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Bortasz
2019-04-19, 10:56 AM
Hello.
I'm writing a splat book about Kobolds. And just finished chapter about Theology and could use that some other people read it.

I'm mostly interested in answers to does question:
Did you have problem with understanding anything?
What part you liked?
What part you disliked?
What part I should expand and/or clarify?
Did anything was missing?
But will accept all constructive Feedback.

If you are interested pleas send PM me your email and I will send the chapter as an odt file to you.
Pleas do not share it. I plan on publishing/Selling it.

NRSASD
2019-04-19, 12:35 PM
What format is the file in?

Boci
2019-04-19, 12:37 PM
What system is the a splatbook for? An edition of D&D? Or is there an RPG called Kobolds?

Bortasz
2019-04-19, 12:45 PM
What format is the file in?

ODT is from Open Office format.


What system is the a splatbook for? An edition of D&D? Or is there an RPG called Kobolds?

It will be mostly for Pathfinder and D&D. But most information are Lore. Not mechanic. So should be to use for many people that use different editions.

noob
2019-04-22, 01:54 PM
Is it for those editions where kobolds are small dragons or for an edition where kobold are creature with some morphological traits of dogs?

Bortasz
2019-04-27, 12:03 PM
Is it for those editions where kobolds are small dragons or for an edition where kobold are creature with some morphological traits of dogs?

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