A pathetic loser's attempt at a comic

[Demosthenes]

A pathetic loser's attempt at a comic Enjoy!
http://img123.echo.cx/my.php?image=untitled5co.png

http://img123.echo.cx/my.php?image=untitled23uy.png

sorry, to big to post up

[HempRope]

Ummm... it's "Splendid."

Not the comic, that's how you spell it.

[Vodrilus]

*Grimace*
Reminds me of my Monkey Island comics... they were absolutely horrible... I was crushed when I realized that. I never learned to make good comics.

[The Glyphstone]

I can't read the dialogue.

[malicousinsectuk]

Bleh. Keep practicing.

[RBPRX1204]

I couldn't get the comic to come up :(. It could be my work computer, so I'll try again when I get home tonight.

[Xanadu]

Well. . . it's. . . interesting. . .
You should probably keep up the work, refine it a little.

[Sneak]

Try a little editing, the dialogue was cut off and the spelling was...erm...bad.

[clarkcd]

Did I miss it or do these not even have jokes in them? I'm not talking about not funny jokes, just no jokes at all.

If you're going to call it a comic or a funny or something there should be some attempt at humor. If not it should be called something else, like doodles or strips.

[The_King_of_Durf]

Okay, no offense by this... but it... kinda wasn't good. Refine your drawings, edit the spelling, add some jokes and define the setting a bit more as well, nice try though

[Geeky]

Hahaha, this is the funniest thread every!


Read the thread title then read all the posts, man, this is some good stuff.

[LightBringer]

I agree with Geeky. He said it was, A pathetic loser's attempt at a comic. What did you expect?

It's okay if you don't compare it to, hmmm, anything.

Keep working at it, it'll come.

[Caelestion]

Well, kinda not good is being polite. The thread title is more honest.
Stick characters only work when they look well done - OOTS as an obvious example.
White speech-bubbles is always good.
Spelling is a must, as is just one joke (I'm not greedy).

Cael.

[Demosthenes]

You can stop commenting now, the whole thing was just some stupid joke. I mean come on. This whole thing was done in MS Paint

Have i successfully wasted everyone's time now?

[Caelestion]

Not really. If we're here commenting, I doubt we'd be complaining about wasting time!

Cael.

[Invariel]

Ahem... You can do a lot of wonderful things with MS Paint, and 'decent webcomics' are on that list. You just don't have the same sort of features that a more "polished" art program will give you, but all of the basics are there, and most of the time, that's all you will need.