HikerChris
2018-02-15, 11:30 PM
I always loved warlocks, and the grand scope of the things to make a pact with is absolutely beautiful. For this, I wanted to make a pact that someone could make with Dagon, but The Great Old One didn't fit it exactly. This one I think could be used interchangeably, but I don't think it is perfect. Please help with all the critique you deem necessary.
Pact of the Fathomless One - Your patron is a powerful being of the sea, a creature whose very existence is as mysterious as the waters they lie in. You have bound yourself to a Kraken, or an ancient being of the sea, such as Dagon. Such beings would never trifle with the likes of you, but most have a dark, world altering desire strong enough to be desperate as to make a deal.
Expanded Spell List
The Deep lets you choose from an expanded list of spells when you learn a warlock spell. The following spells are added to the warlock spell list for you.
1st - Create or Destroy Water, Fog Cloud
2nd - Moonbeam, Silence
3rd - Tidal Wave, Wall of Water
4th - Control Water, Watery Sphere
5th - Maelstrom, Control Winds
Unbearable Isolation - Beginning at 1st level, you can cause other creatures to cower as you invoke the petrifying fear of the isolation one has while in the middle of the sea. As an action, you can cause creatures of your choosing within a 30-foot radius originating from you to make a Charisma saving throw against your warlock spell save DC. The creatures that fail their saving throws are knocked prone, and have their speed halved until the end of your next turn.
Once you use this feature, you can’t use it again until you finish a short or long rest.
One With the Water - Beginning at 6th level, your patron has accepted you as bearable company. You can now breathe and turn invisible while underwater.
Sea Breeze - At 10th level, whenever you are subject to an effect that requires you to make a Dexterity saving throw, you can use your reaction to instantly dissolve into a mist and reappear at an unoccupied location with 30 feet, negating the effect.
Once you use this feature, you can't use it again until you finish a short or long rest.
Bottomless Pit of the Sea - At 14th level, you embrace the darkness that lies in the abyss of the oceans. When using your Unbearable Isolation feature, the targets become Stunned, as well as being able to cast the Darkness spell at will.
Pact of the Fathomless One - Your patron is a powerful being of the sea, a creature whose very existence is as mysterious as the waters they lie in. You have bound yourself to a Kraken, or an ancient being of the sea, such as Dagon. Such beings would never trifle with the likes of you, but most have a dark, world altering desire strong enough to be desperate as to make a deal.
Expanded Spell List
The Deep lets you choose from an expanded list of spells when you learn a warlock spell. The following spells are added to the warlock spell list for you.
1st - Create or Destroy Water, Fog Cloud
2nd - Moonbeam, Silence
3rd - Tidal Wave, Wall of Water
4th - Control Water, Watery Sphere
5th - Maelstrom, Control Winds
Unbearable Isolation - Beginning at 1st level, you can cause other creatures to cower as you invoke the petrifying fear of the isolation one has while in the middle of the sea. As an action, you can cause creatures of your choosing within a 30-foot radius originating from you to make a Charisma saving throw against your warlock spell save DC. The creatures that fail their saving throws are knocked prone, and have their speed halved until the end of your next turn.
Once you use this feature, you can’t use it again until you finish a short or long rest.
One With the Water - Beginning at 6th level, your patron has accepted you as bearable company. You can now breathe and turn invisible while underwater.
Sea Breeze - At 10th level, whenever you are subject to an effect that requires you to make a Dexterity saving throw, you can use your reaction to instantly dissolve into a mist and reappear at an unoccupied location with 30 feet, negating the effect.
Once you use this feature, you can't use it again until you finish a short or long rest.
Bottomless Pit of the Sea - At 14th level, you embrace the darkness that lies in the abyss of the oceans. When using your Unbearable Isolation feature, the targets become Stunned, as well as being able to cast the Darkness spell at will.