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Ichneumon
2016-07-24, 04:10 AM
I'd like some critique/feedback on a comic I made. I've drawn many comics in the past, but this is the first time I've actually created a whole page comic in Photoshop (instead of a vector based program like Inkscape), and I would like tips on how to improve, as I'm thinking of starting a webcomic in the future using non-vector art.

This is the link to the comic in question: http://img11.deviantart.net/4a92/i/2016/205/5/2/sleep_paralysis_by_ichneumonfly-dab7sxa.jpg

The story is based on an experience of sleep paralysis (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sleep_paralysis).

Any kind of feedback would be appreciated.