McToomin
2016-04-04, 06:48 PM
The Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/E1gI40jRl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHeGR6Y3l6Z2lDaUk)
Samsari (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/Nk_ZAJ46e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSHRBblBoNWFKS0E)
Barbarian Primal Path - Elemental Rager (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NJL7UVBTe) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHdHdOaWFiS3lMcVU)
Monk Traditions - Ki Blocker, Shihan Warrior, Way of the Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJgiddr3e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSVZ1cTNiazdKSVk)
Roguish Archetypes - Stinger (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NyEVSAcne) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHQ1JQdDU2ZmVlYkk)
Firelacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V16cheOng) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHNm5IY3pPZXNKcGM)
Airlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V1HI_AJCl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTHpsNXNxMEpMSjQ)
Waterlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJvz7Jh2x) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHU2NpUUJKX0lySDg)
Earthlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/4Jhwev06g) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTUpJM0lqZ3VsakU)
Hey everybody! I've been hard at work tinkering with my Avatar: The Last Airbender system. I know it's still not perfect, but I am pretty happy with where it's at right now, and I would just love love love if anyone, given the opportunity, would be so inclined as to test some of this out and let me know how it plays. I'm especially curious as to how it stacks up compared to other 5e base content, as that's the bar I'm building toward.
At this point, I've reworked the Lacer and Samsari classes. The Lacer is more of a fighter, one that uses elemental attacks and physical power. The Samsari, in contrast, is a caster, a squishy elemental character who uses elemental powers for utility and combat.
There is a lot of choice involved, but every since my first incarnation of the Lacer, the feedback I've gotten is that it was too confusing and not laid out well enough. I've worked really hard on streamlining it, and even with adding more differences between the elements in the Lacer class, I was able to cut out more than a page of empty space.
The Samsari has seen fewer changes, but I did remove the familiar (not really thematically appropriate, as /u/chifii was kind enough to point out), but substituted it with a new ability I think will work well. I feel like the Help action is one that's pretty underutilized, so I was hoping to find some play there.
I wasn't going to put anything new up until I finished creating the forms for all four elements. While I'm sure they still need work, I'm happy to say that I have a list of forms for all four elements ready to go.
I've also got an elemental subclass for the Barbarian and Monk classes, one that adds some elemental abilities. I was originally going to create one for the Fighter and Rogue classes (seeing as how those two classes have subclasses that grant spellcasting) as well, but was having trouble implementing them and didn't feel they were necessary. The Barbarian and Monk felt more thematically appropriate to have.
So that's it! Like I said, I would love if someone had the opportunity to try this out. I've included PDF versions of everything, although these are still not final versions. But I know some people have trouble viewing the Homebrewery.
I've also included links to my [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/alexctanner?ty=h) (which I spent most of the day setting up). I just wanted to have it because, since this is such a passion project for me, I wanted to do what I could to get some custom art commissioned for it. I only mention it in case anyone really wants to support it, but at this point, someone being able to play it and actually rate it in play would be incredible.
Thanks so much for checking it out!
The Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/E1gI40jRl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHeGR6Y3l6Z2lDaUk)
Samsari (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/Nk_ZAJ46e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSHRBblBoNWFKS0E)
Barbarian Primal Path - Elemental Rager (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NJL7UVBTe) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHdHdOaWFiS3lMcVU)
Monk Traditions - Ki Blocker, Shihan Warrior, Way of the Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJgiddr3e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSVZ1cTNiazdKSVk)
Roguish Archetypes - Stinger (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NyEVSAcne) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHQ1JQdDU2ZmVlYkk)
Firelacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V16cheOng) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHNm5IY3pPZXNKcGM)
Airlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V1HI_AJCl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTHpsNXNxMEpMSjQ)
Waterlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJvz7Jh2x) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHU2NpUUJKX0lySDg)
Earthlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/4Jhwev06g) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTUpJM0lqZ3VsakU)
Samsari (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/Nk_ZAJ46e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSHRBblBoNWFKS0E)
Barbarian Primal Path - Elemental Rager (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NJL7UVBTe) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHdHdOaWFiS3lMcVU)
Monk Traditions - Ki Blocker, Shihan Warrior, Way of the Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJgiddr3e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSVZ1cTNiazdKSVk)
Roguish Archetypes - Stinger (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NyEVSAcne) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHQ1JQdDU2ZmVlYkk)
Firelacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V16cheOng) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHNm5IY3pPZXNKcGM)
Airlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V1HI_AJCl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTHpsNXNxMEpMSjQ)
Waterlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJvz7Jh2x) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHU2NpUUJKX0lySDg)
Earthlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/4Jhwev06g) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTUpJM0lqZ3VsakU)
Hey everybody! I've been hard at work tinkering with my Avatar: The Last Airbender system. I know it's still not perfect, but I am pretty happy with where it's at right now, and I would just love love love if anyone, given the opportunity, would be so inclined as to test some of this out and let me know how it plays. I'm especially curious as to how it stacks up compared to other 5e base content, as that's the bar I'm building toward.
At this point, I've reworked the Lacer and Samsari classes. The Lacer is more of a fighter, one that uses elemental attacks and physical power. The Samsari, in contrast, is a caster, a squishy elemental character who uses elemental powers for utility and combat.
There is a lot of choice involved, but every since my first incarnation of the Lacer, the feedback I've gotten is that it was too confusing and not laid out well enough. I've worked really hard on streamlining it, and even with adding more differences between the elements in the Lacer class, I was able to cut out more than a page of empty space.
The Samsari has seen fewer changes, but I did remove the familiar (not really thematically appropriate, as /u/chifii was kind enough to point out), but substituted it with a new ability I think will work well. I feel like the Help action is one that's pretty underutilized, so I was hoping to find some play there.
I wasn't going to put anything new up until I finished creating the forms for all four elements. While I'm sure they still need work, I'm happy to say that I have a list of forms for all four elements ready to go.
I've also got an elemental subclass for the Barbarian and Monk classes, one that adds some elemental abilities. I was originally going to create one for the Fighter and Rogue classes (seeing as how those two classes have subclasses that grant spellcasting) as well, but was having trouble implementing them and didn't feel they were necessary. The Barbarian and Monk felt more thematically appropriate to have.
So that's it! Like I said, I would love if someone had the opportunity to try this out. I've included PDF versions of everything, although these are still not final versions. But I know some people have trouble viewing the Homebrewery.
I've also included links to my [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/alexctanner?ty=h) (which I spent most of the day setting up). I just wanted to have it because, since this is such a passion project for me, I wanted to do what I could to get some custom art commissioned for it. I only mention it in case anyone really wants to support it, but at this point, someone being able to play it and actually rate it in play would be incredible.
Thanks so much for checking it out!
The Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/E1gI40jRl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHeGR6Y3l6Z2lDaUk)
Samsari (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/Nk_ZAJ46e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSHRBblBoNWFKS0E)
Barbarian Primal Path - Elemental Rager (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NJL7UVBTe) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHdHdOaWFiS3lMcVU)
Monk Traditions - Ki Blocker, Shihan Warrior, Way of the Lacer (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJgiddr3e) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHSVZ1cTNiazdKSVk)
Roguish Archetypes - Stinger (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/NyEVSAcne) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHQ1JQdDU2ZmVlYkk)
Firelacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V16cheOng) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHNm5IY3pPZXNKcGM)
Airlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/V1HI_AJCl) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTHpsNXNxMEpMSjQ)
Waterlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/VJvz7Jh2x) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHU2NpUUJKX0lySDg)
Earthlacing Forms (http://www.naturalcrit.com/homebrew/print/4Jhwev06g) - PDF (https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzhFGMh1zxGHTUpJM0lqZ3VsakU)