Foxhound438
2018-05-21, 02:06 PM
Anyone else getting annoyed about how dense this book is with typos? I know, first printing, but it looks like they didn't bother to proofread it at points..
under drow favored consort: "No position of consort is assured for long; priestesses are infamous for being fickle with their favor, which are they are especially glad to lavish on..." This looks really bad. That kind of error is something you would someone would expect from a forum post, not an official 50$ source book.
and it's not just fluff- the duergar despot- "innate spellcasting ability is intelligence (save DC 12)"- this doesn't at all add up. It's a CR 12, so it has prof +4 and int +2, which means it should be DC 14. I really hope this is the only place where that kind of mistake has been made, I would hate to have to double-check the stats on every monster I pull from this book.
there are a ton of referencing issues that I can get over, but still annoy me; for example, with the boneclaw: "Multiattack. The boneclaw makes two claw attacks." On the surface fine, but it doesn't have "claw" attacks, it has "piercing claw" attacks. Maybe they did this intentionally, but I feel like if they were going to give the attack an exuberant name they would stick to it.
another example is with armor references; first the Gith Anarch: "Armor Class 20". Looking at the stats, you can tell that they got this from the monk's unarmored defense, but no where in the stat block does it say that. Again, it's usable, but noticeable and distracting. It's significantly worse for the Elder Oblex though- it has AC 16, no mention of any modification done to it, and only +3 dex. Maybe it's natural armor, but maybe it's actually using int for AC. It doesn't say, so here we're left to guess. Then under tortles, they give them the natural armor that the PC race has, but in the stat block just put "natural" next to the AC. In that case we know exactly what it's talking about, but the fact remains that it's an error that proofreading would eliminate.
I found all of those without even looking for errors. Maybe I have an absurdly keen eye, but assuming I don't, there's bound to be more.
under drow favored consort: "No position of consort is assured for long; priestesses are infamous for being fickle with their favor, which are they are especially glad to lavish on..." This looks really bad. That kind of error is something you would someone would expect from a forum post, not an official 50$ source book.
and it's not just fluff- the duergar despot- "innate spellcasting ability is intelligence (save DC 12)"- this doesn't at all add up. It's a CR 12, so it has prof +4 and int +2, which means it should be DC 14. I really hope this is the only place where that kind of mistake has been made, I would hate to have to double-check the stats on every monster I pull from this book.
there are a ton of referencing issues that I can get over, but still annoy me; for example, with the boneclaw: "Multiattack. The boneclaw makes two claw attacks." On the surface fine, but it doesn't have "claw" attacks, it has "piercing claw" attacks. Maybe they did this intentionally, but I feel like if they were going to give the attack an exuberant name they would stick to it.
another example is with armor references; first the Gith Anarch: "Armor Class 20". Looking at the stats, you can tell that they got this from the monk's unarmored defense, but no where in the stat block does it say that. Again, it's usable, but noticeable and distracting. It's significantly worse for the Elder Oblex though- it has AC 16, no mention of any modification done to it, and only +3 dex. Maybe it's natural armor, but maybe it's actually using int for AC. It doesn't say, so here we're left to guess. Then under tortles, they give them the natural armor that the PC race has, but in the stat block just put "natural" next to the AC. In that case we know exactly what it's talking about, but the fact remains that it's an error that proofreading would eliminate.
I found all of those without even looking for errors. Maybe I have an absurdly keen eye, but assuming I don't, there's bound to be more.