View Full Version : Omega 13

2006-08-03, 10:58 PM
this is just tales of the stars but with a diffrent name.
i started the comic over at the vary begining of the story where they first meat Valcry.
here is the link:

2006-08-04, 01:05 PM
#2 is up!!!
read and reply

i thought long and hard about why a robot would forget to upgrade the system then i remeberd my frends annoying obsestion with WOW.

any way tell me what you think

2006-08-04, 06:17 PM
The link is broken, so I can't view it right now, but I know it certainly would help to get someone to help with the spelling/grammar, because you seem to have some trouble with it. I would be willing to do it, it wouldn't be that hard for me.

2006-08-04, 07:47 PM
i just fixed the link with a link to my new web page i spent all day making. its made with Java so you have to click the program to do anything on it

ya thanks i will take all the help i can get Gramer and otherwize

2006-08-12, 10:20 AM
Zoom in on the characters for dramatic effect. I can't tell them apart. You need to show them a little larger so we can see more detail.