One page not very funny comic.

[Ichneumon]

Oke, this isn't a very great comic, but I feel like posting it here.

http://www.jleuven.net/images/lokg007.png

I even used this joke once....

[Tiffanie Lirle]

While not really funny, the characters have a cute "doll-like" thing going on. The line on that shield might be a bit too thick though? It doesn't seem like its part of the character at all really.

Just my opinion though.

Edit- The red shield, not the round one the other guy has.

[Freshmeat]

It's slightly funny actually. In a 'What?!' kind of way.

[JasonDoomsblade]

Eh, It's not my cup of tea. Good effort though.

[Castaras]

Made me giggle a bit. :smallsmile:

And yeah...I've used that joke once before as well in Real life...<.<

More cute dolls! Woo! *hugs cute doll*

[ufo]

The moon changes position slightly in some frames, and the sky is lighter in the first frame. A very good style, but the page itself is... lacking?

[XiaoTie]

Well, that made me laugh :thog:. Seriously, it did.

#7 ? Where are the #1, #2, #3, #4, #5 and #6 ? :smallbiggrin:

[kirbsys]

Being someone who has fought with shields on an almost weekly basis, I think it would look a bit better if the red shield was a bit closer to the Gnome's body. As of right now it looks like a punch shield, which though its fine for the barbarian, most tower shields look a bit odd like that.

Just my two cents.

[[Insert Neat Username Here]]

I liked it.

For those of you who didn't know, 1-6 are at Jleuven.net.

And Ichneumon, if you didn't get my PM, your site's boards aren't working. Thought you ought to know.

[why123]

Well, that made me laugh . Seriously, it did.

#7 ? Where are the

[Ceska]

...others? See above you, they're at http://jleuven.net/.

I giggled. In a "aww, i'nt that cute" way.

[Ichneumon]

Thanks for the nice comments. Happy you enjoyed it. :smallbiggrin:

I know the forum on my site is down, I really don't know how to fix it.:smallannoyed:

[Dalboz of Gurth]

I like it ^_^