Feuerphoenix
2016-06-20, 07:31 PM
Hey guys,
first of all, most of this work is not my own, but the user OwenLeaf from dandwiki.com and his Oath of the Eternal Flame (https://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/Oath_of_the_Eternal_Flame_(5e_Archetype)).
As I saw it for the first time, I fell in love with the oath's theme. But some things were not what I would consider as "beeing paladin like". Basically it was the oath about leadership, which I changed to protect the ones who do not disturb the balance, and add two spells for the theme of that (Sanctuary and Spirit Guardians, in exchange of command and revivify), and as the Phoenix being a central topic of the oath, I exchanged flame strike with a home-brewed spell "conjure phoenix", where you can conjure this phoenix (https://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/Young_Phoenix_(5e_Creature)), but with lowered Hotpoint's (around 20-40 less, I still have to consider about that).
The most obvious change is its level 7 ability. Yes, true sight is strong, but on the other hand, it becomes available at level 18, and can be used twice at max, when you exceeded LV 19 with your paladin. Also it eats up a very rare resource. The dispelled ability+con success is an addition to keep this spell strong enough to consider it later on.
In the end, I exchanged a little thing a the capstone, namely being under protection from evil and good to being immune to fire, to stick more close towards phoenix and stuff, and replaced being immune to become frightened with immune to become blinded, as immunity to become frightened is already an aura and does not make sense.
PEACHing is always appreciated :)
http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/HJM6viUH
first of all, most of this work is not my own, but the user OwenLeaf from dandwiki.com and his Oath of the Eternal Flame (https://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/Oath_of_the_Eternal_Flame_(5e_Archetype)).
As I saw it for the first time, I fell in love with the oath's theme. But some things were not what I would consider as "beeing paladin like". Basically it was the oath about leadership, which I changed to protect the ones who do not disturb the balance, and add two spells for the theme of that (Sanctuary and Spirit Guardians, in exchange of command and revivify), and as the Phoenix being a central topic of the oath, I exchanged flame strike with a home-brewed spell "conjure phoenix", where you can conjure this phoenix (https://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/Young_Phoenix_(5e_Creature)), but with lowered Hotpoint's (around 20-40 less, I still have to consider about that).
The most obvious change is its level 7 ability. Yes, true sight is strong, but on the other hand, it becomes available at level 18, and can be used twice at max, when you exceeded LV 19 with your paladin. Also it eats up a very rare resource. The dispelled ability+con success is an addition to keep this spell strong enough to consider it later on.
In the end, I exchanged a little thing a the capstone, namely being under protection from evil and good to being immune to fire, to stick more close towards phoenix and stuff, and replaced being immune to become frightened with immune to become blinded, as immunity to become frightened is already an aura and does not make sense.
PEACHing is always appreciated :)
http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/HJM6viUH