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2006-08-21, 03:20 AM
Alas… My half-ass attempt at making a web comic has left crickets chirping…

But now, a real effort has been put in! Real proverbial sweat and blood! I bring you… Parodies of Link!!!

I know. The title sucks. Please PM me for advice/names for the comic, and, if I choose your name/take your advice, thou shalt receive the comic before anyone else (If asked for, and if all goes well) and credit in every comic.


Parodies of Link!

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/7735/1racialslurfa6.th.png (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1racialslurfa6.png)

Comments/critique necessary.

2006-08-21, 10:22 PM
The first thing that I would change is the overall size of the strip. The frames are too small and busy to really see what is going on. On top of that, the black text boxes are really intrusive. I'd reccomend making your frames bigger and experimenting with different, less intrusive text boxes.


2006-08-21, 11:36 PM
I see. I was going for a more generic look, but okay. Thancks for tha advice.

Maybe I could cut down on props and stuff as well?