Omega 13

[cloudncali]

Hello,
this is just tales of the stars but with a diffrent name.
i started the comic over at the vary begining of the story where they first meat Valcry.
here is the link:
http://jacdix0.100webspace.net/

[cloudncali]

#2 is up!!!
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i thought long and hard about why a robot would forget to upgrade the system then i remeberd my frends annoying obsestion with WOW.

any way tell me what you think

[Dr._Weird]

The link is broken, so I can't view it right now, but I know it certainly would help to get someone to help with the spelling/grammar, because you seem to have some trouble with it. I would be willing to do it, it wouldn't be that hard for me.

[cloudncali]

i just fixed the link with a link to my new web page i spent all day making. its made with Java so you have to click the program to do anything on it

ya thanks i will take all the help i can get Gramer and otherwize

[Starla]

Zoom in on the characters for dramatic effect. I can't tell them apart. You need to show them a little larger so we can see more detail.