TentacleSurpris
2016-07-05, 10:52 AM
Hi, I'm working on a book for DMSGuild. It's a book of mostly crunch, about 25 pages or so. It's about a dozen archetypes and 5 backgrounds for Kara-Tur.
I'd really like some playgrounders/other authors to read and offer feedback on it. I'd prefer not to post it online for everyone to see, so if you're interested in reading it and offering feedback, reply here or send me a private message (click on my playground name, yes it's a feature). Ideally I'd like someone who is familiar with Oriental Adventures from 1st and 3rd editions and/or Kara-Tur the Eastern Realm, and can offer feedback on power level vs existing 5e archetypes. Thanks!!
The backgrounds are: Samurai, Geisha, Ronin, Imperial Eunuch, and Physician.
The Archetypes are:
Barbarian: Rider of the Golden Horde
Bard: Yakuza
Cleric: Shukenja
Druid: Circle of Kitsune's Blessing
Fighter: Kensai
Fighter: Iron Dragon School
Monk: Way of the Drunken Boxer
Monk: Eastern Snake Style
Ranger: Yamabushi Healer
Rogue: Ninja of the Hidden Fortress
Paladin: Oath of Protection (Yojimbo, Sohei)
Sorcerer: Profane Bloodline
Warlock: Revered Ancestor Patron
Wizard: Wu Jen
I'd really like some playgrounders/other authors to read and offer feedback on it. I'd prefer not to post it online for everyone to see, so if you're interested in reading it and offering feedback, reply here or send me a private message (click on my playground name, yes it's a feature). Ideally I'd like someone who is familiar with Oriental Adventures from 1st and 3rd editions and/or Kara-Tur the Eastern Realm, and can offer feedback on power level vs existing 5e archetypes. Thanks!!
The backgrounds are: Samurai, Geisha, Ronin, Imperial Eunuch, and Physician.
The Archetypes are:
Barbarian: Rider of the Golden Horde
Bard: Yakuza
Cleric: Shukenja
Druid: Circle of Kitsune's Blessing
Fighter: Kensai
Fighter: Iron Dragon School
Monk: Way of the Drunken Boxer
Monk: Eastern Snake Style
Ranger: Yamabushi Healer
Rogue: Ninja of the Hidden Fortress
Paladin: Oath of Protection (Yojimbo, Sohei)
Sorcerer: Profane Bloodline
Warlock: Revered Ancestor Patron
Wizard: Wu Jen