Small comic.

[Ichneumon]

Now, I have this idea for a 3-5 page comic, but before I start making the pages, I want to know what people think of the art style:

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/8876/bannerbn8.png

EDIT: Yes, its doll style.:smallsmile:

EDIT: Here is the comic:

Page 1 (http://www/images/lokg001.png)
Page 2 (http://www./lokg002.png)
Page 3 (http://www./lokg003.png)
Page 4 (http://www./images/lokg004.png)
Page 5 (http://www/lokg005.png)
Page 6 (http:///lokg006.png)

I will also post this comic on my site later, I think.

[onasuma]

Its doll style then? I like it, simple but obvious.

[Threeshades]

bring it! :smallbiggrin:

Though i would have thought those are goblins not gnomes.

[banjo1985]

Yeah look like goblins to me too. Great though, I'm looking forward to this!

[Attilargh]

Ohhh, I like! The colouring needs a bit of re-thinking, though, as they really do look like goblins.

But why is everyone bald?

[Threeshades]

Ohhh, I like! The colouring needs a bit of re-thinking, though, as they really do look like goblins.

But why is everyone bald?
Bald is the new black.


Maybe after all they are really goblins ans the title just refers to someone not in the picture, or is mistakenly written as "gnome"

[Castaras]

Gnomes?! KILL! KILL!

ahem.

Nice drawing style, although they do look like goblins rather than gnomes...They need red cone hats, and a little fishing rod...

[Lyinginbedmon]

Looks good

[[Insert Neat Username Here]]

Looks good, but they need to look more like gnomes.

[Mr_Saturn]

Will you be accepting doll requests too? Hahahaha :smallwink:

PS: dolls are cuuute. Good art. :smallcool:

[Nathan]

Any comic you make I will read. They bring the surreal funny.

[Lissou]

A doll comic? Of course I'm interested in reading it :p

[Ichneumon]

Finished! Now, it is quite a strange small comic, but enjoy.:smallamused:

Page 1 (http://www./lokg001.png)
Page 2 (http://www./lokg002.png)
Page 3 (http://www./images/lokg003.png)
Page 4 (http://www./images/lokg004.png)
Page 5 (http://.png)
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[Lissou]

It's very cute and quite interesting, but there are some mysteries that need explaining :p

Long live King Gnome!

[Omicroncubed]

I agree with Lissou.

This is a very interesting comic.

[Wolfman42666]

Make more! quickly.

[onasuma]

I dont get the ending. Other than that quite good, but Opening is better.

[Yeril]

The ending was awesome :D

[Threeshades]

i expected them to act more silly actually, but its pretty neat.

They still look like goblins though.:smallwink:

[Raistlin1040]

Wait what? That's the end?

[Vaynor]

The dialog is forced, and the artwork is lacking detail.

While the characters are good, it could use a background.

[solgursky]

I kinda like the forced dialogue. Very dry. Could play up the humour a bit more, though. It's almost too dry- no slapstick, no obvious jokes, no backgrounds.

I like it, it has lots of potential. :smallbiggrin:

[MrEdwardNigma]

Whatever happened to 3-5 pages? It's six!
And on a different note: when will we get to know what happens next? It's not really a conclusive ending, now is it?

[starwoof]

Ooh, they're all so precious!

[Ichneumon]

No, I do not expect to continue this comic. It is finished, at least until the next holiday. I will have my hands full on making Opening.

Also, next two pages of "Vegeful" are up. The Order will never be the same again.

[Old One]

Very cute comic! Liked it alot! Very special style and simple but interesting storyline. I do however miss some kind of a background. A simple background would make it more interesting, instead of just a colour. As it is now they appear to float in space, just a line would make it appear like ground and sky anyway. That's my thoughts anyway, but it was good anyhow. :smallsmile: