Miraqariftsky
2016-02-23, 12:46 PM
Hallo to the Playground. I hope y'all are doing well?
Might I take the liberty of posting some pieces here, and hope for your wonderful critique and appreciation?
First piece... lessee now... hmm... Pulling out one of my personal classics.
The Darksome King
He is the lord of the horde,
master of a massive hoard.
Many boar-bristles at his beck,
a hundred spits at his call.
Much spittle flecks
the fangs of the wolves at his knees.
Stormcrows, the shadows prowl,
beneath the pinion of the throne
At head of board he sits.
Wise, his craven thanes.
For dare they not the honour
of his rings’ dread hold.
Dark the countenance,
grim the frown.
Shadowed eyes like pits do gape---
deep the glare from greying orbs
Steepled fingers uphold
the slipping crown.
Bowed by sleepless stars
head slumps… breath rasps.
Gold pass’d to silver,
to iron black.
Ashen grey the crown.
And dust the robe
that bleeds but chaff!
Skull’s smile breaks not,
a sigh keens from winter’s heart.
Though on his cracked lips,
shines a smile,
The smile of a sword unsheathed.
Might I take the liberty of posting some pieces here, and hope for your wonderful critique and appreciation?
First piece... lessee now... hmm... Pulling out one of my personal classics.
The Darksome King
He is the lord of the horde,
master of a massive hoard.
Many boar-bristles at his beck,
a hundred spits at his call.
Much spittle flecks
the fangs of the wolves at his knees.
Stormcrows, the shadows prowl,
beneath the pinion of the throne
At head of board he sits.
Wise, his craven thanes.
For dare they not the honour
of his rings’ dread hold.
Dark the countenance,
grim the frown.
Shadowed eyes like pits do gape---
deep the glare from greying orbs
Steepled fingers uphold
the slipping crown.
Bowed by sleepless stars
head slumps… breath rasps.
Gold pass’d to silver,
to iron black.
Ashen grey the crown.
And dust the robe
that bleeds but chaff!
Skull’s smile breaks not,
a sigh keens from winter’s heart.
Though on his cracked lips,
shines a smile,
The smile of a sword unsheathed.