentration, up to 10 minutes" is excessive for its effect.
Thanks in advance for your time and feedback.
Nymph's Beauty
7th-level enchantment
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Self (30-foot radius)
Components: V, S, M (a nymph's tear)
Duration: Concentration, up to 10 minutes
You become blindingly beautiful. Any humanoid within range who can see you must make a Constitution saving throw or become blinded. A lesser restoration spell will be needed to remove this effect.
If you remove your clothing or are already naked, any creature who sees you and who is not blinded takes 10d8 psychic damage.
This spell can be used by both men and women and affects both men and women equally.
Thanks in advance for your time and feedback.
Nymph's Beauty
7th-level enchantment
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Self (30-foot radius)
Components: V, S, M (a nymph's tear)
Duration: Concentration, up to 10 minutes
You become blindingly beautiful. Any humanoid within range who can see you must make a Constitution saving throw or become blinded. A lesser restoration spell will be needed to remove this effect.
If you remove your clothing or are already naked, any creature who sees you and who is not blinded takes 10d8 psychic damage.
This spell can be used by both men and women and affects both men and women equally.